White Album 2 Omake/Story04/Chapter 3/PartA - Revision history

Arczyx at 14:05, 17 March 2014

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Velocity7 at 03:43, 15 March 2012

2012-03-15T03:43:09Z

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	Haruki came after having talked to him for thirty minutes on the phone.		Haruki came after having talked to him for thirty minutes on the phone.

	Like always, he'd keep his cool, ~~make use of everything~~, lecture people, ~~encourage~~ Tomochika as if nothing had happened that night, and finally began his work.		Like always, he'd keep his cool, run the entire thing, lecture people, egg on Tomochika as if nothing had happened that night, and finally began his work.

	First, he helped him prepare for sending his mother to the hospital, dealt with finances, and followed up with the camp.		First, he helped him prepare for sending his mother to the hospital, dealt with finances, and followed up with the camp.

Velocity7 at 00:03, 17 February 2012

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	Even so, Setsuna waited for tomorrow, hurting herself once more.		Even so, Setsuna waited for tomorrow, hurting herself once more.

	... and, just when Setsuna had again sunk into despair, the high-pitched sound of the ~~entranceway~~ doorbell ~~rang~~.		... and, just when Setsuna had again sunk into despair, the high-pitched sound of the doorbell came from the entrance-way.

	"Sis, you got a visitor."<br />		"Sis, you got a visitor."<br />
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	Certainly, the eldest daughter of the Ogiso residence was known by the neighbors as ''"well brought up"'', both physically and in personality.		Certainly, the eldest daughter of the Ogiso residence was known by the neighbors as ''"well brought up"'', both physically and in personality.
	But to {{Furigana\|   Takahiro   \|her younger brother}}, who'd seen her slouch around every day at home like this, there was no way he'd even humor the thought.		But to {{Furigana\|     Takahiro     \|her younger brother}}, who'd seen her slouch around every day at home like this, there was no way he'd even humor the thought.

	"Look, it's ringing again."<br />		"Look, it's ringing again."<br />

Velocity7: /* Chapter 3 - Those Feelings, Three Years Later */

2012-02-17T00:01:50Z

Chapter 3 - Those Feelings, Three Years Later

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	To get between the north and south sides of the long Houjou campus, one would need to spend more than ten minutes walking.		To get between the north and south sides of the long Houjou campus, one would need to spend more than ten minutes walking.

	The reason why the home-keeping Setsuna would walk this ~~long distance~~ was...		The reason why the home-keeping Setsuna would walk all this way was...

	"What's going on... Haruki-kun...?"		"What's going on... Haruki-kun...?"
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	It was about Haruki who had changed programs entering third year, but since the new term started his attendance was rather poor.		It was about Haruki who had changed programs entering third year, but since the new term started his attendance was rather poor.

	This was coming from Takeya's {{Furigana\|friend\|girlfriend}}, who'd seen him go to Building 3 at least three times over the past two weeks.		This was coming from Takeya's {{Furigana\| friend \|girlfriend}}, who'd seen him go to Building 3 at least three times over the past two weeks.

	If he were in arts and sciences, perhaps he'd have been finished here. Even in social sciences, as ''"that"'' Haruki who was a master at earning his credits, this would have been a state of emergency.		If he were in arts and sciences, perhaps he'd have been finished here. Even in social sciences, as ''"that"'' Haruki who was a master at earning his credits, this would have been a state of emergency.
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	Certainly, the eldest daughter of the Ogiso residence was known by the neighbors as ''"well brought up"'', both physically and in personality.		Certainly, the eldest daughter of the Ogiso residence was known by the neighbors as ''"well brought up"'', both physically and in personality.
	But to {{Furigana\|Takahiro\|her younger brother}}, who'd seen her slouch around every day at home like this, there was no way he'd even humor the thought.		But to {{Furigana\|   Takahiro   \|her younger brother}}, who'd seen her slouch around every day at home like this, there was no way he'd even humor the thought.

	"Look, it's ringing again."<br />		"Look, it's ringing again."<br />

Velocity7 at 20:03, 16 February 2012

2012-02-16T20:03:30Z

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	~~<span style="float:right;"><small>[{{fullurl:White_Album_2_Omake/Story04/Chapter_3/PartA\|action=edit}} Edit] this section</small></span>~~
	==Chapter 3 - Those Feelings, Three Years Later==		==Chapter 3 - Those Feelings, Three Years Later==

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	Three years had finally passed since Setsuna enrolled in Houjou University.		Three years had finally passed since Setsuna enrolled in Houjou University.

	It was the season where (the standard number for winter/The Love That Will Not Reach) would stop playing from the university FM radio...		It was the season where {{Furigana\|the standard number for winter\|The Love That Will Not Reach}} would stop playing from the university FM radio...

	"Setsuna~ next week will be the last party for new students, so be sure to come!"<br />		"Setsuna~ next week will be the last party for new students, so be sure to come!"<br />
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	"Yeah yeah, the two from the organizing group both dropped out~"		"Yeah yeah, the two from the organizing group both dropped out~"

	Remembering such a horrible event, the blame on the two (from the stressful group/friends) hadn't ended.		Remembering such a horrible event, the blame on the two {{Furigana\|from the stressful group\|friends}} hadn't ended.

	However, the way they said it had a far stronger and interesting meaning than being resentful...		However, the way they said it had a far stronger and interesting meaning than being resentful...
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	It was about Haruki who had changed programs entering third year, but since the new term started his attendance was rather poor.		It was about Haruki who had changed programs entering third year, but since the new term started his attendance was rather poor.

	This was coming from Takeya's (friend/girlfriend), who'd seen him go to Building 3 at least three times over the past two weeks.		This was coming from Takeya's {{Furigana\|friend\|girlfriend}}, who'd seen him go to Building 3 at least three times over the past two weeks.

	If he were in arts and sciences, perhaps he'd have been finished here. Even in social sciences, as ''"that"'' Haruki who was a master at earning his credits, this would have been a state of emergency.		If he were in arts and sciences, perhaps he'd have been finished here. Even in social sciences, as ''"that"'' Haruki who was a master at earning his credits, this would have been a state of emergency.
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	Certainly, the eldest daughter of the Ogiso residence was known by the neighbors as ''"well brought up"'', both physically and in personality.		Certainly, the eldest daughter of the Ogiso residence was known by the neighbors as ''"well brought up"'', both physically and in personality.
	But to (Takahiro/her younger brother), who'd seen her slouch around every day at home like this, there was no way he'd even humor the thought.		But to {{Furigana\|Takahiro\|her younger brother}}, who'd seen her slouch around every day at home like this, there was no way he'd even humor the thought.

	"Look, it's ringing again."<br />		"Look, it's ringing again."<br />
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	"........."		"........."

	Yes, it was as if (she/Setsuna) had become like (her best friend/Kazusa) in an instant...		Yes, it was as if {{Furigana\|she\|Setsuna}} had become like {{Furigana\|her best friend\|Kazusa}} in an instant...

	"Well then, this time, farew..."<br />		"Well then, this time, farew..."<br />

Velocity7 at 19:54, 14 February 2012

2012-02-14T19:54:58Z

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