Zero no Tsukaima:Volume11 Chapter5 - Revision history

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	Malicorne tried to stop the conflict.		Malicorne tried to stop the conflict.

	“Please stop fighting over me!” he shouted, but was sent flying by ~~both~~ kicks from both sides.		“Please stop fighting over me!” he shouted, but was sent flying by kicks from both sides.

	Then every one from the Knight Corps got involved, and chaos erupted in their hangout.		Then every one from the Knight Corps got involved, and chaos erupted in their hangout.

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	===Chapter Five: The New School Term ===		===Chapter Five: The New School Term ===

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	===Chapter Five: The New School Term ===		===Chapter Five: The New School Term ===



	Saito and others didn't know what to do with so much free time before the new school term started.		Saito and others didn't know what to do with so much free time before the new school term started.

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	Though the words damaged their pride, or maybe because of that, the two girls did not reply with anything.		Though the words damaged their pride, or maybe because of that, the two girls did not reply with anything.

	“Remember, underwear is a woman’s weapon. It’s the spell that captures men's minds. Showing them gives you a mature woman’s aura.“		“Remember, underwear is a woman’s weapon. It’s the spell that captures men's minds. Showing them gives you a mature woman’s aura.”


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Ephyon at 21:50, 20 February 2010

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	Saito and others didn't know what to do with so much free time before the new school term started.		Saito and others didn't know what to do with so much free time before the new school term started.

	Three days had passed ~~after~~ returning from Louise’s place. When they returned to the academy, it was basically the same daily life as usual.		Three days had passed since returning from Louise’s place. When they returned to the academy, it was basically the same daily life as usual.

	“Tsk… He's clearly a bad guy, we can't just stand around and do nothing.”		“Tsk… He's clearly a bad guy, we can't just stand around and do nothing.”
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	Guiche asked as he gulped down his wine.		Guiche asked as he gulped down his wine.

	This was the place where noble boys used to drink recklessly after school, and if the teachers scowled at them, they would excuse it as a ‘training filth <!--what?-->’. Because the Undine Knight Corps ~~was~~ founded as the Queen's guards, the teachers could not complain once training was mentioned.		This was the place where noble boys used to drink recklessly after school, and if the teachers scowled at them, they would excuse it as a ‘training filth <!--what?-->’. Because the Undine Knight Corps were founded as the Queen's guards, the teachers could not complain once training was mentioned.

	“Because it’s strange. They, umm, that Gallia. It’s a really big country. If they wanted to, they could attack Louise and me, and Tabitha and her mother, but for some reason they haven't done it.”		“Because it’s strange. They, umm, that Gallia. It’s a really big country. If they wanted to, they could attack Louise and me, and Tabitha and her mother, but for some reason they haven't done it.”
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	“I want to do something about Tabitha’s mother…”		“I want to do something about Tabitha’s mother…”

	“Well, it's nice and all, but what can we do about ~~elvish~~ medicine? We're at a dead end.”		“Well, it's nice and all, but what can we do about elven medicine? We're at a dead end.”

	Not disagreeing, Saito shook his head.		Not disagreeing, Saito shook his head.

	“Anyhow, Gallia's not sending an official protest is most satisfying. Isn't it strange when war doesn't break out when it usually should? The opponent is the king of the large country of Gallia. As said before, it's too big for common folk like us to understand.”		“Anyhow, the fact that Gallia's not sending an official protest is most satisfying. Isn't it strange when war doesn't break out when it usually should? The opponent is the king of the large country of Gallia. As said before, it's too big for common folk like us to understand.”

	Certainly, Gallia ~~has~~ not figured out what to say yet.		Certainly, Gallia had not figured out what to say yet.

	Though that silence was eerie, sometimes there ~~are~~ circumstances never revealed to the public.		Though that silence was eerie, sometimes there were circumstances never revealed to the public.

	“The king of that large country, huh…”		“The king of that large country, huh…”

	Saito absentmindedly looked up into the sky. As ~~has~~ been said – he should be happy returning alive rather than troubled about such things.		Saito absentmindedly looked up into the sky. As had been said – he should have been happy returning alive rather than troubled about such things.

	However, he could not allow himself that.		However, he could not allow himself that.
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	“C-cheers…”		“C-cheers…”

	After all, it was far more challenging at Louise’s home than in Gallia. Tired and injured, Saito slept for a long time. He only ~~woke~~ up ~~today~~ at noon, and found neither Louise nor Siesta around.		After all, it was far more challenging at Louise’s home than in Gallia. Tired and injured, Saito slept for a long time. He had only woken up that day at noon, and found neither Louise nor Siesta around.

	Without him there, those fellows cut their classes, and were indulging themselves to binge for as long as three days and three nights. Soon after he arrived, Saito joined the clamor.		Without him there, those fellows cut their classes, and were indulging themselves to binge for as long as three days and three nights. Soon after he arrived, Saito joined the clamor.

	“Nooo, but, I have a great question! Because we invaded Gallia, Tabitha… wasn’t she a member of Gallia’s royal family? And we helped her! As one would expect from Commander and Sub-Commander.”		“Nooo, but, I have a great question! Because we invaded Gallia, Tabitha… wasn’t she a member of Gallia’s royal family? And we helped her! As one would expect from the Commander and Sub-Commander.”

	One drunk member rattled. Guiche gladly shook his head.		One drunk member rattled. Guiche gladly shook his head.
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	“What good would that have been without your cover? You lured the Dragon Knight Corps to the Germanian border. When I become a general, I’ll reward you.”		“What good would that have been without your cover? You lured the Dragon Knight Corps to the Germanian border. When I become a general, I’ll reward you.”

	“Indeed! We ~~have~~ might have been useful after all!”		“Indeed! We might have been useful after all!”

	“Not just might! Ahahaha!”		“Not just might! Ahahaha!”
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	“H-handsome…”		“H-handsome…”

	Guiche thrust both hands ~~out, then~~ placed them in front of his face. Then, he began swirling his hair around his right finger.		Guiche thrust out both hands and placed them in front of his face. Then, he began swirling his hair around his right finger.

	“The commander of the Undine Knight Corps of the Water Spirit, Guiche de Gramont. There is no more excellent commander of such boorish fellows than I. My, you are so cute. No, you are probably the holy woman Joanna that they draw in all religious paintings! You might be a rose after all. My goodness, if you are not the best rose!”		“The commander of the Undine Knight Corps of the Water Spirit, Guiche de Gramont. There is no more excellent commander of such boorish fellows than I. My, you are so cute. No, you are probably the holy woman Joanna that they draw in all religious paintings! You might be a rose after all. My goodness, if you are not the best rose!”
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	With determined face, Siesta began setting dishes on the table.		With determined face, Siesta began setting dishes on the table.

	~~Katy~~ got angry, took a placed dish and began eating while mumbling.		Katie got angry, took a placed dish and began eating while mumbling.

	“Please do not eat that!”		“Please do not eat that!”
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	“Hey Kirche, I clearly said that I have no interest in such hobbies!”		“Hey Kirche, I clearly said that I have no interest in such hobbies!”

	“Me ~~too~~!”		“Me neither!”

	“Neither do I, but I cannot teach you about love otherwise. I am the teacher; you are my pupils, so be completely obedient.”		“Neither do I, but I cannot teach you about love otherwise. I am the teacher; you are my pupils, so be completely obedient.”
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	“What?!”		“What?!”

	“A woman, who doesn't value her underwear, won’t be valued by a man ~~as well~~.”		“A woman, who doesn't value her underwear won’t be valued by a man either.”

	The two went ‘Ugh’ and shut up.		The two went ‘Ugh’ and shut up.
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	“Remember, underwear is a woman’s weapon. It’s the spell that captures men's minds. Showing them gives you a mature woman’s aura.“		“Remember, underwear is a woman’s weapon. It’s the spell that captures men's minds. Showing them gives you a mature woman’s aura.“


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	Louise said in a shaky voice, still struggling to maintain her dignity:		Louise said in a shaky voice, still struggling to maintain her dignity:

	“W-well, since I have nothing to do, I could keep you a company for a short while.”		“W-well, since I have nothing to do, I could keep you company for a short while.”

	“Great. It will be fun!”		“Great. It will be fun!”
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	Montmorency said with a blush on her cheeks.		Montmorency said with a blush on her cheeks.

	“Alright then. I’ll take a good care of you.”		“Alright then. I’ll take good care of you.”




	Louise and Montmorency went into Kirche's room. As usual, it was a very gorgeous room. There were two wardrobes by the west wall, each larger than a bed, reaching from the floor to ceiling, ~~with~~ had a giant mirror in between. Lacy curtains hung from the ceilings; sculptures, paintings, and various works of art were placed all over the room.		Louise and Montmorency went into Kirche's room. As usual, it was a very gorgeous room. There were two wardrobes by the west wall, each larger than a bed, reaching from the floor to ceiling, which had a giant mirror in between. Lacy curtains hung from the ceilings; sculptures, paintings, and various works of art were placed all over the room.

	Kirche, looking very eager, sat on the bed and ordered them both:		Kirche, looking very eager, sat on the bed and ordered them both:
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	Louise and Montmorency had vacant expressions.		Louise and Montmorency had vacant expressions.

	“Take them off. Now, I’m telling you to show the Ardent what kind of ~~undergarment do~~ you wear.”		“Take them off. Now, I’m telling you to show the Ardent what kind of undergarments you wear.”

	The two pupils blushed hard and protested.		The two pupils blushed hard and protested.

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	“Help?”		“Help?”

	At Saito’s vacant look, ~~Katy~~, with some rustling, took out the basket at her side.		At Saito’s vacant look, Katie, with some rustling, took out the basket at her side.

	“Yes! We prepared some dishes for now! Please eat it during your training.”		“Yes! We prepared some dishes for now! Please eat it during your training.”

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