Zero no Tsukaima:Volume14 Chapter1 - Revision history

Rxls at 15:18, 30 June 2018

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	==Chapter 1: The Flowerbed Squadron's Rebellion==		===Chapter 1: The Flowerbed Squadron's Rebellion===

Toshiya: /* Chapter 1: The Flowerbed Squadron's Rebellion */

2017-10-30T15:42:09Z

Chapter 1: The Flowerbed Squadron's Rebellion

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	"This is 'Explosion' huh. Quite a convenient spell. It had this much power just by destroying the castle's support structure. As for ways to use it, there ought to be more interesting ones."		"This is 'Explosion' huh. Quite a convenient spell. It had this much power just by destroying the castle's support structure. As for ways to use it, there ought to be more interesting ones."

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	Joseph muttered as he stared at the 'Founder's Music Box' that he held in his hand. After that, he produced the 'Founder's Censer' from his pocket. As he stroked in gently, fragrance wafted from within it.		Joseph muttered as he stared at the 'Founder's Music Box' that he held in his hand. After that, he produced the 'Founder's Censer' from his pocket. As he stroked in gently, fragrance wafted from within it.

JeruTz at 21:35, 5 July 2017

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	==Translation Notes==		==Translation Notes==
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JeruTz: Complete translation overhaul. The entire chapter has been retranslated from scratch.

2017-07-05T21:33:13Z

Complete translation overhaul. The entire chapter has been retranslated from scratch.

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Veritatis cupitor at 18:16, 21 March 2017

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	"Frandall!<!--フランダール--> Unsheathe your sword!"		"Frandall!<!--フランダール--> Unsheathe your sword!"

	The old aged knight pulled out his sword to ready to charge.		The old aged knight pulled out his sword, ready to charge.

	"Hey, what do you mean?" the young knight mumbled, the tide of the wind was flying from the rear of Castlemorre, it was ~~simultaneous~~ entwined into the body of the knight.		"Hey, what do you mean?" the young knight mumbled, the tide of the wind was flying from the rear of Castlemorre, it was simultaneously entwined into the body of the knight.

	The young knight turned around and unsheathed his sword seeing that attack on his subordinate but felt how a mass of air sank to his stomach. With a harsh face, Castlemorre pulled out his sword from the young knight only enough to make him lose consciousness. Knights dressed in black robes began to show up one after another from the darkness.		The young knight turned around and unsheathed his sword seeing that attack on his subordinate but felt how a mass of air sank to his stomach. With a harsh face, Castlemorre pulled out his sword from the young knight only enough to make him lose consciousness. Knights dressed in black robes began to show up one after another from the darkness.
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	"Well, giving the point that 'I'm not like any other king' makes me laugh. Castlemorre, you do not have a pretty taste. But I thought it flattery."		"Well, giving the point that 'I'm not like any other king' makes me laugh. Castlemorre, you do not have a pretty taste. But I thought it flattery."

	"It sure is!　It is no more than a performance in order to deceive your way!"		"It sure is! It is no more than a performance in order to deceive your way!"

	"A little more than truly ...... The eye which looks at the person has been lacking. As you say, having completely, that I'm not suited to be the likes of a king. The truth is being noticed because of you. The inability has become extreme! Is that it?"		"A little more than truly ...... The eye which looks at the person has been lacking. As you say, having completely, that I'm not suited to be the likes of a king. The truth is being noticed because of you. The inability has become extreme! Is that it?"
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	The skylight window facing the courtyard was small, it was impossible to get out from there. Casltemorre ordered the urgent voice.		The skylight window facing the courtyard was small, it was impossible to get out from there. Casltemorre ordered the urgent voice.

	"Turn to the courtyard!　~~Hurry~~!　~~The~~ enemy is escaping!"		"Turn to the courtyard! Hurry! The enemy is escaping!"

	The knights quickly ran outside.		The knights quickly ran outside.

Coffeezombie: minor fixes

2016-10-29T15:34:40Z

minor fixes

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	"...Leader!"		"...Leader!"

	Arnulf cried. Castlemorre turned only to see Arnulf as his body w receded. It looked like they might shift a large stone table.		Arnulf cried. Castlemorre turned only to see Arnulf as his body receded. It looked like they might shift a large stone table.

	Castlemorre understood something.		Castlemorre understood something.
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	"Fool! What's happening?"		"Fool! What's happening?"

	There was no spare time when spells were being cast. Then Castlemorre ~~who~~ looked up to see the roof deteriorate and the enormous stone ceiling fall.		There was no spare time when spells were being cast. Then Castlemorre looked up to see the roof deteriorate and the enormous stone ceiling fall.

	Grand Troyes was a beautiful stone palace which soon swallowed the whole troops of the East Knights as it crumbled. Joseph started to laugh. Not only the Knights, but his servants, the minister of state, everyone were there, yet, he continued to laugh.		Grand Troyes was a beautiful stone palace which soon swallowed the whole troops of the East Knights as it crumbled. Joseph started to laugh. Not only the Knights, but his servants, the minister of state, everyone were there, yet, he continued to laugh.

Coffeezombie: grammar fixes

2016-10-29T15:31:43Z

grammar fixes

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Twistedymond: fixed some minor problems

2012-09-27T18:31:41Z

fixed some minor problems

KoNNz SuPa: /* Chapter 1: The Flowerbed Squadron's Rebellion */

2012-06-04T14:23:22Z

Chapter 1: The Flowerbed Squadron's Rebellion

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	Castlemorre looked at the knight that jumped on the window.		Castlemorre looked at the knight that jumped on the window.

	"Um, ~~wat~~ are they looking at?"		"Um, what are they looking at?"

	Just whether those which used what kind of skill, Joseph stood on a side of the fountain of the courtyard. The knight turned pale. The reason why he could move to the courtyard in an instant was not even recognized by any of the knights who were experts in magic. The magic he could have used, was the "Uneven Distribution" of the only wind system, but he disappeared so beautifully that it couldn't have been.		Just whether those which used what kind of skill, Joseph stood on a side of the fountain of the courtyard. The knight turned pale. The reason why he could move to the courtyard in an instant was not even recognized by any of the knights who were experts in magic. The magic he could have used, was the "Uneven Distribution" of the only wind system, but he disappeared so beautifully that it couldn't have been.

75.38.233.49: /* Chapter 1: The Flowerbed Squadron's Rebellion */

2012-04-25T21:42:08Z

Chapter 1: The Flowerbed Squadron's Rebellion

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	This much of the place was not searched and the land that makes up the large palace was elaborated everywhere around the central area.		This much of the place was not searched and the land that makes up the large palace was elaborated everywhere around the central area.

	That night, with the favor of twin moons that was hidden by the dark clouds, darkness began to engulf the source of light that shone through the eerie night. One shadowy figure ~~couldmbe~~ seen in a form of a horseman, who was swaggering and dashing towards a gate surrounded by red roses which was in fact the east side of the royal palace.		That night, with the favor of twin moons that was hidden by the dark clouds, darkness began to engulf the source of light that shone through the eerie night. One shadowy figure could be seen in a form of a horseman, who was swaggering and dashing towards a gate surrounded by red roses which was in fact the east side of the royal palace.

	It was still dark even with the light from the torches that were hung on the palace wall. With the heavy rain that fell that noon, humidity had risen up to its high point and the night mist wrapped around the knight.		It was still dark even with the light from the torches that were hung on the palace wall. With the heavy rain that fell that noon, humidity had risen up to its high point and the night mist wrapped around the knight.

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	This much of the place was not searched and the land that makes up the large palace was elaborated everywhere around the central area.		This much of the place was not searched and the land that makes up the large palace was elaborated everywhere around the central area.

	That night, with the favor of twin moons ~~that was~~ hidden by the ~~dark~~ clouds, darkness began to engulf the source of light that shone through the eerie night. One shadowy figure could be seen in a form of a horseman, who was swaggering and dashing towards a gate surrounded by red roses which was in fact the east side of the royal palace.		That night, with the favor of twin moons hidden by the clouds, darkness began to engulf the source of light that shone through the eerie night. One shadowy figure could be seen in a form of a horseman, who was swaggering and dashing towards a gate surrounded by red roses which was in fact the east side of the royal palace.

	It was still dark even with the light from the torches that were hung on the palace wall. With the heavy rain that fell ~~that~~ noon, humidity had risen up to its high point and the night mist wrapped around the knight.		It was still dark even with the light from the torches that were hung on the palace wall. With the heavy rain that fell at noon, the humidity had risen up to its high point and the night mist wrapped around the knight.

	As a young knight was walking, on the right side of him was a knight from the White Lily who lifted his shaded hat decorated with the White Lily emblem to show his face to the young knight and said to him in a tired voice,		As a young knight was walking, on the right side of him was a knight from the White Lily who lifted his shaded hat decorated with the White Lily emblem to show his face to the young knight and said to him in a tired voice,

	“However, regarding the Furotte Bilateral fleet and the rebellion, Commander Lord Claville knows that the government isn’t loyal to the king. Now that's rebellion! Tradition falls to ~~area~~, politics become corrupted, and nobility only thinks of increasing the gold coin of the warehouse, the commoners think and can increase only taking part in the share. All this leads to rebellion!”		“However, regarding the Furotte Bilateral fleet and the rebellion, Commander Lord Claville knows that the government isn’t loyal to the king. Now that's rebellion! Tradition falls to era, politics become corrupted, and nobility only thinks of increasing the gold coin of the warehouse, the commoners think and can increase only taking part in the share. All this leads to rebellion!”

	A horseman took a deep breath and with a small voice, started singing a song that was popular back in his town.		A horseman took a deep breath and with a small voice, started singing a song that was popular back in his town.
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	“What do you mean?”		“What do you mean?”

	~~“Everything~~ has a private opinion of His Majesty.”		“Everyone has a private opinion of His Majesty.”

	The old aged horseman that was wearing an old uniform and had a fatigued eye and in the mix of insight, glanced across the stone wall.		The old aged horseman that was wearing an old uniform and had a fatigued eye and in the mix of insight, glanced across the stone wall.
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	“Are those people glaring at us?”		“Are those people glaring at us?”

	“They are probably playing around with us. It’s as if His Majesty was being made fun of from the inside and outside. But, I’m having a second thought. Even though His Majesty has always been disrespected, he’s an individual who’s to be feared of. I have been serving to the royal family for 40 years and I always lower my sword below the waist in His Majesty’s presence, I know him very well. I teach the battlefield with my two fingers. But even the King knows that a man such as me fears him.”		“They are probably playing around with us. It’s as if His Majesty was being made fun of from the inside and outside. But, I’m having a second thought. Even though His Majesty has always been disrespected, he’s an individual who’s to be feared. I have been serving to the royal family for 40 years and I always lower my sword below the waist in His Majesty’s presence, I know him very well. I teach the battlefield with my two fingers. But even the King knows that a man such as me fears him.”

	The young knight kept staring at the old man, and let out a deep sighed.		The young knight kept staring at the old man, and let out a deep sighed.
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	“Does that mean we have to be playing their games?”		“Does that mean we have to be playing their games?”

	“Knights like that are like us. After all, this is no more than a comedian dancing in someone’s palm. But as for now, the mouth I've spoken with, it is probably understood. Because this might fly to your neck, not only I, if these enter to the ears of His ~~Majesty’s~~."		“Knights like that are like us. After all, this is no more than a comedian dancing in someone’s palm. But as for now, the mouth I've spoken with, it is probably understood. Because this might fly to your neck, not only I, if these enter to the ears of His Majesty."

	The young knight straightened his back and nodded.		The young knight straightened his back and nodded.
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	He murmured in the young knight's ear. He shook his head with a troubled look on his face. It was probably a life risking duty. But it was still a duty.		He murmured in the young knight's ear. He shook his head with a troubled look on his face. It was probably a life risking duty. But it was still a duty.

	"It cannot be increased and it will be defeated in such reason. Because at these times, they are yours. You should know your curfew, no? ~~Everything~~ we meet in this area, we received orders to arrest ~~any~~ government position and status case. But, hey, just ~~format~~. If it's people like you, it's fine, you have to sign papers and ~~appreciate~~ the guard post. Well, here anyways..."		"It cannot be increased and it will be defeated in such reason. Because at these times, they are yours. You should know your curfew, no? Everone we meet in this area, we received orders to arrest all, regardless of government position and status case. But, hey, it's just formality. If it's people like you, it's fine, you have to sign papers and check in at the guard post. Well, here anyways..."

	But Lord Castlemorre did not move.		But Lord Castlemorre did not move.