White Album 2/Script/2015 - Revision history

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2021-12-18T18:39:23Z

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Phirb: Changed the style of stutter punctuation for the beginning of sentences (e.g. W-well... --> W-Well...)

2018-02-08T19:11:40Z

Changed the style of stutter punctuation for the beginning of sentences (e.g. W-well... --> W-Well...)

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	\|260\|春希\|Haruki		\|260\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「は、は～い！<br>ただいま！」		\|「は、は～い！<br>ただいま！」
	\|"O-~~okay~~! <br>I'll be there in a moment!"		\|"O-Okay! <br>I'll be there in a moment!"
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	\|335\|春希\|Haruki		\|335\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「そ、それは…」		\|「そ、それは…」
	\|"Th-~~that~~'s..."		\|"Th-That's..."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|353\|麻理\|Mari		\|353\|麻理\|Mari
	\|「あ、ありがと。<br>…で、何の話？」		\|「あ、ありがと。<br>…で、何の話？」
	\|"Th-~~thanks~~? <br>...Um, what are you talking about?"		\|"Th-Thanks? <br>...Um, what are you talking about?"
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	\|363\|麻理\|Mari		\|363\|麻理\|Mari
	\|「こ、こらっ、離れなさいっ！」		\|「こ、こらっ、離れなさいっ！」
	\|"He-~~hey~~! Let go of me!"		\|"He-Hey! Let go of me!"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|366\|春希\|Haruki		\|366\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「ほ、ほら、あっちだってハッキリ否定したろ？」		\|「ほ、ほら、あっちだってハッキリ否定したろ？」
	\|"S-~~see~~. She fully denied it just now, didn't she?"		\|"S-See. She fully denied it just now, didn't she?"
	\|}}		\|}}

Phirb: No major changes with this one either, however I would like to revisit the lines where Koharu is eating

2017-12-30T07:10:01Z

No major changes with this one either, however I would like to revisit the lines where Koharu is eating

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Cthaeh: Protected "White Album 2/Script/2015": project staff request ([Edit=Allow only autoconfirmed users] (indefinite) [Move=Allow only autoconfirmed users] (indefinite))

2017-08-10T03:20:27Z

Protected "White Album 2/Script/2015": project staff request ([Edit=Allow only autoconfirmed users] (indefinite) [Move=Allow only autoconfirmed users] (indefinite))

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Tuxedosammy: Revisit: 60 TLC 368. Is there something supposed to be grammatically wrong w the sentence? (in reference to the next line)

2016-09-12T15:10:44Z

Revisit: 60 TLC 368. Is there something supposed to be grammatically wrong w the sentence? (in reference to the next line)

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	\|雪菜のメールに、少しだけ毒が含まれてた。		\|雪菜のメールに、少しだけ毒が含まれてた。
	\|Setsuna's text was coated with a ~~light~~ layer of poison.		\|Setsuna's text was coated with a thin layer of poison.
	\|Literal translation.}}		\|Literal translation.}}

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	\|何も言えず溜め込んで、<br>そのせいで爆発しそうになって、<br>抑え込むのにとてつもないエネルギーを使って。		\|何も言えず溜め込んで、<br>そのせいで爆発しそうになって、<br>抑え込むのにとてつもないエネルギーを使って。
	\|Keeping everything to herself without saying a word, almost to the point ~~of bursting~~, and exhausting herself as a result of it...		\|Keeping everything to herself without saying a word, almost to the point where she bursts, and exhausting herself as a result of it...
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	\|もしかしたら、今の俺たちには、<br>この、文字だけの関係が一番心地良いのかもしれない。		\|もしかしたら、今の俺たちには、<br>この、文字だけの関係が一番心地良いのかもしれない。
	\|Considering our current ~~state~~, <br>this text-only relationship might be the most comforting solution for both of us.		\|Considering our current situation, <br>this text-only relationship might be the most comforting solution for both of us.
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|ランチタイムを猛烈な勢いで頑張ったせいで、<br>この遅めの昼食時には、お腹も猛烈に空いていたとか。		\|ランチタイムを猛烈な勢いで頑張ったせいで、<br>この遅めの昼食時には、お腹も猛烈に空いていたとか。
	\|Maybe she tired herself too much working so fiercely through the lunch rush that by the time she could have lunch herself, her hunger became too ~~fierce~~ to bear.		\|Maybe she tired herself too much working so fiercely through the lunch rush that by the time she could have lunch herself, her hunger became too much to bear.
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	\|118\|小春\|Koharu		\|118\|小春\|Koharu
	\|実はですね先輩…わたしこのお店で<br>立場的に追い詰められてるみたいなんです」		\|実はですね先輩…わたしこのお店で<br>立場的に追い詰められてるみたいなんです」
	\|The truth is, senpai... I'm feeling a little pressured in ~~this~~ restaurant because of my position."		\|The truth is, senpai... I'm feeling a little pressured in the restaurant because of my position."
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	\|172\|春希\|Haruki		\|172\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「だからって正論を振りかざすのもどうかと思うぞ…」		\|「だからって正論を振りかざすのもどうかと思うぞ…」
	\|"That doesn't mean you should just ~~broadcast~~ it to the world like that..."		\|"That doesn't mean you should just announce it to the world like that..."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|たった一月で嫌というほど思い知らされた経験則がある。<br>…こうなった後の杉浦は無敵の正義超人だと。		\|たった一月で嫌というほど思い知らされた経験則がある。<br>…こうなった後の杉浦は無敵の正義超人だと。
	\|If there's anything I've learned in this past month, it's that whenever Sugiura's like this, she's not far from turning into an invincible champion of justice.		\|If there's anything I've learned this past month, it's that whenever Sugiura's like this, she's not far from turning into an invincible champion of justice.
	\|this might need a bit of trimming to fit into one line, or some rewriting to split it into two lines.}}		\|this might need a bit of trimming to fit into one line, or some rewriting to split it into two lines.}}

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2016-09-09T00:24:07Z

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	\|5\|佐藤\|Satou		\|5\|佐藤\|Satou
	\|「ホールはランチタイム終了後から<br>順次休憩に入ってください。<br>…キッチンはヘルプが来るまで待って」		\|「ホールはランチタイム終了後から<br>順次休憩に入ってください。<br>…キッチンはヘルプが来るまで待って」
	\|"The members in the hall can take turns taking breaks after the lunch rush ~~is over~~... The kitchen staff should wait until the other helpers arrive."		\|"The members in the hall can take turns taking breaks after the lunch rush... The kitchen staff should wait until the other helpers arrive."
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	\|32\|中川\|Nakagawa		\|32\|中川\|Nakagawa
	\|「そんだけ可愛いのに、もったいない」		\|「そんだけ可愛いのに、もったいない」
	\|"And you'd be so cute without it, too. What a waste."		\|"And you'd be so cute without it too. What a waste."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|俺が見たら、絶対にちくんとすることを、<br>しっかり残しておくのはなんでなんだろうな。		\|俺が見たら、絶対にちくんとすることを、<br>しっかり残しておくのはなんでなんだろうな。
	\|She probably kept them on there on purpose, thinking I'd be super curious about it or something.		\|She probably kept them there on purpose, thinking I'd be super curious about it or something.
	\|}}		\|}}

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2016-02-29T16:42:42Z

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	\|155\|春希\|Haruki		\|155\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「そういう言い方、<br>俺に対して失礼だと思わないか？<br>…あえて指摘しないけど」		\|「そういう言い方、<br>俺に対して失礼だと思わないか？<br>…あえて指摘しないけど」
	\|"Doesn't the way you put it s awfully disrespectful ~~towards~~ me? Not that I would disagree, though."		\|"Doesn't the way you put it sound awfully disrespectful to me? Not that I would disagree, though."
	\|}}		\|}}

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2015-09-24T15:59:25Z

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	\|369\|春希\|Haruki		\|369\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「お前らもう一度中学から国語やり直してこい」		\|「お前らもう一度中学から国語やり直してこい」
	\|"You ~~guys~~ need to go back to middle school and relearn proper Japanese."		\|"You need to go back to middle school and relearn proper Japanese."
	\|}}		\|}}

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2015-09-24T13:24:21Z

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2015-09-23T20:27:03Z

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