Zero no Tsukaima:Volume11 Chapter2 - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 06:25, 19 February 2016

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	Agnes had a displeased look on her face. Colbert sheepishly bowed.		Agnes had a displeased look on her face. Colbert sheepishly bowed.

	“But why to take me to La Vallière’s estate?”		“But why take me to La Vallière’s estate?”

	“You don’t want to meet your pupils?”		“You don’t want to meet your pupils?”
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	The duchess who was holding the wand, shook her head and said.		The duchess who was holding the wand, shook her head and said.

	~~“Even more so – we cannot look weak… Well~~, ~~I think so anyway~~.”		“It's too hard to reduce the power of my magic even further, but it should work out fine...”

	“K-Karin! Therefore Louise…”		“K-Karin! Therefore Louise…”
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	“Do you have a fever? Are you cold?” Kirche, who was sitting next to Saito, placed a hand on surprisingly cold fingers and asked in a shocked voice.		“Do you have a fever? Are you cold?” Kirche, who was sitting next to Saito, placed a hand on surprisingly cold fingers and asked in a shocked voice.

	Tabitha was sitting next them. Her mother was left in Kirche's residence rather than taking her to Tristain. Though Kirche recommended for her to remain in residence with her mother, Tabitha was stubborn. ~~Well~~, ~~she could leave Kirche’s~~ residence ~~safely~~, as Tabitha ~~would be taken as part of their traveling party~~. Tabitha's ~~mother’s~~ mind was ~~still because~~ of ~~the sickness, but she started to like~~ seeing Tabitha ~~more often and was not frightened by her anymore~~.		Tabitha was sitting next to them. Her mother was left in Kirche's residence rather than taking her to Tristain. Though Kirche recommended for her to remain in residence with her mother, Tabitha was stubborn. However, as it was safe to let Tabitha's mother stay in Kirche's residence, everyone agreed to let Tabitha follow them. Also, Tabitha's mother's mind had not fully recovered from her sickness. She was now just less afraid of seeing Tabitha as compared to before.

	“Hey Tabitha, don’t you agree that Louise is acting strange?”		“Hey Tabitha, don’t you agree that Louise is acting strange?”
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	Saito remembered Louise’s father’s angry face and shivered.		Saito remembered Louise’s father’s angry face and shivered.

	“On the contrary~~. In~~ my family, if one violates the regulations, being hated is as ~~badly~~ as being dead.”		“On the contrary, in my family, if one violates the regulations, being hated is as bad as being dead.”

	Louise hugged herself with both hands and started trembling heavily.		Louise hugged herself with both hands and started trembling heavily.

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	===Chapter Two: The Queen and the Duke===		===Chapter Two: The Queen and the Duke===

Ambjoorn at 23:31, 8 March 2013

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	“Before receiving judgment from Her Majesty, this family has its own punishment to deal.”		“Before receiving judgment from Her Majesty, this family has its own punishment to deal.”

	With these words, the air in the dining room froze. The face of Duke of La Vallière ~~blanched~~.		With these words, the air in the dining room froze. The face of Duke of La Vallière paled.

	“P-Punishment to deal?”		“P-Punishment to deal?”

70.232.165.130 at 09:31, 21 September 2012

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Vaelis at 09:24, 20 April 2012

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	===Chapter Two: The Queen and the Duke===		===Chapter Two: The Queen and the Duke===



	In the workroom of Tristain‘s Royal Palace, the Queen worried alone. She had just sent a letter to Louise in Germania.		In the workroom of Tristain‘s Royal Palace, the Queen worried alone. She had just sent a letter to Louise in Germania.

Isapfe at 05:26, 26 October 2010

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	“Rule of steel. My mother hated lack of discipline the most.”		“Rule of steel. My mother hated lack of discipline the most.”

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	“Rule of steel. My mother hated lack of discipline the most.”		“Rule of steel. My mother hated lack of discipline the most.”

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190.177.222.213: One typo and a grammar error ("As one might be expect" just doesn't cut it for me)

2010-03-16T02:00:47Z

One typo and a grammar error ("As one might be expect" just doesn't cut it for me)

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	Guiche, after Malicorne's words, also recalled few things.		Guiche, after Malicorne's words, also recalled few things.

	“When Eustace raised a revolt, wasn’t it the ‘Heavy Wind’ who suppressed it single-handedly? Father told me, that when he was young, he ~~lead~~ his troops to take over the Cardin Bridge, but it was already taken over by Karin the Heavy Wind. And that it has been said that the Heavy Wind used to work alone.”		“When Eustace raised a revolt, wasn’t it the ‘Heavy Wind’ who suppressed it single-handedly? Father told me, that when he was young, he led his troops to take over the Cardin Bridge, but it was already taken over by Karin the Heavy Wind. And that it has been said that the Heavy Wind used to work alone.”

	Soon, they began telling one after another, old hero stories.		Soon, they began telling one after another, old hero stories.
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	“I am not. D-Do you know the motto of Manticore unit of that time?”		“I am not. D-Do you know the motto of Manticore unit of that time?”

	All the party members shook their heads. As one might be expect, no one knew the motto of the corps.		All the party members shook their heads. As one might expect, no one knew the motto of the corps.

	“Rule of steel. My mother hated lack of discipline the most.”		“Rule of steel. My mother hated lack of discipline the most.”

Ephyon at 17:43, 20 February 2010

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	“Please choose a few trusted subordinates and get ready to go.”		“Please choose a few trusted subordinates and get ready to go.”

	“We are prepared to leave anytime. Your Majesty ~~have~~ only to tell us where.”		“We are prepared to leave anytime. Your Majesty has only to tell us where.”

	Interrupted by one of Agnes’ eager soldiers, Henrietta gave a slight smile.		Interrupted by one of Agnes’ eager soldiers, Henrietta gave a slight smile.

Ephyon at 17:39, 20 February 2010

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	In the La Vallière castle, powerful family members gathered and waited impatiently. A gorgeous lunch was served on the big table in the dining room; however, no one tried to touch the dishes.		In the La Vallière castle, powerful family members gathered and waited impatiently. A gorgeous lunch was served on the big table in the dining room; however, no one tried to touch the dishes.

	Duke de La Vallière was sitting at the end of the table, his hard gray eyes were shining.		Duke of La Vallière was sitting at the end of the table, his hard gray eyes were shining.

	''Pon!'' his fist hit the table. Even though the sound was loud, no one, including servants, moved a muscle. It was not unusual for the duke to express his anger this openly.		''Pon!'' his fist hit the table. Even though the sound was loud, no one, including servants, moved a muscle. It was not unusual for the duke to express his anger this openly.
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	“She would not remember such an old thing. Besides, Louise returns from the Von Zerbst estate, right? The Ancestors would grieve hearing such a thing.”		“She would not remember such an old thing. Besides, Louise returns from the Von Zerbst estate, right? The Ancestors would grieve hearing such a thing.”

	Then the sisters both fell silent as their mother, Duchess de La Vallière, opened her mouth.		Then the sisters both fell silent as their mother, Duchess of La Vallière, opened her mouth.

	“Before receiving judgment from Her Majesty, this family has its own punishment to deal.”		“Before receiving judgment from Her Majesty, this family has its own punishment to deal.”

	With these words, the air in the dining room froze. The face of Duke de La Vallière blanched.		With these words, the air in the dining room froze. The face of Duke of La Vallière blanched.

	“P-Punishment to deal?”		“P-Punishment to deal?”
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	“I-I think so too.”		“I-I think so too.”

	''Kohn'' coughed Duke de La Vallière.		''Kohn'' coughed Duke of La Vallière.

	“Umm, Karin. It’s like the daughters say. Nothing to bother with… Right Jerome?”		“Umm, Karin. It’s like the daughters say. Nothing to bother with… Right Jerome?”
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	"It‘s my responsibility for my daughter's carelessness, thus I myself will educate her. Isn't that so?"		"It‘s my responsibility for my daughter's carelessness, thus I myself will educate her. Isn't that so?"

	Duke de La Vallière, with trembling fingers began to fiddle with his mustache. He recalled the old times. Youth, beauty, and the severe past of his wife…		Duke of La Vallière, with trembling fingers began to fiddle with his mustache. He recalled the old times. Youth, beauty, and the severe past of his wife…

	“It is so! A-Asking for a strict lecture! Give me a second…”		“It is so! A-Asking for a strict lecture! Give me a second…”
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	“When invading the Alhambra castle, she was not scared. But now, returning to her parents and family, she is? Strange child.”		“When invading the Alhambra castle, she was not scared. But now, returning to her parents and family, she is? Strange child.”

	Saito recalled Louise's parents. Louise’s father who wore hard armor, the impenetrable Duke de La Vallière…		Saito recalled Louise's parents. Louise’s father who wore hard armor, the impenetrable Duke of La Vallière…

	Louise’s eldest sister, Eléonore, who took Louise’s personality even further to an extreme…		Louise’s eldest sister, Eléonore, who took Louise’s personality even further to an extreme…