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Turbos: /* Translation Notes */

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	\|141\|佐和子\|Sawako		\|141\|佐和子\|Sawako
	\|「はぁ…向こうは若いから仕方ないとは言え、<br>あんたまで調子に乗っちゃって…<br>まったく、覚えたての猿じゃないんだから」		\|「はぁ…向こうは若いから仕方ないとは言え、<br>あんたまで調子に乗っちゃって…<br>まったく、覚えたての猿じゃないんだから」
	\|"Sigh…You're partner is young, so I guess there's no helping that. <br>Still, you got caught up in the moment too. <br>~~Gheez~~, I don't remember you being such a monkey."		\|"Sigh…You're partner is young, so I guess there's no helping that. <br>Still, you got caught up in the moment too. <br>Geez, I don't remember you being such a monkey."
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Noir: /* Translation Notes */

2018-09-23T16:17:14Z

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	\|「…南末次の駅前。<br>今から帰るところだけど」		\|「…南末次の駅前。<br>今から帰るところだけど」
	\|"In front of Minamisuetsugu Station. <br>I'm about to head home right now, why?"		\|"In front of Minamisuetsugu Station. <br>I'm about to head home right now, why?"
	\|}}~~Added the why at the end to express the nuance of だけど~~		\|}}

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	\|"I don't know if there will be a next time if I let today get away. <br>You're keeping me company, even if I have to force you."		\|"I don't know if there will be a next time if I let today get away. <br>You're keeping me company, even if I have to force you."
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	\|25\|春希\|Haruki		\|25\|春希\|Haruki
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	\|ほぼ一日中ベッドの中にいたとはいえ、<br>その運動量は外出したときと比べて全然遜色なかったし。		\|ほぼ一日中ベッドの中にいたとはいえ、<br>その運動量は外出したときと比べて全然遜色なかったし。
	\|Although I'd spent nearly a day in a bed, <br>going out seems like nothing compared to the momentum this took.		\|Although I'd spent nearly a day in a bed, <br>going out seems like nothing compared to the momentum this took.
	\|}}~~I myself do not feel very confident with this translation, particularly because I'm not entirely sure about the use of 色 in this sentence.~~		\|}}

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	\|「お、おい！　落ち着け！<br>俺男だぞ？　春希！<br>お前の守備範囲外！」		\|「お、おい！　落ち着け！<br>俺男だぞ？　春希！<br>お前の守備範囲外！」
	\|"H-hey! Calm down! <br>I'm a dude, you know? I'm Haruki! Not your type at all!'		\|"H-hey! Calm down! <br>I'm a dude, you know? I'm Haruki! Not your type at all!'
	\|}}~~I'm almost tempted to write "I'm out of the question!" but it is not as literal as the other translation. It's up to you to decide which fits better.~~		\|}}

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	\|けれど、武也の言動が謎なのは、<br>まだその時点で直っていなかった。		\|けれど、武也の言動が謎なのは、<br>まだその時点で直っていなかった。
	\|However, that wasn't the end of it, <br>Takeya's strange behavior continued.		\|However, that wasn't the end of it, <br> as Takeya's strange behavior continued.
	\|}}~~The literal translation being "Takeya's strangeness was at that point still not fixed" does not sound normal to me at all. This localization makes more sense in my opinion.~~		\|}}

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	\|101\|武也\|Takeya		\|101\|武也\|Takeya
	\|「………美人？」		\|「………美人？」
	\|"~~………is~~ she hot?"		\|"………Is she hot?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|武也は、そんな俺に似合わない感情論だらけの話を、<br>武也に似合わない理性的な態度で聞いていた。		\|武也は、そんな俺に似合わない感情論だらけの話を、<br>武也に似合わない理性的な態度で聞いていた。
	\|Takeya's sentiment that I'm not suited for them in itself was a rational attitude that did not suit Takeya either.		\|Takeya's sentiment that I'm not suited for them in itself was a rational attitude that did not suit Takeya either.
	\|}}~~I probably need help with making this sound better.~~		\|}}

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	\|「そんな下世話なこと聞くな…<br>親友だからって、俺に非があるからって、<br>それでも言っていいことと悪いことがあるぞ」		\|「そんな下世話なこと聞くな…<br>親友だからって、俺に非があるからって、<br>それでも言っていいことと悪いことがあるぞ」
	\|"Don't give me that cliché sentence… <br>Even though you're my best friend and it's my fault, <br>there are still things you should and shouldn't say."		\|"Don't give me that cliché sentence… <br>Even though you're my best friend and it's my fault, <br>there are still things you should and shouldn't say."
	\|}}~~Had trouble translating 下世話, need help with this one.~~		\|}}

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	\|「やってらんないわよもう！」		\|「やってらんないわよもう！」
	\|"It just won't get finished!"		\|"It just won't get finished!"
	\|}}~~I would put "It won't end" or "Theres no end to it" here but I'm not sure if the change in meaning is too big.~~		\|}}

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	\|「はぁ…向こうは若いから仕方ないとは言え、<br>あんたまで調子に乗っちゃって…<br>まったく、覚えたての猿じゃないんだから」		\|「はぁ…向こうは若いから仕方ないとは言え、<br>あんたまで調子に乗っちゃって…<br>まったく、覚えたての猿じゃないんだから」
	\|"Sigh…You're partner is young, so I guess there's no helping that. <br>Still, you got caught up in the moment too. <br>Gheez, I don't remember you being such a monkey."		\|"Sigh…You're partner is young, so I guess there's no helping that. <br>Still, you got caught up in the moment too. <br>Gheez, I don't remember you being such a monkey."
	\|}}~~Thought to put immature instead of a monkey, but the word needed to be conserved for later. It might also be a derogatory term for slut (albeit archaic) or a sly person.~~		\|}}

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	\|187\|麻理\|Mari		\|187\|麻理\|Mari
	\|「…聞いてる？」		\|「…聞いてる？」
	\|"~~…you~~ listening?"		\|"…You listening?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|「それに俺は…今の俺はさ、<br>最低なほどに心が揺れてる」		\|「それに俺は…今の俺はさ、<br>最低なほどに心が揺れてる」
	\|"And to add that… right now, my heart falters at the lowest level."		\|"And to add that… right now, my heart falters at the lowest level."
	\|}}~~I need help making this sound better.~~		\|}}

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	\|片や常に人の上に立ち、<br>片や何があろうと孤高を貫く。		\|片や常に人の上に立ち、<br>片や何があろうと孤高を貫く。
	\|On one hand, she stood above the rest. <br>In the other, she believed in her isolation and that something would happen.		\|On one hand, she stood above the rest. <br>In the other, she believed in her isolation and that something would happen.
	\|}}~~In this case, 孤高 may also the carry the nuance of superiority.~~		\|}}

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	\|その、切れ長の目が。<br>自信満々の態度が。<br>自分の気持ちをうまく伝えられないその口が…		\|その、切れ長の目が。<br>自信満々の態度が。<br>自分の気持ちをうまく伝えられないその口が…
	\|Those pretty narrow eyes. <br>That self-confident attitude. <br>That mouth of mine that could not convey my feelings…		\|Those pretty narrow eyes. <br>That self-confident attitude. <br>That mouth of mine that could not convey my feelings…
	\|}}~~According to my dictionary, 切れ長の目が could also mean almond eyes, but I doubt he's referring to Setsuna here.~~		\|}}

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	\|「本当にそう思ってるのよ。<br>あんたの仕事廃人ぶりを知ってて、<br>それでも追いかけてくれる男なんて他にいないよ？」		\|「本当にそう思ってるのよ。<br>あんたの仕事廃人ぶりを知ってて、<br>それでも追いかけてくれる男なんて他にいないよ？」
	\|"That's what I really think! <br>Are there any other guys who, knowing that you're crippled with your job, <br>would still chase after you?		\|"That's what I really think! <br>Are there any other guys who, knowing that you're crippled with your job, <br>would still chase after you?
	\|}}~~I can't find out whether 仕事廃人is a set expression or not.~~		\|}}

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	\|「ん…多分、大丈夫。<br>早くて来年じゃないかな」		\|「ん…多分、大丈夫。<br>早くて来年じゃないかな」
	\|"Hmm… I think I'll be fine. <br>I don't think it's early this year."		\|"Hmm… I think I'll be fine. <br>I don't think it's early this year."
	\|}} ~~I might be missing out on some context with the last two lines. I assumed they might be talking about her promotion.~~		\|}}

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	\|だからって、全てを白日の下に晒し、<br>はっきりと結論を出して、『傷が浅くてすんだ』なんて<br>胸をなで下ろせるほど厚顔でも平気でもない。		\|だからって、全てを白日の下に晒し、<br>はっきりと結論を出して、『傷が浅くてすんだ』なんて<br>胸をなで下ろせるほど厚顔でも平気でもない。
	\|Even so, I don't have the audacity nor the courage to expose everything under broad daylight, <br>to properly come to a conclusion, to "close up small wounds," <br>or to make her feel relieved.		\|Even so, I don't have the audacity nor the courage to expose everything under broad daylight, <br>to properly come to a conclusion, to "close up small wounds," <br>or to make her feel relieved.
	\|}}~~Note: I'm not sure what 『傷が浅くてすんだ』refers to.~~		\|}}

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	\|結局、話すタイミングでまで雪菜を傷つけるのか…<br>本当にもう、俺たちの星の巡りの悪さは芸術的だな。		\|結局、話すタイミングでまで雪菜を傷つけるのか…<br>本当にもう、俺たちの星の巡りの悪さは芸術的だな。
	\|In the end, I wonder if the timing of our talk will hurt Setsuna…<br>truly, it seems our fate was artistically written quite terribly in the stars.		\|In the end, I wonder if the timing of our talk will hurt Setsuna…<br>truly, it seems our fate was artistically written quite terribly in the stars.
	\|}}~~Regrettably, I can't seem to find a good way to translate this sentence. The badness of our stars' circulation/rotation is artistic?~~		\|}}

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