White Album 2/Script/1009 020 - Revision history

Krizs: /* Text */

2021-12-18T18:22:20Z

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Turbos: /* Editing */

2018-08-17T01:58:40Z

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	== Editing ==		== Editing ==
	*[[User:Nekiko\|Nekiko]]		*[[User:Nekiko\|Nekiko]]
			*[[User:Turbos\|turbos86]]

	== Translation Notes ==		== Translation Notes ==

Turbos: /* Text */

2018-08-17T01:57:50Z

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	\|95\|曜子\|Youko		\|95\|曜子\|Youko
	\|「人の目をバリバリに意識して、<br>いちいちカッコつけたり、艶っぽさを見せつけたり」		\|「人の目をバリバリに意識して、<br>いちいちカッコつけたり、艶っぽさを見せつけたり」
	\|"You're conscious ~~that other people are looking at~~ you, ~~so you work hard~~, and sometimes you show off your coolness and let them see your charm."		\|"You're conscious of how others perceive you, being a go-getter, and sometimes you show off your coolness and let them see your charm."
	\|~~I'm not even sure if this TL is correct, honestly...~~		\|}}
	~~\|deepskyblue~~}}

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	\|96\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|96\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|「バリバリって…<br>もう日本じゃそんな言葉使わないって」		\|「バリバリって…<br>もう日本じゃそんな言葉使わないって」
	\|"'~~Working hard~~'... No one uses that expression ~~anymore~~ in Japan."		\|"A 'go-getter'... No one uses that expression in Japan anymore."
	\|~~An alternative would be good for "baribari" since "Working hard" is a pretty standard thing to say in English.~~		\|}}
	~~\|deepskyblue~~}}

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Dokdek: /* Text */

2018-08-13T14:33:44Z

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	\|21\|曜子\|Youko		\|21\|曜子\|Youko
	\|「柴田さんがね、連絡くれたの。<br>あなたが久しぶりにステージで演奏するって」		\|「柴田さんがね、連絡くれたの。<br>あなたが久しぶりにステージで演奏するって」
	\|"I got a call from ~~Shibata—san~~. She told me that you would be performing on stage again after a long time."		\|"I got a call from Shibata-san. She told me that you would be performing on stage again after a long time."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|24\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|24\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|「っ…あ、あれは勝手に決められてて！」		\|「っ…あ、あれは勝手に決められてて！」
	\|"~~I—I~~ wasn't the one who decided on that outfit!"		\|"I-I wasn't the one who decided on that outfit!"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|59\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|59\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|「あ、あいつは…<br>そんなことで人を差別するような奴じゃない！」		\|「あ、あいつは…<br>そんなことで人を差別するような奴じゃない！」
	\|"~~He—He~~'s not the kind to discriminate against others like that!"		\|"He-He's not the kind to discriminate against others like that!"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|101\|曜子\|Youko		\|101\|曜子\|Youko
	\|「年明けに、とある出版社主催のコンクールがあるわ。<br>私の知り合いが編集長やってるから、<br>今からでも潜り込める」		\|「年明けに、とある出版社主催のコンクールがあるわ。<br>私の知り合いが編集長やってるから、<br>今からでも潜り込める」
	\|"Early next year, a certain publishing company will be holding a competition. An acquaintance of mine is the ~~editor—in—chief~~ there, so I think I can still get you on the list of performers."		\|"Early next year, a certain publishing company will be holding a competition. An acquaintance of mine is the editor-in-chief there, so I think I can still get you on the list of performers."
	\|}}		\|}}

Dokdek: /* Text */

2018-07-24T20:46:50Z

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	\|21\|曜子\|Youko		\|21\|曜子\|Youko
	\|「柴田さんがね、連絡くれたの。<br>あなたが久しぶりにステージで演奏するって」		\|「柴田さんがね、連絡くれたの。<br>あなたが久しぶりにステージで演奏するって」
	\|"I got a call from ~~Shibata-san~~. She told me that you would be performing on stage again after a long time."		\|"I got a call from Shibata—san. She told me that you would be performing on stage again after a long time."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|24\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|24\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|「っ…あ、あれは勝手に決められてて！」		\|「っ…あ、あれは勝手に決められてて！」
	\|"~~I-I~~ wasn't the one who decided on that outfit!"		\|"I—I wasn't the one who decided on that outfit!"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|59\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|59\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|「あ、あいつは…<br>そんなことで人を差別するような奴じゃない！」		\|「あ、あいつは…<br>そんなことで人を差別するような奴じゃない！」
	\|"~~He-He~~'s not the kind to discriminate against others like that!"		\|"He—He's not the kind to discriminate against others like that!"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|101\|曜子\|Youko		\|101\|曜子\|Youko
	\|「年明けに、とある出版社主催のコンクールがあるわ。<br>私の知り合いが編集長やってるから、<br>今からでも潜り込める」		\|「年明けに、とある出版社主催のコンクールがあるわ。<br>私の知り合いが編集長やってるから、<br>今からでも潜り込める」
	\|"Early next year, a certain publishing company will be holding a competition. An acquaintance of mine is the ~~editor-in-chief~~ there, so I think I can still get you on the list of performers."		\|"Early next year, a certain publishing company will be holding a competition. An acquaintance of mine is the editor—in—chief there, so I think I can still get you on the list of performers."
	\|}}		\|}}

Observer of Time: /* Text */

2018-03-11T12:13:34Z

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	\|60\|曜子\|Youko		\|60\|曜子\|Youko
	\|「…そうなの？」		\|「…そうなの？」
	"...Really now?"		\|"...Really now?"
	\|}}		\|}}

Observer of Time: /* Text */

2018-03-11T11:12:03Z

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	\|60\|曜子\|Youko		\|60\|曜子\|Youko
	\|「…そうなの？」		\|「…そうなの？」
	\|"... Really now?"		"...Really now?"
	\|}}		\|}}

Kannagumi: /* Text */

2018-03-09T06:00:40Z

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	\|3\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|3\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|「………ぇ？」		\|「………ぇ？」
	\|"... Eh?"		\|"...Eh?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|8\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|8\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|「…嫌ってたよ。ついこの前まで。<br>今は、それどころじゃないだけ」		\|「…嫌ってたよ。ついこの前まで。<br>今は、それどころじゃないだけ」
	\|"... I do hate you. Until recently, I have, anyway. But I just can't think about that right now."		\|"...I do hate you. Until recently, I have, anyway. But I just can't think about that right now."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|14\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|14\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|「…あんたと一緒にするな」		\|「…あんたと一緒にするな」
	\|"... Don't lump me together with yourself."		\|"...Don't lump me together with yourself."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|52\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|52\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|「…会ったの？」		\|「…会ったの？」
	\|"... You've met him?"		\|"...You've met him?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|64\|曜子\|Youko		\|64\|曜子\|Youko
	\|「…だからやられちゃったんだ？<br>似たような境遇なのに、<br>平気で頑張ってる彼が眩しかった？」		\|「…だからやられちゃったんだ？<br>似たような境遇なのに、<br>平気で頑張ってる彼が眩しかった？」
	\|"... Is that why you fell for him? Because his circumstances were similar, but he still tried his best? Did that make him appear charming to you?"		\|"...Is that why you fell for him? Because his circumstances were similar, but he still tried his best? Did that make him appear charming to you?"
	\| }}		\| }}

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	\|73\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|73\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|「っ…おかしいかよ？」		\|「っ…おかしいかよ？」
	\|"... Is that strange?"		\|"...Is that strange?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|82\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|82\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|「…なんだよ」		\|「…なんだよ」
	\|"... What is it?"		\|"...What is it?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|「…そういうジョーク飛ばせるってことは、<br>少しは落ち着いたみたいね」		\|「…そういうジョーク飛ばせるってことは、<br>少しは落ち着いたみたいね」
	\|"... If you can joke about it like that, I guess you have calmed down."		\|"...If you can joke about it like that, I guess you have calmed down."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|88\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|88\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|「…え？」		\|「…え？」
	\|"... Eh?"		\|"...Eh?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|94\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|94\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|「…わからない。<br>言ってること理解できないよ」		\|「…わからない。<br>言ってること理解できないよ」
	\|"... I don't understand. I really don't understand what you're saying."		\|"...I don't understand. I really don't understand what you're saying."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|99\|曜子\|Youko		\|99\|曜子\|Youko
	\|「…あなたの演奏の中じゃ久々のヒットだった。<br>すごく、私好み」		\|「…あなたの演奏の中じゃ久々のヒットだった。<br>すごく、私好み」
	\|"... It's been a long time since you've shown that much dedication when performing. I like it."		\|"...It's been a long time since you've shown that much dedication when performing. I like it."
	\|}}		\|}}

Nekiko: /* Text */

2017-09-13T19:17:42Z

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	\|20\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|20\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|「なん、で？」		\|「なん、で？」
	\|"~~W, why~~?"		\|"Why...?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|24\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|24\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|「っ…あ、あれは勝手に決められてて！」		\|「っ…あ、あれは勝手に決められてて！」
	\|"I~~...~~ I wasn't the one who decided on that outfit!"		\|"I-I wasn't the one who decided on that outfit!"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|59\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|59\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|「あ、あいつは…<br>そんなことで人を差別するような奴じゃない！」		\|「あ、あいつは…<br>そんなことで人を差別するような奴じゃない！」
	\|"He~~...~~ He's not the kind to discriminate against others like that!"		\|"He-He's not the kind to discriminate against others like that!"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|84\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|84\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|「そりゃよござんしたね。<br>そろそろフランス男に飽きた？」		\|「そりゃよござんしたね。<br>そろそろフランス男に飽きた？」
	\|"That's good to hear. Have you grown tired of ~~Frenchmen~~?"		\|"That's good to hear. Have you grown tired of French men?"
	\|}}		\|}}

Nekiko: /* Editing */

2017-09-13T19:11:13Z

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	== Editing ==		== Editing ==
			*[[User:Nekiko\|Nekiko]]

	== Translation Notes ==		== Translation Notes ==