Zero no Tsukaima:Volume10 Chapter6 - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 04:57, 26 January 2016

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Glorfyboy: /* Chapter 6: The Imprisoned Six */

2011-03-06T22:08:55Z

Chapter 6: The Imprisoned Six

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	Saito bowed at Kirche and the rest.		Saito bowed at Kirche and the rest.

	“S-~~Sry~~....<!-- On purpose--> Getting caught when we said we would go to rescue Tabitha... Guess that can't be helped, huh...”		“S-Sorry....<!-- On purpose--> Getting caught when we said we would go to rescue Tabitha... Guess that can't be helped, huh...”

	Colbert tapped Saito's shoulder.		Colbert tapped Saito's shoulder.

Error: /* Chapter 6: The Imprisoned Six */ several minor edits... any verb that refers back to a word like furniture always takes the singular form.

2011-01-26T07:51:28Z

Chapter 6: The Imprisoned Six: several minor edits... any verb that refers back to a word like furniture always takes the singular form.

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	Upon which, Louise gazed at Saito with a solemn look.		Upon which, Louise gazed at Saito with a solemn look.

	“Saito. That is wrong. Precisely because we are trying to save someone, we must go through the proper ~~proceedures~~.”		“Saito. That is wrong. Precisely because we are trying to save someone, we must go through the proper procedures.”

	“Why!?”		“Why!?”
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	“You're thinking that the enemy would believe us? Quitting being a knight alone is not enough! At least until you become a wanted person, then only you can be said to have cut all connections!”		“You're thinking that the enemy would believe us? Quitting being a knight alone is not enough! At least until you become a wanted person, then only you can be said to have cut all connections!”

	“But can you actually stop being a noble? At least until ~~your~~ are the same as me, your cheekiness...”		“But can you actually stop being a noble? At least until you are the same as me, your cheekiness...”

	At that point, Saito noticed Louise's appearance for the first time. Because she was uneasy, he didn't know, but...		At that point, Saito noticed Louise's appearance for the first time. Because she was uneasy, he didn't know, but...
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	“Returned... you...”		“Returned... you...”

	“Shaddap! With this, I'm just the normal Louise! Same as you, a commoner! Com-mon-er! Thank you very much! I have thrown away both my family name and my pride! So don't just ~~showing~~ off like that!”		“Shaddap! With this, I'm just the normal Louise! Same as you, a commoner! Com-mon-er! Thank you very much! I have thrown away both my family name and my pride! So don't just show off like that!”

	Saito was very touched, more than he had ever been ever since meeting Louise.		Saito was very touched, more than he had ever been ever since meeting Louise.
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	''This pink-haired female magic user whose pride is supposed to be so high; my master... She had been so obsessive over the “noble” title, and now she had thrown it away easily.''		''This pink-haired female magic user whose pride is supposed to be so high; my master... She had been so obsessive over the “noble” title, and now she had thrown it away easily.''

	''For a girl like Louise, that was probably something which needed a huge ~~a mount~~ of courage.''		''For a girl like Louise, that was probably something which needed a huge amount of courage.''

	''If she hadn’t the determination to throw away the life she had built up until now, she could not have done such a thing. That's because, as far as Louise is concerned, her status as a noble was her everything.''		''If she hadn’t the determination to throw away the life she had built up until now, she could not have done such a thing. That's because, as far as Louise is concerned, her status as a noble was her everything.''
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	“............”		“............”

	Putting that on, she checked her body. She could not feel anything strange at all. Looking around, just like the bed and the accessories, the furniture around her ~~were~~ luxurious as well. It was the furniture of the previous Capet dynasty. The generation during which Gallia had thoroughly achieved the artistic, military, greatest splendor.		Putting that on, she checked her body. She could not feel anything strange at all. Looking around, just like the bed and the accessories, the furniture around her was luxurious as well. It was the furniture of the previous Capet dynasty. The generation during which Gallia had thoroughly achieved the artistic, military, greatest splendor.

	“Have you woken up?”		“Have you woken up?”
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	“If you are bored, read a book. I have brought a few here.”		“If you are bored, read a book. I have brought a few here.”

	Bidashal pointed at the few books stacked in a ~~tow~~, which was apparently brought from the mansion of Orleans.		Bidashal pointed at the few books stacked in a row, which was apparently brought from the mansion of Orleans.

	“This ''The Hero of Ivaldi'' book is really of great interest.”		“This ''The Hero of Ivaldi'' book is really of great interest.”

Wolfpup: /* Chapter 6: The Imprisoned Six */

2010-06-09T01:53:22Z

Chapter 6: The Imprisoned Six

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	“Anyway, I don't want to use the ship for dangerous things. After rescuing Miss Tabitha, we will use the ship to travel east. Right?” With a teasing-like smile on his face, Colbert looked at Saito.		“Anyway, I don't want to use the ship for dangerous things. After rescuing Miss Tabitha, we will use the ship to travel east. Right?” With a teasing-like smile on his face, Colbert looked at Saito.

	''Yes!'' Touched, Saito nodded.		''Yes!'' Touched, Saito nodded.

	“Because of that, we should cross the country border on horses, and head towards the old Orleans residence at the shore of Ragdorian Lake, which Miss Zerbst knew about. That is where Miss Tabitha's home is. Maybe there is some clue over there. Well then, for the time being, this is the plan. Everyone, any questions?”		“Because of that, we should cross the country border on horses, and head towards the old Orleans residence at the shore of Ragdorian Lake, which Miss Zerbst knew about. That is where Miss Tabitha's home is. Maybe there is some clue over there. Well then, for the time being, this is the plan. Everyone, any questions?”

Ephyon at 19:11, 21 February 2010

2010-02-21T19:11:28Z

Ephyon: Neftes->Nephthys

2010-02-19T23:41:20Z

Neftes->Nephthys

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	“Who are you?”		“Who are you?”

	“Member of the Old Council of ~~Neftes~~... no, right now, I am but the Bidashal of Sahara.”		“Member of the Old Council of Nephthys... no, right now, I am but the Bidashal of Sahara.”

	“Where is this place?”		“Where is this place?”

Ephyon at 20:00, 18 February 2010

2010-02-18T20:00:59Z

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RonnieCorny: /* Chapter 6: The Imprisoned Six */

2009-08-21T03:50:14Z

Chapter 6: The Imprisoned Six

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	“We thought that you would be refused and would give up after that, and waited secretly for your return at the courtyard. And then, after seeing you all being arrested and taken away......”		“We thought that you would be refused and would give up after that, and waited secretly for your return at the courtyard. And then, after seeing you all being arrested and taken away......”

	“They told us who were waiting on the ship. Then, ~~Jann~~ and I devised a plan, and sought help from this Charming Fairies Inn.”		“They told us who were waiting on the ship. Then, Jean and I devised a plan, and sought help from this Charming Fairies Inn.”

	Triumphantly, Kirche said.		Triumphantly, Kirche said.

82.171.230.84: /* Chapter 6: The Imprisoned Six */

2009-07-20T21:43:58Z

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	“They're just asleep.”		“They're just asleep.”

	Kirche replied as if she was having fun. ''How on earth did they manage to do that?'' As he was thinking how strange it was, with mage guards as their lead, some soldiers came up ~~form~~ below. It was a group of soldiers who noticed the anomaly in the tower.		Kirche replied as if she was having fun. ''How on earth did they manage to do that?'' As he was thinking how strange it was, with mage guards as their lead, some soldiers came up from below. It was a group of soldiers who noticed the anomaly in the tower.

	“You bastards! What are you doing!?”		“You bastards! What are you doing!?”

Kumichael: /* Chapter 6: The Imprisoned Six */

2009-07-20T01:14:29Z

Chapter 6: The Imprisoned Six

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	Embarrassed, Saito cast his eyes down.		Embarrassed, Saito cast his eyes down.

	“Sorry......But I still have to do it! Logically, I know what you said is true, but...because of that, what I can probably do, I naturally can't do it at this rate......Aaaah, ~~dammit~~! I am really anxious!”		“Sorry......But I still have to do it! Logically, I know what you said is true, but...because of that, what I can probably do, I naturally can't do it at this rate......Aaaah, damn it! I am really anxious!”

	“Yeah huh......I thought Princess would probably understand, but......looks like I was too naïve.”		“Yeah huh......I thought Princess would probably understand, but......looks like I was too naïve.”
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	Covering her ears, Louise crouched down. As if his hand was hurt, Saito withdrew his hand.		Covering her ears, Louise crouched down. As if his hand was hurt, Saito withdrew his hand.

	~~“Ok~~, ok. I won't say it any more.”		“Okay, okay. I won't say it any more.”

	If she doesn't want him to say such things, he couldn't do anything else. Louise became tearful.		If she doesn't want him to say such things, he couldn't do anything else. Louise became tearful.
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	“Isn't that Montmorency's voice!?”		“Isn't that Montmorency's voice!?”

	Sure enough, that was the voice of Montmorency who was supposed to be waiting for the group's return on the ''Ostland''.		Sure enough, that was the voice of Montmorency, who was supposed to be waiting for the group's return on the ''Ostland''.

	In the courtyard of the palace, be it the escorting knights, the soldiers, or the nobles who were walking at the streets, everyone was looking up to the sky.		In the courtyard of the palace, be it the escorting knights, the soldiers, or the nobles who were walking at the streets, everyone was looking up to the sky.

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	“How could this be...”		“How could this be...”

	“What did you want to say? ~~Although~~ we ~~don't~~ know if that ~~would be~~ the case, ~~above~~ not ~~discarding~~ this ~~probability~~, we ~~must~~ think ~~that it is certain and act accordingly~~. ~~How much more cruel than this would be the method employed by~~ the kingdom of Gallia to ~~capture~~ us? We don't know what they would do. After that, we would probably cause trouble for the Princess, if not all of Tristain. Because of that, it is possible for people unrelated to us to get hurt. Even I want to save Tabitha. But, I cannot cause problems for everyone. That course of action is exactly what someone who had lost their head would take.”		“What did you want to say? Even though we do not really know if that were the case, since we can not remove this possibility, we should think carefully before making our next move. After all, they are the kingdom of Gallia, which has been using all kinds of cruel methods to attack us. We don't know what they would do. After that, we would probably cause trouble for the Princess, if not all of Tristain. Because of that, it is possible for people unrelated to us to get hurt. Even I want to save Tabitha. But, I cannot cause problems for everyone. That course of action is exactly what someone who had lost their head would take.”

	Embarrassed, Saito cast his eyes down.		Embarrassed, Saito cast his eyes down.
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	Saito was very touched, more than he had ever been ever since meeting Louise.		Saito was very touched, more than he had ever been ever since meeting Louise.

	''This pink-haired female magic user whose pride is supposed to be so high; my master... She had been so obsessive over the “noble” title, and now she had thrown it away easily.''		''This pink-haired female magic user whose pride was supposed to be so high; my master... She had been so obsessive over the “noble” title, and now she had thrown it away easily.''

	''For a girl like Louise, that was probably something which needed a huge amount of courage.''		''For a girl like Louise, that was probably something which needed a huge amount of courage.''

	''If she hadn’t the determination to throw away the life she had built up until now, she could not have done such a thing. That's because, as far as Louise is concerned, her status as a noble was her everything.''		''If she hadn’t the determination to throw away the life she had built up until now, she could not have done such a thing. That's because, as far as Louise was concerned, her status as a noble was her everything.''

	“Y-You...”		“Y-You...”
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	Sure enough, that was the voice of Montmorency, who was supposed to be waiting for the group's return on the ''Ostland''.		Sure enough, that was the voice of Montmorency, who was supposed to be waiting for the group's return on the ''Ostland''.

	In the courtyard of the palace, be it the escorting knights, the soldiers, or the nobles who were walking at the streets, everyone was looking up to the sky.		In the courtyard of the palace, be it the escorting knights, the soldiers, or the nobles who were walking on the streets, everyone was looking up to the sky.

	A few dragon knights approached them, and flew around the ''Ostland''. '”Do it somewhere else! Get back!” They were warning them. Yet, without the slightest indication that they were worried, the ''Ostland'' continued circling it.		A few dragon knights approached them, and flew around the ''Ostland''. '”Do it somewhere else! Get back!” They were warning them. Yet, without the slightest indication that they were worried, the ''Ostland'' continued circling it.
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	Bidashal nodded.		Bidashal nodded.

	~~“That~~ drug ~~which is so strong; we are not~~ able to prepare it. ~~<!—So did or didn’t he?-->~~Well then, although I pity you, I am also a captive-like being as well. I think this is the will of 'The Great Purpose' too, so give up.”		“A drug that could have such consistent results, you humans would never be able to prepare something like this. Well then, although I pity you, I am also a captive-like being as well. I think this is the will of 'The Great Purpose' too, so give up.”

	Tabitha stood up, and went towards a window in the room.		Tabitha stood up, and went towards a window in the room.
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	Taking the book he was indulged with at the old mansion of Orleans, Bidashal murmured.		Taking the book he was indulged with at the old mansion of Orleans, Bidashal murmured.

	''The Hero of Ivaldi'' is the most popular epic tale in Halkeginia.		''The Hero of Ivaldi'' was the most popular epic tale in Halkeginia.

	Receiving the divine protection of Founder Brimir, Ivaldi the Hero used ''swords'' and ''spears'' and defeated various enemies- dragons, demons, demihumans...Because the original script no longer existed, besides the plot and the characters, it had branched off into innumerable variations - folklores, traditions, poems, plays, puppet shows...		Receiving the divine protection of Founder Brimir, Ivaldi the Hero used ''swords'' and ''spears'' and defeated various enemies- dragons, demons, demihumans...Because the original script no longer existed, besides the plot and the characters, it had branched off into innumerable variations - folklores, traditions, poems, plays, puppet shows...

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	===Chapter 6: The Imprisoned Six===		===Chapter 6: The Imprisoned Six===

	Saito noticed the sunlight shining through the gap between the metal grills. Beside him, Louise's head ~~was laid~~ on his shoulder as she was breathing gently. Guiche and Malicorne laid down side by side on the bed, snoring.		Saito noticed the sunlight shining through the gap between the metal grills. Beside him, Louise's head rested on his shoulder as she was breathing gently. Guiche and Malicorne laid down side by side on the bed, snoring.

	“It's morning, huh...”		“It's morning, huh...”
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	''What on earth is she dreaming about? Being trapped within these grills, now is not the time to oversleep. We have to leave to save Tabitha quickly...''		''What on earth is she dreaming about? Being trapped within these grills, now is not the time to oversleep. We have to leave to save Tabitha quickly...''

	“Aren't you stupid? Being rejected by the Princess, we can face our opponents...”		“Aren't you stupid? Being rejected by the Princess, we can't face our opponents...”

	Saito nudged Louise.		Saito nudged Louise.
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	“...What're you talking about?”		“...What're you talking about?”

	Saito ~~spoke~~ astonished, and she realized that this place was not a dream, but the real world.		Saito asked astonished, and she realized that this place was not a dream, but the real world.

	Her face crimsoned, and began hitting Saito repeatedly.		Her face crimsoned, and began hitting Saito repeatedly.
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	“How could this be...”		“How could this be...”

	“What did you want to say? Although we don't know if that would be the case, above not discarding this probability, we must think that it is certain and act accordingly. How much more cruel than this would the method employed by the kingdom of Gallia to capture us? We don't know what they would do. After that, we would probably cause trouble for the Princess, if not all of Tristain. Because of that, it is possible for people unrelated to us to get hurt. Even I want to save Tabitha. But, I cannot cause problems for everyone. That course of action is exactly what someone who had lost their head would take.”		“What did you want to say? Although we don't know if that would be the case, above not discarding this probability, we must think that it is certain and act accordingly. How much more cruel than this would be the method employed by the kingdom of Gallia to capture us? We don't know what they would do. After that, we would probably cause trouble for the Princess, if not all of Tristain. Because of that, it is possible for people unrelated to us to get hurt. Even I want to save Tabitha. But, I cannot cause problems for everyone. That course of action is exactly what someone who had lost their head would take.”

	Embarrassed, Saito cast his eyes down.		Embarrassed, Saito cast his eyes down.
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	Under Kirche's guidance, the group that sneaked out of the palace headed towards the “Charming Fairies” Inn at which they had worked before. Surprisingly, horses and ~~travelling~~ equipment were already prepared there.		Under Kirche's guidance, the group that sneaked out of the palace headed towards the “Charming Fairies” Inn at which they had worked before. Surprisingly, horses and traveling equipment were already prepared there.

	“You're going to save your friends right? I want to help<nowiki>~~~</nowiki>.”		“You're going to save your friends right? I want to help<nowiki>~~~</nowiki>.”
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	Tabitha stood up, and went towards a window in the room.		Tabitha stood up, and went towards a window in the room.

	Under the radiant sun she could the collapsed castle walls. Alhambra was supposed to be an abandoned castle, but when she looked at the furnished noble room, she thought that Joseph had probably renovated it.		Under the radiant sun she could see the collapsed castle walls. Alhambra was supposed to be an abandoned castle, but when she looked at the furnished noble room, she thought that Joseph had probably renovated it.

	Blocked by the castle walls, she couldn’t see the courtyard until the outside of the castle, but she was able to look down at the huge entrance protruding from the castle keep. Soldiers wielding lances and rifles were standing there. Although she did not know how many armed soldiers they were, since she did not have her wand, it was impossible to escape with her mother.		Blocked by the castle walls, she couldn’t see the courtyard until the outside of the castle, but she was able to look down at the huge entrance protruding from the castle keep. Soldiers wielding lances and rifles were standing there. Although she did not know how many armed soldiers they were, since she did not have her wand, it was impossible to escape with her mother.
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	She did not want them to think of things like trying their best to save them. Because she did not want to be a bother, she did not tell anyone about her departure at all.		She did not want them to think of things like trying their best to save them. Because she did not want to be a bother, she did not tell anyone about her departure at all.

	''But... it should be okay not to worry about that.'' Anyhow, the one who had captured Tabitha was Gallia. Coming to save her would be the same as looking for a ~~braw~~ with the whole country. ''Kirche or Saito would not think of taking such a risk. Especially Saito, isn't he a knight of the Imperial Guard now...?''		''But... it should be okay not to worry about that.'' Anyhow, the one who had captured Tabitha was Gallia. Coming to save her would be the same as looking for a brawl with the whole country. ''Kirche or Saito would not think of taking such a risk. Especially Saito, isn't he a knight of the Imperial Guard now...?''

	''But, if it's Saito, he probably wouldn't mind taking such risks. Anyway, when it comes to that Saito, during that time when we fought to the death, he let me off without considering the risk to himself.''		''But, if it's Saito, he probably wouldn't mind taking such risks. Anyway, when it comes to that Saito, during that time when we fought to the death, he let me off without considering the risk to himself.''