Zero no Tsukaima:Volume10 Chapter2 - Revision history

127.0.0.1: fix grammar

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	However, this time was different.		However, this time was different.

	Tabitha's enemy is the royal family of Gallia.		Tabitha's enemy was the royal family of Gallia.

	This was an opponent on a completely different level than the beasts, mages, or demihumans whom she fought against until then.		This was an opponent on a completely different level than the beasts, mages, or demihumans whom she fought against until then.

Veritatis cupitor at 03:50, 12 November 2015

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Loafy: /* Chapter 2: The Elf */ changed "would not able to deal with them" to "would not be able to deal with them"

2012-12-28T02:54:17Z

Chapter 2: The Elf: changed "would not able to deal with them" to "would not be able to deal with them"

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	Granted with a will, they were magic puppets, gargoyles.		Granted with a will, they were magic puppets, gargoyles.

	Approached at a close range by 10 fearless and firm gargoyles, normal mages would not able to deal with them.		Approached at a close range by 10 fearless and firm gargoyles, normal mages would not be able to deal with them.

	However, Tabitha's magical power right now swelled with anger.		However, Tabitha's magical power right now swelled with anger.

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	“O “Great Purpose”... Please forgive such a foolish use of the “power of the spirits”.”		“O “Great Purpose”... Please forgive such a foolish use of the “power of the spirits”.”

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68.55.44.115: punctuation; "her cemetery" -> "her grave" (implying death instead of literal possession of cemetary); "life force" -> "vitality" (maybe? - never seen "life force" used to mean anything in English)

2010-02-01T23:47:31Z

punctuation; "her cemetery" -> "her grave" (implying death instead of literal possession of cemetary); "life force" -> "vitality" (maybe? - never seen "life force" used to mean anything in English)

Ephyon at 15:42, 1 August 2009

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	Saying that, the man removed his hat.		Saying that, the man removed his hat.

	“I am the Bidashal of “Neftes”. I am grateful for this meeting.”		“I am the Bidashal of “Neftes”<!--Nephthys?-->. I am grateful for this meeting.”

	From the blond hair... long pointed ears protruded.		From the blond hair... long pointed ears protruded.

Ephyon at 15:24, 1 August 2009

2009-08-01T15:24:47Z

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Akirasav: /* Chapter 2 - The Elf */

2009-06-17T06:00:25Z

Chapter 2 - The Elf

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	===Chapter 2 - The Elf===		===Chapter 2: The Elf===

	Along Ragdorian Lake, which was situated on the border between Gallia and Tristain, in front of an old-looking house nearby, a blue-haired girl who was riding a wind dragon alighted.		Along Ragdorian Lake, which was situated on the border between Gallia and Tristain, in front of an old-looking house nearby, a blue-haired girl who was riding a wind dragon alighted.

Akirasav at 15:43, 10 June 2009

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	“Chill.”		“Chill.”

	Facing the front, she told that to her faithful familiar, upon which ''“Tsush, tsush...”'', Sylphid drew nearer to her.		Facing the front, she told that to her faithful familiar, upon which ''“Tsush, tsush...”'' Sylphid drew nearer to her.

	Tabitha turned back, and stopped Sylphid.		Tabitha turned back, and stopped Sylphid.

Akirasav: clarity

2009-06-10T05:25:34Z

clarity

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	Sylphid shook her head.		Sylphid shook her head.

	This wise dragon understood. Her master obviously did not have any intention to surrender. She intended to fight, and recover her mother. Naturally, Gallia's royal government should not have thought that Tabitha would hand over her wand peacefully. To win over that wind magic, they ~~had~~ definitely prepared many powerful users.		This wise dragon understood. Her master obviously did not have any intention to surrender. She intended to fight, and recover her mother. Naturally, Gallia's royal government should not have thought that Tabitha would hand over her wand peacefully. To win over that wind magic, they would have definitely prepared many powerful users.

	Because of her betrayal, there is absolutely no reason whatsoever for them to continue using Tabitha. Since the start, the royal family had been wanting to dispossess Tabitha of her life. However, if she were to be murdered with her father as well, it would result in the ex-Duke of Orleans' formal faction being enraged. Consequently, they assigned dangerous tasks to her, thinking that she would be disposed of that way.		Because of her betrayal, there was absolutely no reason whatsoever for them to continue using Tabitha. Since the start, the royal family had been wanting to dispossess Tabitha of her life. However, if she were to be murdered with her father as well, it would result in the ex-Duke of Orleans' formal faction being enraged. Consequently, they assigned dangerous tasks to her, thinking that she would be disposed of that way.

	Yet, Tabitha managed to accomplished those tasks well. The current king's faction should be certainly impatient now.		Yet, Tabitha managed to accomplished those tasks well. The current king's faction should be certainly impatient now.
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	This time... was the chance for them to deliver their full potential to kill her.		This time... was the chance for them to deliver their full potential to kill her.

	Sylphid noticed the unpleasant atmosphere enveloping the house. That air ~~became~~ a chilly sensation as if pricking one's skin, and Sylphid's scales were agitated.		Sylphid noticed the unpleasant atmosphere enveloping the house. That air had a chilly sensation as if pricking one's skin, and Sylphid's scales were agitated.

	“You understand, don't you? From now on the fight would proceed. In the same, usual way, wait for me in the air.”		“You understand, don't you? From now on the fight would proceed. In the same, usual way, wait for me in the air.”

	~~Sylphid~~ never ~~joins~~ Tabitha in ~~her~~ battle. ~~“Because I don't have~~ the ~~legs to go~~ back,~~” <!--I am not sure of this. 帰りの足がなくなるから-->with that reason, she usually waits patiently~~ in the air for her master's battle ~~to finish~~.		Slyphid never joined Tabitha in battle. She always used the reason that "You need something that can bring you back home, right?" and stayed in the air meekly waiting for her master to complete her battle.

	However, this time was different.		However, this time was different.
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	This was an opponent on a completely different level than the beasts, mages, or demihumans whom she fought against until then.		This was an opponent on a completely different level than the beasts, mages, or demihumans whom she fought against until then.

	A kingdom against a person; no matter how she ~~struggles~~, she ~~has~~ no chance of winning.		A kingdom against a person; no matter how she struggled, she had no chance of winning.

	This ex-Orleans residence was already not the place of Tabitha's dear memories.		This ex-Orleans residence was already not the place of Tabitha's dear memories.
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	There were bookshelves at the surrounding of the wall... A man was standing there.		There were bookshelves at the surrounding of the wall... A man was standing there.

	Clad in a pale, light brown robe, he was a tall and thin man. He was wearing a hat of a foreign country, with a wide flange and a feather on top of it. From the bare parts of his hat, golden hairs hung down until his waist. With his back facing the entrance to the room ~~at which~~ Tabitha was standing, he was facing the bookshelf at the wall, and was apparently doing something enthusiastically.		Clad in a pale, light brown robe, he was a tall and thin man. He was wearing a hat of a foreign country, with a wide flange and a feather on top of it. From the bare parts of his hat, golden hairs hung down until his waist. With his back facing the entrance to the room where Tabitha was standing, he was facing the bookshelf at the wall, and was apparently doing something enthusiastically.

	The sound of pages flipping could be heard. To her astonishment, the man was seemingly reading a book. She had never heard of any assassin who ~~turns~~ his back towards his enemy and ~~reads~~ a book.		The sound of pages flipping could be heard. To her astonishment, the man was seemingly reading a book. She had never heard of any assassin who turned his back towards his enemy and read a book.

	Facing that back, Tabitha spoke softly.		Facing that back, Tabitha spoke softly.
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	Tabitha squeezed out an astonished sound from her throat.		Tabitha squeezed out an astonished sound from her throat.

	~~This~~ man is an elf.		That man was an elf.

	Staying at the outspread desert at the east of Halkeginia, a race that ~~has~~ long life.		Staying at the outspread desert at the east of Halkeginia, a race that had long life.

	A race which boasts of many-fold history and civilization compared to the humans.		A race which boasts of many-fold history and civilization compared to the humans.

	The dreadful warriors who ~~are~~ users of the powerful ancient magic.		The dreadful warriors who were users of the powerful ancient magic.

	Tabitha grasped her staff tightly.		Tabitha grasped her staff tightly.

	Even for the Knight of the North Parterre Tabitha, who had fought with various types of enemies, there ~~are~~ two opponents she did not want to meet. One of them is dragons. For a human to fight against a mature dragon, the danger is far too great. The dragons' flame power and vitality easily ~~surpass~~ her magic powers.		Even for the Knight of the North Parterre Tabitha, who had fought with various types of enemies, there were two opponents she did not want to meet. One of them was dragons. For a human to fight against a mature dragon, the danger was far too great. The dragons' flame power and vitality easily surpassed her magic powers.

	And, the other one is elves, the one standing in front of her eyes right now.		And, the other one was elves, the one standing in front of her eyes right now.

	First time seeing an elf, Tabitha was struck with wonder... and subsequently terror. According to rumors, their magic powers were extraordinary. Anyhow, her Windy Icicles could not reach him at all...		First time seeing an elf, Tabitha was struck with wonder... and subsequently terror. According to rumors, their magic powers were extraordinary. Anyhow, her Windy Icicles could not reach him at all...
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	The lump of frozen air revolved around her body like countless snake-like objects.		The lump of frozen air revolved around her body like countless snake-like objects.

	~~The and \| a sharpness which as if bisects the X and the felt things \| <!--Eh!?-->~~

	Combining both the beauty of the art formed by ice and wind interweaving each other, and the sharpness which would split anything which touches it into two, the “Ice Storm” appeared.		Combining both the beauty of the art formed by ice and wind interweaving each other, and the sharpness which would split anything which touches it into two, the “Ice Storm” appeared.
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	“Rhyme Dragon. I have no intention to fight against you. “The Great Purpose” did not wish for me to fight you as well.”		“Rhyme Dragon. I have no intention to fight against you. “The Great Purpose” did not wish for me to fight you as well.”

	“The Great Purpose” is... the general concept believed by the elves, Rhyme Dragons... the Ancient inhabitants of Halkeginia. They existed with the source which was called “the power of the spirits”, something which ~~determines~~ their respective actions... It was something like a god to the humans.		“The Great Purpose” was... the general concept believed by the elves, Rhyme Dragons... the Ancient inhabitants of Halkeginia. They existed with the source which was called “the power of the spirits”, something which determined their respective actions... It was something like a god to the humans.

	Despite “The Great Purpose”, this Rhyme Dragon before his eyes did not pull back. On the contrary, as if gathering courage, started roaring.		Despite “The Great Purpose”, this Rhyme Dragon before his eyes did not pull back. On the contrary, as if gathering courage, started roaring.

	This dragon knew what “fear” is. Whilst aware of his hidden ability as a user of the “power of the spirits”, which was many times more, she bared her fangs.		This dragon knew what “fear” was. Whilst aware of his hidden ability as a user of the “power of the spirits”, which was many times more, she bared her fangs.

	“You went as far as selling your soul to barbarians? Familiar, what pathetic existences.”		“You went as far as selling your soul to barbarians? Familiar, what pathetic existences.”

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	Nor was it the battleground.		Nor was it the battleground.

	It was a place where the executioner, who was dispatched to kill her, was waiting; her coffin, her ~~cemetery~~.		It was a place where the executioner, who was dispatched to kill her, was waiting; her coffin, her grave.

	If it were a “battlefield,” it would still be okay; but her beloved master must not venture alone into this “cemetery.”		If it were a “battlefield,” it would still be okay; but her beloved master must not venture alone into this “cemetery.”

	Tabitha gazed firmly at Sylphid who was staring at her with those brave eyes.		Tabitha gazed firmly at Sylphid, who was staring at her with those brave eyes.

	In a soft, instruction-like voice, Tabitha said.		In a soft, instruction-like voice, Tabitha said.
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	Tabitha grasped her staff tightly.		Tabitha grasped her staff tightly.

	Even for the Knight of the North Parterre Tabitha, who had fought with various types of enemies, there are two opponents she did not want to meet. One of them is dragons. For a human to fight against a mature dragon, the danger is far too great. The dragons' flame power and ~~life force~~ easily surpass her magic powers.		Even for the Knight of the North Parterre Tabitha, who had fought with various types of enemies, there are two opponents she did not want to meet. One of them is dragons. For a human to fight against a mature dragon, the danger is far too great. The dragons' flame power and vitality easily surpass her magic powers.

	And, the other one is elves, the one standing in front of her eyes right now.		And, the other one is elves, the one standing in front of her eyes right now.
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	“Yeah. My request is that you do not resist. We elves don't like useless battles. Despite your intentions, I must take you back to Joseph. Because I had promised that. That's why, if you can, I want you to come along with me peacefully.”		“Yeah. My request is that you do not resist. We elves don't like useless battles. Despite your intentions, I must take you back to Joseph. Because I had promised that. That's why, if you can, I want you to come along with me peacefully.”

	At her uncle's name, Tabitha's blood flowed backwards.		At her uncle's name, Tabitha's blood flowed backwards. <!--Translator's note? Is this surprise, anger, or fear?-->

	''How could you be afraid? You had decided to bring back your mother! Whether it is an elf, or a god, I cannot stop here.''		''How could you be afraid? You had decided to bring back your mother! Whether it is an elf, or a god, I cannot stop here.''

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	===Chapter 2 - The Elf===		===Chapter 2 - The Elf===

	Along ~~the~~ Ragdorian Lake, which was situated ~~along~~ the border between Gallia and Tristain, in front of an old-looking house nearby, a blue-haired girl who was riding a ~~Wind Dragon~~ alighted.		Along Ragdorian Lake, which was situated on the border between Gallia and Tristain, in front of an old-looking house nearby, a blue-haired girl who was riding a wind dragon alighted.

	Although the Gallia royal family's crest could be seen at the door of the residence, it was humiliated by an unsightly cross-shaped dent. This was the house of which Tabitha's mother lived quietly...... It was the premise of an ex-Orleans residence.		Although the Gallia royal family's crest could be seen at the door of the residence, it was humiliated by an unsightly cross-shaped dent. This was the house in which Tabitha's mother lived quietly...... It was the premise of an ex-Orleans residence.

	Tabitha pondered on the contents of the letter which she had torn up completely last night. It was a letter with the Gallia royal family's seal. Something short was written inside:		Tabitha pondered about the contents of the letter which she had torn up completely last night. It was a letter with the Gallia royal family's seal. Something short was written inside:

	''“Charlotte Hélène Chevalier De Parterre. Deprivation of your title as my right-hand assistant, Chevalier, and your social status. PS: The aforementioned person's mother, ex-Duchess of Orleans, is restrained. For bail negotiations to be approved, within a week, the aforementioned person must be present at the ex-Duke of Orléans' official residence.”''		''“Charlotte Hélène Chevalier de Parterre. Deprivation of your title as my right-hand assistant, Chevalier, and your social status. PS: The aforementioned person's mother, ex-Duchess of Orleans, is restrained. For bail negotiations to be approved, within a week, the aforementioned person must be present at the ex-Duke of Orléans' official residence.”''

	“Bail negotiations” is an extremely mild expression. Tabitha was certainly not deceived. In other words, it means “Because your mother has been made a hostage, surrender peacefully!” After that, a trial against Tabitha's treachery would probably begin. The result would be...... if she is lucky, the gallows. If not...... she did not really want to think about it.		“Bail negotiations” is an extremely mild expression. Tabitha was certainly not deceived. In other words, it means “Because your mother has been made a hostage, surrender peacefully!” After that, a trial against Tabitha's treachery would probably begin. The result would be...... if she is lucky, the gallows. If not...... she did not really want to think about it.
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	Tabitha's enemy is the royal family of Gallia.		Tabitha's enemy is the royal family of Gallia.

	This is an opponent on a completely different level than the beasts, ~~magi~~, or demihumans whom she fought against until now.		This is an opponent on a completely different level than the beasts, mages, or demihumans whom she fought against until now.

	A kingdom against a person; no matter how she struggles, she has no chance of winning.		A kingdom against a person; no matter how she struggles, she has no chance of winning.
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	It was a place where the executioner, who was dispatched to kill her, was waiting; her coffin, her cemetery.		It was a place where the executioner, who was dispatched to kill her, was waiting; her coffin, her cemetery.

	If it were a ~~“battlefield”~~, it was still okay; but her beloved master must not venture alone into this ~~“cemetery”~~.		If it were a “battlefield,” it was still okay; but her beloved master must not venture alone into this “cemetery.”

	Tabitha gazed firmly at Sylphid who was staring at her with those brave eyes.		Tabitha gazed firmly at Sylphid who was staring at her with those brave eyes.
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	Taller than her, she casually held her rough and knobby staff, and Tabitha slowly faced the interior of the residence.		Taller than her, she casually held her rough and knobby staff, and Tabitha slowly faced the interior of the residence.

	~~Her~~ usual expression, her usual movements, but Tabitha's anger changed the atmosphere around her.		She had her usual expression, her usual movements, but Tabitha's anger changed the atmosphere around her.

	She walked down the long corridor leading to her mother's living room in the interior of the residence, and......the doors at the left and right of the corridor opened simultaneously.		She walked down the long corridor leading to her mother's living room in the interior of the residence, and......the doors at the left and right of the corridor opened simultaneously.
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	Granted with a will, they were magic puppets, gargoyles.		Granted with a will, they were magic puppets, gargoyles.

	Approached at a close range by 10 fearless and firm gargoyles, normal ~~magi were~~ not able to deal with them.		Approached at a close range by 10 fearless and firm gargoyles, normal mages would not able to deal with them.

	However, Tabitha's magical power right now swelled with anger.		However, Tabitha's magical power right now swelled with anger.
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	Holding her staff up high, the countless ice arrows at her surrounding just now which shone a pale color, revolved. Her short hair also fluttered intensely due to the tornado which sprang forth, with her as the center.		Holding her staff up high, the countless ice arrows at her surrounding just now which shone a pale color, revolved. Her short hair also fluttered intensely due to the tornado which sprang forth, with her as the center.

	“Windy Icicle” of speed and power never displayed before this, pierced through the 10 gargoyles at the same time......and blew them away.		A “Windy Icicle” of speed and power never displayed before this, pierced through the 10 gargoyles at the same time......and blew them away.

	Because of the magic contained in the Windy Icicles, the gargoyles which had been pierced through, turned into ice in an instant. This was the result of the surging magical power seeking its destination.		Because of the magic contained in the Windy Icicles, the gargoyles which had been pierced through, turned into ice in an instant. This was the result of the surging magical power seeking its destination.
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	The double-sided door swung back casually.		The double-sided door swung back casually.

	A bed and a small desk could be seen. On top of the bed, her mother's figure was ~~not there~~.		A bed and a small desk could be seen. On top of the bed, her mother's figure was absent.

	The window was open, and spring breeze blew in.		The window was open, and spring breeze blew in.