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Toshiya: /* Chapter 5: Six Thousand Years Ago */

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	Suddenly, someone grabbed Saito's wrist. He looked up. A mud-splattered Sasha stood there.		Suddenly, someone grabbed Saito's wrist. He looked up. A mud-splattered Sasha stood there.

	“You all right?” [[Image: ZnT14-139.jpg\|thumb\|]]		“You all right?”

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	“Of-of course not... the power of the spell even hit us too... that's even scarier than Louise's spell...”		“Of-of course not... the power of the spell even hit us too... that's even scarier than Louise's spell...”

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Wildk: /* Chapter 5: Six Thousand Years Ago */

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CrimsonLace: /* Chapter 5: Six Thousand Years Ago */

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	Saito gazed at glowing door.		Saito gazed at glowing door.

	He thought: Just ahead might be a place that's considered to be holy.		He thought: ''Just ahead might be a place that's considered to be holy.'' With mixed feelings of attachment and unease, Saito entered the glowing door.

	With mixed feelings of attachment and unease, Saito entered the glowing door.

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

CrimsonLace: /* Chapter 5: Six Thousand Years Ago */

2011-10-14T05:56:26Z

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	The little girl called Lauren, who was holding a ceramic pot, took went over there with small steps. She placed the pot on the stove outside the tent.		The little girl called Lauren, who was holding a ceramic pot, took went over there with small steps. She placed the pot on the stove outside the tent.

	“Ah, bring me the Bass Tres. Thank you. ”		“Ah, bring me the Bass Tres. Thank you. ” <!--No idea how accurate Bass Tres is. Much appreciated if someone could check.-->

	Looks like the thing called Bass Tres was a object. The girl who brought that took out a staff and began chanting a spell.		Looks like the thing called Bass Tres was a object. The girl who brought that took out a staff and began chanting a spell.

CrimsonLace: /* Chapter 5: Six Thousand Years Ago */

2011-10-14T05:46:52Z

Chapter 5: Six Thousand Years Ago

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	Unsurprisingly, Brimir and Sasha faced each other and laughed. "Hahahaha.”		Unsurprisingly, Brimir and Sasha faced each other and laughed. "Hahahaha.”

	“What you said was indeed ~~hillarious~~.”		“What you said was indeed hilarious.”

	“Sorry, sorry. I understand how you want you protect your master. Especially during this kind of chaos. Very few people use this kind of "odd system" of magic. It would be terrible if the ~~Balliag~~ knew. Why don't you tell me when you feel like it. “		“Sorry, sorry. I understand how you want you protect your master. Especially during this kind of chaos. Very few people use this kind of "odd system" of magic. It would be terrible if the Valiag knew. Why don't you tell me when you feel like it. “

	Brimir laughed lightly.		Brimir laughed lightly.
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	Odd system was referring to 'Void' right? In this era, the term 'Void' must be non-existent.		Odd system was referring to 'Void' right? In this era, the term 'Void' must be non-existent.

	“What's the ~~Balliag~~?”		“What's the Valiag?”

	Saito asked.		Saito asked.
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	Saito felt a bit reluctant to believe what he was hearing on the topic of the Founder's enemies....those weren't the elves, who used ancient magic, were they?		Saito felt a bit reluctant to believe what he was hearing on the topic of the Founder's enemies....those weren't the elves, who used ancient magic, were they?

	“By ~~Balliag~~, are you referring to elves? ”		“By Valiag, are you referring to elves? ”

	Saito's head got hit hard with a “clang.”		Saito's head got hit hard with a “clang.”
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	“Did you know that to use magic, elves have to learn it?”		“Did you know that to use magic, elves have to learn it?”

	“That's a widely known fact, after all.... but what do you mean by the ~~Balliag~~'s frightening tactics?”		“That's a widely known fact, after all.... but what do you mean by the Valiag's frightening tactics?”

	Brimir looked at Saito in bewilderment.		Brimir looked at Saito in bewilderment.

	“Do you honestly not know about the ~~Balliag~~?”		“Do you honestly not know about the Valiag?”

	“That's right.”		“That's right.”

	“I sure envy you; there's actually someone on this world who doesn't have the ~~Balliag~~'s shadow treading upon their land. Oh, I understand; your master must be intentionally hiding it from you.”		“I sure envy you; there's actually someone on this world who doesn't have the Valiag's shadow treading upon their land. Oh, I understand; your master must be intentionally hiding it from you.”

	As though he was very satisfied, Brimir nodded his head. Saito could only watch in bafflement.		As though he was very satisfied, Brimir nodded his head. Saito could only watch in bafflement.
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	“What is this? What is this?” Saito was bewildered.		“What is this? What is this?” Saito was bewildered.

	“They came. The ~~Balliag~~.”		“They came. The Valiag.”

	Sasha explained.		Sasha explained.
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	Sasha grabbed the gun inside the tent and handed it to Saito.		Sasha grabbed the gun inside the tent and handed it to Saito.

	Understanding nothing, Saito darted outside. Just who are these feared ~~Balliags~~? The villages are mages, but their feared enemies are......?		Understanding nothing, Saito darted outside. Just who are these feared Valiags? The villages are mages, but their feared enemies are......?

	The village was in a state of chaos. In the empty center of the village, the young man held a staff in his hands, forcing Brimir to gather in the center. As Sasha, and Saito, who was standing on the edge, made their way there, Brimir gave them instructions.		The village was in a state of chaos. In the empty center of the village, the young man held a staff in his hands, forcing Brimir to gather in the center. As Sasha, and Saito, who was standing on the edge, made their way there, Brimir gave them instructions.
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	At the front were horse-riding troops. They wore frightening horned helmets and chest armour. Following that were troops on feet. Holding four meter long spears, similar corps uniformly stood there motionlessly.		At the front were horse-riding troops. They wore frightening horned helmets and chest armour. Following that were troops on feet. Holding four meter long spears, similar corps uniformly stood there motionlessly.

	“......That's the ~~Balliag~~?”		“......That's the Valiag?”

	If that was their enemy........He had no idea how many thousands or millions of people there were. We, on the other hand, only have a few mages. Even if they were mages, they were incapable to defeating such a large number of enemies.		If that was their enemy........He had no idea how many thousands or millions of people there were. We, on the other hand, only have a few mages. Even if they were mages, they were incapable to defeating such a large number of enemies.

	Besides, just what inside the frighting helmet and armour? As their name happened to be ~~Balliag~~, Saito had thought that they were ghost-like scums.		Besides, just what inside the frighting helmet and armour? As their name happened to be Valiag, Saito had thought that they were ghost-like scums.

	Despite having held up against this type of army before, this time's opponents weren't moving, and were organized and prepared for battle. A prepared opponent has no openings. If you directly faced the enemy from the front, you'll get stomped on by the enemy like an ants.		Despite having held up against this type of army before, this time's opponents weren't moving, and were organized and prepared for battle. A prepared opponent has no openings. If you directly faced the enemy from the front, you'll get stomped on by the enemy like an ants.
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	Louise's "Explosion." But....this should be the earliest form of it.		Louise's "Explosion." But....this should be the earliest form of it.

	The ~~Balliag~~ troops reached about three hundred meters from them. The range corps started shooting arrows. For a split second, a storm started to form, much like a natural one in the sky. As soon as they reached their destination, several hundreds of arrows were sucked to the ground by gravity as soon as they reached Saito and the others.		The Valiag troops reached about three hundred meters from them. The range corps started shooting arrows. For a split second, a storm started to form, much like a natural one in the sky. As soon as they reached their destination, several hundreds of arrows were sucked to the ground by gravity as soon as they reached Saito and the others.

	The wind mage by Brimir started chanting wind magic. That was probably the “wind wall' that Tabitha normally used.		The wind mage by Brimir started chanting wind magic. That was probably the “wind wall' that Tabitha normally used.

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	===Chapter 5: Six Thousand Years Ago===		===Chapter 5: Six Thousand Years Ago===

	~~====Part 1====~~

	But at the same time, his conscious said otherwise.		But at the same time, his conscious said otherwise.
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	“We will win. Sooner or later, we will win for sure. “		“We will win. Sooner or later, we will win for sure. “

	If someone truly listened to Brimir's words......then fight against with elves without understanding why. From then on, he'll escape the land of the living.		If someone truly listened to Brimir's words......then fight against with elves without understanding why. From then on, he'll escape the land of the living. <!--I'm not too sure about this phrase. The text that I translated from seemed a bit odd. I would love it if someone could check this.-->

	This kind of person had unexpectedly turned an elf into a familiar. How ironic. Of course, that cannot be told to Brimir.		This kind of person had unexpectedly turned an elf into a familiar. How ironic. Of course, that cannot be told to Brimir.

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	Brimir took a hold of Saito's left hand.		Brimir took a hold of Saito's left hand.

	That's why I engraved this inscription on her. ~~Gandalfr~~. In our old language, it means 'the lowly person who controls magic.'		That's why I engraved this inscription on her. Gandálfr. In our old language, it means 'the lowly person who controls magic.'

	"So you're the one who engraved this inscription. ”		"So you're the one who engraved this inscription. ”
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	"That's right. Yet your master didn't?”		"That's right. Yet your master didn't?”

	Saito shook his head. The inscriptions actually engraved 'themselves'. But according to Brimir, inscriptions in this era had to be engraved. “Nope. Although, 'the lowly person who controls magic' ── ~~Gandalfr~~ doesn't actually use magic.”		Saito shook his head. The inscriptions actually engraved 'themselves'. But according to Brimir, inscriptions in this era had to be engraved. “Nope. Although, 'the lowly person who controls magic' ── Gandálfr doesn't actually use magic.”

	“That's because you're a mere human. Looks like ordinary humans can actually become familiars. I had thought that only beasts, magical creatures, or creatures of a different race could. Essentially, the magic that she uses isn't what I use.”		“That's because you're a mere human. Looks like ordinary humans can actually become familiars. I had thought that only beasts, magical creatures, or creatures of a different race could. Essentially, the magic that she uses isn't what I use.”
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	“What's that? Please don't use another other odd expressions. Call it “elven powers” all right?”		“What's that? Please don't use another other odd expressions. Call it “elven powers” all right?”

	Saito began to realize how serious history was. A ~~Gandalfr~~ was 'the lowly person who controls magic.' And the ~~Gandalfr~~ in this era was an elf. He just felt that all of that was a bit hard to believe.		Saito began to realize how serious history was. A Gandálfr was 'the lowly person who controls magic.' And the Gandálfr in this era was an elf. He just felt that all of that was a bit hard to believe.

	After having stared at Sasha for the whole time........he felt reality crack, as though he was seeing his own ancestors. Just some kind of indescribable feeling.		After having stared at Sasha for the whole time........he felt reality crack, as though he was seeing his own ancestors. Just some kind of indescribable feeling.
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	Generally speaking, seeing this organized army and hearing their terrifying war cries, people would be too scared to keep their backs straight.		Generally speaking, seeing this organized army and hearing their terrifying war cries, people would be too scared to keep their backs straight.

	But a ~~Gandalfr~~ that hears its master chanting from behind has no chance of fear.		But a Gandálfr that hears its master chanting from behind has no chance of fear.

	A ~~Gandalfr~~ is exists for just one reason- to protect their master as they chant their spells.		A Gandálfr is exists for just one reason- to protect their master as they chant their spells.

	They are weaponry experts capable of rivaling a thousand troops alone.		They are weaponry experts capable of rivaling a thousand troops alone.
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	“Uwah!”		“Uwah!”

	Sasha and Saito were like windmills waving off the weapons on hand. Relying on ~~Gandalfr~~'s power. The enemy troops were sent flying off like scarecrows.		Sasha and Saito were like windmills waving off the weapons on hand. Relying on Gandálfr's power. The enemy troops were sent flying off like scarecrows.

	Suddenly, someone's armour got hit off by a pike. Catching a glimpse of the creature below , Saito found himself shocked.		Suddenly, someone's armour got hit off by a pike. Catching a glimpse of the creature below , Saito found himself shocked.
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	“Thank you. You helped us greatly. Had you not been here, the incantation might not have been completed.”		“Thank you. You helped us greatly. Had you not been here, the incantation might not have been completed.”

	Even if he himself said they did not consent to it, the fight for control over his master's intentions continued. Is this a ~~Gandalfr~~'s karma?		Even if he himself said they did not consent to it, the fight for control over his master's intentions continued. Is this a Gandálfr's karma?

	While thinking about how the situation looks, facing Brimir's back, Saito asked.		While thinking about how the situation looks, facing Brimir's back, Saito asked.

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	Brimir and Sasha brought Saito to a village called Nitabelio.		Brimir and Sasha brought Saito to a village called Nitabelio.

	Although described as being brought there, as soon as he walked past the gates, the village appeared before him. With Nitabelio as its name, it seemed to undoubtedly be a ~~properous~~ market. With that kind of mindset, he found that what he saw did not fall within his expectations.		Although described as being brought there, as soon as he walked past the gates, the village appeared before him. With Nitabelio as its name, it seemed to undoubtedly be a prosperous market. With that kind of mindset, he found that what he saw did not fall within his expectations.

	It was a small village filled with ~~moveable~~ tents placed along the sides of nameless hills. One round tent was made of wood and cloth. On one side of the tent, there were a few goats eating long strands of grass.		It was a small village filled with movable tents placed along the sides of nameless hills. One round tent was made of wood and cloth. On one side of the tent, there were a few goats eating long strands of grass.

	The whole scenery looked just like the nomadic Mongolians living in their daily lives—something that he had seen in a community textbook.		The whole scenery looked just like the nomadic Mongolians living in their daily lives—something that he had seen in a community textbook.
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	“My house is just over there. ”		“My house is just over there. ”

	Brimir led him to one of the highest tents in the village. A blue flag flapped atop the tent's canopy. Wasn't Brimir a founder? Someone like Christianity's Jesus, Islam's ~~Mohammed~~, or ~~Buddism~~'s Śākyamuni? Essentially some incredible person! While thinking, Saito entered. He's living in this kind of run-down place? Is this really Brimir himself?		Brimir led him to one of the highest tents in the village. A blue flag flapped atop the tent's canopy. Wasn't Brimir a founder? Someone like Christianity's Jesus, Islam's Mohammad, or Buddhism's Śākyamuni? Essentially some incredible person! While thinking, Saito entered. He's living in this kind of run-down place? Is this really Brimir himself?

	The furniture inside was simple; crude. A thatch bed was placed further inside. A carpet that resembled Middle-Eastern carpets covered the ground.		The furniture inside was simple; crude. A thatch bed was placed further inside. A carpet that resembled Middle-Eastern carpets covered the ground.
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	“So it's like that.”		“So it's like that.”

	Brimir took ~~ahold~~ of Saito's left hand.		Brimir took a hold of Saito's left hand.

	That's why I engraved this inscription on her. Gandalfr. In our old language, it means 'the lowly person who controls magic.'		That's why I engraved this inscription on her. Gandalfr. In our old language, it means 'the lowly person who controls magic.'
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	Saito began to realize how serious history was. A Gandalfr was 'the lowly person who controls magic.' And the Gandalfr in this era was an elf. He just felt that all of that was a bit hard to believe.		Saito began to realize how serious history was. A Gandalfr was 'the lowly person who controls magic.' And the Gandalfr in this era was an elf. He just felt that all of that was a bit hard to believe.

	After having stared at Sasha for the whole time........he felt reality crack, as though he was seeing his own ancestors. Just some kind of ~~undescribeable~~ feeling.		After having stared at Sasha for the whole time........he felt reality crack, as though he was seeing his own ancestors. Just some kind of indescribable feeling.

	“Why didn't you use magic during that time?”		“Why didn't you use magic during that time?”
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	“Coming already? That was quick. You've already found this place, haven't you?”		“Coming already? That was quick. You've already found this place, haven't you?”

	Then, he whisked away what Lauren had ~~broguht~~ and ran outside the tent.		Then, he whisked away what Lauren had brought and ran outside the tent.

	“What is going on?” Saito was bewildered.		“What is going on?” Saito was bewildered.
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	Actually, it would be more accurate to say that it was a scene that would be difficult to describe with 'army'. The number of people involved was unknown. Four hundred metres to the front, there were several organized armies.		Actually, it would be more accurate to say that it was a scene that would be difficult to describe with 'army'. The number of people involved was unknown. Four hundred metres to the front, there were several organized armies.

	At the front were ~~calvaries~~. They wore frightening horned helmets and ~~chainmail~~. Following were troops on feet. Holding four meter long spears, similar to model corps, they stood there motionlessly.		At the front were cavalry. They wore frightening horned helmets and chain mail. Following were troops on feet. Holding four meter long spears, similar to model corps, they stood there motionlessly.

	“......That's the Valiag?”		“......That's the Valiag?”
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	“So it's like this? Really, why must the innocent me face these kinds of enemies.......”		“So it's like this? Really, why must the innocent me face these kinds of enemies.......”

	While Saito was complaining, Sasha gripped the gun in her hands tightly, never taking her eyes off the ~~enenmy~~.		While Saito was complaining, Sasha gripped the gun in her hands tightly, never taking her eyes off the enemy.

	“Aren't they all fully armed.....just what should we do?”		“Aren't they all fully armed.....just what should we do?”
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	Even if he himself said they did not consent to it, the fight for control over his master's intentions continued. Is this a Gandalfr's karma?		Even if he himself said they did not consent to it, the fight for control over his master's intentions continued. Is this a Gandalfr's karma?

	While thinking about how the situation looks, facing ~~Brimi~~'r back, Saito asked.		While thinking about how the situation looks, facing Brimir's back, Saito asked.

	“Brimir-san.”		“Brimir-san.”
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	“We will win. Sooner or later, we will win for sure. “		“We will win. Sooner or later, we will win for sure. “

	If this was ~~truely~~ the legendary Brimir......after this, he would go to war with the elves for an unknown reason. In the middle of this, he will then pass away.		If this was truly the legendary Brimir......after this, he would go to war with the elves for an unknown reason. In the middle of this, he will then pass away.

	This kind of person had unexpectedly turned an elf into a familiar. How ironic. Of course, that cannot be told to Brimir.		This kind of person had unexpectedly turned an elf into a familiar. How ironic. Of course, that cannot be told to Brimir.

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	As though he was mumbling to himself, Brimir said,		As though he was mumbling to himself, Brimir said,

	“Humans would fight for recognition. But the me who is recognized hardly does anything for our clan; I lack the power to confront them. However.......the Gods have not abandoned us. I've been granted this unfathomable, strong power,” Brimir ended with a strong ~~tones~~.		“Humans would fight for recognition. But the me who is recognized hardly does anything for our clan; I lack the power to confront them. However.......the Gods have not abandoned us. I've been granted this unfathomable, strong power,” Brimir ended with a strong tone.

	“We will win. Sooner or later, we will win for sure. “		“We will win. Sooner or later, we will win for sure. “

	If someone truly listened to Brimir's words......then fight against ~~with~~ elves without understanding why. From then on, he'll escape the land of the living. <!--I'm not too sure about this phrase. The text that I translated from seemed a bit odd. I would love it if someone could check this.-->		If someone truly listened to Brimir's words......then fight against the elves without understanding why. From then on, he'll escape the land of the living. <!--I'm not too sure about this phrase. The text that I translated from seemed a bit odd. I would love it if someone could check this.-->

	This kind of person had unexpectedly turned an elf into a familiar. How ironic. Of course, that cannot be told to Brimir.		This kind of person had unexpectedly turned an elf into a familiar. How ironic. Of course, that cannot be told to Brimir.
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	Brimir once again chanted a spell. A gigantic hinged door appeared before their eyes. An "eruption" also formed to open the gigantic hinged door. This man was worthy of being called the “Founder”. His magic powers are unimaginably strong.		Brimir once again chanted a spell. A gigantic hinged door appeared before their eyes. An "eruption" also formed to open the gigantic hinged door. This man was worthy of being called the “Founder”. His magic powers are unimaginably strong.

	…...But looking at back at when he met Sasha, he hadn't entered a “different world.” From the looks of that, perhaps a lot of will power was needed		…...But looking back at when he met Sasha, he hadn't entered a “different world.” From the looks of that, perhaps a lot of will power was needed

	Freely opening a “door” leading to a “different world” would require some time, wouldn't it?		Freely opening a “door” leading to a “different world” would require some time, wouldn't it?
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	The women and children were absorbed into the door. This gigantic door led to some other place. A place in this world where the enemies would not find them.		The women and children were absorbed into the door. This gigantic door led to some other place. A place in this world where the enemies would not find them.

	They avoid the enemies' assaults numerous times like this while constantly fleeing. On a land called ~~“Halkaginia”~~, they are referred to as nobles. Probably only after a lot of history.		They avoid the enemies' assaults numerous times like this while constantly fleeing. On a land called “Halkeginia”, they are referred to as nobles. Probably only after a lot of history.

	The men have also disappeared through the door. It was finally Saito and Sasha's turn.		The men have also disappeared through the door. It was finally Saito and Sasha's turn.