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Rustler08: /* Chapter 1: The Ostland */

2016-03-18T23:59:23Z

Chapter 1: The Ostland

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	“Hand movements? I still remember them well... Hyaaa!”		“Hand movements? I still remember them well... Hyaaa!”

	The ending was, Louise pinched Siesta's ass. ''Hyaah!'' ''Aagghh!'' Whilst groaning, Siesta jumped up into air, but Saito and Henrietta were engrossed in their own world, and did not notice her. The ever joyous Guiche mistook Henrietta's furiously blushing face as a response to his loyalty, and, overcome by emotion, had fainted long ago.		The ending was that Louise pinched Siesta's ass. ''Hyaah!'' ''Aagghh!'' Whilst groaning, Siesta jumped up into air, but Saito and Henrietta were engrossed in their own world, and did not notice her. The ever joyous Guiche mistook Henrietta's furiously blushing face as a response to his loyalty, and, overcome by emotion, had fainted long ago.

	Kirche leaned flirtatiously against Colbert and said.		Kirche leaned flirtatiously against Colbert and said.

	“It's really peaceful, rrrriiiigggghht? ~~Jean.~~”		“It's really peaceful, rrrriiiigggghht Jean?”

	Staring at the scene before him with a troubled face, Colbert perspired.		Staring at the scene before him with a troubled face, Colbert perspired.
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	“Oh well, after all, this is a brief rest. Isn't it good? By the way, Miss Zerbst, umm... can you not use 'Jean,' please?”		“Oh well, after all, this is a brief rest. Isn't it good? By the way, Miss Zerbst, umm... can you not use 'Jean,' please?”

	Smiling sweetly, Kirche kissed Colbert at his cheek.		Smiling sweetly, Kirche kissed Colbert on his cheek.

	“N.O. And yeah, I have already asked many times. Just call me 'Kirche.'”		“N.O. And yeah, I have already asked many times. Just call me 'Kirche.'”

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Ambjoorn at 23:57, 7 March 2013

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	And then, Tabitha was being sent to Tristain to study abroad, as if getting rid of her...		And then, Tabitha was being sent to Tristain to study abroad, as if getting rid of her...

	“But, what is the thing the Gallian royal family ~~don~~'t allow...?”		“But, what is the thing the Gallian royal family didn't allow...?”

	Kirche bit her lips. In her usually taunting look, as if she was made to recollect that family line, fiery anger could be seen on her face.		Kirche bit her lips. In her usually taunting look, as if she was made to recollect that family line, fiery anger could be seen on her face.
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	His usual firm expression... and his ecstatic expression when he sought girls - these gaps became the mainstream of appeal, which engulfed him.		His usual firm expression... and his ecstatic expression when he sought girls - these gaps became the mainstream of appeal, which engulfed him.

	At that... No matter what, Saito's heart confused. ''I love Louise. That truth is supposed to be unshakable...''Unintentionally, Henrietta's face floated into his mind.		At that... No matter what, Saito's heart confused. ''I love Louise. That truth is supposed to be unshakable...'' Unintentionally, Henrietta's face floated into his mind.

	''To lose someone you love, do you feel only loneliness?''		''To lose someone you love, do you feel only loneliness?''

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2011-06-18T12:38:16Z

minor grammar correction

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	Saito noticed that Henrietta's eyes were a little wet. ''Don't pay attention to that!...'' Saito murmured in his thoughts.		Saito noticed that Henrietta's eyes were a little wet. ''Don't pay attention to that!...'' Saito murmured in his thoughts.

	He looked at ~~the~~ Henrietta's eyes which were about to overflow with tears... and he felt as if he must stay beside her to protect her, and that he must do what she says. And to think that he had been thinking of proceeding to get Louise's attackers after clearly identifying the true identity of the enemy.		He looked at Henrietta's eyes which were about to overflow with tears... and he felt as if he must stay beside her to protect her, and that he must do what she says. And to think that he had been thinking of proceeding to get Louise's attackers after clearly identifying the true identity of the enemy.

	His flaming fervor was splashed with cold water. Saito bit his teeth hard. As if asking for help, he looked at Louise... Louise puffed her cheeks up, and avoided Saito's eyes.		His flaming fervor was splashed with cold water. Saito bit his teeth hard. As if asking for help, he looked at Louise... Louise puffed her cheeks up, and avoided Saito's eyes.

24.47.216.175: /* Chapter 1: The Ostland */ minor edit. While you may use a flash pass at a theme park or flash a pass much like one may flash a badge, flashed past is proper in this given context I believe.

2011-01-26T05:21:29Z

Chapter 1: The Ostland: minor edit. While you may use a flash pass at a theme park or flash a pass much like one may flash a badge, flashed past is proper in this given context I believe.

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	''The real Henrietta is merely an ordinary girl dressed in multiple-layered and pricey chiffon. If she kisses, she would blush; if she embraces, she would bury her face in the other party's chest. Her breasts and cheeks, all of them are soft... She is this fragile lady.''		''The real Henrietta is merely an ordinary girl dressed in multiple-layered and pricey chiffon. If she kisses, she would blush; if she embraces, she would bury her face in the other party's chest. Her breasts and cheeks, all of them are soft... She is this fragile lady.''

	''More... I want to see her former face more. Her face before the kiss, what on earth does it look like?'' Such a notion flashed ~~pass~~ his mind... but Saito shook his head.		''More... I want to see her former face more. Her face before the kiss, what on earth does it look like?'' Such a notion flashed past his mind... but Saito shook his head.

	Somehow, he thought that it was something very wrong.		Somehow, he thought that it was something very wrong.

M.A.D: /* Chapter 1: The Ostland */

2010-12-10T05:27:41Z

Chapter 1: The Ostland

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	''Where is the sweet bait?'' Looking at Louise's body which had little humps, Saito whispered in his heart.		''Where is the sweet bait?'' Looking at Louise's body which had little humps, Saito whispered in his heart.

	''Sweet bait huh...'' As he was thinking about this, he noticed Henrietta who was before his eyes. Covered by her dress, Henrietta's body was rich with absolutely ladylike ~~humps~~. Although it was not to Tiffania's extent, her cleavage which peeked out of the sufficiently large breasts, flew into his sight. The feeling of that cleavage still remained at his hands.		''Sweet bait huh...'' As he was thinking about this, he noticed Henrietta who was before his eyes. Covered by her dress, Henrietta's body was rich with absolutely ladylike curves. Although it was not to Tiffania's extent, her cleavage which peeked out of the sufficiently large breasts, flew into his sight. The feeling of that cleavage still remained at his hands.

	At the same time, Saito remembered the kiss, and his cheeks reddened.		At the same time, Saito remembered the kiss, and his cheeks reddened.

Akirasav: Reverted edits by Akirasav (Talk) to last version by Const2k

2010-03-02T00:26:02Z

Reverted edits by Akirasav (Talk) to last version by Const2k

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	“Saito-san...”		“Saito-san...”

	Sure enough, it was Saito, wearing an ~~Undine~~ mantle. Although Guiche's figure could be seen beside him, Siesta's eyes were only on Saito.		Sure enough, it was Saito, wearing an Ondine mantle. Although Guiche's figure could be seen beside him, Siesta's eyes were only on Saito.

	Guiche stepped up in front of Henrietta and bowed elegantly. Saito who was standing half a step behind followed suit, bowing down in an unrefined manner for a knight. The clumsiness which was brought up from amongst the commoners made Siesta's heart beat more.		Guiche stepped up in front of Henrietta and bowed elegantly. Saito who was standing half a step behind followed suit, bowing down in an unrefined manner for a knight. The clumsiness which was brought up from amongst the commoners made Siesta's heart beat more.

Akirasav: Undine

2010-03-02T00:20:49Z

Undine

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	“Saito-san...”		“Saito-san...”

	Sure enough, it was Saito, wearing an ~~Ondine~~ mantle. Although Guiche's figure could be seen beside him, Siesta's eyes were only on Saito.		Sure enough, it was Saito, wearing an Undine mantle. Although Guiche's figure could be seen beside him, Siesta's eyes were only on Saito.

	Guiche stepped up in front of Henrietta and bowed elegantly. Saito who was standing half a step behind followed suit, bowing down in an unrefined manner for a knight. The clumsiness which was brought up from amongst the commoners made Siesta's heart beat more.		Guiche stepped up in front of Henrietta and bowed elegantly. Saito who was standing half a step behind followed suit, bowing down in an unrefined manner for a knight. The clumsiness which was brought up from amongst the commoners made Siesta's heart beat more.

Const2k: is back, so no more vol.10 fulltext version screwing

2009-09-11T12:23:15Z

<noinclude> is back, so no more vol.10 fulltext version screwing

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	“N.O. And yeah, I have already asked many times. Just call me 'Kirche.'”		“N.O. And yeah, I have already asked many times. Just call me 'Kirche.'”

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	Louise stared at the wings of the ''Ostland'' which were protruding from its deck. They were enormous wings, which were about three times larger than the ones of normal ships. Usually, wings which are set up in ships were wood, like the support, with a spreading sail. But this ship was different. To achieve that strength, instead of wood, tall iron masts were used. Reaching 100 mails tall, these straight iron masts could not be produced in Tristain.		Louise stared at the wings of the ''Ostland'' which were protruding from its deck. They were enormous wings, which were about three times larger than the ones of normal ships. Usually, wings which are set up in ships were wood, like the support, with a spreading sail. But this ship was different. To achieve that strength, instead of wood, tall iron masts were used. Reaching 100 mails tall, these straight iron masts could not be produced in Tristain.

	In the middle of the wings, there was an engine room with huge propellers! It looked like the “steam engine” Colbert prided in. Apparently, it was something Colbert and the Zerbst family made using the “Happy Little Snake” from some time before as a model. From their outer appearance, they looked like two long, huge iron boxes with massive chimneys. With the energy from the steam which is generated from the combustion of coal and the heating of water, these huge propellers revolved- this is its mechanism.		In the middle of the wings, there was an engine room with huge propellers! It looked like the “steam engine” Colbert prided in. Apparently, it was something Colbert and the Zerbst family made using the “Happy Little Snake” from some time before as a model. From their outer appearance, they looked like two long, huge iron boxes with massive chimneys. With the energy from the steam which was generated from the combustion of coal and the heating of water, these huge propellers revolved- this was its mechanism.

	Those two things were the product of Germanian mechanics who were excellent metallurgists.		Those two things were the product of Germanian mechanics who were excellent metallurgists.
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	“Well then, I will just express my gratitude to the Assistant Commanding Officer instead.”		“Well then, I will just express my gratitude to the Assistant Commanding Officer instead.”
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	Henrietta said in a slightly anxious tone. Around her, tension spread rapidly. Although Saito is a chevalier, he is still of a commoner origin (the truth is that he is a person of a different world). Previously, despite knowing that he was permitted to kiss Her Majesty's hand at Tristain, for him to do so right now before everyone's eyes, was something he could not even imagine, and this made him dizzy.		Henrietta said in a slightly anxious tone. Around her, tension spread rapidly. Although Saito was a chevalier, he was still of a commoner origin (the truth was that he was a person of a different world). Previously, despite knowing that he was permitted to kiss Her Majesty's hand at Tristain, for him to do so right now before everyone's eyes, was something he could not even imagine, and this made him dizzy.

	Saito involuntarily looked up at Henrietta's face, and blushed, lowering his head slightly. The surrounding noble students thought, ''Aren't you a little too nervous in kissing the queen's hand?'', but that thing was reflected in Siesta's eyes as well. Squinting her eyes, she stared at the queen's and Saito's faces alternately.		Saito involuntarily looked up at Henrietta's face, and blushed, lowering his head slightly. The surrounding noble students thought, ''Aren't you a little too nervous in kissing the queen's hand?'', but that thing was reflected in Siesta's eyes as well. Squinting her eyes, she stared at the queen's and Saito's faces alternately.
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	Siesta hastily shook Louise. From Louise's mouth which was mumbling something, curse-like words could be heard.		Siesta hastily shook Louise. From Louise's mouth which was mumbling something, curse-like words could be heard.

	~~“Though you~~'re a dog, what ~~are you thinking about~~ that is impossible~~, so there is nothing more dreadful than this~~ or ~~is it~~ Princess-sama ~~is Princess-sama there is nothing less honorable than this you~~'re not serious ~~right you're~~ joking ~~right you~~ don't know ~~what this feeling is an unforgivable~~ dog ~~is really unforgivable yet you~~ and ~~the~~ queen? ~~How amusing~~...”		“Isn't he just a dog just a dog what is that supposed to mean that is impossible hey that's too rude anyway that's just not possible or should I say that Princess-sama has no morals she really has no morals I'm not serious or what am I joking or what this feeling is real or not I don't know I can't forgive them really can't forgive them they are just one stupid dog and a queen? That's just too funny really, reaaaaaaaally......”

	“Miss! Miss!”		“Miss! Miss!”
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	“What do you mean by 'mission'!? Isn't she a quiet person? Oh yeah, she had also said...'I'll tell you the reasons after this fight.' Hey, Kirche! Tell me!”		“What do you mean by 'mission'!? Isn't she a quiet person? Oh yeah, she had also said...'I'll tell you the reasons after this fight.' Hey, Kirche! Tell me!”

	''Nnnnn~'' Kirche placed her hand at her forehead.		''Nnnnn~'' Kirche placed her hand on her forehead.

	“Well... It's inevitable that this fact is hidden from you for such a long time. Do you know that she is a Gallian?”		“Well... It's inevitable that this fact is hidden from you for such a long time. Do you know that she is a Gallian?”
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	Kirche explained to Saito. The whole sad story of Tabitha studying abroad at Tristain Academy of Magic...		Kirche explained to Saito. The whole sad story of Tabitha studying abroad at Tristain Academy of Magic...

	The younger brother of the ruling king, Duke of Orleans, who was Tabitha's father, was killed by people of the ruling king. To protect Tabitha, ~~Tabitha's~~ mother drank poison, and became mentally ill.		The younger brother of the ruling king, Duke of Orleans, who was Tabitha's father, was killed by people of the ruling king. To protect Tabitha, her mother drank poison, and became mentally ill.

	And then, Tabitha was being sent to Tristain to study abroad, as if getting rid of her...		And then, Tabitha was being sent to Tristain to study abroad, as if getting rid of her...
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	With that, a big table was hurriedly prepared in Louise's room, and seats specially for the queen's lunch were prepared.		With that, a big table was hurriedly prepared in Louise's room, and seats specially for the queen's lunch were prepared.

	At the prepared table, in the seat of honor with its back facing the window, sat Henrietta; at her right was Louise, followed by Guiche. As a waitress, Siesta stood behind, displaying a nervous expression. ~~Something like serving~~ the queen was something she had never even dreamed of. Siesta stole quick glances at Henrietta's face occasionally.		At the prepared table, in the seat of honor with its back facing the window, sat Henrietta; at her right was Louise, followed by Guiche. As a waitress, Siesta stood behind, displaying a nervous expression. Serving the queen was something she had never even dreamed of. Siesta stole quick glances at Henrietta's face occasionally.

	Recalling that burning look Henrietta had towards Saito some time ago... she rolled her eyes. Seemingly, until now she still could not believe it.		Recalling that burning look Henrietta had towards Saito some time ago... she rolled her eyes. Seemingly, until now she still could not believe it.
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	“Re-Really, nothing's wrong...” Whilst pinning Siesta's face with her thighs, Louise broke out in cold sweat.		“Re-Really, nothing's wrong...” Whilst pinning Siesta's face with her thighs, Louise broke out in cold sweat.

	Once again, Henrietta gazed wistfully outside the window. At a look, she barely touched her food. Ah, Henrietta looked deeply in love.		Once again, Henrietta gazed wistfully outside the window. At a look it could be seen that she barely touched her food. Ah, Henrietta looked deeply in love.

	Louise heaved a deep sigh.		Louise heaved a deep sigh.
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	With furious eyes, Louise glared at Saito.		With furious eyes, Louise glared at Saito.

	Appearing from under the table, with craving and loneliness blended together, Siesta greeted him with a very complicated-looking face. The feelings of the two ladies who ~~are~~ beings exalted beyond the clouds... Towards Saito who had obtained those, they felt both proud and incredulous... and also that their distance was pulled further apart.		Appearing from under the table, with craving and loneliness blended together, Siesta greeted him with a very complicated-looking face. The feelings of the two ladies who were beings exalted beyond the clouds... Towards Saito who had obtained those, they felt both proud and incredulous... and also that their distance was pulled further apart.

	“What's wrong? Don't you have some things to do?”		“What's wrong? Don't you have some things to do?”
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	''Where is the sweet bait?'' Looking at Louise's body which had little humps, Saito whispered in his heart.		''Where is the sweet bait?'' Looking at Louise's body which had little humps, Saito whispered in his heart.

	''Sweet bait huh...'' As he was thinking about this, he noticed Henrietta who was before his eyes. Covered by her dress, Henrietta's body was rich with absolutely ladylike curves. Although it was not to Tiffania's extent, her cleavage which peeked out of the sufficiently large breasts, flew into his sight. The feeling of that cleavage still remained at his hands.		''Sweet bait huh...'' As he was thinking about this, he noticed Henrietta who was before his eyes. Covered by her dress, Henrietta's body was rich with absolutely ladylike curves. Although it was not to Tiffania's extent, her cleavage which peeked out of the sufficiently large breasts, flew into his sight. The feeling of that cleavage still remained in his hands.

	At the same time, Saito remembered the kiss, and his cheeks reddened.		At the same time, Saito remembered the kiss, and his cheeks reddened.