White Album 2/Script/2511 2 - Revision history

Krizs: /* Translation Notes */

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Turbos: /* Translation Notes */

2018-12-17T08:47:50Z

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	\|その白い布すらも横にずらすと、<br>その中に隠れていた赤い肉ひだにむしゃぶりつく。		\|その白い布すらも横にずらすと、<br>その中に隠れていた赤い肉ひだにむしゃぶりつく。
	\|When I also slide that white cloth off to the side, it’s caught by the folds of ~~vermillion~~ flesh hidden inside it.		\|When I also slide that white cloth off to the side, it’s caught by the folds of vermilion flesh hidden inside it.
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	\|167\|麻理\|Mari		\|167\|麻理\|Mari
	\|「ちっとも済まないなんて思ってないくせに…っ、<br>もう、なんでこんな…私の方が年上なんだぞぅ？」		\|「ちっとも済まないなんて思ってないくせに…っ、<br>もう、なんでこんな…私の方が年上なんだぞぅ？」
	\| “Even though you’re not actually sorry at all…? ~~Jeez~~, why this… I’m the older one here, you know?”		\| “Even though you’re not actually sorry at all…? Geez, why this… I’m the older one here, you know?”
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Noir: /* Translation Notes */

2018-09-23T16:23:14Z

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	\|身体をぴったり重ね合わせ、性器と口を深く結合し、<br>お互いの体液を飲み込みあい、一緒に喘ぎ、<br>牡と牝の、獣の匂いを漂わせつつ。		\|身体をぴったり重ね合わせ、性器と口を深く結合し、<br>お互いの体液を飲み込みあい、一緒に喘ぎ、<br>牡と牝の、獣の匂いを漂わせつつ。
	\|Our bodies closely overlap, deeply joined by our mouths and genitals. We drink up each others’ fluids, gasp for air together, and let the animalistic smell of our sexes drift through the air.		\|Our bodies closely overlap, deeply joined by our mouths and genitals. We drink up each others’ fluids, gasp for air together, and let the animalistic smell of our sexes drift through the air.
	\|}} ~~Yes, sexes as in their respective sex, not the act that they are doing.~~		\|}}

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	\|一緒に、身体の奥をぶるりと震わせて、<br>深いところで繋がって、溶けていく。		\|一緒に、身体の奥をぶるりと震わせて、<br>深いところで繋がって、溶けていく。
	\|Together, we tremble down to our very bones. We connect to each other by a profound means and melt away.		\|Together, we tremble down to our very bones. We connect to each other by a profound means and melt away.
	\|}} ~~Chose to use “down to our very bones” instead of the literal “to the depths of our bodies”~~		\|}}

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	\|「はぁ、はぁ、ぁ…<br>ひ、ひたは…はぅっ、あ、んぷ…ん、んぅ…」		\|「はぁ、はぁ、ぁ…<br>ひ、ひたは…はぅっ、あ、んぷ…ん、んぅ…」
	\|”Mmmmhn, chu… nnnha, ah… Kitahara… mmm, nnnh… chu…”		\|”Mmmmhn, chu… nnnha, ah… Kitahara… mmm, nnnh… chu…”
	\|}} ~~She says his name somewhere in there but it’s not in text~~		\|}}

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Noir: /* Translation Notes */

2018-09-23T16:20:13Z

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	\|黒いナイロンが俺の顔全体をこすり、<br>麻理さんの媚肉の温かさに、摩擦熱を加えていく。		\|黒いナイロンが俺の顔全体をこすり、<br>麻理さんの媚肉の温かさに、摩擦熱を加えていく。
	\|The black nylon scrubs all over my face, adding the heat of its friction together with the warmth of Mari-san’s flower.		\|The black nylon scrubs all over my face, adding the heat of its friction together with the warmth of Mari-san’s flower.
	\|}} ~~For lack of a better word substitute for when he’s referring to her vagina, I just chose “flower”~~		\|}}

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2018-09-23T16:19:39Z

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