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	\|出始めの冷水も、<br>設定温度になる直前に噴き出す熱湯も、<br>余すところなく頭から思いっきりかぶる。		\|出始めの冷水も、<br>設定温度になる直前に噴き出す熱湯も、<br>余すところなく頭から思いっきりかぶる。
	\|~~Not caring if it's~~ the cold water in the ~~beginning or~~ the ~~warm water after it~~ reaches ~~the~~ set temperature ~~that first flows out~~, I ~~simply and~~ thoroughly soak my head.		\|Caring for neither the initial splash of cold water nor the subsequent, brief sensation of hot water before the shower reaches its set temperature, I thoroughly soak myself, starting from my head.
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	\|そして、化けの皮の剥がれた<br>本物の小木曽雪菜という女の子に出逢った三年前。		\|そして、化けの皮の剥がれた<br>本物の小木曽雪菜という女の子に出逢った三年前。
	\|And my encounter with the true self of a certain girl named Ogiso Setsuna after ~~revealing~~ her disguise, all three years ago.		\|And my encounter with the true self of a certain girl named Ogiso Setsuna after peeling away her disguise, all three years ago.
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	\|ちょっとだけ、紆余曲折はあったけど、<br>おおむね順調にお互いの気持ちが近づいて、<br>言葉と気持ちと唇が触れあった三年前。		\|ちょっとだけ、紆余曲折はあったけど、<br>おおむね順調にお互いの気持ちが近づいて、<br>言葉と気持ちと唇が触れあった三年前。
	\|Although there were a couple of twists and turns, we managed to understand each other in the end, as our words, ~~our~~ passions, and ~~our~~ lips drew closer to each other -- that ~~all~~ happened three years ago.		\|Although there were a couple of twists and turns, we managed to understand each other in the end, as our words, passions, and lips drew closer to each other -- all of that happened three years ago.
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	\|…俺から、離れようとしてくれなかった。		\|…俺から、離れようとしてくれなかった。
	\|...Not once ~~had~~ she ~~refused to~~ leave my side.		\|...Not once did she leave my side.
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	\|大抵の奴は、延々続く俺の説教に辟易して、<br>次からは態度を改めるんだけど、そこは年期の差。		\|大抵の奴は、延々続く俺の説教に辟易して、<br>次からは態度を改めるんだけど、そこは年期の差。
	\|Most people who've done this to me ~~at some point before~~ have subsequently changed their attitude towards me after being fed up of of my unending lectures, though that's simply a matter of how long we've known one another.		\|Most people who've done this to me in the past have subsequently changed their attitude towards me after being fed up of of my unending lectures, though that's simply a matter of how long we've known one another.
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	\|「帰んのか？　早いじゃん今日は。<br>ゼミ寄ってかないの？」		\|「帰んのか？　早いじゃん今日は。<br>ゼミ寄ってかないの？」
	\|"Going home ~~now~~? You're early today. <br>Don't you have to stop by the seminar?"		\|"Going home already? You're early today. <br>Don't you have to stop by the seminar?"
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	\|ありがたくて、そして少々持て余す、<br>なにもかも知られちまってる親友…		\|ありがたくて、そして少々持て余す、<br>なにもかも知られちまってる親友…
	\|A friend that I'm grateful for; a friend that's just a little bit too much to handle; and a friend that knows me like the ~~palm~~ of his hand...		\|A friend that I'm grateful for; a friend that's just a little bit too much to handle; and a friend that knows me like the back of his hand...
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	\|普段の言動の９割が、口説き文句と自己陶酔と<br>おちゃらけなこいつの、年に一度の本気の言葉は、<br>嫌なくらい何本も心臓に突き刺さり、死ぬかと思った。		\|普段の言動の９割が、口説き文句と自己陶酔と<br>おちゃらけなこいつの、年に一度の本気の言葉は、<br>嫌なくらい何本も心臓に突き刺さり、死ぬかと思った。
	\|~~While nine~~ tenths of ~~what this man says on a~~ daily ~~basis~~ consists of pick-up lines, complaints or narcissistic bragging, this joker~~'s annual dose of serious conversation seems~~ to hit my heart where it hurts every time, as if it comes with the intent to murder me.		\|Nine tenths of his daily conversation consists of pick-up lines, complaints or narcissistic bragging, but when this joker decides to talk seriously with me, his words seem to hit my heart where it hurts every time, as if it comes with the intent to murder me.
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	\|それでも、昔みたいに毎日顔を合わせていられない。		\|それでも、昔みたいに毎日顔を合わせていられない。
	\|Still, I don't want to see him every day like the old days.		\|Still, I don't want to see him every day like in the old days.
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	\|「だって、もし約束したら、<br>すがってしまうから」		\|「だって、もし約束したら、<br>すがってしまうから」
	\|"Because, if we make a promise, I'll start ~~to rely on~~ it."		\|"Because, if we make a promise, I'll start having faith in it."
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	\|394\|武也\|Takeya		\|394\|武也\|Takeya
	\|「いや、感謝されても困るな。<br>言づて頼まれてたのに、今まで忘れてたくらいなんだし」		\|「いや、感謝されても困るな。<br>言づて頼まれてたのに、今まで忘れてたくらいなんだし」
	\|"I'~~m worried~~ if you thank me like this. After all, I was told to relay that message, yet I forgot about it until now."		\|"I'll be embarrassed if you thank me like this. After all, I was told to relay that message, yet I forgot about it until now."
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	\|418\|武也\|Takeya		\|418\|武也\|Takeya
	\|「お前がお節介過ぎんだよ。<br>昔の春希といい勝負だ」		\|「お前がお節介過ぎんだよ。<br>昔の春希といい勝負だ」
	\|"You butt into others' problems too much. You ~~sure hold a candle to~~ Haruki ~~from~~ the past."		\|"You butt into others' problems too much. You're just like the Haruki of the past."
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	\|編集していた記事も、ほとんど頭に入ってない。<br>…明日の午前中入稿なのに。		\|編集していた記事も、ほとんど頭に入ってない。<br>…明日の午前中入稿なのに。
	\|I completely forgot about the article I was supposed to be editing... ~~The~~ draft is due tomorrow morning.		\|I completely forgot about the article I was supposed to be editing... Even though the draft is due tomorrow morning.
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	\|徐々に、徐々に頭の中を切り替えて、<br>何も考えずに眠れるようになって一週間。		\|徐々に、徐々に頭の中を切り替えて、<br>何も考えずに眠れるようになって一週間。
	\|In the past week, I've steadily tried to ~~extert~~ my brain completely, working myself to exhaustion so that I wouldn't have time to think about it.		\|In the past week, I've steadily tried to exert my brain completely, working myself to exhaustion so that I wouldn't have time to think about it.
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	\|素っ気無く、杉浦小春と名乗った少女は、<br>その次に矢田美穂子という名を口にした。		\|素っ気無く、杉浦小春と名乗った少女は、<br>その次に矢田美穂子という名を口にした。
	\|The girl who had bluntly introduced herself as ~~Suguira~~ Koharu subsequently mentioned the name of Yada Mihoko.		\|The girl who had bluntly introduced herself as Sugiura Koharu subsequently mentioned the name of Yada Mihoko.
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	\|「しょうがないで済むか！<br>俺みたいな奴なんか好きにならないでくれよ！」		\|「しょうがないで済むか！<br>俺みたいな奴なんか好きにならないでくれよ！」
	\|"'It can't be ~~helepd~~' doesn't cut it! Don't come to fall in love with someone like me!"		\|"'It can't be helped' doesn't cut it! Don't come to fall in love with someone like me!"
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	\|俺に対して、声より先に手を出す奴は、<br>大学に入ってからも、[R武也^こいつ]だけだ。		\|俺に対して、声より先に手を出す奴は、<br>大学に入ってからも、[R武也^こいつ]だけだ。
	\|Even in university, if there ~~is one guy~~ who would greet me with his fists before his voice, it would be Takeya.		\|Even amidst our university lives, if there exists only a single person who would greet me with his fists before his voice, it would be Takeya.
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	\|ありがたくて、そして少々持て余す、<br>なにもかも知られちまってる親友…		\|ありがたくて、そして少々持て余す、<br>なにもかも知られちまってる親友…
	\|I ~~am thankful~~ for ~~him, but he~~'s ~~difficult~~ to ~~deal with sometimes because he~~ knows ~~my past so well..~~.		\|A friend that I'm grateful for; a friend that's just a little bit too much to handle; and a friend that knows me like the palm of his hand.
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	\|普段の言動の９割が、口説き文句と自己陶酔と<br>おちゃらけなこいつの、年に一度の本気の言葉は、<br>嫌なくらい何本も心臓に突き刺さり、死ぬかと思った。		\|普段の言動の９割が、口説き文句と自己陶酔と<br>おちゃらけなこいつの、年に一度の本気の言葉は、<br>嫌なくらい何本も心臓に突き刺さり、死ぬかと思った。
	\|~~For as long as I've known this guy, 90 percent~~ of what ~~has come out~~ of ~~his mouth has been~~ complaints, narcissistic bragging, ~~or flirting. But about once per year, whenever~~ this joker ~~gets~~ serious~~, he hits the bullseye deep inside~~ my heart as if ~~trying~~ to kill me.		\|While nine tenths of what this man says on a daily basis consists of pick-up lines, complaints or narcissistic bragging, this joker's annual dose of serious conversation seems to hit my heart where it hurts every time, as if it comes with the intent to kill me.
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	\|それでも、結局根負けしたのはこいつの方で。		\|それでも、結局根負けしたのはこいつの方で。
	\|~~Even so,~~ in the end ~~he just admits defeat and walks away~~.		\|And yet his lack of patience doesn't win him any fights in the end.
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	\|…いや、もしかしたら、<br>ただ、俺のことを見ていられなくなった<br>だけかもしれないけど。		\|…いや、もしかしたら、<br>ただ、俺のことを見ていられなくなった<br>だけかもしれないけど。
	\|...No, ~~maybe~~ this guy simply can't bear witness to the way I act any longer.		\|...No, perhaps this guy simply can't bear witness to the way I act any longer.
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	\|「…本当に『男同士の付き合い』ならな」		\|「…本当に『男同士の付き合い』ならな」
	\|"...Only if it's truly a 'Meeting between two male friends'"		\|"...Only if it's truly a 'Meeting between two male friends'."
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	\|…だからまた、『誰かさん』の泣きそうな笑顔が、<br>眠気に満ちていた俺の脳を覚ましてしまう。		\|…だからまた、『誰かさん』の泣きそうな笑顔が、<br>眠気に満ちていた俺の脳を覚ましてしまう。
	\|...~~That's why, once again,~~ the tearful smile of a "certain someone" woke my drowsy brain up.		\|...Leading to the abrupt resurfacing of the tearful smile of a "certain someone" that woke my drowsy brain up once again.
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	\|「そ、そういう意味じゃなくて…」		\|「そ、そういう意味じゃなくて…」
	\|"That~~, that~~'s not what I meant..."		\|"T-That's not what I meant..."
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	\|あの言葉は条件反射だった。<br>今の俺にとっては、当然の反応だった。		\|あの言葉は条件反射だった。<br>今の俺にとっては、当然の反応だった。
	\|I had only said that ~~in reflex~~. ~~That much~~ was ~~clear to me~~.		\|I had only said that reflexively. Thinking of it right now, I felt it was a natural response.
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	\|だからって、それが他人に、<br>しかも年下の女の子にしていい態度かと言うと…		\|だからって、それが他人に、<br>しかも年下の女の子にしていい態度かと言うと…
	\|But even so, saying it to someone else, especially to a younger girl, with that kind of attitude...		\|But even so, saying it to someone else, especially to a younger girl with that kind of attitude...
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	\|「わかってる。約束は守る」		\|「わかってる。約束は守る」
	\|"I will. ~~I'll keep~~ my ~~promise~~."		\|"I will. You have my word."
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	\|きっと、何も悪気はなかった。<br>本当に、真面目に気持ちを伝えようとしてくれてた。		\|きっと、何も悪気はなかった。<br>本当に、真面目に気持ちを伝えようとしてくれてた。
	\|I'm sure she ~~didn~~'t have any bad intentions. She was only trying to clearly get her message across to me.		\|I'm sure she doesn't have any bad intentions. She was only trying to clearly get her message across to me.
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	\|そんな彼女に、あんな冷たい言葉をかけたのは、<br>許されることじゃないのかもしれない。		\|そんな彼女に、あんな冷たい言葉をかけたのは、<br>許されることじゃないのかもしれない。
	\|I had said such cold words to a girl like it was nothing, and ~~that~~ was ~~truely~~ unforgivable.		\|I had said such cold words to a girl like it was nothing, and perhaps it was truly an unforgivable deed.
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	\|229\|春希\|Haruki		\|229\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「けど、やっぱり彼女の申し出には応じられない。<br>悪いけど」		\|「けど、やっぱり彼女の申し出には応じられない。<br>悪いけど」
	\|"~~But~~, still~~, I~~ can't accept her confession. I'm sorry."		\|"However, I still can't accept her confession. I'm sorry."
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	\|「よっ、久しぶり。<br>今日もまた、徹夜明けの魚の目してやがんなぁ」		\|「よっ、久しぶり。<br>今日もまた、徹夜明けの魚の目してやがんなぁ」

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	\|「そっか…もうそこまで具体的に考えてるんだ。<br>やっぱり、かなわないなぁ」		\|「そっか…もうそこまで具体的に考えてるんだ。<br>やっぱり、かなわないなぁ」
	\|"Is that so... You've already thought it through. I'm no match for you after all."		\|"Is that so...<br>You've already thought it through. I'm no match for you after all."
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	\|あの頃と比べ、あまり表に出なくなったにも関わらず、<br>あの頃以上に周囲の注目を浴びる存在になっていた。		\|あの頃と比べ、あまり表に出なくなったにも関わらず、<br>あの頃以上に周囲の注目を浴びる存在になっていた。
	\|~~Ever since~~ that time, while she's almost never revealed her true self, she still remains as much of striking existence to those around her.		\|Since that time, while she's almost never revealed her true self, she still remains as much of a striking existence as ever to those around her.
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	\|68\|？？？\|???		\|68\|？？？\|???
	\|「よっ、久しぶり。<br>今日もまた、徹夜明けの魚の目してやがんなぁ」		\|「よっ、久しぶり。<br>今日もまた、徹夜明けの魚の目してやがんなぁ」
	\|"Yo, long time no see. ~~You look just like the usual,~~ dead fish eyes after an all-nighter again."		\|"Yo, long time no see. I see you still have those dead fish eyes after pulling an all-nighter again today."
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	\|「『徹夜明けで、死んだ魚のような腐った目をしてる』<br>って言いたいんだろうけど、妙な省略するな。<br>それじゃ日本語の表現として通用しないぞ」		\|「『徹夜明けで、死んだ魚のような腐った目をしてる』<br>って言いたいんだろうけど、妙な省略するな。<br>それじゃ日本語の表現として通用しないぞ」
	\|"What you wanted to say ~~earlier should be~~ '~~After~~ an all-nighter, ~~you've gotten the rotten eye of a dead fish'...~~ Don't omit stuff like that. It's not proper use of Japanese, you know?"		\|"What you wanted to say was 'your eyes are as rotten as a dead fish's after pulling an all-nighter', right? Don't omit stuff like that. It's not proper use of Japanese, you know?"
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	\|「…普通、コンパだから寄るもんだろ？」		\|「…普通、コンパだから寄るもんだろ？」
	\|"...That's the one thing people would usually make sure to show up to, no?"		\|"...That's the one thing people would usually make sure to show up to, you know?"
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	\|「お前、そろそろ付属のコはやめとけよ。<br>大学三年にもなって」		\|「お前、そろそろ付属のコはやめとけよ。<br>大学三年にもなって」
	\|"You should ~~start~~ lay off those high school girls already. You're a 3rd year university student, for crying out loud."		\|"You should lay off those high school girls already. You're a 3rd year university student, for crying out loud."
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	\|その顔は完全に怒りに満ちていて、<br>でも、だからこそ少しだけ安心する。<br>…泣かれるより、よっぽど楽だから。		\|その顔は完全に怒りに満ちていて、<br>でも、だからこそ少しだけ安心する。<br>…泣かれるより、よっぽど楽だから。
	\|Her face is filled with rage, but that's also somewhat reassuring... ~~After all,~~ it's better ~~if she's angry~~ than ~~if she's crying~~.		\|Her face is filled with rage, but that's also somewhat reassuring... it's a better response than having to see a girl cry, anyway.
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	\|「そんなのいちいち覚えられるか。<br>お前みたいに一人の女の子だけを<br>どん底まで泣かせたことはないんでね、俺は」		\|「そんなのいちいち覚えられるか。<br>お前みたいに一人の女の子だけを<br>どん底まで泣かせたことはないんでね、俺は」
	\|"How could I remember something like that? ~~Unlike~~ you, I ~~don~~'t ~~just love~~ one girl ~~and~~ then make her cry like there's no tomorrow."		\|"How could I remember something like that? And unlike you, I didn't stick with only one girl then make her cry like there's no tomorrow."
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	\|訂正。		\|訂正。
	\|~~I stand corrected.~~		\|Correction:
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	\|『泣かれるより、よっぽど楽』ってのは、<br>対象が俺じゃない場合にのみ通用するケースであり。		\|『泣かれるより、よっぽど楽』ってのは、<br>対象が俺じゃない場合にのみ通用するケースであり。
	\|~~The statement~~ "~~Angry is~~ better than ~~crying~~" only applies if I'm not the ~~target~~.		\|"A better response than having to see a girl cry" is something that only applies to cases where I in particular am not the culprit.
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	\|今みたいに、会ったこともない女のコに、<br>いきなり敵意むき出しで睨みつけられる場合には、<br>何の参考にもならないと言うことを、思い知らされた。		\|今みたいに、会ったこともない女のコに、<br>いきなり敵意むき出しで睨みつけられる場合には、<br>何の参考にもならないと言うことを、思い知らされた。
	\|~~Until~~ now, I~~'ve never~~ in ~~my life met a~~ girl ~~who has~~ glared at me with such hostility.		\|I realize now that I have no recollection of any situation in which an unknown girl abruptly appeared and glared at me with such hostility up until this point.
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