Zero no Tsukaima:Volume11 Chapter9 - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 10:09, 19 March 2016

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	Fouquet's eyebrow twitched a little.		Fouquet's eyebrow twitched a little.

	Tiffania was looking at Saito ~~surprised~~ as well.		Tiffania surprised, was looking at Saito as well.

	Saito leaned forward.		Saito leaned forward.

Isapfe at 05:30, 26 October 2010

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	His consciousness fading… Saito collapsed on the floor.		His consciousness fading… Saito collapsed on the floor.

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Ephyon at 22:14, 8 March 2010

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	“B-But…”		“B-But…”

	~~“Matilda~~ nee-san! Do not raise your hand against this person!”		“Mathilda nee-san! Do not raise your hand against this person!”

	~~“Matilda~~ nee-san?”		“Mathilda nee-san?”

	Saito watched Fouquet. Wrong person? Though he thought so, those sharp eyes on her strong face, he really fought against her Golem before — no doubt, it was Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt.		Saito watched Fouquet. Wrong person? Though he thought so, those sharp eyes on her strong face, he really fought against her Golem before — no doubt, it was Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt.
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	Saito was surprised.		Saito was surprised.

	“It’s not that bad. ~~Matilda~~-nee-san was sending us the money for our living expenses.”		“It’s not that bad. Mathilda-nee-san was sending us the money for our living expenses.”

	Though Saito tried to say something, he was interrupted by Fouquet.		Though Saito tried to say something, he was interrupted by Fouquet.
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	“Nuh-oh. Don’t talk about my former job. Let’s keep some secrets here.”		“Nuh-oh. Don’t talk about my former job. Let’s keep some secrets here.”

	“Saito, do you know what ~~Matilda~~-nee-san was doing?”		“Saito, do you know what Mathilda-nee-san was doing?”

	Tiffania asked while leaning forward.		Tiffania asked while leaning forward.
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	“Uh-huh. Besides, I am broke now. Even if I wanted to send the remittance, I could no longer do so. That’s why I came to see you today. This is a nice opportunity.”		“Uh-huh. Besides, I am broke now. Even if I wanted to send the remittance, I could no longer do so. That’s why I came to see you today. This is a nice opportunity.”

	~~“Matilda~~-nee-san…”		“Mathilda-nee-san…”

	Tiffania’s face fell. Fouquet walked up to Tiffania and hugged her tightly.		Tiffania’s face fell. Fouquet walked up to Tiffania and hugged her tightly.
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	“Are there parents who would want their daughter to feel anxious?”		“Are there parents who would want their daughter to feel anxious?”

	“But ~~Matilda~~-nee-san is not my parent.”		“But Mathilda-nee-san is not my parent.”

	“I feel like one. Because I have known you since you were so small.”		“I feel like one. Because I have known you since you were so small.”

RabidRabbit at 05:00, 8 March 2010

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	“I-Is that the village where the half-elf with an unnaturally big chest lives?”		“I-Is that the village where the half-elf with an unnaturally big chest lives?”

	Guiche asked ~~restlessly~~.		Guiche asked anxiously.

	“What the heck are you talking about?”		“What the heck are you talking about?”

	“Didn’t you say that? ~~You~~ described the ~~features of that~~ half elf girl — long ears and a ‘ridiculous chest.’”		“Didn’t you say that? It's how you described the half-elf girl — long ears and a ‘ridiculous chest.’”

	“You seem to have had quite a sneaky conversation behind our backs.”		“You seem to have had quite the sneaky conversation behind our backs.”

	Kirche teased ~~while~~ grinning.		Kirche teased, grinning.

	“B-Because it’s ~~the thing that this guy~~ wanted to know the most about!”		“B-Because it’s what he wanted to know the most about!”

	“Don’t blame it all on me!”		“Don’t blame it all on me!”

	“But, are that girl’s breasts really that big? Bigger than mine?”		“But are that girl’s breasts really that big? Bigger than mine?”

	Kirche puffed her chest.		Kirche puffed out her chest.

	“D-Dunno.”		“D-Dunno.”

	Saito ~~said~~ feeling awkward.		Saito replied, feeling awkward.

	It was already evening when the party reached Westwood Village. ~~Though due~~ to the position of the ~~moon~~, Albion was considerably closer to Tristain, it still it took half a day with Sylphid flying at full speed to get there.		It was already evening when the party reached Westwood Village. Due to the position of the moons, Albion was considerably closer to Tristain than usual, but it still took half a day with Sylphid flying at full speed to get there.

	Compared to the other time when they went to Gallia, the party was in a completely different mood. This time they had a duty ~~to take~~ Tiffania ~~with them~~.		Compared to the other time when they went to Gallia, the party was in a completely different mood. This time they had the duty of returning with Tiffania.

	The only ~~trouble~~ was ~~the need to persuade~~ Tiffania the best they could. It ~~was not~~ dangerous, so the party was ~~in a bright mood~~.		The only hurdle was convincing Tiffania the best they could. It wasn't dangerous, so the party was cheerful.

	''It may not be a trouble-free duty though,'' Saito thought.		''It may not be a trouble-free duty though,'' Saito thought.
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	''After all, Louise can’t use Void now.''		''After all, Louise can’t use Void now.''

	Speaking of which, Louise was the only one who was not in a good mood and remained silent most of the time.		Speaking of which, Louise was the only one who was not in a good mood, and remained silent most of the time.

	Kirche poked Saito.		Kirche poked Saito.

Ephyon at 03:28, 8 March 2010

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	He looked at Tiffania, who had a serious expression while reciting the Void’s runes towards Saito.		He looked at Tiffania, who had a serious expression while reciting the Void’s runes towards Saito.

	''Nyd Is ~~Arjis~~ Berkanan Man Laguz…''		''Nyd Is Algiz Berkanan Man Laguz…''

	The spell was completed.		The spell was completed.

Ephyon at 03:24, 8 March 2010

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	Indeed, Tiffania’s house guest was none other but the enemy, Fouquet. Saito’s shoulders began to tremble. He recalled the face of Wales, who met his death on the ground of Albion.		Indeed, Tiffania’s house guest was none other but the enemy, Fouquet. Saito’s shoulders began to tremble. He recalled the face of Wales, who met his death on the ground of Albion.

	This was the woman who cooperated with the Crown Prince’s ~~murdererm~~ Wardes.		This was the woman who cooperated with the Crown Prince’s murderer, Wardes.

	The thief Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt.		The thief Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt.
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	After Fouquet left, Saito and others decided to go to sleep.		After Fouquet left, Saito and others decided to go to sleep.

	Saito sat down on the sofa, but since he was not able to fall asleep he just stared at the moons. Fouquet’s words were whirling in his head.		Saito sat down on the sofa, but since he was not able to fall asleep he just stared at the moons.

			Fouquet’s words were whirling in his head.

	‘For the sake of returning home.<!--[The reason is returning to the hometown.] Original line so someone can possibly word it better.-->’		‘For the sake of returning home.<!--[The reason is returning to the hometown.] Original line so someone can possibly word it better.-->’
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	“Answer me!”		“Answer me!”

	Saito slowly… repeated the words he kept on saying recently		Saito slowly… repeated the words he kept on saying recently,

	“No, there are still things left unfinished in this world, I will return after that…”		“No, there are still things left unfinished in this world, I will return after that…”
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	“Why do you never tell me how you really feel?”		“Why do you never tell me how you really feel?”

	''Why... ''		''Why...''

	Absent-mindedly, Saito was losing himself in far away musings.		Absent-mindedly, Saito was losing himself in far away musings.

	''Because I love Louise. ''		''Because I love Louise.''

	''I don't want to show tears in front of the woman I love. ''		''I don't want to show tears in front of the woman I love.''

	''But… it wasn’t just that. It wasn’t just this feeling. '		''But… it wasn’t just that. It wasn’t just this feeling.''

	“Hey, why?”		“Hey, why?”

Ephyon at 03:17, 8 March 2010

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Akirasav at 02:56, 8 March 2010

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	Fouquet’s words were whirling in his head.		Fouquet’s words were whirling in his head.

	~~‘The~~ reason is to return home.<!--[The reason is returning to the hometown.] Original line so someone can possibly word it better.-->’		''The reason is to return home.<!--[The reason is returning to the hometown.] Original line so someone can possibly word it better.-->''

	''Even if I wanted to return, I could not,'' Saito thought. ''However, do I really want to return?'' The idea of leaving this world was still very vague somehow, was it because he still hasn't decided?		''Even if I wanted to return, I could not,'' Saito thought. ''However, do I really want to return?'' The idea of leaving this world was still very vague somehow, was it because he still hasn't decided?

	~~When~~ he was lost in a deep thought…		As he was lost in a deep thought…

	“Saito.”		“Saito.”
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	He called.		He called.

	She was silent for such a long time… ~~what~~ was the matter?		She was silent for such a long time… What was the matter?

	His hand abruptly reached out, and gently touched Louise’s cheek.		His hand abruptly reached out, and gently touched Louise’s cheek.
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	“Don’t cry.”		“Don’t cry.”

	Because the room was ~~dark… he~~ could not read her expression. It made Saito feel anxious. Ignoring Saito’s words, Louise asked,		Because the room was dark…he could not read her expression. It made Saito feel anxious. Ignoring Saito’s words, Louise asked,

	“Do you want to return?”		“Do you want to return?”
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	“Answer me!”		“Answer me!”

	Saito ~~slowly… repeated~~ the words he kept on saying ~~recently”~~		Saito slowly…repeated the words he kept on saying recently,

	“No, there are still things left unfinished in this world, I will return after that…”		“No, there are still things left unfinished in this world, I will return after that…”
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	“That…”		“That…”

	Suddenly, he recalled. How he was held close to Cattleya’s chest… he remembered everything all of sudden. Mother’s warmth. His hometown…		Suddenly, he recalled. How he was held close to Cattleya’s chest… He remembered everything all of sudden. Mother’s warmth. His hometown…

	“How do you know about that?”		“How do you know about that?”
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	“Why do you never tell me how you really feel?”		“Why do you never tell me how you really feel?”

	~~‘Why~~...’		“Why...”

	Absent-mindedly, Saito was loosing himself in far away musings.		Absent-mindedly, Saito was loosing himself in far away musings.

	Because I love Louise.		''Because I love Louise.''

	I don't want to show tears in front of the woman I love.		''I don't want to show tears in front of the woman I love.''

	But…it wasn’t just that. It wasn’t just this feeling.		But…it wasn’t just that. It wasn’t just this feeling.
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	Nonono — Louise shook her head as if trying to drive the unpleasant thoughts away. In a voice that sounded like she was trying to persuade herself, she said,		Nonono — Louise shook her head as if trying to drive the unpleasant thoughts away. In a voice that sounded like she was trying to persuade herself, she said,

	~~“Un~~. I agree with what Tabitha said. Therefore, when you are close to me, the thoughts of returning home just don't enter your mind. No, you cannot think about it. Because when you stay by me, this world seems like the right one for you. No, that’s how it has to be.”		“Yes. I agree with what Tabitha said. Therefore, when you are close to me, the thoughts of returning home just don't enter your mind. No, you cannot think about it. Because when you stay by me, this world seems like the right one for you. No, that’s how it has to be.”

	“Different. It’s different. That’s…”		“Different. It’s different. That’s…”
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	“As time passes, the effect grows stronger. Gradually, the familiar becomes accustomed so that he can become one in body and spirit with their master in the end.”		“As time passes, the effect grows stronger. Gradually, the familiar becomes accustomed so that he can become one in body and spirit with their master in the end.”

	“Oi oi, if so, then I am not me…”		“Oi, oi, if so, then I am not me…”

	Saito remarked, to which Derflinger’s voice responded,		Saito remarked, to which Derflinger’s voice responded,
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	“Tiffania?”		“Tiffania?”

	Tiffania, who has been sleeping soundly till now, came closer to Saito ~~and said<!--The lines above and below this both appear to be Saito~~, ~~so this line could use some rewording-->.~~		Tiffania, who has been sleeping soundly till now, came closer to Saito; he continued,

	“Really…then I am not really me.”		“Really…then I am not really me.”
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	“I don’t know…”		“I don’t know…”

	“It’s worth a try. The only thing that can interfere with ‘Void’ is another ~~‘Void’~~.”		“It’s worth a try. The only thing that can interfere with ‘Void’ is another ‘Void.’”

	“Oi oi, don’t decide for me!”		“Oi, oi, don’t decide for me!”

	Saito shouted.		Saito shouted.
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	“However, the way it is right now, I cannot help you. I am really nothing more than Louise the Zero…”		“However, the way it is right now, I cannot help you. I am really nothing more than Louise the Zero…”

	After saying that much, Louise ~~flung~~ out of the room.		After saying that much, Louise ran out of the room.

	Saito tried to run after her, but Guiche and Kirche stopped him, grabbing his hands.		Saito tried to run after her, but Guiche and Kirche stopped him, grabbing his hands.

Neon1995: /* Chapter Nine: Reunion in Westwood */

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Chapter Nine: Reunion in Westwood

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	''Or is it that you simply hate goodbyes...''		''Or is it that you simply hate goodbyes...''

	Not knowing what else to say, Saito silently watched Fouquet ~~walking~~ to the door. At the doorway, Fouquet turned around.		Not knowing what else to say, Saito silently watched Fouquet walk to the door. At the doorway, Fouquet turned around.

	“That child is so naïve. She doesn't know about the world. Look after her so that she doesn't run into trouble.”		“That child is so naïve. She doesn't know about the world. Look after her so that she doesn't run into trouble.”
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	“Do you want to return to your home place, tell me.”		“Do you want to return to your home place, tell me.”

	“Why you are asking such thing ~~out~~ of sudden?”		“Why you are asking such a thing all of a sudden?”

	“Answer me!”		“Answer me!”
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	“I’m not lying.”		“I’m not lying.”

	“Then why ~~you~~ were you crying in front of Chii-nee-sama? If you did not want to return home, you wouldn't have cried.”		“Then why were you crying in front of Chii-nee-sama? If you did not want to return home, you wouldn't have cried.”

	“That…”		“That…”

	Suddenly, he recalled. How he was held close to Cattleya’s chest… he remembered it all ~~out~~ of sudden. Mother’s warmth. His hometown…		Suddenly, he recalled. How he was held close to Cattleya’s chest… he remembered everything all of sudden. Mother’s warmth. His hometown…

	“How do you know about that?”		“How do you know about that?”
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	It was hard to explain.		It was hard to explain.

	However, he was not very certain…it could be ~~the way~~ like Louise says. Or it could be his own feelings messing with his mind.		However, he was not very certain…it could be like Louise says. Or it could be his own feelings messing with his mind.

	Whichever it was, he could not deny it.		Whichever it was, he could not deny it.
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	Tabitha indifferently continued her speech,		Tabitha indifferently continued her speech,

	“As ~~the~~ time passes, the effect grows stronger. Gradually, the familiar becomes accustomed so that he can become one in body and spirit with their master in the end.”		“As time passes, the effect grows stronger. Gradually, the familiar becomes accustomed so that he can become one in body and spirit with their master in the end.”

	“Oi oi, if so, then I am not me…”		“Oi oi, if so, then I am not me…”
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	“Well, you finally understand what I was worrying about.”		“Well, you finally understand what I was worrying about.”

	Without them noticing, all group members already ~~woke~~ up.		Without them noticing, all of the group members had already woken up.

	“Certainly, you have been acting weird lately. Somehow, you were strangely serious…”		“Certainly, you have been acting weird lately. Somehow, you were strangely serious…”
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	“I don’t know…”		“I don’t know…”

	“It’s worth a try. The only thing that can interfere ‘Void’ is another ‘Void’.”		“It’s worth a try. The only thing that can interfere with ‘Void’ is another ‘Void’.”

	“Oi oi, don’t decide for me!”		“Oi oi, don’t decide for me!”
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	Louise started to run…but then stopped and said while looking down, bangs covering her eyes,		Louise started to run…but then stopped and said while looking down, bangs covering her eyes,

	“However, the way it is right now, I cannot help you. I am really nothing more ~~but~~ Louise the Zero…”		“However, the way it is right now, I cannot help you. I am really nothing more than Louise the Zero…”

	After saying that much, Louise flung out of the room.		After saying that much, Louise flung out of the room.