Zero no Tsukaima:Volume14 Chapter4 - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 09:50, 2 September 2017

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	As the day of the third annual coronation ceremony began, Guiche and the Ondine Water Spirit Knights were ordered to maintain order at the gates around the city. Aquileia's narrow alleys were mapped with complicated waterway patterns. All Romalia Pilgrims would be congregating in this tiny place. The Knights being ordered to prevent chaos deemed this as an inevitable part of their jobs.		As the day of the third annual coronation ceremony began, Guiche and the Ondine Water Spirit Knights were ordered to maintain order at the gates around the city. Aquileia's narrow alleys were mapped with complicated waterway patterns. All Romalia Pilgrims would be congregating in this tiny place. The Knights being ordered to prevent chaos deemed this as an inevitable part of their jobs.

	Packed like sardines in an alley less than 2 ~~meters~~ wide, the flow of traffic became dead slow. Louise and the others, who has to dress up as nuns and start praying from 5 a.m. in the morning in front of St. Lucia Aquileia's Cathedral, were literally in the middle of a battlefield everyday.		Packed like sardines in an alley less than 2 mails wide, the flow of traffic became dead slow. Louise and the others, who has to dress up as nuns and start praying from 5 a.m. in the morning in front of St. Lucia Aquileia's Cathedral, were literally in the middle of a battlefield everyday.

	Guiche and the boys were armed with (杌孀虐諮俸嫌朧テ韉那嗟抓旦`コート Unknown clothing here<!-- ed note: they probably wear mantles decorated with both Tristanian (青地に白の百合, white lily on a blue background) and Romalian (that's 聖具の紋) (sur)coats of arms. In Japanese it goes like this: 青地に白の百合と聖具の紋をあしらったサーコート -->) and bore the responsibility of keeping visitor flow in order. In reality, it felt more like going to war. Romalian Pilgrims pushed and shoved each other aggressively to "line up" at the gates of St Lucia Aquileia Cathedral. With the crowd's erratic motion, most of the pilgrims ended up outside the Cathedral despite their efforts in "lining up".		Guiche and the boys were armed with (杌孀虐諮俸嫌朧テ韉那嗟抓旦`コート Unknown clothing here<!-- ed note: they probably wear mantles decorated with both Tristanian (青地に白の百合, white lily on a blue background) and Romalian (that's 聖具の紋) (sur)coats of arms. In Japanese it goes like this: 青地に白の百合と聖具の紋をあしらったサーコート -->) and bore the responsibility of keeping visitor flow in order. In reality, it felt more like going to war. Romalian Pilgrims pushed and shoved each other aggressively to "line up" at the gates of St Lucia Aquileia Cathedral. With the crowd's erratic motion, most of the pilgrims ended up outside the Cathedral despite their efforts in "lining up".
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	Right underneath the Panzer, were those logs... the same species of wood of which logs are made from as the ones they would use to transport giant stone blocks a castle is under construction. Only those logs will stand the pressure of the Panzer and roll simultaneously.		Right underneath the Panzer, were those logs... the same species of wood of which logs are made from as the ones they would use to transport giant stone blocks a castle is under construction. Only those logs will stand the pressure of the Panzer and roll simultaneously.

	"Everyone please take care! Any plain log, even with the 'harden spell' casted on them will not sustain the weight of this steel lump. It weights as much as 12,000 ~~Libros~~!"		"Everyone please take care! Any plain log, even with the 'harden spell' casted on them will not sustain the weight of this steel lump. It weights as much as 120,000 livres!"

	So that was the reason, how it's able to withstand the great weight. "Harden" logs over the limit of sustainable weight will snap and be crushed into pieces.		So that was the reason, how it's able to withstand the great weight. "Harden" logs over the limit of sustainable weight will snap and be crushed into pieces.

115.42.184.211 at 01:32, 3 January 2013

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	"So? Will this thing move?"		"So? Will this thing move?"

	"In somewhat way, yeah. It wasn't easy, using 'gasoline' to pilot this 'work of art' and the '~~feathers of the dragon~~'. Mm, although fundamentally, there are a few big differences. Anyhow, mastering its structure requires time. It's not something that can be done overnight."		"In somewhat way, yeah. It wasn't easy, using 'gasoline' to pilot this 'work of art' and the 'Dragon's Raiment'. Mm, although fundamentally, there are a few big differences. Anyhow, mastering its structure requires time. It's not something that can be done overnight."

	"That's more than enough."		"That's more than enough."
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	''First time seeing this "work of art", it was really shocking. Although the first time seeing machine fly was just as shocking, but the degree of how stunning this was only goes up, not down.''		''First time seeing this "work of art", it was really shocking. Although the first time seeing machine fly was just as shocking, but the degree of how stunning this was only goes up, not down.''

	''Using such a large amount of metal... steel, made part by part without disturbing the overall organization. Behind, inside the tank was an "engine" even more advanced than the one of "~~the feathers of the dragon~~".''		''Using such a large amount of metal... steel, made part by part without disturbing the overall organization. Behind, inside the tank was an "engine" even more advanced than the one of "Dragon's Raiment".''

	''Even the extruding cannon, it's just a perfect work of art. How lethal would a shell fired from here be? How devastating could this get?''		''Even the extruding cannon, it's just a perfect work of art. How lethal would a shell fired from here be? How devastating could this get?''

Vaelis at 10:20, 19 April 2012

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	===The Capital of Water===		===Chapter 4: The Capital of Water===

	As the day of the third annual coronation ceremony began, Guiche and the Ondine Water Spirit Knights were ordered to maintain order at the gates around the city. Aquileia's narrow alleys were mapped with complicated waterway patterns. All Romalia Pilgrims would be congregating in this tiny place. The Knights being ordered to prevent chaos deemed this as an inevitable part of their jobs.		As the day of the third annual coronation ceremony began, Guiche and the Ondine Water Spirit Knights were ordered to maintain order at the gates around the city. Aquileia's narrow alleys were mapped with complicated waterway patterns. All Romalia Pilgrims would be congregating in this tiny place. The Knights being ordered to prevent chaos deemed this as an inevitable part of their jobs.

Ajmc93 at 05:56, 28 February 2012

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	This enormous vessel porting is none other than the "Orient". The nobles standing guard on the deck casted another volley of wind magics, finally stabilizing this monstrous ship. In the end, few figures of pitch blackness sprung out from the warehouse of the docks, grabbing the harness and tied it around the mast.		This enormous vessel porting is none other than the "Orient". The nobles standing guard on the deck casted another volley of wind magics, finally stabilizing this monstrous ship. In the end, few figures of pitch blackness sprung out from the warehouse of the docks, grabbing the harness and tied it around the mast.

	Creaking at a sharp tone, the front hull of the ship slowly opened like a crow's beak. This door is made to carry the large loads, designed by Professor ~~Cortes~~.		Creaking at a sharp tone, the front hull of the ship slowly opened like a crow's beak. This door is made to carry the large loads, designed by Professor Colbert.

	The walls of the harbor, procuring out like a tongue which scratched the bird's beak, had an array cylindrical logs laid down side by side. The twenty something nobles stood across those trees, including the ones who were casting wind spells on the deck.		The walls of the harbor, procuring out like a tongue which scratched the bird's beak, had an array cylindrical logs laid down side by side. The twenty something nobles stood across those trees, including the ones who were casting wind spells on the deck.
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	"Right side! It's the right side! Hurry up and use 'Levitation'!"		"Right side! It's the right side! Hurry up and use 'Levitation'!"

	Mages standing left and right started chanting "levitation" to lift the Panzer's right side up. Even with this number of mages, they are unable to buckle it at all. At least the good thing is that it is now stuck in the bird's beak. Professor ~~Cortes~~ held his breath, and carefully instructed mages left and right, eventually successfully landing the tank on the stony ground of the center.		Mages standing left and right started chanting "levitation" to lift the Panzer's right side up. Even with this number of mages, they are unable to buckle it at all. At least the good thing is that it is now stuck in the bird's beak. Professor Colbert held his breath, and carefully instructed mages left and right, eventually successfully landing the tank on the stony ground of the center.

	An energy depleted Colbert rested on top of the tank. There was no more to worry, whether the Orient will plummet or will the tank sink into the depths of the ocean. As soon as he is relieved from this burden, tiredness started to reveal in every part of his body.		An energy depleted Colbert rested on top of the tank. There was no more to worry, whether the Orient will plummet or will the tank sink into the depths of the ocean. As soon as he is relieved from this burden, tiredness started to reveal in every part of his body.
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	The moves started pulling, while the aristocrats applied "levitation" to help out. On the "hardened" logs, this Panzer started to roll again.		The moves started pulling, while the aristocrats applied "levitation" to help out. On the "hardened" logs, this Panzer started to roll again.

	Sticking her head out of the Panzer's cabin, Kirche winced her eyes at Julio and ~~Cortes~~ in the midst of some sort of a conversation.		Sticking her head out of the Panzer's cabin, Kirche winced her eyes at Julio and Colbert in the midst of some sort of a conversation.

	"This really stinks.... Although it doesn't need to be as clean as the streets, it's really dirty and sticky inside..."		"This really stinks.... Although it doesn't need to be as clean as the streets, it's really dirty and sticky inside..."

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	An energy depleted Colbert rested on top of the tank. There was no more to worry, whether the Orient will plummet or will the tank sink into the depths of the ocean. As soon as he is relieved from this burden, tiredness started to reveal in every part of his body.		An energy depleted Colbert rested on top of the tank. There was no more to worry, whether the Orient will plummet or will the tank sink into the depths of the ocean. As soon as he is relieved from this burden, tiredness started to reveal in every part of his body.

	"It's alright now, Miss ~~Slipheed~~, Miss Tabitha."		"It's alright now, Miss Zerbst, Miss Tabitha."

	The hatch on the tank sudden sprang open. ~~Illococoo~~'s head popped out, wearing a black officer's hat found within. Following, Tabitha's small head partially stuck out of the gunner's window. The two were inside stabilizing the whole tank.		The hatch on the tank sudden sprang open. Kirche's head popped out, wearing a black officer's hat found within. Following, Tabitha's small head partially stuck out of the gunner's window. The two were inside stabilizing the whole tank.

	A teen wearing white clothes sharply stood out from the rest of the crowd, wearing pitch black clothing. He gave Colbert a salute. Other than is unmatching attire, this salute was one of a fully professional soldier's.		A teen wearing white clothes sharply stood out from the rest of the crowd, wearing pitch black clothing. He gave Colbert a salute. Other than is unmatching attire, this salute was one of a fully professional soldier's.
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	The moves started pulling, while the aristocrats applied "levitation" to help out. On the "hardened" logs, this Panzer started to roll again.		The moves started pulling, while the aristocrats applied "levitation" to help out. On the "hardened" logs, this Panzer started to roll again.

	~~Inside the cabin~~ of the Panzer, ~~a cute Illococoo wincing~~ her eyes at Julio and Cortes in the midst of some sort of a conversation.		Sticking her head out of the Panzer's cabin, Kirche winced her eyes at Julio and Cortes in the midst of some sort of a conversation.

	"This really stinks.... Although it doesn't need to be as clean as the streets, it's really dirty and sticky inside..."		"This really stinks.... Although it doesn't need to be as clean as the streets, it's really dirty and sticky inside..."

	~~Illococoo~~ chuckled to herself. Tabitha nodded her head in agreement from the gunner's window.		Kirche chuckled to herself. Tabitha nodded her head in agreement from the gunner's window.

	"Your white knight, where would he be sent this time?"		"Your white knight, where would he be sent this time?"

	~~Illococoo~~ pulled of her cap and put it on Tabitha instead.		Kirche pulled of her cap and put it on Tabitha instead.

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Isapfe at 07:07, 16 January 2012

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	Julio shook his head.		Julio shook his head.

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	"Right now, he's on a 'voyage'. He won't be coming back for a short period of time."		"Right now, he's on a 'voyage'. He won't be coming back for a short period of time."
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	The black clothed males somehow started to transport the tank into the warehouse, hooking the front with a rope to pull with.		The black clothed males somehow started to transport the tank into the warehouse, hooking the front with a rope to pull with.

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	The moves started pulling, while the aristocrats applied "levitation" to help out. On the "hardened" logs, this Panzer started to roll again.		The moves started pulling, while the aristocrats applied "levitation" to help out. On the "hardened" logs, this Panzer started to roll again.
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	Illococoo pulled of her cap and put it on Tabitha instead.		Illococoo pulled of her cap and put it on Tabitha instead.

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	===The Capital of Water===		===The Capital of Water===

	As the ~~days for~~ the third annual coronation ceremony ~~starts~~, Guiche and the Ondine Water Spirit Knights were ordered to maintain order at the gates around the city. Aquileia's narrow alleys were mapped with complicated waterway patterns. All Romalia Pilgrims ~~will~~ be congregating in this tiny place. ~~Being~~ ordered to prevent chaos is deemed as an inevitable part of their jobs.		As the day of the third annual coronation ceremony began, Guiche and the Ondine Water Spirit Knights were ordered to maintain order at the gates around the city. Aquileia's narrow alleys were mapped with complicated waterway patterns. All Romalia Pilgrims would be congregating in this tiny place. The Knights being ordered to prevent chaos deemed this as an inevitable part of their jobs.

	Packed like sardines in an alley less than 2 meters wide, the flow of traffic ~~becomes~~ dead slow. Louise and the others, who has to dress up as ~~a nun~~ and start praying from 5 a.m. in the morning in front of St. Lucia Aquileia's Cathedral, ~~are~~ literally in the middle of a battlefield everyday.		Packed like sardines in an alley less than 2 meters wide, the flow of traffic became dead slow. Louise and the others, who has to dress up as nuns and start praying from 5 a.m. in the morning in front of St. Lucia Aquileia's Cathedral, were literally in the middle of a battlefield everyday.

	Guiche and the boys ~~are~~ armed with (杌孀虐諮俸嫌朧テ韉那嗟抓旦`コート Unknown clothing here<!-- ed note: they probably wear mantles decorated with both Tristanian (青地に白の百合, white lily on a blue background) and Romalian (that's 聖具の紋) (sur)coats of arms. In Japanese it goes like this: 青地に白の百合と聖具の紋をあしらったサーコート -->) and ~~bears~~ the responsibility of keeping visitor flow in order. ~~But in fact~~, it's more like going to war. ~~Romalia~~ Pilgrims ~~push~~ and ~~shove~~ each other aggressively to "line up" at the gates of St Lucia Aquileia Cathedral. With the crowd's erratic motion, most of the pilgrims ~~end~~ up outside the Cathedral despite their efforts ~~made~~ in "lining up".		Guiche and the boys were armed with (杌孀虐諮俸嫌朧テ韉那嗟抓旦`コート Unknown clothing here<!-- ed note: they probably wear mantles decorated with both Tristanian (青地に白の百合, white lily on a blue background) and Romalian (that's 聖具の紋) (sur)coats of arms. In Japanese it goes like this: 青地に白の百合と聖具の紋をあしらったサーコート -->) and bore the responsibility of keeping visitor flow in order. In reality, it felt more like going to war. Romalian Pilgrims pushed and shoved each other aggressively to "line up" at the gates of St Lucia Aquileia Cathedral. With the crowd's erratic motion, most of the pilgrims ended up outside the Cathedral despite their efforts in "lining up".

	And so ~~you see~~, Guiche and the Ondine Knights ~~are~~ stuck in this position, where they have to fight with the desperate pilgrims on the verge of a brawl.		And so, Guiche and the Ondine Knights were stuck in this position, where they would have to fight with the desperate pilgrims on the verge of a brawl.

	"C-Curse you! You shall not pass this line! Stop pushing!"		"C-Curse you! You shall not pass this line! Stop pushing!"
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	"Let us catch a glimpse of his Holiness!"		"Let us catch a glimpse of his Holiness!"

	The Ondine Water Spirit Knights took out their wands, using only their bodies to control the masses ~~does~~ not make things any easier.		The Ondine Water Spirit Knights took out their wands; using only their bodies to control the masses did not make things any easier.

	"Hey! Scutter off! If you don't want to get hurt then stand back!"		"Hey! Scutter off! If you don't want to get hurt then stand back!"
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	"Y-You bastard!"		"Y-You bastard!"

	Because of the surrounding magic detectors, ~~although~~ Guiche is sweating like a waterfall, ~~he still~~ issued a ban on using magic to his teammates.		Because of the surrounding magic detectors, Guiche, already sweating like a waterfall, issued a ban on using magic to his teammates.

	"Everyone! Put down your wands! We can handle them! ~~Therefore don~~'t use magic!"		"Everyone! Put down your wands! We can handle them! Don't use magic!"

	Except that using the wands to beat the furious peasants only further ~~enrages~~ them.		Except that using the wands to beat the furious peasants only further enraged them.

	Soon Malicorne's wand was stolen in a tug-of-war, and himself was engulfed by the furious peasants around.		Soon, Malicorne's wand was stolen in a tug-of-war, and he himself was engulfed by the furious peasants around.

	"Waah! Waaaah! Stop that! You plebeians! How dare you!"		"Waah! Waaaah! Stop that! You plebeians! How dare you!"
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	"Arrogant aristobrat! Go to hell!"		"Arrogant aristobrat! Go to hell!"

	Guiche and the team were trying to reach Malicorne to help, but were easily swept away by the rioting crowds to taken aside be beaten in one corner.		Guiche and the team were trying to reach Malicorne to help, but were easily swept away by the rioting crowds to be taken aside and beaten in one corner.

	"These people! They just won't listen!"		"These people! They just won't listen!"

	Gimili blinded by anger, ~~has~~ activated killing spree mode. It wasn't very long before he started chanting the spells. Guiche, who had his head lifted by someone and was made a punching bag, was in a state of high tension.		Gimili blinded by anger, activated killing spree mode. It wasn't very long before he started chanting the spells. Guiche, who had his head lifted by someone and was made a punching bag, was in a state of high tension.

	"No, stop! I tell you, do not use magic!"		"No, stop! I tell you, do not use magic!"

	Just at this moment, a group of people wrapped in white cloth ~~bursted~~ out from the Cathedral.		Just at this moment, a group of people wrapped in white cloth burst out from the Cathedral.

	"Crusaders!"		"Crusaders!"

	No one ~~does not know~~ of the legends of how aggressive these Crusaders, claiming the title as Guardians of the Ancestors, could get if you were in their way. Waving the staffs carved with of holy crosses, the Crusaders gathered together and rammed into the crowd.		No one knows of the legends of how aggressive these Crusaders, claiming the title as Guardians of the Ancestors, could get if you were in their way. Waving the staffs carved with of holy crosses, the Crusaders gathered together and rammed into the crowd.

	"An enemy of ours is the enemy of God!"		"An enemy of ours is the enemy of God!"
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	Carlo, seeing the exhausted boys leave without another word, added		Carlo, seeing the exhausted boys leave without another word, added

	"Oh, and from tomorrow onwards, you are in charge of patrolling the streets. Remember to report in any suspicious people."		"Oh, and from tomorrow onwards, you are in charge of patrolling the streets. Remember to report any suspicious people."

	The boys felt their blood boiling, but were incapable of complaining. Patrolling was their job now. To them, the harsh words sounded like		The boys felt their blood boiling, but were incapable of complaining. Patrolling was their job now. To them, the harsh words sounded like
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	After all, the streets are jammed with people here and there. There was absolutely no space for patrol.		After all, the streets are jammed with people here and there. There was absolutely no space for patrol.

	Guiche and the team came to a corner on the center beside the Cathedral, staring blankly at the excited crowds. A few vendors grouped together to sell ~~alcoholics~~ and snacks.		Guiche and the team came to a corner on the center beside the Cathedral, staring blankly at the excited crowds. A few vendors grouped together to sell alcohol and snacks.

	"Turns out, we can't do anything without Saito..."		"Turns out, we can't do anything without Saito..."