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	\|それからは地獄の責め苦のように、<br>冬特有の長い夜を、灯りをつけないまま、<br>まんじりともせずに過ごし。		\|それからは地獄の責め苦のように、<br>冬特有の長い夜を、灯りをつけないまま、<br>まんじりともせずに過ごし。
	\|And I've spent the especially long winter night under the hellish torture of being wide awake in my room without my lights on.		\|And I've spent the same, especially long winter night under the hellish torture of being wide awake in my room without my lights on.
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	\|そして、やっと訪れた二度目の日の出は、<br>今度こそ明るい[R朝陽^あさひ]を俺の目に焼きつけた。		\|そして、やっと訪れた二度目の日の出は、<br>今度こそ明るい[R朝陽^あさひ]を俺の目に焼きつけた。
	\|~~And then,~~ the bright morning sun finally appeared a second time~~, burning~~ daylight into my eyes.		\|I remained like that until the bright morning sun finally appeared a second time to burn daylight into my eyes.
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	\|そして厚い雲に覆われた空は、<br>そのまままたリアルタイムで黒く染まっていき、<br>暮れない昼が本当にないということまで思い出させた。		\|そして厚い雲に覆われた空は、<br>そのまままたリアルタイムで黒く染まっていき、<br>暮れない昼が本当にないということまで思い出させた。
	\|Watching a day of the sky covered with clouds darkening in real time also made me remember that daylight doesn’t last forever, ~~as well~~.		\|Watching a day of the sky covered with clouds darkening in real time also made me remember that daylight doesn’t last forever, either.
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	\|疲れと眠気に苛まれているはずの頭は、<br>それでもただ一人の記憶を追い出すことができなくて、<br>割れんばかりの痛みばかりを俺にもたらす。		\|疲れと眠気に苛まれているはずの頭は、<br>それでもただ一人の記憶を追い出すことができなくて、<br>割れんばかりの痛みばかりを俺にもたらす。
	\|I had hoped ~~for~~ fatigue and sleepiness to cloud my mind; they failed to expel the memories of a certain someone out of it~~, however~~, only serving to give me a splitting pain.		\|I had hoped fatigue and sleepiness would cloud my mind. However, they failed to expel the memories of a certain someone out of it, only serving to give me a splitting pain.
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2018-06-03T05:19:56Z

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	\|疲れと眠気に苛まれているはずの頭は、<br>それでもただ一人の記憶を追い出すことができなくて、<br>割れんばかりの痛みばかりを俺にもたらす。		\|疲れと眠気に苛まれているはずの頭は、<br>それでもただ一人の記憶を追い出すことができなくて、<br>割れんばかりの痛みばかりを俺にもたらす。
	\|~~While I’d~~ hoped for fatigue and sleepiness to cloud my mind, they failed to expel the memories of a certain someone out of it, only serving to give me a splitting pain.		\|I had hoped for fatigue and sleepiness to cloud my mind; they failed to expel the memories of a certain someone out of it, however, only serving to give me a splitting pain.
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	\|そして厚い雲に覆われた空は、<br>そのまままたリアルタイムで黒く染まっていき、<br>暮れない昼が本当にないということまで思い出させた。		\|そして厚い雲に覆われた空は、<br>そのまままたリアルタイムで黒く染まっていき、<br>暮れない昼が本当にないということまで思い出させた。
	\|~~And watching~~ a day of the sky covered with clouds darkening in real time also made me remember that daylight doesn’t last forever, ~~either~~.		\|Watching a day of the sky covered with clouds darkening in real time also made me remember that daylight doesn’t last forever, as well.
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	\|明け方にやんでしまった雪は、<br>道行く人にただ寒さと歩きにくさを与えるだけで、<br>昼を過ぎた頃にはすっかり黒く土に溶け込んでいた。		\|明け方にやんでしまった雪は、<br>道行く人にただ寒さと歩きにくさを与えるだけで、<br>昼を過ぎた頃にはすっかり黒く土に溶け込んでいた。
	\|The snow had stopped piling up by the time dawn arrived, and only served to deliver the chill of winter and hinder the steps of passersby, ~~before~~ completely ~~dissolving~~ into blackened soil that merged into the ground ~~by noon~~.		\|The snow had stopped piling up by the time dawn arrived, and only served to deliver the chill of winter and hinder the steps of passersby. By noon, it completely dissolved into blackened soil that merged into the ground.
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	\|窓の外の黒い空が白く薄曇っていくのを<br>リアルタイムで全て視界に収め<br>明けない夜が本当にないということを痛感した。		\|窓の外の黒い空が白く薄曇っていくのを<br>リアルタイムで全て視界に収め<br>明けない夜が本当にないということを痛感した。
	\|~~It was only after~~ a night ~~of me~~ engraving the period of the dark sky gradually brightening outside the window in my mind ~~that~~ I came to the clear realization that nights are not eternal.		\|I'd spent a whole night engraving the period of the dark sky gradually brightening outside the window in my mind; I then came to the clear realization that nights are not eternal.
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	\|明け方にやんでしまった雪は、<br>道行く人にただ寒さと歩きにくさを与えるだけで、<br>昼を過ぎた頃にはすっかり黒く土に溶け込んでいた。		\|明け方にやんでしまった雪は、<br>道行く人にただ寒さと歩きにくさを与えるだけで、<br>昼を過ぎた頃にはすっかり黒く土に溶け込んでいた。
	\|The snow ~~that was no longer~~ piling by the time dawn arrived only served to deliver the chill of winter and hinder the steps of passersby, before completely dissolving into blackened soil that merged into the ground by noon.		\|The snow had stopped piling up by the time dawn arrived, and only served to deliver the chill of winter and hinder the steps of passersby, before completely dissolving into blackened soil that merged into the ground by noon.
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	\|それは、俺がまだ雪菜と一緒にいるんじゃないかって、<br>そんな下世話で温かい期待だったんだと思う。		\|それは、俺がまだ雪菜と一緒にいるんじゃないかって、<br>そんな下世話で温かい期待だったんだと思う。
	\|His teasing hinted at his natural, ~~warm expectations and~~ his initial impression that I was perhaps still with Setsuna.		\|His teasing hinted at his natural and kind hopes, as well as his initial impression that I was perhaps still with Setsuna.
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	\|…嘘を、ついてるってわかってしまったこと。		\|…嘘を、ついてるってわかってしまったこと。
	\|...And she knew that all of it was a lie.		\|...And that she knew that all of it was a lie.
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	\|この優しい陽射しに包まれた空が、<br>リアルタイムに赤く、そして黒く染まっていくのを<br>ただ眺める。		\|この優しい陽射しに包まれた空が、<br>リアルタイムに赤く、そして黒く染まっていくのを<br>ただ眺める。
	\|I can ~~only watch~~ in real time ~~the sky~~, wrapped by the gentle sunlight, ~~being~~ dyed red, ~~and then~~ black.		\|All I can do now is observe the sky above in real time, as it's wrapped by the gentle sunlight, and dyed a warm red, before turning black.
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	\|明け方にやんでしまった雪は、<br>道行く人にただ寒さと歩きにくさを与えるだけで、<br>昼を過ぎた頃にはすっかり黒く土に溶け込んでいた。		\|明け方にやんでしまった雪は、<br>道行く人にただ寒さと歩きにくさを与えるだけで、<br>昼を過ぎた頃にはすっかり黒く土に溶け込んでいた。
	\|The snow that was no longer piling by the time dawn arrived only served to deliver the chill of winter and ~~walking discomfort to~~ passersby, before completely dissolving into blackened soil that merged into the ground by noon.		\|The snow that was no longer piling by the time dawn arrived only served to deliver the chill of winter and hinder the steps of passersby, before completely dissolving into blackened soil that merged into the ground by noon.
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	\|そして厚い雲に覆われた空は、<br>そのまままたリアルタイムで黒く染まっていき、<br>暮れない昼が本当にないということまで思い出させた。		\|そして厚い雲に覆われた空は、<br>そのまままたリアルタイムで黒く染まっていき、<br>暮れない昼が本当にないということまで思い出させた。
	\|And watching a day of the sky ~~thickening~~ with darkening ~~clouds~~ also made me remember that daylight doesn’t last forever, either.		\|And watching a day of the sky covered with clouds darkening in real time also made me remember that daylight doesn’t last forever, either.
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	\|それからは地獄の責め苦のように、<br>冬特有の長い夜を、灯りをつけないまま、<br>まんじりともせずに過ごし。		\|それからは地獄の責め苦のように、<br>冬特有の長い夜を、灯りをつけないまま、<br>まんじりともせずに過ごし。
	\|And I've spent the ~~especial,~~ long winter night under the hellish torture of being wide awake in my room without my lights on.		\|And I've spent the especially long winter night under the hellish torture of being wide awake in my room without my lights on.
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	\|さっきの携帯も武也からだった。<br>これでもう、二日で九度目の居留守になる。		\|さっきの携帯も武也からだった。<br>これでもう、二日で九度目の居留守になる。
	\|The call on my cell just a while ago was from Takeya as well. This makes it the ninth time in two days that I've been running away, pretending to be ~~out~~.		\|The call on my cell just a while ago was from Takeya as well. This makes it the ninth time in two days that I've been running away, pretending to be unavailable.
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	\|最初は、いつまでも電話の通じない俺に対する<br>揶揄みたいな響きが含まれてた。		\|最初は、いつまでも電話の通じない俺に対する<br>揶揄みたいな響きが含まれてた。
	\|At first, when I didn't answer the phone, <br>he sounded ~~like~~ he was teasing me.		\|At first, when I didn't answer the phone, <br>he sounded as if he was teasing me.
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	\|何もなかったって雪菜が言ったこと。<br>笑ってたこと、泣いてなかったこと。		\|何もなかったって雪菜が言ったこと。<br>笑ってたこと、泣いてなかったこと。
	\|She said that Setsuna had told her nothing had happened. That ~~she'd~~ kept smiling and didn't cry.		\|She said that Setsuna had told her nothing had happened. That Setsuna only kept smiling and didn't cry.
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	\|なのに俺は、<br>まるであいつらの慌てぶりを他人事のように俯瞰して、<br>スルーを繰り返す。		\|なのに俺は、<br>まるであいつらの慌てぶりを他人事のように俯瞰して、<br>スルーを繰り返す。
	\|And yet I've only continued to ~~overlook~~ them, as if their panicked state right now was their own problem.		\|And yet I've only continued to ignore them, as if their panicked state right now was their own problem.
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	\|そんな自己満足の停滞なんて意味がない。<br>解決していないのに、<br>解決した気になることほど最悪の事態はない。		\|そんな自己満足の停滞なんて意味がない。<br>解決していないのに、<br>解決した気になることほど最悪の事態はない。
	\|It'd only be complacency derived from such stagnation, though. There's nothing worse than pretending an issue is already solved when it ~~truthfully~~ isn't.		\|It'd only be complacency derived from such stagnation, though. There's nothing worse than pretending an issue is already solved when it isn't.
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	\|だから俺は…結局、動けない。		\|だから俺は…結局、動けない。
	\|That's why I... ultimately ~~cannot move~~ in the end.		\|That's why I... ultimately can't do anything in the end.
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	\|だって、俺が楽になった瞬間も、<br>雪菜にとっては何も解決してない、救われてない。<br>だったら俺一人が楽になることは、何ももたらさない。		\|だって、俺が楽になった瞬間も、<br>雪菜にとっては何も解決してない、救われてない。<br>だったら俺一人が楽になることは、何ももたらさない。
	\|~~Because~~, even if I ~~end up happy~~, Setsuna ~~will still have no closure~~. ~~That sort of~~ result, my ~~happiness~~ alone, would ~~settle~~ nothing.		\|After all, even if I do get my moment of comfort, it would not solve anything for Setsuna — it wouldn't save her. A result such as this, my own salvation alone, would accomplish nothing.
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	\|それは、俺がまだ雪菜と一緒にいるんじゃないかって、<br>そんな下世話で温かい期待だったんだと思う。		\|それは、俺がまだ雪菜と一緒にいるんじゃないかって、<br>そんな下世話で温かい期待だったんだと思う。
	\|~~Perhaps thinking~~ I was still with Setsuna~~, he was hoping that something good had happened~~.		\|His teasing hinted at his natural, warm expectations and his initial impression that I was perhaps still with Setsuna.
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	\|自分たちが仕掛人だからってだけじゃない。<br>純粋に俺たちを心配してるって口調から、<br>あいつらの焦燥感が伝わってくる。		\|自分たちが仕掛人だからってだけじゃない。<br>純粋に俺たちを心配してるって口調から、<br>あいつらの焦燥感が伝わってくる。
	\|~~Not~~ because they ~~were the instigators, but because they were genuinely worried about us.~~ I ~~could hear~~ their uneasiness through their ~~voices~~.		\|They're doing so not just because they've instigated all this — I can feel their uneasiness from their genuine, worried tones through their calls.
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	\|なのに俺は、<br>まるであいつらの慌てぶりを他人事のように俯瞰して、<br>スルーを繰り返す。		\|なのに俺は、<br>まるであいつらの慌てぶりを他人事のように俯瞰して、<br>スルーを繰り返す。
	\|And yet ~~I, feeling like~~ I'~~m nothing but an onlooker~~ to their ~~frenzied~~ state ~~of panic, continued ignoring them~~.		\|And yet I've only continued to overlook them, as if their panicked state right now was their own problem.
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	\|あいつらは、きっと俺に罰を与える。<br>怒り、嘆き、叱責して、必死に俺たちに干渉し、<br>なんとか解決策を探そうとするだろう。		\|あいつらは、きっと俺に罰を与える。<br>怒り、嘆き、叱責して、必死に俺たちに干渉し、<br>なんとか解決策を探そうとするだろう。
	\|They ~~will most~~ likely punish me. They ~~will be angry with~~ me~~, lament, reproach~~, and interfere ~~completely. And maybe they will somehow find~~ a solution.		\|They'll likely punish me. They'll furiously lament and reprimand me, and desperately interfere in hopes of finding a solution somehow, won't they?
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	\|そして俺は、そのあいつらの干渉に対して、<br>罰を受けた気になり、自らの思考を止めてしまう。		\|そして俺は、そのあいつらの干渉に対して、<br>罰を受けた気になり、自らの思考を止めてしまう。
	\|~~Then~~ I~~, in gratitude for them trying to help resolve the situation, will~~ accept ~~the~~ punishment, and stop ~~thinking about it~~.		\|And I would likely accept their punishment and stop my own thoughts in response to their intervention.
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	\|そんな自己満足の停滞なんて意味がない。<br>解決していないのに、<br>解決した気になることほど最悪の事態はない。		\|そんな自己満足の停滞なんて意味がない。<br>解決していないのに、<br>解決した気になることほど最悪の事態はない。
	\|~~But that sort of~~ stagnation ~~from self-satisfaction is pointless~~. There's nothing worse than pretending an issue is already solved when it truthfully isn't.		\|It'd only be complacency derived from such stagnation, though. There's nothing worse than pretending an issue is already solved when it truthfully isn't.
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	\|だから俺は…結局、動けない。		\|だから俺は…結局、動けない。
	\|That's why I... ultimately cannot move.		\|That's why I... ultimately cannot move in the end.
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	\|この優しい陽射しに包まれた空が、<br>リアルタイムに赤く、そして黒く染まっていくのを<br>ただ眺める。		\|この優しい陽射しに包まれた空が、<br>リアルタイムに赤く、そして黒く染まっていくのを<br>ただ眺める。
	\|~~The~~ gentle sunlight ~~that wraps the sky changes from~~ red ~~to dyed~~ black ~~in real time as I gaze on~~.		\|I can only watch in real time the sky, wrapped by the gentle sunlight, being dyed red, and then black.
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	\|次の夜が明けたら、<br>少しは前に進む気になれるんだろうかって…		\|次の夜が明けたら、<br>少しは前に進む気になれるんだろうかって…
	\|~~The next time it dawns, I wonder if~~ I will be able to move forward, even just a little...		\|And entertain myself with the question of whether or not I will be able to move forward, even if just a little, when the next dawn arrives...
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	\|そんな、初歩も初歩の自問自答を繰り返しつつ。		\|そんな、初歩も初歩の自問自答を繰り返しつつ。
	\|A question I keep asking myself over and over again.		\|A question I keep asking myself over and over again.
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