White Album 2/Script/2005 - Revision history

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Turbos: /* Text */

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	\|354\|中川\|Nakagawa		\|354\|中川\|Nakagawa
	\|「ちょっとぉ、北原さん」		\|「ちょっとぉ、北原さん」
	\|"Come on, ~~Kithara~~-san."		\|"Come on, Kitahara-san."
	\|}}		\|}}

Noir: /* Text */

2018-04-05T13:51:37Z

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	\|今日は日曜日。		\|今日は日曜日。
	\|~~Today is~~ Sunday.		\|It's Sunday today.
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	\|一週間のうちで唯一、<br>自由な時間を持て余してしまう、忌むべき日。		\|一週間のうちで唯一、<br>自由な時間を持て余してしまう、忌むべき日。
	\|The ~~one~~ day of the week I ~~hate, one full~~ of free time.		\|The sole detestable day of the week for me, given that I have a lot of free time that I don't know what to do with for myself.
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	\|寝起きの俺よりも弱々しい、<br>大人の男性の声だった。		\|寝起きの俺よりも弱々しい、<br>大人の男性の声だった。
	\|What wakes me up is the voice of a man who sounds like he's in even worse shape than me.		\|What wakes me up is the voice of an elderly man who sounds like he's in even worse shape than me.
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	\|13\|佐藤\|Satou		\|13\|佐藤\|Satou
	\|「や～助かりました北原さん。<br>ほんと大変だったんすよ。<br>先月でバイトが軒並み辞めたところに店長までも…」		\|「や～助かりました北原さん。<br>ほんと大変だったんすよ。<br>先月でバイトが軒並み辞めたところに店長までも…」
	\|"Wow, I really can't thank you enough, Kitahara-san. Things were looking pretty bad. The part-timers from last month all resigned and now even the manager..."		\|"Wow, I really can't thank you enough, Kitahara-san. Things were looking pretty bad. The part-timers from last month all resigned, and now even the manager..."
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	\|南末次駅から徒歩１０分のところにある<br>ファミリーレストラン。		\|南末次駅から徒歩１０分のところにある<br>ファミリーレストラン。
	\|A family restaurant ~~about~~ a 10 minute walk from the station.		\|A family restaurant located around a 10-minute walk from the station.
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	\|ついでに言えば、<br>峰城大からも徒歩１０分のところにあるので、<br>来客の３割くらいはウチや付属の学生で占められている。		\|ついでに言えば、<br>峰城大からも徒歩１０分のところにあるので、<br>来客の３割くらいはウチや付属の学生で占められている。
	\|~~At the same time~~, ~~since~~ it's a 10 minute walk from the university, ~~too~~, about ~~30%~~ of the customers consist of our university or the high school's students.		\|While I'm at it, given that it's a 10 minute walk from the university, as well, about three tenths of the customers here consist of our university or the high school's students.
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	\|店長を除けば最古参で、しかも俺より二つ年上なのに、<br>何故か俺に敬語を使う、少しばかり弱腰な幹部候補。		\|店長を除けば最古参で、しかも俺より二つ年上なのに、<br>何故か俺に敬語を使う、少しばかり弱腰な幹部候補。
	\|The manager aside, he's the one with the most experience, not to mention he's two years older than me. But despite all that, this slightly cowardly backup manager always speaks so politely to me.		\|The manager aside, he's the one with the most experience here, not to mention he's two years older than me. But despite all that, this slightly cowardly backup manager always speaks so politely to me.
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	\|49\|佐藤\|Satou		\|49\|佐藤\|Satou
	\|「いや～、北原さんが戻るっていうから、<br>どうしても期待しちゃって。<br>見るに見かねて毎日来てくれるんじゃないかって…」		\|「いや～、北原さんが戻るっていうから、<br>どうしても期待しちゃって。<br>見るに見かねて毎日来てくれるんじゃないかって…」
	\|"Well, after I heard you were coming back, I couldn't help but get my hopes up. 'Wouldn't it be nice if he could come every day?', or something like that."		\|"Well~ after I heard you were coming back, I couldn't help but get my hopes up. 'Wouldn't it be nice if he could come every day?', or something like that."
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	\|佐藤には失礼だけど、<br>店長を除けばこの店で一番使えるスタッフで、<br>俺の恐怖政治の一番の理解者だった記憶がある。		\|佐藤には失礼だけど、<br>店長を除けばこの店で一番使えるスタッフで、<br>俺の恐怖政治の一番の理解者だった記憶がある。
	\|This might be a little disrespectful to Satou, but I do remember her as the most useful staff here behind the manager, and the one who best understood my reign of terror.		\|This might be a little disrespectful to Satou, but I do remember her as the most useful staff member here behind the manager, and the one who best understood my reign of terror while I was still working here.
	\|This is probably a reference to the historical Reign of Terror, but any description to make his leadership habits seem scary can work here.}}		\|This is probably a reference to the historical Reign of Terror, but any description to make his leadership habits seem scary can work here.}}

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	\|なんてこった。		\|なんてこった。
	\|Oh ~~man~~.		\|Oh, what the hell.
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	\|101\|春希\|Haruki		\|101\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「例えば、半熟オムライスだったらこのボタン。<br>２個なら…」		\|「例えば、半熟オムライスだったらこのボタン。<br>２個なら…」
	\|"For example, if you needed a half-cooked ~~omelette~~, you'd press this button. If you needed two..."		\|"For example, if you needed a half-cooked omurice, you'd press this button. If you needed two..."
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	\|俺と新しいバイト…こと、<br>峰城大付属３年杉浦小春は、<br>皆の邪魔にならないよう、フロアの隅に佇んでいた。		\|俺と新しいバイト…こと、<br>峰城大付属３年杉浦小春は、<br>皆の邪魔にならないよう、フロアの隅に佇んでいた。
	\|Me and the new part-time... worker, Houjou High's 3rd year Sugiura Koharu~~, maintain our positions on the~~ side as to not get in anyone's way.		\|Me and the new part-time... worker — Houjou High's 3rd year student Sugiura Koharu — remain at one side so as to not get in anyone's way.
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	\|…こうして羅列してみると、<br>確かに俺が彼女だったとしても、<br>間違いなく嫌うだろうなぁ。		\|…こうして羅列してみると、<br>確かに俺が彼女だったとしても、<br>間違いなく嫌うだろうなぁ。
	\|...~~When~~ I ~~think about it,~~ even I ~~would be annoyed if that had happened~~ to me.		\|...I have no doubt that this girl absolutely despises me right now even as I enumerate these steps to her.
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	\|129\|小春\|Koharu		\|129\|小春\|Koharu
	\|「結構です」		\|「結構です」
	\|"~~No need~~."		\|"That will do."
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	\|159\|春希\|Haruki		\|159\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「ちょっと折る必要があってね…鼻」		\|「ちょっと折る必要があってね…鼻」
	\|"We need to cut ~~her~~ down to size a ~~little~~."		\|"It seems we need to cut down to size...a certain someone, I mean."
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2018-03-16T23:30:56Z

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	\|169\|春希\|Haruki		\|169\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「悪いな。<br>教育終わったら俺がフォローするから。<br>…久しぶりだから更に足引っ張るかもしれないけど」		\|「悪いな。<br>教育終わったら俺がフォローするから。<br>…久しぶりだから更に足引っ張るかもしれないけど」
	\|"Sorry about this. I'll take over once her training's done. But it's been a while since I last did this, so I ~~might~~ might mess up even worse."		\|"Sorry about this. I'll take over once her training's done. But it's been a while since I last did this, so I might mess up even worse."
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	\|177\|春希\|Haruki		\|177\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「駄目、全然駄目。<br>もうさっきから膝が笑って笑って」		\|「駄目、全然駄目。<br>もうさっきから膝が笑って笑って」
	\|"No way, no way. My knees ~~have been~~ killing me ~~these last couple of minutes~~."		\|"No way, no way. My knees started killing me near the end there."
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	\|178\|佐藤\|Satou		\|178\|佐藤\|Satou
	\|「それはブランクじゃなくて歳…お疲れさまっす！」		\|「それはブランクじゃなくて歳…お疲れさまっす！」
	\|"That's got less to do with your ~~break~~ than your age... ~~Oh, good~~ work today!"		\|"That's got less to do with your hiatus than your age... Good work today!"
	\|~~This line feels weird, someone check the TL for me please? *Phirb: Looks alright to me, though I don't really see why he would say this.~~}}		\|}}

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	\|両チーフの温かい（？）ねぎらいの言葉を受け、<br>少しふらつく足を引きずってフロアの隅に戻る。		\|両チーフの温かい（？）ねぎらいの言葉を受け、<br>少しふらつく足を引きずってフロアの隅に戻る。
	\|Having received the ~~two chiefs'~~ warm~~(?)~~ words of gratitude, I unsteadily walk back behind the counter.		\|Having received the... warm... words of gratitude from both of the team chiefs, I unsteadily walk back behind the counter.
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	\|184\|春希\|Haruki		\|184\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「さてと…感想は？」		\|「さてと…感想は？」
	\|"So... ~~What~~ do you think?"		\|"So... what do you think?"
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	\|とりあえず、狙い通りに鼻が根本からポキリと折れて、<br>日本人らしい容姿に戻ってる杉浦小春の隣に立つ。		\|とりあえず、狙い通りに鼻が根本からポキリと折れて、<br>日本人らしい容姿に戻ってる杉浦小春の隣に立つ。
	\|I walk up to Sugiura Koharu, whose ego is but~~<br>~~a fraction of a fraction of what it was before, and stand beside her.		\|I walk up to the humbled Sugiura Koharu, whose ego is but a fraction of a fraction of what it was before, and stand beside her.
	\|Phirb: I see that a lot of meaning is removed from this translation, but ultimately I don't deem it as necessary and could potentially confuse readers, so I'm leaving it as is.}}		\|Phirb: I see that a lot of meaning is removed from this translation, but ultimately I don't deem it as necessary and could potentially confuse readers, so I'm leaving it as is.}}

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	\|98\|男子店員２\|Male Clerk 2		\|98\|男子店員２\|Male Clerk 2
	\|「ありがとうございます。<br>お会計２５８０円になります。<br>…はい、５０００円お預かりします」		\|「ありがとうございます。<br>お会計２５８０円になります。<br>…はい、５０００円お預かりします」
	\|"Thank you very much. Your total comes to 2580 yen.<br>... Your change comes to 2420 yen."		\|"Thank you very much. Your total comes to 2580 yen.<br>...Your change comes to 2420 yen."
	\|The last sentence is originally "I've received your 5000 yen" but I don't think it works in English. "Your change comes to 2420 yen." might sound better. // Agreed here. I'll go ahead and do it for now}}		\|The last sentence is originally "I've received your 5000 yen" but I don't think it works in English. "Your change comes to 2420 yen." might sound better. // Agreed here. I'll go ahead and do it for now}}

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	\|「言ってるそばからっ！？」		\|「言ってるそばからっ！？」
	\|"Right after what I just said!?"		\|"Right after what I just said!?"
	\|The last line's tone is meant to be doubtful, so this line is saying "You're saying that right after I just said to not look down on me?!". What I have here might not be too clear}}		\|The last line's tone is meant to be doubtful, so this line is saying "You're saying that right after I just said to not look down on me!?". What I have here might not be too clear}}

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	\|キッチンチーフに膝カックンを食らった。		\|キッチンチーフに膝カックンを食らった。
	\|... And a knee from the kitchen chief.		\|...And a knee from the kitchen chief.
	\|}}		\|}}

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2018-02-24T20:53:03Z

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	\|佐藤には失礼だけど、<br>店長を除けばこの店で一番使えるスタッフで、<br>俺の恐怖政治の一番の理解者だった記憶がある。		\|佐藤には失礼だけど、<br>店長を除けばこの店で一番使えるスタッフで、<br>俺の恐怖政治の一番の理解者だった記憶がある。
	\|This might be a little disrespectful to Satou, but I do remember her as the most useful staff here behind the manager, and the one who ~~most~~ understood my reign of terror.		\|This might be a little disrespectful to Satou, but I do remember her as the most useful staff here behind the manager, and the one who best understood my reign of terror.
	\|This is probably a reference to the historical Reign of Terror, but any description to make his leadership habits seem scary can work here.}}		\|This is probably a reference to the historical Reign of Terror, but any description to make his leadership habits seem scary can work here.}}

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	\|三年間『許す理由がないから許しあえない』<br>どこかの二人を嘲笑うかのように、<br>和解の瞬間は実にあっさりとやってきた。		\|三年間『許す理由がないから許しあえない』<br>どこかの二人を嘲笑うかのように、<br>和解の瞬間は実にあっさりとやってきた。
	\|As if to ~~laugh at some other people's three years' worth of~~ "~~there~~'s nothing to forgive you for so I won't forgive you", ~~we reached~~ a ~~compromise here easily and effectively~~.		\|As if to mock the "There's nothing to forgive you for, so I won't forgive you" situation that's been tearing at me for three years, my reconciliation with this girl came in a mere instant.
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	\|こんな簡単なことが…<br>こんな、あっという間のことが…		\|こんな簡単なことが…<br>こんな、あっという間のことが…
	\|~~Something so~~ simple... <br>In a mere instant...		\|It was that simple...<br>In a mere instant...
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	\|誰に対してもできるのなら、<br>今の俺は、そして今のあいつは、<br>一体どうなっていたのかなって…		\|誰に対してもできるのなら、<br>今の俺は、そして今のあいつは、<br>一体どうなっていたのかなって…
	\|If I can be like this to anyone, ~~<br>~~then ~~how should I explain~~ the ~~way I am with~~ her now...?"		\|If I can be like this with anyone else, then what in the world is going on between me and her right now...?"
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	\|339\|小春\|Koharu		\|339\|小春\|Koharu
	\|「そっちだって嘘ついてたくせに！<br>彼女がいること美穂子に隠してたくせに！」		\|「そっちだって嘘ついてたくせに！<br>彼女がいること美穂子に隠してたくせに！」
	\|"That's because you haven't been telling us the truth! You hid the fact ~~about your~~ girlfriend from Mihoko!"		\|"That's because you haven't been telling us the truth! You hid the fact that you had a girlfriend from Mihoko!"
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	\|341\|小春\|Koharu		\|341\|小春\|Koharu
	\|「あなたのその優柔不断な態度のせいで、<br>ここまで事態がややこしくなっちゃったんですよ！」		\|「あなたのその優柔不断な態度のせいで、<br>ここまで事態がややこしくなっちゃったんですよ！」
	\|"It's all because you're so indecisive that things ~~got this~~ complicated!"		\|"It's all because you're so indecisive that things have gotten so complicated!"
	\|}}		\|}}

Phirb: Changed the style of stutter punctuation for the beginning of sentences (e.g. W-well... --> W-Well...)

2018-02-08T18:11:58Z

Changed the style of stutter punctuation for the beginning of sentences (e.g. W-well... --> W-Well...)

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	\|137\|春希\|Haruki		\|137\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「あ、ああ。<br>俺は基本的に人の足りないところならどこでも…」		\|「あ、ああ。<br>俺は基本的に人の足りないところならどこでも…」
	\|"Y-~~yeah~~. I basically took on whatever position was short on people."		\|"Y-Yeah. I basically took on whatever position was short on people."
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	\|295\|春希\|Haruki		\|295\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「そ、それにしても卒業旅行でバイトかぁ。<br>家の人は出してくれないの？」		\|「そ、それにしても卒業旅行でバイトかぁ。<br>家の人は出してくれないの？」
	\|"S-so you're working to pay for your trip, huh? Your parents can't pay for you?"		\|"S-So you're working to pay for your trip, huh? Your parents can't pay for you?"
	\|}}		\|}}

Phirb: Punctuation fixes

2018-01-03T19:52:23Z

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	\|2\|春希\|Haruki		\|2\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「…八時ぃ？」		\|「…八時ぃ？」
	\|"... Eight o'clock?"		\|"...Eight o'clock?"
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	\|「………そちらこそ大丈夫ですか？」		\|「………そちらこそ大丈夫ですか？」
	\|"... I should be the one asking that. Are you okay?"		\|"...I should be the one asking that. Are you okay?"
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	\|…のはいいんだけど。		\|…のはいいんだけど。
	\|... If only that was the whole story.		\|...If only that was the whole story.
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	\|…特にこういう会話をしてる時なんかは痛切に感じる。		\|…特にこういう会話をしてる時なんかは痛切に感じる。
	\|... That sense of worry doubles when these kinds of conversations come up.		\|...That sense of worry doubles when these kinds of conversations come up.
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	\|50\|春希\|Haruki		\|50\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「…俺もうすぐ就職活動なんだよ？」		\|「…俺もうすぐ就職活動なんだよ？」
	\|"... I have to start job-hunting soon, you know?"		\|"...I have to start job-hunting soon, you know?"
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	\|57\|佐藤\|Satou		\|57\|佐藤\|Satou
	\|「…ごめんねホールチーフ」		\|「…ごめんねホールチーフ」
	\|"... Terribly sorry, hall chief."		\|"...Terribly sorry, hall chief."
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	\|95\|中川\|Nakagawa		\|95\|中川\|Nakagawa
	\|「お待たせしました。<br>チーズハンバーグセットと、ミックスピザでございます。<br>…鉄板熱くなっておりますのでお気をつけください」		\|「お待たせしました。<br>チーズハンバーグセットと、ミックスピザでございます。<br>…鉄板熱くなっておりますのでお気をつけください」
	\|"Sorry for the wait! <br>Here is your cheeseburger combo and mixed pizza. <br>... The tray is still hot, so please be careful."		\|"Sorry for the wait! <br>Here is your cheeseburger combo and mixed pizza. <br>...The tray is still hot, so please be careful."
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	\|…のはいいんだけど。		\|…のはいいんだけど。
	\|... If only that was the case.		\|...If only that was the case.
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	\|113\|春希\|Haruki		\|113\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「…聞いてる？」		\|「…聞いてる？」
	\|"... Are you listening?"		\|"...Are you listening?"
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	\|…こうして羅列してみると、<br>確かに俺が彼女だったとしても、<br>間違いなく嫌うだろうなぁ。		\|…こうして羅列してみると、<br>確かに俺が彼女だったとしても、<br>間違いなく嫌うだろうなぁ。
	\|... When I think about it, even I would be annoyed if that had happened to me.		\|...When I think about it, even I would be annoyed if that had happened to me.
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|122\|春希\|Haruki		\|122\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「…お見事」		\|「…お見事」
	\|"... Good work."		\|"...Good work."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|人の好き嫌いでモチベーションを下げられても、<br>雇用側としては非常に困る訳で…と言いたかったのに。		\|人の好き嫌いでモチベーションを下げられても、<br>雇用側としては非常に困る訳で…と言いたかったのに。
	\|Letting your own preferences affect your work performance would be nothing but trouble for the employer... Is what I'd like to say.		\|Letting your own preferences affect your work performance would be nothing but trouble for the employer... <br>Is what I'd like to say.
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|142\|春希\|Haruki		\|142\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「…本当に大丈夫か？」		\|「…本当に大丈夫か？」
	\|"... Are you sure you're gonna be okay?"		\|"...Are you sure you're gonna be okay?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|149\|中川\|Nakagawa		\|149\|中川\|Nakagawa
	\|「…なに？　てんちょ」		\|「…なに？　てんちょ」
	\|"... What's up, manager?"		\|"...What's up, manager?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|240\|小春\|Koharu		\|240\|小春\|Koharu
	\|「…はい？」		\|「…はい？」
	\|"... Yes?"		\|"...Yes?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|257\|春希\|Haruki		\|257\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「…行ってきます」		\|「…行ってきます」
	\|"... I'll be off now."		\|"...I'll be off now."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|292\|小春\|Koharu		\|292\|小春\|Koharu
	\|「ま、まさか…」		\|「ま、まさか…」
	\|"~~No...~~ No way."		\|"N-No way."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|361\|\|		\|361\|\|
	\|生真面目で、責任感が強くて、負けず嫌いで、<br>…そして、俺なんかより打たれ強くて。		\|生真面目で、責任感が強くて、負けず嫌いで、<br>…そして、俺なんかより打たれ強くて。
	\|Serious, with a strong sense of responsibility, and a hatred for defeat... And even tougher to break than me.		\|Serious, with a strong sense of responsibility, and a hatred for defeat. <br>...And even tougher to break than me.
	\|}}		\|}}

Phirb at 20:14, 24 December 2017

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