White Album 2/Script/2016 - Revision history

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2021-12-18T18:39:48Z

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Phirb: Minor edit 166

2019-06-28T01:04:06Z

Minor edit 166

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	\|166\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|166\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「？　できなかったのに？」		\|「？　できなかったのに？」
	\|"Huh? ~~You mean, because~~ I couldn't do it?"		\|"Huh? Even though I couldn't do it?"
	\|}}		\|}}

Phirb: Minor Edit

2019-06-28T00:49:11Z

Minor Edit

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	\|100\|千晶\|Chiaki		\|100\|千晶\|Chiaki
	\|「あ～たとえ話でいいから、何でもいいから」		\|「あ～たとえ話でいいから、何でもいいから」
	\|"Aaah~! ~~Drop the~~ '~~hypothetical~~' stuff, just tell me~!"		\|"Aaah~! 'Hypothetical' stuff is fine, just tell me~!"
	\|}}		\|}}

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2018-12-17T06:04:49Z

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	\|9\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|9\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「せっかくの冬休みなのになぁ」		\|「せっかくの冬休みなのになぁ」
	\|"Even though it's winter vacation, ~~jeez~~."		\|"Even though it's winter vacation, geez."
	\|}}		\|}}

NaokiP: /* Text */

2018-07-03T02:16:42Z

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	\|だから、もうすぐ電車が来て、<br>俺の体のどこも温かくなくなってしまうことが、<br>なんだか辛いって、そんな、酷い心配をしてる。		\|だから、もうすぐ電車が来て、<br>俺の体のどこも温かくなくなってしまうことが、<br>なんだか辛いって、そんな、酷い心配をしてる。
	\|That's why the fact that the train will be here soon, the reality that will make my body to lose this warmth, makes me feel very pained and worried.		\|That's why the fact that the train will be here soon, the reality that will make my body lose this warmth, makes me feel very pained and worried.
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	\|538\|千晶\|Chiaki		\|538\|千晶\|Chiaki
	\|「春希のお望みのあたしが相手するよ？<br>親友でも、悪友でも...それとも...」		\|「春希のお望みのあたしが相手するよ？<br>親友でも、悪友でも...それとも...」
	\|"I'll be ~~whatever~~ you ~~want~~ me to be. ~~A good~~ friend, a bad ~~influence,~~ or even..."		\|"I'll be whoever you wish for me to be, Haruki. Whether it's just a friend, either good or bad... or perhaps even..."
	\|}}		\|}}

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2018-03-21T09:33:22Z

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	\|『...どうかな？　そういうのあまり想像できないな。<br>雪菜って見かけによらず出不精だもんな』		\|『...どうかな？　そういうのあまり想像できないな。<br>雪菜って見かけによらず出不精だもんな』
	\|"...I wonder? I can't imagine how you'll spend the holidays. ~~You~~'re actually more of a stay-home person than you seem, Setsuna."		\|"...I wonder? I can't imagine how you'll spend the holidays. I know that you're actually more of a stay-home person than you might seem, Setsuna."
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	\|9\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|9\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「せっかくの冬休みなのになぁ」		\|「せっかくの冬休みなのになぁ」
	\|"Even ~~thought~~ it's winter vacation, jeez."		\|"Even though it's winter vacation, jeez."
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	\|今までゼミの行事を、課題提出含め全部スルーしてきた<br>和泉が、初めて打ち上げに参加してもいいってんで、<br>結構方々に調整で走り回ったんだけどなぁ。		\|今までゼミの行事を、課題提出含め全部スルーしてきた<br>和泉が、初めて打ち上げに参加してもいいってんで、<br>結構方々に調整で走り回ったんだけどなぁ。
	\|She never attended any of the seminars, even when her reports were due, but Izumi suddenly decided to attend the ~~celebration~~ all of a sudden, forcing me to make all sorts of adjustments.		\|She never attended any of the seminars, even when her reports were due, but Izumi suddenly decided to attend the party all of a sudden, forcing me to make all sorts of adjustments.
	\|~~Is there anything a bit more specific than "celebration" for this?~~}}		\|}}

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	\|101\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|101\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「人の言うこと頭から信じてないんだもんなぁ。<br>.........別に、一進一退だよ」		\|「人の言うこと頭から信じてないんだもんなぁ。<br>.........別に、一進一退だよ」
	\|"You never seem to believe what ~~other~~ say. <br>...The truth is, we're just going back and forth."		\|"You never seem to believe what others say. <br>...The truth is, we're just going back and forth."
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	\|114\|千晶\|Chiaki		\|114\|千晶\|Chiaki
	\|「っ！　できた～！<br>ほらほら見て見て！<br>サクランボの茎、口の中で結べたよ？」		\|「っ！　できた～！<br>ほらほら見て見て！<br>サクランボの茎、口の中で結べたよ？」
	\|"Oh! I did it~! Check this out!<br>I made a knot with the ~~peach~~ stem in my mouth!"		\|"Oh! I did it~! Check this out!<br>I made a knot with the cherry stem in my mouth!"
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	\|和泉の打ち上げ出席宣言と結局のすっぽかしは、<br>男子ゼミ生の間に、結構な波紋を呼んでいたらしい。		\|和泉の打ち上げ出席宣言と結局のすっぽかしは、<br>男子ゼミ生の間に、結構な波紋を呼んでいたらしい。
	\|Izumi said she would come but she ~~isn~~'t, and a lot of the guys from the seminar are making a fuss out of it.		\|Izumi said she would come, but she's not here, and a lot of the guys from the seminar are making a fuss out of it.
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	\|122\|男子学生１\|Male Student 1		\|122\|男子学生１\|Male Student 1
	\|「なに？　やっぱお前ら付き合ってんだ？<br>彼女目当ての俺らウザい？」		\|「なに？　やっぱお前ら付き合ってんだ？<br>彼女目当ての俺らウザい？」
	\|"What? So you two ARE going out after all? <br>You think ~~who~~ we're annoying for ~~having~~ her ~~in our sights~~?"		\|"What? So you two ARE going out after all?<br>You think we're annoying for going after her or something?"
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	\|123\|春希\|Haruki		\|123\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「.........俺とは関係なしに、<br>先輩たち、本当にあんなんがいいんですか？」		\|「.........俺とは関係なしに、<br>先輩たち、本当にあんなんがいいんですか？」
	\|"...It ~~has nothing to do with me~~, but do you guys seriously like that kind of girl?"		\|"...It's really none of my business, but do you guys seriously like that kind of girl?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|ありますね...怠惰な雰囲気が。		\|ありますね...怠惰な雰囲気が。
	\|She sure does... ~~The~~ aura of laziness.		\|She sure does... the aura of laziness.
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	\|そういったレベルの、はずなんだけど。		\|そういったレベルの、はずなんだけど。
	\|Well, ~~that’s~~ all it should be.		\|Well, that's all it should be.
	\|*Phirb: The original translation "Is that really it?" didn't reflect enough of the meaning, so I changed it to this. }}		\|*Phirb: The original translation "Is that really it?" didn't reflect enough of the meaning, so I changed it to this. }}

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	\|なんか、違う...？		\|なんか、違う...？
	\|~~Something~~ feels... different?		\|But something feels... different?
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	\|いつもの和泉と、手触りが違う。<br>...いや、正確に言えば、手触られ、だけど。		\|いつもの和泉と、手触りが違う。<br>...いや、正確に言えば、手触られ、だけど。
	\|The way Izumi's an my hand are touching is different ~~from~~ usual... Or rather, the way she's touching me in particular is...		\|The way Izumi's and my hand are touching is different than usual... or rather, the way she's touching me in particular is...
	\|}}		\|}}

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2018-03-11T11:34:09Z

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	\|309\|春希\|Haruki		\|309\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「あ...っ！？<br>や、やめろ！<br>...じゃなくてやめてくださいっ！」		\|「あ...っ！？<br>や、やめろ！<br>...じゃなくてやめてくださいっ！」
	\|"Ah...!? <br> Sto-Stop it, you-! <br>... No, please stop it!"		\|"Ah...!? <br> Sto-Stop it, you-! <br>...No, please stop it!"
	\|}}		\|}}

Phirb: Changed the style of stutter punctuation for the beginning of sentences (e.g. W-well... --> W-Well...)

2018-02-08T19:15:12Z

Changed the style of stutter punctuation for the beginning of sentences (e.g. W-well... --> W-Well...)

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	\|25\|千晶\|Chiaki		\|25\|千晶\|Chiaki
	\|「っ！<br>あ、あ～！　そうそう晶子！<br>あたしってばそんな名前だったわ～！」		\|「っ！<br>あ、あ～！　そうそう晶子！<br>あたしってばそんな名前だったわ～！」
	\|"Ah! A-ah~! Right, right, Shouko! <br>So you're using my first name~!"		\|"Ah! A-Ah~! Right, right, Shouko! <br>So you're using my first name~!"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|26\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|26\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「よ、よかったぁ...<br>恥ずかしい勘違いしたかと思っちゃった」		\|「よ、よかったぁ...<br>恥ずかしい勘違いしたかと思っちゃった」
	\|"Th-~~that~~'s a relief... <br>I almost thought I got the wrong person."		\|"Th-That's a relief... <br>I almost thought I got the wrong person."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|27\|千晶\|Chiaki		\|27\|千晶\|Chiaki
	\|「ど、ど、どしたの？<br>今日はもう終わり？<br>それじゃお疲れ...」		\|「ど、ど、どしたの？<br>今日はもう終わり？<br>それじゃお疲れ...」
	\|"W-wh-~~what~~'s up? <br>Are you done for today? Good work..."		\|"W-Wh-What's up? <br>Are you done for today? Good work..."
	\|*Phirb: Changing 'Uh, um, what is it?' to 'W-wh-what’s up?' because I think the former makes Chiaki sound too formal.}}		\|*Phirb: Changing 'Uh, um, what is it?' to 'W-wh-what’s up?' because I think the former makes Chiaki sound too formal.}}

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	\|81\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|81\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「お、遅いね」		\|「お、遅いね」
	\|"Th-~~that~~'s late..."		\|"Th-That's late..."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|83\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|83\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「そ、その日だけ忙しかったんじゃない？」		\|「そ、その日だけ忙しかったんじゃない？」
	\|"Ma-~~maybe~~ he's busy that day?"		\|"Ma-Maybe he's busy that day?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|95\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|95\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「う、上手くなんて行ってないよぉ！<br>...じゃなくて、彼がいるなんて言ってないよ...」		\|「う、上手くなんて行ってないよぉ！<br>...じゃなくて、彼がいるなんて言ってないよ...」
	\|"I-it's not as smooth as you think! <br>...Wait, no, I never even said I had a boyfriend..."		\|"I-It's not as smooth as you think! <br>...Wait, no, I never even said I had a boyfriend..."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|162\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|162\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「キ、キス...っ？」		\|「キ、キス...っ？」
	\|"Ki-~~kissing~~...?"		\|"Ki-Kissing...?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|170\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|170\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「な、な、なんのこと...？」		\|「な、な、なんのこと...？」
	\|"Wha-~~wha~~-~~what~~ are you talking about...!?"		\|"Wha-Wha-What are you talking about...!?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|172\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|172\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「っ...い、いやらしいよ言い方が」		\|「っ...い、いやらしいよ言い方が」
	\|"...Th-~~that~~'s a dirty way to describe it."		\|"...Th-That's a dirty way to describe it."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|174\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|174\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「ちょ、ちょっとぉ、やめてよ。<br>そんなの意識してないってば！」		\|「ちょ、ちょっとぉ、やめてよ。<br>そんなの意識してないってば！」
	\|"Wa-~~wait~~ a second, stop. <br>I didn't mean it that way!"		\|"Wa-Wait a second, stop. <br>I didn't mean it that way!"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|309\|春希\|Haruki		\|309\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「あ...っ！？<br>や、やめろ！<br>...じゃなくてやめてくださいっ！」		\|「あ...っ！？<br>や、やめろ！<br>...じゃなくてやめてくださいっ！」
	\|"Ah...!? <br> Sto-~~stop~~ it, you-! <br>... No, please stop it!"		\|"Ah...!? <br> Sto-Stop it, you-! <br>... No, please stop it!"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|395\|春希\|Haruki		\|395\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「な、なぁ、和泉...」		\|「な、なぁ、和泉...」
	\|"He-~~hey~~, Izumi..."		\|"He-Hey, Izumi..."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|397\|春希\|Haruki		\|397\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「い、いや...<br>謝らなくてもいいけど、意図を説明して欲しいなと」		\|「い、いや...<br>謝らなくてもいいけど、意図を説明して欲しいなと」
	\|"N-no need... <br>You don't need to apologize, I'd just like you to explain what you're trying to do."		\|"N-No need... <br>You don't need to apologize, I'd just like you to explain what you're trying to do."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|408\|春希\|Haruki		\|408\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「べ、別に」		\|「べ、別に」
	\|"N-no."		\|"N-No."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|503\|春希\|Haruki		\|503\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「ど、どうした？」		\|「ど、どうした？」
	\|"Wha-~~what~~ happened?"		\|"Wha-What happened?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|548\|春希\|Haruki		\|548\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「ち...違っ」		\|「ち...違っ」
	\|"N-no..."		\|"N-No..."
	\|}}		\|}}

Phirb: Noticeable changes are 27, 158, 249, 325, 353, 399, 400, 409, 498, and 536

2017-12-30T22:33:44Z

Noticeable changes are 27, 158, 249, 325, 353, 399, 400, 409, 498, and 536

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Cthaeh: Protected "White Album 2/Script/2016": project staff request ([Edit=Allow only autoconfirmed users] (indefinite) [Move=Allow only autoconfirmed users] (indefinite))

2017-08-10T03:20:30Z

Protected "White Album 2/Script/2016": project staff request ([Edit=Allow only autoconfirmed users] (indefinite) [Move=Allow only autoconfirmed users] (indefinite))

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