Zero no Tsukaima:Volume11 Chapter1 - Revision history

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	It was already the second dream of his mother. Being so far away, it was a wonder he could recall her face at all.		It was already the second dream of his mother. Being so far away, it was a wonder he could recall her face at all.

	Saito rose from bed and looked out of the window. The sun ~~has~~ already gone halfway. The bed next to him, where Malicorne and Guiche should have been sleeping, was empty. No one had slept in it for some time.		Saito rose from bed and looked out of the window. The sun had already gone halfway. The bed next to him, where Malicorne and Guiche should have been sleeping, was empty. No one had slept in it for some time.

	Saito dressed and turned to leave the room…		Saito dressed and turned to leave the room…
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	“S-Shame for what! There’s nothing wrong with being seen by a familiar!”		“S-Shame for what! There’s nothing wrong with being seen by a familiar!”

	~~Flurried~~ Louise countered.		Louise countered in a flurry.

	Firstly, in the carriage, Saito’s feverish gaze when he looked at her dancer’s clothing, was very amusing. But as if showing was not satisfying enough, she went up with the whole provocative ending.		Firstly, in the carriage, Saito’s feverish gaze when he looked at her dancer’s clothing, was very amusing. But as if showing was not satisfying enough, she went up with the whole provocative ending.
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	“H-Hey, let's go.”		“H-Hey, let's go.”

	Nervous, Saito urged Louise. As always, he was looking at the opposite direction. ''Kaaaaan'' – a lot of blood went up to Louise’s head. ''I’m acting so cute, I’m acting so cute and yet... Can’t let that happen''. ~~Pride soared~~ high ~~in Louise, like from the~~ blood ~~that ran up~~ to her head. Result: Louise’s ~~temperament~~ broke loose.		Nervous, Saito urged Louise. As always, he was looking at the opposite direction. ''Kaaaaan'' – a lot of blood went up to Louise’s head. ''I’m acting so cute, I’m acting so cute and yet... Can’t let that happen''. Louise's pride was as high as a mountain and blood soared to her head. Result: Louise’s temper broke loose.

	“B, B-B-B, B-B...”		“B, B-B-B, B-B...”
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	“Then the b-b-breast cloth w-w-w-will go.”		“Then the b-b-breast cloth w-w-w-will go.”

	~~“How long will you hesitate? E~~-~~Everyone will see you if you wait~~.”		“T-take it off then. Th-that kind of stuff, no-nobody would even want to look at it.”

	~~“Hey you!~~”		“So be it then.”

	~~“Pshh~~.”		“So be it.”

	“I ~~won’t hesitate~~.”		“I'm taking it off now, okay.”

	Saito applied more power to the finger digging into his thigh. From the pain, cold sweat flowed. Seriously, flowed.		Saito applied more power to the finger digging into his thigh. From the pain, cold sweat flowed. Seriously, flowed.
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	Louise gave a lot of care to the cloth which covered her chest. "Move," but the hand wouldn’t move even if ordered. It was shameful. No, shame was not the only thing. Death. Her head would explode and she would die from shame.		Louise gave a lot of care to the cloth which covered her chest. "Move," but the hand wouldn’t move even if ordered. It was shameful. No, shame was not the only thing. Death. Her head would explode and she would die from shame.

	~~And then~~ it ~~changed again~~. ~~Though~~ she ~~returned~~ her noble ~~position to Her Majesty~~, her noble ~~pride was still there~~. ~~By all means. It is necessarily for a master to make a~~ familiar ~~turn his~~ eyes on her~~, so that there~~ would ~~be no regrets left~~.		But if she took it off...

			While she should be able to reclaim her position as a noble from the Queen herself, her pride as a noble would be lost forever. Since that would be the case, she must fix her familiar's eyes firmly on her body or she would regret it.

	Even though she was confused, because blood went up her head, Louise didn't notice such thing. Her pride was driving her insane.		Even though she was confused, because blood went up her head, Louise didn't notice such thing. Her pride was driving her insane.
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	“…then if so, maybe it’s the only time we can be alone as a couple?”		“…then if so, maybe it’s the only time we can be alone as a couple?”

	After those words… ~~that~~ time spent held firmly in Saito’s arms felt irreplaceable. Those thoughts, and Saito’s passionate look, deprived the last remains of the strength from her resisting hand.		After those words… the time spent held firmly in Saito’s arms felt irreplaceable. Those thoughts, and Saito’s passionate look, deprived the last remains of the strength from her resisting hand.

	“I-Is it alright?”		“I-Is it alright?”
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	“S-Stop a-asking, idiot…”		“S-Stop a-asking, idiot…”

	Louise, looking very shy, was so lovely at this moment, that Saito’s head started ~~spin~~.		Louise, looking very shy, was so lovely at this moment, that Saito’s head started spinning.

	He hugged her close to him,		He hugged her close to him.

	Louise’s mind was in a turmoil.		Louise’s mind was in a turmoil.

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	===Chapter One: Von Zerbst===		===Chapter One: Von Zerbst===

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	===Chapter One: Von Zerbst===		===Chapter One: Von Zerbst===



	Within the deep, dark woods of Germania stood Von Zerbst Castle. But even though it was called a castle, it was considerably different from the Tristanian ones.		Within the deep, dark woods of Germania stood Von Zerbst Castle. But even though it was called a castle, it was considerably different from the Tristanian ones.

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	The first thing Saito’s eyes jumped on was the pulled-down fabric of the dancing costume, covering the breasts, Louise’s slender fingers covering the exposed top of her breasts… which looked rather plain.		The first thing Saito’s eyes jumped on was the pulled-down fabric of the dancing costume, covering the breasts, Louise’s slender fingers covering the exposed top of her breasts… which looked rather plain.

	Saito, with a reflex speed at the insect level~~<!—At the what of the what? An insect’s reflexes maybe?-->~~, jumped at Louise. And clung close to her.		Saito, with a reflex speed at the insect level, jumped at Louise. And clung close to her.

	“Sorry, can’t help it.”		“Sorry, can’t help it.”

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	Saito was surprised. Even if he were not surprised, the moment when Louise shouted, his head moved on its own, disregarding his intentions. And thus, his head graciously turned to Louise.		Saito was surprised. Even if he were not surprised, the moment when Louise shouted, his head moved on its own, disregarding his intentions. And thus, his head graciously turned to Louise.

	The first thing Saito’s eyes jumped on was the pulled down ~~the~~ fabric of the dancing costume, covering the breasts, Louise’s slender fingers covering the exposed top of her breasts… which looked rather plain.		The first thing Saito’s eyes jumped on was the pulled-down fabric of the dancing costume, covering the breasts, Louise’s slender fingers covering the exposed top of her breasts… which looked rather plain.

	Saito, at ~~the reflection speed of~~ the insect level<!—At the what of the what? An insect’s reflexes maybe?-->, jumped at Louise. And clung close to her.		Saito, with a reflex speed at the insect level<!—At the what of the what? An insect’s reflexes maybe?-->, jumped at Louise. And clung close to her.

	“Sorry, can’t help it.”		“Sorry, can’t help it.”

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	However, he wouldn’t look. A man decided not to look; so, he won’t look.		However, he wouldn’t look. A man decided not to look; so, he won’t look.

	Louise gave a lot of care to the cloth which covered her chest. "Move," but the hand wouldn’t move even if ordered. It was shameful. No, shame was not the only thing. Death. Her head ~~will~~ explode and she would die from shame.		Louise gave a lot of care to the cloth which covered her chest. "Move," but the hand wouldn’t move even if ordered. It was shameful. No, shame was not the only thing. Death. Her head would explode and she would die from shame.

	And then it changed again. Though she returned her noble position to Her Majesty, her noble pride was still there. By all means. It is necessarily for a master to make a familiar turn his eyes on her, so that there would be no regrets left.		And then it changed again. Though she returned her noble position to Her Majesty, her noble pride was still there. By all means. It is necessarily for a master to make a familiar turn his eyes on her, so that there would be no regrets left.
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	“…R-Right.”		“…R-Right.”

	Then a painful thought pierced Louise's mind. If… she ~~would~~ be put into prison for all this…		Then a painful thought pierced Louise's mind. If… she were to be put into prison for all this…

	Then she would not be able to meet Saito for a while.		Then she would not be able to meet Saito for a while.
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	“W-What is it?! What’s written in there!?”		“W-What is it?! What’s written in there!?”

	Saito, ~~who was not able~~ to endure the tension any longer~~, pressed her~~.		Saito pressed her, unable to endure the tension any longer.

	“Just this much was written? And more importantly, what is written on that? Give it to me.”		“Just this much was written? And more importantly, what is written on that? Give it to me.”

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RonnieCorny at 07:08, 11 February 2010

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	“Who's looking?”		“Who's looking?”

	The two walked silently for a while. Eventually, missing his gaze, Louise started to ~~loose~~ her temper. It is so trivial.		The two walked silently for a while. Eventually, missing his gaze, Louise started to lose her temper. It is so trivial.

	Finding the mirror put on the wall, Louise halted in front of it.		Finding the mirror put on the wall, Louise halted in front of it.

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	It was the young leader of the knights, who introduced himself as Castelmorr.		It was the young leader of the knights, who introduced himself as Castelmorr.

	That moment, Kirche grasped her wand and Saieto ~~pulhledt~~ out his sword.		That moment, Kirche grasped her wand and Saieto pulled out his sword.

	However, Castelmorr got out of the carriage and loudly proclaimed,		However, Castelmorr got out of the carriage and loudly proclaimed,

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	“Yeah yeah.”		“Yeah yeah.”

	Saito kept his head turned to the other side. Louise was growing increasingly angry. In her mind she started repeating strings of angry words. ''~~Loveyouhesaidloveyouhesailoveyouhesaid~~''.		Saito kept his head turned to the other side. Louise was growing increasingly angry. In her mind she started repeating strings of angry words. ''Loveyouhesaidloveyouhesaidloveyouhesaid''.

	''Whyishepretendingnottoseewhyishepretendingnottoseewhyishepretendingnottoseelooklooklookgettingangrylook''.		''Whyishepretendingnottoseewhyishepretendingnottoseewhyishepretendingnottoseelooklooklookgettingangrylook''.
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	Guiche put a hand on his chin and shook his head.		Guiche put a hand on his chin and shook his head.

	“You, what are you doing in other people's homes?”		“You, what are you doing in other people's homes?” Kirche asked, not hiding the amazement in her voice.

	Kirche asked, not hiding the amazement in her voice.

	Louise’s mouth opened and closed few times, vaguely trying to remember any letter of the alphabet to utter. She shivered while cold sweat dripped down her skin.		Louise’s mouth opened and closed few times, vaguely trying to remember any letter of the alphabet to utter. She shivered while cold sweat dripped down her skin.
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	“ An i-insect leeched to my neck so I tried to take it off.”		“ An i-insect leeched to my neck so I tried to take it off.”

	“And of course for that you needed to take off your breast cloth?”		“And of course for that you needed to take off your breast cloth?” Kirche asked with a malicious smile.

	~~Kirche asked with a malicious smile.~~ Louise’s body stiffened. Slowly, she dropped on her knees and her shoulders sagged.		Louise’s body stiffened. Slowly, she dropped on her knees and her shoulders sagged.

	Meanwhile, Saito was busy twitching on the floor.		Meanwhile, Saito was busy twitching on the floor.
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	“Extremely soon.”		“Extremely soon.”

	“Surely, it must be because she is so very angry, that queen of your country.”		“Surely, it must be because she is so very angry, that queen of your country.” Said a relaxed Kirche as she spread her hands.

	~~Said a relaxed Kirche as she spread her hands.~~ Louise carefully eyed the letter that Kirche passed to her. The envelope was made from high-class parchment and had the Kingdom of Tristain’s signature placed on it. The Crest of Lilies that she got used to seeing… a reply from Henrietta so soon.		Louise carefully eyed the letter that Kirche passed to her. The envelope was made from high-class parchment and had the Kingdom of Tristain’s signature placed on it. The Crest of Lilies that she got used to seeing… a reply from Henrietta so soon.

	''In this letter, mine and the others’ fates are written. How did Henrietta judge me?''		''In this letter, mine and the others’ fates are written. How did Henrietta judge me?''