Zero no Tsukaima:Volume11 Chapter8 - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 08:36, 18 March 2016

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	“Liar. Then, why is Miss Vallière depressed so much? What did you do to that girl?”		“Liar. Then, why is Miss Vallière depressed so much? What did you do to that girl?”

	~~“Just what kind of person you think I am?!~~”		“Hey, she was just teaching me how to read.”

	~~“Is~~ it ~~true~~?”		“Are you really sure it's just that?”

	~~“It is.~~ Why ~~would I do such things to Tabitha~~? Louise is depressed about her magic not working. Hey, Louise, stop sulking this instant.”		“Of course! Why shouldn't be it be just that? Louise is depressed about her magic not working. Hey, Louise, stop sulking this instant.”

	Saito rocked Louise.		Saito rocked Louise.
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	“Anyway, we need to wake Louise up… Hey Siesta, hold this.”		“Anyway, we need to wake Louise up… Hey Siesta, hold this.”

	Saito and Siesta held the edges of the blanket and pulled. Clinging to the blanket, Louise rolled with it to the floor. ~~The baby doll~~ dress ~~from yesterday, somewhat suited to wear as a nightdress~~. ~~Because it~~ was a chilly ~~night~~, Siesta put ~~the clothes~~ on.		Saito and Siesta held the edges of the blanket and pulled. Clinging to the blanket, Louise rolled with it to the floor. She looked strange wearing a long dress along with her singlet. That was because the night was chilly, so Siesta put it on her.


	“Oi, Louise. Morning.”		“Oi, Louise. Morning.”
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	Saito decided to ask the sword. Recently Derflinger was neglected on numerous occasions, so he answered in a foul mood.		Saito decided to ask the sword. Recently Derflinger was neglected on numerous occasions, so he answered in a foul mood.

	~~“Andayo.~~ So you call me out when you need an advice, huh. And you pull me out when you need to cut, huh. What if I am tired?”		“What is it? So you call me out when you need an advice, huh. And you pull me out when you need to cut, huh. What if I am tired?”

	“Listen up. Louise cannot use ‘Void’ anymore, can you tell us something about it?”		“Listen up. Louise cannot use ‘Void’ anymore, can you tell us something about it?”
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	“I’ll go.”		“I’ll go.”

	~~Thumbing,~~ Louise stood up.		Louise stood up abruptly.

	“Don’t over do it. Your condition is bad right now.”		“Don’t over do it. Your condition is bad right now.”
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	“Louise, it’s not like that.”		“Louise, it’s not like that.”

	Saito called out to Louise, fearing unforeseen retribution from her.		Saito called out to Louise, fearing unforeseen retribution from her.

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	There was one building in the corner of this urban area.		There was one building in the corner of this urban area.

	~~It had foundations made~~ of ~~bricks~~ and mortar, ~~hidden by the tree frames and~~ a ~~sail cloth as the roof, pulled over the cut into half~~ column ~~and laid down in its full length~~.		A building, built with lumber and sail cloth on a foundation of stone and mortar, which looked like a fallen cylindrical column.

	The guards were placed in the surroundings to keep the citizens from coming close to the outskirts.		The guards were placed in the surroundings to keep the citizens from coming close to the outskirts.
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	The mistress dizzily looked up. However, the king didn’t really seem to mind the heat. The man in scholar clothes beside them explained.		The mistress dizzily looked up. However, the king didn’t really seem to mind the heat. The man in scholar clothes beside them explained.

	~~“It is done with purpose~~. ~~The~~ whole building is covered ~~with a~~ sail cloth ~~so that no air or sound can escape~~. ~~Inside the~~ air is heated by the spring ~~sunshine level~~. It is ~~created by~~ numerous ~~blast-~~furnaces~~. It is easier to keep~~ the heat ~~when you prevent its leak~~.”		“I'm terribly sorry for the heat. To prevent air and sound from leaking out, the whole building is covered by sail cloth. The air inside is already extremely hot after being heated by the spring sun. There is also numerous furnaces within the building, so this heat is unavoidable.”

	“What did you want me to see then?”		“What did you want me to see then?”
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	However, Joseph didn't answer.		However, Joseph didn't answer.

	Finally, after some time, they arrived to the central and very spacious portion of the building. Seats reserved for special guests were installed there - ~~his retainer was already prepared for the waited~~ Joseph's arrival.		Finally, after some time, they arrived to the central and very spacious portion of the building. Seats reserved for special guests were installed there - Joseph's henchmen were already awaiting his arrival.

	“We waited for your command, Joseph-sama.”		“We waited for your command, Joseph-sama.”

Asteradragon: /* Chapter Eight: Jörmungand */

2011-04-03T23:19:35Z

Chapter Eight: Jörmungand

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	Joseph was already crazy about the new toy.		Joseph was already crazy about the new toy.

	Mrs. Molière took an interest into this "Jörmungand" that made the ~~kind~~ so obsessed.		Mrs. Molière took an interest into this "Jörmungand" that made the king so obsessed.

	“Your Majesty, could you tell me what is that ‘Jörmungand?’”		“Your Majesty, could you tell me what is that ‘Jörmungand?’”

Isapfe at 05:30, 26 October 2010

2010-10-26T05:30:12Z

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	“My brother. We will capture my niece easily… with this Jörmungand…”		“My brother. We will capture my niece easily… with this Jörmungand…”

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Ephyon at 14:15, 6 March 2010

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	“Y-You? Why?”		“Y-You? Why?”

	Saito asked in surprise after a short pause. The previous night as well, she was really eager to help him to learn the ~~Halkeginan~~ written language.		Saito asked in surprise after a short pause. The previous night as well, she was really eager to help him to learn the Halkeginian written language.

	“Silly question. That’s because you helped me.”		“Silly question. That’s because you helped me.”
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	There was one building in the corner of this urban area.		There was one building in the corner of this urban area.

	It had foundations made of bricks and mortar, hidden by the tree frames and a sail cloth as the roof, pulled over the cut into half column and laid down in ~~it’s~~ full length.		It had foundations made of bricks and mortar, hidden by the tree frames and a sail cloth as the roof, pulled over the cut into half column and laid down in its full length.

	The guards were placed in the surroundings to keep the citizens from coming close to the outskirts.		The guards were placed in the surroundings to keep the citizens from coming close to the outskirts.
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	“Unusually huge ship.”		“Unusually huge ship.”

	This was a Gallia’s royal family’s warship named after the crown prince who died three years before. 150 mails in total length, after the Lexington of the Albion’s air force sank, it was the largest warship in Halkeginia.		This was a Gallia’s royal family’s warship named after the crown prince who had died three years before. 150 mails in total length, after the Lexington of the Albion’s air force sank, it was the largest warship in Halkeginia.

	Seeing the royal family flag flapping on the mast, the guard was speechless.		Seeing the royal family flag flapping on the mast, the guard was speechless.

Ephyon at 14:04, 6 March 2010

2010-03-06T14:04:27Z

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Neon1995: /* Chapter Eight: Jörmungand */

2010-03-05T00:45:43Z

Chapter Eight: Jörmungand

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Akirasav at 03:31, 3 March 2010

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BakaSama: /* Chapter Eight: Jörmungand */

2010-03-01T19:42:11Z

Chapter Eight: Jörmungand

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	The mistress dizzily looked up. However, the king didn’t really seem to mind the heat. The man in scholar clothes besides them explained.		The mistress dizzily looked up. However, the king didn’t really seem to mind the heat. The man in scholar clothes besides them explained.

	“It is done with purpose. The whole building is covered with sail cloth so that no air or sound escape. Inside the air is heated by the spring sunshine level. It is created by numerous blast-furnaces. It is easier to keep the heat when you prevent ~~it’s~~ leak.”		“It is done with purpose. The whole building is covered with sail cloth so that no air or sound escape. Inside the air is heated by the spring sunshine level. It is created by numerous blast-furnaces. It is easier to keep the heat when you prevent its leak.”

	“What did you want me to see then?”		“What did you want me to see then?”
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	Joseph, watched coliseum with a boy-like fascination.		Joseph, watched coliseum with a boy-like fascination.

	While Mrs. Molière was waiting quietly as well… the hedge on the west side opened, and with a loud, earth-shattering sounds, the ten mails height, huge golem appeared.		While Mrs. Molière was waiting quietly as well… the hedge on the west side opened, and with loud, earth-shattering sounds, the ten mails height, huge golem appeared.

	“It’s just an earth golem.”		“It’s just an earth golem.”

RonnieCorny: spelling corrections

2010-02-28T04:11:46Z

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	“The armor… Just how thick is this armor?...”		“The armor… Just how thick is this armor?...”

	Though he ~~worse~~ such armor, Jörmungand plunged forward in a speed of blitz. Hit by the Jörmungand 's tackle, earth golem shattered in an instant.		Though he wore such armor, Jörmungand plunged forward in a speed of blitz. Hit by the Jörmungand 's tackle, earth golem shattered in an instant.

	Witnessing such unbelievable spectacle with her own two eyes, Mrs. Molière was completely at a loss of words.		Witnessing such unbelievable spectacle with her own two eyes, Mrs. Molière was completely at a loss of words.
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	“…ten of such monsters would be enough to conquer Halkeginia.”		“…ten of such monsters would be enough to conquer Halkeginia.”

	“Ten? Much more than that – we’ll create a whole knight unit of ~~Jörmungand s~~.”		“Ten? Much more than that – we’ll create a whole knight unit of Jörmungands.”

	Mrs. Molière suddenly recalled the huge steel plates she saw before, and her eyes widened.		Mrs. Molière suddenly recalled the huge steel plates she saw before, and her eyes widened.

Darknemo2000 at 22:29, 27 February 2010

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	Jörmungand , pulled right and left golems, and crushed them into each other.		Jörmungand , pulled right and left golems, and crushed them into each other.
	A monstrous cloud of dust flew up, forcing Mrs. Molière into a violent coughing fit.
			A monstrous cloud of dust flew up, forcing Mrs. Molière into a violent coughing fit.

	The two golems were completely mashed against each other, and now only one big pile of dirt remained.		The two golems were completely mashed against each other, and now only one big pile of dirt remained.