Zero no Tsukaima:Volume11 Chapter4 - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 17:58, 10 March 2016

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	===Chapter Four: The Vallière Family ===		===Chapter Four: The Vallière Family ===

Ambjoorn at 00:15, 9 March 2013

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	Louise let out a cute sigh, looking doubtfully into the mirror.		Louise let out a cute sigh, looking doubtfully into the mirror.

	“Hey Louise. Louise the Zero. You being a ‘legend’ cannot be the ~~true~~.”		“Hey Louise. Louise the Zero. You being a ‘legend’ cannot be the truth.”

	''That’s what I was told. ''		''That’s what I was told. ''

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	That night... the queen, enclosed in the living room of the La Vallière house, confessed a secret.		That night... the queen, enclosed in the living room of the La Vallière house, confessed a secret.

	Duke de La Vallière was sitting wordlessly in front of the fireplace, watching the flame burn. Next to the father, two elder sisters were listening carefully with a serious looks on their faces.		Duke of La Vallière was sitting wordlessly in front of the fireplace, watching the flame burn. Next to the father, two elder sisters were listening carefully with a serious looks on their faces.

	Karin Desiree <!-- Duchess Karin?--> was there too, she had changed her mantle back to her usual duchess dress. The sharp eyes of that fearsome knight of Heavy Wind also disappeared somewhere. An indescribably quick change.		Karin Desiree <!-- Duchess Karin?--> was there too, she had changed her mantle back to her usual duchess dress. The sharp eyes of that fearsome knight of Heavy Wind also disappeared somewhere. An indescribably quick change.
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	“That’s right. Louise’s awoken element... is the legendary element of ‘Void.’”		“That’s right. Louise’s awoken element... is the legendary element of ‘Void.’”

	Duke de La Vallière fiddled with his mustache for a while, then stood up slowly and approached his daughter.		Duke of La Vallière fiddled with his mustache for a while, then stood up slowly and approached his daughter.

	Then he gently patted Louise's head.		Then he gently patted Louise's head.
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	“Hmm...”		“Hmm...”

	Duke de La Vallière fell silent. Eléonore fell down on the floor.		Duke of La Vallière fell silent. Eléonore fell down on the floor.

	“Void... You – void? It’s impossible to believe...”		“Void... You – void? It’s impossible to believe...”
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	It felt like silence lasted for an eternity.		It felt like silence lasted for an eternity.

	Finally, Duke de La Vallière broke the silence.		Finally, Duke of La Vallière broke the silence.

	“I would like to hear the intentions of Her Majesty’s visit.”		“I would like to hear the intentions of Her Majesty’s visit.”

	Taking a deep breath, as if finally setting her mind on something, Henrietta looked straight at Duke de La Vallière.		Taking a deep breath, as if finally setting her mind on something, Henrietta looked straight at Duke of La Vallière.

	“Please entrust Louise to me.”		“Please entrust Louise to me.”
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	Henrietta motioned to Agnes.		Henrietta motioned to Agnes.

	Then Agnes nodded and opened the big leather bag at her side and took a black mantle out. Duke de La Vallière’s eyes widened when he saw the crest shaped Lily on the purple lining.		Then Agnes nodded and opened the big leather bag at her side and took a black mantle out. Duke of La Vallière’s eyes widened when he saw the crest shaped Lily on the purple lining.

	“This is Royal family crest... young Marinanne used to wear this mantle!”		“This is Royal family crest... young Marinanne used to wear this mantle!”
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	Henrietta watched Louise with stern eyes. On wobbly legs, like a frog bitten by snake, Louise received it.		Henrietta watched Louise with stern eyes. On wobbly legs, like a frog bitten by snake, Louise received it.

	Duke de La Vallière’s mouth opened wide to this unexpected Louise’s promotion.		Duke of La Vallière’s mouth opened wide to this unexpected Louise’s promotion.

	“Your Majesty, I wish to express my gratitude for such warm reception of my daughter. No, even the biggest gratitude, cannot compare to such warm reception. However, there is something I’d like to ask Your Majesty.”		“Your Majesty, I wish to express my gratitude for such warm reception of my daughter. No, even the biggest gratitude, cannot compare to such warm reception. However, there is something I’d like to ask Your Majesty.”
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	Though she was a little lonely, Henrietta was still prideful.		Though she was a little lonely, Henrietta was still prideful.

	When Saito tried to leave as well, he was called to stop by Duke de La Vallière who stayed last.		When Saito tried to leave as well, he was called to stop by Duke of La Vallière who stayed last.
	“Wait.”		“Wait.”

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	“It’s our first meeting.”		“It’s our first meeting.”

	After Duke de La Vallière's words, Saito could only feel a great relief inside.		After Duke of La Vallière's words, Saito could only feel a great relief inside.

	''I'm so glad. I won‘t be necessarily killed. F-Founder Brimir-sama, thank you... Saito dedicated his deepest gratitude to the founder in whom he did not believe.''		''I'm so glad. I won‘t be necessarily killed. F-Founder Brimir-sama, thank you... Saito dedicated his deepest gratitude to the founder in whom he did not believe.''
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	“Yes. It’s our first meeting after you became Chevalier.”		“Yes. It’s our first meeting after you became Chevalier.”

	In a single moment, Saito was thrown from heaven down to the depths of hell. Duke de La Vallière, placed a hand on Saito's shoulder.		In a single moment, Saito was thrown from heaven down to the depths of hell. Duke of La Vallière, placed a hand on Saito's shoulder.

	“Calm down. I cannot order the beheading of a knight of Her Majesty's Imperial Guards.”		“Calm down. I cannot order the beheading of a knight of Her Majesty's Imperial Guards.”
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	“M-Move...”		“M-Move...”

	Saito sighed, lying prostrated in the hall. He was first beaten up by Louise’s mama during the day, and during the night time he was trashed by Duke de La Vallière – so now his body was screaming.		Saito sighed, lying prostrated in the hall. He was first beaten up by Louise’s mama during the day, and during the night time he was trashed by Duke of La Vallière – so now his body was screaming.

	Though Louise mama's magic was fearsome, Duke de La Vallière was truly terrifying.		Though Louise mama's magic was fearsome, Duke of La Vallière was truly terrifying.

	The eyes full of anger even now were making Saito tremble from head to toes.		The eyes full of anger even now were making Saito tremble from head to toes.
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	“Come water spirits...”		“Come water spirits...”

	The healing spell slowly cured the injuries received from Duke de La Vallière.		The healing spell slowly cured the injuries received from Duke of La Vallière.

	“T-Thank you very much!”		“T-Thank you very much!”

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	“Now then, did you just say ‘Void?’”		“Now then, did you just say ‘Void?’”

Isapfe at 05:25, 26 October 2010

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	The chatter of three girls continued throughout the night.		The chatter of three girls continued throughout the night.

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Chapter Four: The Vallière Family

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	Cattleya made a sorrowful face and gently hugged Saito’s head. Her faint perfume scent mixed with gentle kindness, made Saito close his eyes.		Cattleya made a sorrowful face and gently hugged Saito’s head. Her faint perfume scent mixed with gentle kindness, made Saito close his eyes.

	Being held close against warm ~~Cattleya’s~~ chest, settled his mind down. At the same time, he felt something very nostalgic.		Being held close against Cattleya’s warm chest, settled his mind down. At the same time, he felt something very nostalgic.

	“...why, why did I recall it now? Since I came over here, I did not remember that often. So weird.”		“...why, why did I recall it now? Since I came over here, I did not remember that often. So weird.”
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	Louise slipped under the sheets and covered herself with the futon. Henrietta jumped on her and started to tickle.		Louise slipped under the sheets and covered herself with the futon. Henrietta jumped on her and started to tickle.

	“Hey Louise! Speak out! ~~Whom~~ do you love?”		“Hey Louise! Speak out! Who do you love?”

	“No... princess! I love no one in particular... hiyan!”		“No... princess! I love no one in particular... hiyan!”
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	“There is a need for such thing. Come on, say it.”		“There is a need for such thing. Come on, say it.”

	When gentle Cattleya urged him this way... Saito responded instinctively,		When the gentle Cattleya urged him this way... Saito responded instinctively,

	“O-onee-san.”		“O-onee-san.”
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	“That’s my line! Why did you both jump in through the window?!”		“That’s my line! Why did you both jump in through the window?!”

	Without answering Saito’s question, Louise eyes narrowed.		Without answering Saito’s question, Louise's eyes narrowed.

	“Y-You are going after Chii-nee-sama now?! Unbelievableeeee!”		“Y-You are going after Chii-nee-sama now?! Unbelievableeeee!”
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	Henrietta smoothingly looked over the place and voiced her opinion with a forced smile.		Henrietta smoothingly looked over the place and voiced her opinion with a forced smile.

	“Well... umm, Cattleya-dono is just like Louise. Like her hair color. Therefore, Saito-dono has surely absent-mindedly regarded her as grown-up Louise.”		“Well... umm, Cattleya-dono is just like Louise. Like her hair color. Therefore, Saito-dono has surely absent-mindedly regarded her a grown-up Louise.”

	“Eh?”		“Eh?”
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	Later that night... laying unconscious Saito on the sofa, the three noble girls slept in one bed after a long time. Cattleya in the center, Louise on the left and Henrietta on the right.		Later that night... laying unconscious, Saito was on the sofa, the three noble girls slept in one bed after a long time. Cattleya in the center, Louise on the left and Henrietta on the right.

	“It has been such a long time since all three of us slept like this.”		“It has been such a long time since all three of us slept like this.”

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2010-04-03T21:33:18Z

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	Though she was a little lonely, Henrietta was still prideful.		Though she was a little lonely, Henrietta was still prideful.

	When Saito tried to leave as well, he was called to stop by Duke de La Vallière ~~duke~~ who stayed last.		When Saito tried to leave as well, he was called to stop by Duke de La Vallière who stayed last.

	“Wait.”		“Wait.”

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	Happy chatter about the day's events filled the ~~dinning~~ room that evening. Reunion was accomplished when Agnes brought Colbert. As a bonus, Henrietta did not say no, and listened to the beaming face Guiche – everyone was amusing themselves in this fuss.		Happy chatter about the day's events filled the dining room that evening. Reunion was accomplished when Agnes brought Colbert. As a bonus, Henrietta did not say no, and listened to the beaming face Guiche – everyone was amusing themselves in this fuss.

	However... the dinner fest ended, and even when bed-time came too, but Saito did not appear.		However... the dinner fest ended, and even when bed-time came too, but Saito did not appear.

Ephyon at 20:44, 20 February 2010

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	“Karin.”		“Karin.”

	“The long story seems to have ended. Though it is late, let’s prepare for dinner. Though it's a poor way to entertain Your Majesty, who ~~come~~ all the way here, please attend. Louise, call your friends and come; Cattleya, Eléonore, please continue your favors as host.”		“The long story seems to have ended. Though it is late, let’s prepare for dinner. Though it's a poor way to entertain Your Majesty, who came all the way here, please attend. Louise, call your friends and come; Cattleya, Eléonore, please continue your favors as host.”

	Like a gracious soldier from the past, Karin briskly left the room.		Like a gracious soldier from the past, Karin briskly left the room.
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	In a single moment, Saito was thrown from heaven down to the depths of hell. Duke de La Vallière, placed a hand on Saito's shoulder.		In a single moment, Saito was thrown from heaven down to the depths of hell. Duke de La Vallière, placed a hand on Saito's shoulder.

	“Calm down. I cannot order the beheading a knight of Her Majesty's Imperial Guards.”		“Calm down. I cannot order the beheading of a knight of Her Majesty's Imperial Guards.”

	“T-Thank you very much!”		“T-Thank you very much!”
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	While living in this room, she had been dying to get out of this residence as soon as possible. A severe education from her mother, who seemed to only think of how to marry her out; a father, always associating with the neighborhood, and the only thing he seemed to be interested in was hunting.		While living in this room, she had been dying to get out of this residence as soon as possible. A severe education from her mother, who seemed to only think of how to marry her out; a father, always associating with the neighborhood, and the only thing he seemed to be interested in was hunting.

	Those two people, once said she could not learn magic. A girl who cannot do magic cannot marry off properly, they strictly ~~said~~ - thus, every day felt like a prison.		Those two people once said she could not learn magic. A girl who cannot do magic cannot marry off properly, they said strictly - thus, every day felt like a prison.

	However, her parents and this residence were not a prison, they were the castle that protected her. Though love was not visible on the outside, deep inside she was defended and treasured.		However, her parents and this residence were not a prison, they were the castle that protected her. Though love was not visible on the outside, deep inside she was defended and treasured.
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	“Princess-sama.”		“Princess-sama.”

	Henrietta's voice. Panicking, Louise ran up and opened the door. There stood Henrietta, who had changed ~~change~~ to plain clothes, and smiled.		Henrietta's voice. Panicking, Louise ran up and opened the door. There stood Henrietta, who had changed to plain clothes, and smiled.

	Louise made a profound reverence.		Louise made a profound reverence.
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	“What’s wrong?”		“What’s wrong?”

	Anxiously, Cattleya looked into Saito’s face. Unbeknownst himself, Saito started to cry.		Anxiously, Cattleya looked into Saito’s face. Unbeknownst to himself, Saito started to cry.

	“S-Sorry! It’s nothing!”		“S-Sorry! It’s nothing!”

Ephyon at 20:34, 20 February 2010

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