Zero no Tsukaima:Volume14 Chapter8 - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 17:07, 30 December 2018

2018-12-30T17:07:01Z

Arcorann: Measurement fixes; Bella -> Verdandi, Myozunitonirun -> Myoznitnirn

2016-06-14T02:54:08Z

Measurement fixes; Bella -> Verdandi, Myozunitonirun -> Myoznitnirn

115.70.114.118: NFI how Japanese>Chinese>English created the ridiculous name 'golomonta'. Having read the raws, unquestionably supposed to be Jörmungandr (ヨルマンガンド, yorumangando). Therefore have revised all of Volume 14 to reflect this.

2013-05-29T06:05:17Z

NFI how Japanese>Chinese>English created the ridiculous name 'golomonta'. Having read the raws, unquestionably supposed to be Jörmungandr (ヨルマンガンド, yorumangando). Therefore have revised all of Volume 14 to reflect this.

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205.208.7.103 at 00:41, 3 December 2012

2012-12-03T00:41:44Z

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	Sheffield was like an anxious little girl in love, seeping out happy cries. ''That young teen controlling the copper golems.... wasn't he one of those at Albion, along with that naïve Tristain girl? If that's the case, the direction where they're escaping must lead to that Tristain girl as well, right?''		Sheffield was like an anxious little girl in love, seeping out happy cries. ''That young teen controlling the copper golems.... wasn't he one of those at Albion, along with that naïve Tristain girl? If that's the case, the direction where they're escaping must lead to that Tristain girl as well, right?''

	''Most likely, that arrogant ~~Gandalfr~~ will there too, protecting her. This is not a time to attack from the shadows. ''		''Most likely, that arrogant Gandálfr will there too, protecting her. This is not a time to attack from the shadows. ''

	"I will – including you little girl – kill of tens of thousands of army troops. That ~~Gandalftr~~ kid may have stopped an army of 70,000.... but if it were me, the enemy would have been simply crushed like ants. "		"I will – including you little girl – kill of tens of thousands of army troops. That Gandálftr kid may have stopped an army of 70,000.... but if it were me, the enemy would have been simply crushed like ants. "

	The Golomontas ran as if they were flying. They would never lose to any type of enemy, unless they were fighting themselves.		The Golomontas ran as if they were flying. They would never lose to any type of enemy, unless they were fighting themselves.
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	Sheffield quickly realized that there was only one existence capable of achieving that.		Sheffield quickly realized that there was only one existence capable of achieving that.

	"So you finally appeared. How interesting! Let us end it here and now, ~~Gandalfr~~."		"So you finally appeared. How interesting! Let us end it here and now, Gandálfr."

	The Panzer roared strongly and charged toward the Canyon's entrance, pushing soil around its sides. There gathered Romalian soldiers and generals.		The Panzer roared strongly and charged toward the Canyon's entrance, pushing soil around its sides. There gathered Romalian soldiers and generals.
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	Saito repeated this retreating attack numerous times.		Saito repeated this retreating attack numerous times.

	Golomontas were no different from sitting ducks, called to death one by one by the Panzer. Because of the sudden appearance of ~~Gandalfr~~, a hot-headed Sheffield lost her senses and actually ordered the entire army to charge forward.		Golomontas were no different from sitting ducks, called to death one by one by the Panzer. Because of the sudden appearance of Gandálfr, a hot-headed Sheffield lost her senses and actually ordered the entire army to charge forward.

	Apparently, Sheffield had no idea what a "tank" was.		Apparently, Sheffield had no idea what a "tank" was.

180.149.49.227 at 08:11, 3 July 2012

2012-07-03T08:11:37Z

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	''How did I do it? How did I always emerge victorious then?''		''How did I do it? How did I always emerge victorious then?''

	"Where did ~~you~~ familiar run off to? That kid always sticks to you like a faithful watchdog, shielding you. Did he leave you out of despair?"		"Where did your familiar run off to? That kid always sticks to you like a faithful watchdog, shielding you. Did he leave you out of despair?"

	''Watchdog? ''		''Watchdog? ''

Vaelis at 10:23, 19 April 2012

2012-04-19T10:23:11Z

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	==Chapter 8: The Steel Tiger==		===Chapter 8: The Steel Tiger===

	"Those guys... taking their time so slowly... what are they doing?!"		"Those guys... taking their time so slowly... what are they doing?!"

Vaelis at 10:20, 19 April 2012

2012-04-19T10:20:57Z

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	==The Steel Tiger==		==Chapter 8: The Steel Tiger==


	"Those guys... taking their time so slowly... what are they doing?!"		"Those guys... taking their time so slowly... what are they doing?!"

Neojimmy6: Totally revamped this, corrected, made it better basically. You're welcome. :D

2012-03-24T02:50:18Z

Totally revamped this, corrected, made it better basically. You're welcome. :D

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148.87.19.194 at 19:04, 26 January 2012

2012-01-26T19:04:30Z

Fox350z: just fixed some spelling

2012-01-15T04:43:00Z

just fixed some spelling

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	She waited for the ship to sail just a bit closer.		She waited for the ship to sail just a bit closer.

	When the enemy ship was around a ~~few~~ hundred ~~meters~~ above ground, Sheffield ordered two Jörmungandr to join hands and crouch.		When the enemy ship was around a hundred mails above ground, Sheffield ordered two Jörmungandr to join hands and crouch.

	Another Jörmungandr stepped on their hands, and the two flung him up into the air.		Another Jörmungandr stepped on their hands, and the two flung him up into the air.
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	Reinard was right on target. The armored golems, using their fingerlike nails, stabbed their chubby fingers into the strong walls and started climbing. They looked like they planned to travel along the mountain range and attack from the army's side.		Reinard was right on target. The armored golems, using their fingerlike nails, stabbed their chubby fingers into the strong walls and started climbing. They looked like they planned to travel along the mountain range and attack from the army's side.

	"The cliffs are as tall ~~as 200 meters~~! These things really plan to climb up?"		"The cliffs are over 200 mails tall! These things really plan to climb up?"

	"Looks like they're serious. And with such hand coordination.... they look just like acrobats at the circus."		"Looks like they're serious. And with such hand coordination.... they look just like acrobats at the circus."
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	"It looks like we have no choice. Better draw their attention now."		"It looks like we have no choice. Better draw their attention now."

	Guiche kissed ~~Bella~~ beside him. Because he looked so serious, the teens all covered their dried mouths. Kissing a mole wasn’t really a romantic scene at all.		Guiche kissed Verdandi beside him. Because he looked so serious, the teens all covered their dried mouths. Kissing a mole wasn’t really a romantic scene at all.

	"If I unfortunately die, ~~Bella~~, take this to Montmorency. Do you get it?"		"If I unfortunately die, Verdandi, take this to Montmorency. Do you get it?"

	Cutting off a part of his hair, Guiche handed it to ~~Bella~~. Like saying "no, no", ~~Bella~~ shook her head with watery eyes.		Cutting off a part of his hair, Guiche handed it to Verdandi. Like saying "no, no", Verdandi shook her head with watery eyes.

	"Leave me smiling. I am a noble."		"Leave me smiling. I am a noble."
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	''Most likely, that arrogant Gandálfr will there too, protecting her. This is not a time to attack from the shadows. ''		''Most likely, that arrogant Gandálfr will there too, protecting her. This is not a time to attack from the shadows. ''

	"I will – including you little girl – kill of tens of thousands of army troops. That ~~Gandálftr~~ kid may have stopped an army of 70,000.... but if it were me, the enemy would have been simply crushed like ants. "		"I will – including you little girl – kill of tens of thousands of army troops. That Gandálfr kid may have stopped an army of 70,000.... but if it were me, the enemy would have been simply crushed like ants. "

	The Jörmungandr ran as if they were flying. They would never lose to any type of enemy, unless they were fighting themselves.		The Jörmungandr ran as if they were flying. They would never lose to any type of enemy, unless they were fighting themselves.
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	From that point onwards, Sheffield fueled on jealousy secretly.		From that point onwards, Sheffield fueled on jealousy secretly.

	The inscription of "~~Myozunitonirun~~" on her forehead emitted an eye piercing blue light.		The inscription of "Myoznitnirn" on her forehead emitted an eye piercing blue light.

	"This time, I'll definitely let you die without your limbs, your ashes scattered across Halkeginia."		"This time, I'll definitely let you die without your limbs, your ashes scattered across Halkeginia."
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	''Then... Joseph would also.... with me....''		''Then... Joseph would also.... with me....''

	Sheffield's lips trembled, mesmerized with her own imagination. The Mind of God ~~Myozunitonirun~~ closed the distance between her and the Ondine knights little by little.		Sheffield's lips trembled, mesmerized with her own imagination. The Mind of God Myoznitnirn closed the distance between her and the Ondine knights little by little.

	"It's already been an hour.... what have the kids been doing? Did they escape from fear?"		"It's already been an hour.... what have the kids been doing? Did they escape from fear?"
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	"It looks like it's tuned up too low."		"It looks like it's tuned up too low."

	Saito declared while looking through multiple triangular shaped scopes. He originally thought that the Jörmungandr's width was around 6 ~~meters~~... but seems like 8 ~~meters~~ was the correct answer.		Saito declared while looking through multiple triangular shaped scopes. He originally thought that the Jörmungandr's width was around 6 mails... but seems like 8 mails was the correct answer.

	Miscalculating the enemy's radius, the shell hit somewhat lower than where the scope really aimed at.		Miscalculating the enemy's radius, the shell hit somewhat lower than where the scope really aimed at.
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	The armor of the Jörmungandr were originally designed to withstand the maximal magical damage possible. Nevertheless, being capable of escaping harmlessly from the most powerful attacks has its own limits.		The armor of the Jörmungandr were originally designed to withstand the maximal magical damage possible. Nevertheless, being capable of escaping harmlessly from the most powerful attacks has its own limits.

	The momentum of an 88 millimeter shell, if converted into Halkeginian units, meant that at 2000 ~~meters~~ away, it was able of piercing an 84 millimeter armor plate like cake. An armor thick enough to endure this shell has still yet to exist in this world.		The momentum of an 88 millimeter shell, if converted into Halkeginian units, meant that at 2000 mails away, it was able of piercing an 84 millimeter armor plate like cake. An armor thick enough to endure this shell has still yet to exist in this world.

	Shells capable of piercing through an armor of that size were not possible in this world. The shells for the Panzer, to everyone’s surprise, were in fact capable of doing so.		Shells capable of piercing through an armor of that size were not possible in this world. The shells for the Panzer, to everyone’s surprise, were in fact capable of doing so.

	Traveling at a speed of ~~700~~ meters per second, the 88 millimeter shell instantly demolished the Jörmungandr fallen to ground, cutting through the armor that caused nobles so much trouble, and exploding from within.		Traveling at a speed of over 750 meters per second, the 88 millimeter shell instantly demolished the Jörmungandr fallen to ground, cutting through the armor that caused nobles so much trouble, and exploding from within.

	The armor of the dead Jörmungandr expanded rapidly and blew to smithereens.		The armor of the dead Jörmungandr expanded rapidly and blew to smithereens.
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	Buzzing through the headphones, cheers were heard. It was Colbert, who was on the controller's seat. On the other side, Kirche exclaimed		Buzzing through the headphones, cheers were heard. It was Colbert, who was on the controller's seat. On the other side, Kirche exclaimed

	"Incredible... that must've been a distance of 2 ~~miles~~, yet the shell still hit so accurately!"		"Incredible... that must've been a distance of 2 leagues, yet the shell still hit so accurately!"

	What should have been asked was why a Panzer would appear here...		What should have been asked was why a Panzer would appear here...
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	Sheffield, seeing through her monocle, confirmed the massive wreck those Jörmungandr caused when being destroyed.		Sheffield, seeing through her monocle, confirmed the massive wreck those Jörmungandr caused when being destroyed.

	"From a distance of 2 ~~miles~~, penetrating the armor of Jörmungandr......?"		"From a distance of 2 leagues, penetrating the armor of Jörmungandr......?"

	''Unbelievable. ''		''Unbelievable. ''
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	Skidding across the ground, the Panzer spat dust in the air, and finally halted.		Skidding across the ground, the Panzer spat dust in the air, and finally halted.

	The distance was about 1000 meters.		The distance was about 1000 meters. <!-- 距離は千。 missing a line here 直接照準でも問題ないと、左手のルーンが教えてくれる。-->

	From the triangular scope, the Jörmungandr's distinct silhouette was revealed. With Halkeginia's technology, making a periscope this powerful and precise was absolutely impossible.		From the triangular scope, the Jörmungandr's distinct silhouette was revealed. With Halkeginia's technology, making a periscope this powerful and precise was absolutely impossible.

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	Inn street of Tiger's Highway.... in this emptied place, Sheffield ordered the '''Golomontas (''' to be on alert.		Inn street of Tiger's Highway.... in this emptied place, Sheffield ordered the '''Golomontas (''' to be on alert.

	She put the light blue monocle on in front of her eye. It's a type of magic ~~tools~~. Every ~~Yolomonta~~'s vision were all shown here. Through this, Sheffield can manipulate 10 Golomontas as swift as using her arms.		She put the light blue monocle on in front of her eye. It's a type of magic tool. Every Golomonta's vision were all shown here. Through this, Sheffield can manipulate 10 Golomontas as swift as using her arms.

	After landing, it has already been an hour. Meanwhile, Romalia put up quite a bit of a fight, and all her ammo are exhausted.		After landing, it has already been an hour. Meanwhile, Romalia put up quite a bit of a fight, and all her ammo are exhausted.
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	If attacks are continuous, "reflection" will fail eventually.		If attacks are continuous, "reflection" will fail eventually.

	To cease the firing of enemy guns and magic, long ranged ~~weaponrys~~ are definitely needed.		To cease the firing of enemy guns and magic, long ranged weaponry are definitely needed.

	In the case of ammo exhaustion, resupplies are supposed to be parachuted down the ships.		In the case of ammo exhaustion, resupplies are supposed to be parachuted down the ships.
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	If the supplies don't come, that would be quite a bit of a trouble.		If the supplies don't come, that would be quite a bit of a trouble.

	Through the elves's assistance, the manufactured magical supplies - power source for Golomontas, is the basic of magic.... in other words, the "wind rocks". To swiftly swing their beefy armored arms, requires large amounts of wind rocks. If the wind rocks are used up, Golomontas can hardly move an inch.		Through the elves' assistance, the manufactured magical supplies - power source for Golomontas, is the basic of magic.... in other words, the "wind rocks". To swiftly swing their beefy armored arms, requires large amounts of wind rocks. If the wind rocks are used up, Golomontas can hardly move an inch.

	So, if this continues, no matter how powerful these armored golems are, they will not escape the fate of being a big lump of metal. After an intense battle with the separated enemy army, the consumption of wind rocks were sky high. Though Romalia armies suffered great losses themselves as well, this was nothing to be happy about.		So, if this continues, no matter how powerful these armored golems are, they will not escape the fate of being a big lump of metal. After an intense battle with the separated enemy army, the consumption of wind rocks were sky high. Though Romalia armies suffered great losses themselves as well, this was nothing to be happy about.
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	"Idiots! We're down here!"		"Idiots! We're down here!"

	Guiche kept trembling with fear, yet never stopped yelling at them. Two Golomontas ~~slided~~ down swiftly, firing their big guns.		Guiche kept trembling with fear, yet never stopped yelling at them. Two Golomontas slid down swiftly, firing their big guns.

	"Wind magic"		"Wind magic"
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	"I finally found you"		"I finally found you"

	Sheffield was like a anxious little girl in love, seeping out happy cries. That young teen controlling copper golems.... wasn't he part of the ones at Albion, with that naïve ~~Tristing~~ girl? If that's the case, the direction they are escaping must lead to that ~~Tristing~~ girl as well?		Sheffield was like a anxious little girl in love, seeping out happy cries. That young teen controlling copper golems.... wasn't he part of the ones at Albion, with that naïve Tristain girl? If that's the case, the direction they are escaping must lead to that Tristain girl as well?

	Most likely, that arrogant Gandalfr would be there as well. This is no time to attack from the shadows.		Most likely, that arrogant Gandalfr would be there as well. This is no time to attack from the shadows.
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	''Why would I having the greatest power of familiar.... always return home in defeat''		''Why would I having the greatest power of familiar.... always return home in defeat''

	In Albion, at ~~Tristan~~, that ~~Tristan~~ girl and her familiar made her fail so many times.		In Albion, at Tristain, that Tristain girl and her familiar made her fail so many times.

	''Is it the difference between couples''		''Is it the difference between couples''
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	The inscription of "Myozunitonirun" on her forehead emitted an eye piercing blue light.		The inscription of "Myozunitonirun" on her forehead emitted an eye piercing blue light.

	"This time, I will definitely let you die without your limbs, your ashes scattered across ~~Halkenia~~"		"This time, I will definitely let you die without your limbs, your ashes scattered across Halkeginia"

	As events played out, Sheffield no longer cared about whether or not she can torch the whole Romalia. All she wants is to rip those two... Saito and Louise apart on this world.		As events played out, Sheffield no longer cared about whether or not she can torch the whole Romalia. All she wants is to rip those two... Saito and Louise apart on this world.
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	On one Golomonta's upper body, something shaped like a mouth opened up. Sheffield's voice boomed loudly from inside.		On one Golomonta's upper body, something shaped like a mouth opened up. Sheffield's voice boomed loudly from inside.

	"Long time no see! Void user of ~~Tristing~~. I have been looking forward to this conversation"		"Long time no see! Void user of Tristain. I have been looking forward to this conversation"

	"Myozunitonirun!"		"Myozunitonirun!"
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	"....who?"		"....who?"

	~~Everytime~~ this name pops out, her heart darkens, tormenting the crack in her heart, as if widening even more.		Every time this name pops out, her heart darkens, tormenting the crack in her heart, as if widening even more.

	While searching for a light in pitch black, suddenly she understood everyone's feelings.		While searching for a light in pitch black, suddenly she understood everyone's feelings.
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	Though says to be a magic protection on the armor, the armor was originally proposed through testing with the maximal magical damage possible. The features of being capable of escaping harmless from the most powerful attacks, comes also with its limits.		Though says to be a magic protection on the armor, the armor was originally proposed through testing with the maximal magical damage possible. The features of being capable of escaping harmless from the most powerful attacks, comes also with its limits.

	The momentum of an 88 millimeter shell, changed into ~~Halkenian~~ units, means that at 2000 meters away, it pierces a 84 millimeter armor plate like cake. Although, an armor this thick has still yet to exist in this world.		The momentum of an 88 millimeter shell, changed into Halkeginian units, means that at 2000 meters away, it pierces a 84 millimeter armor plate like cake. Although, an armor this thick has still yet to exist in this world.

	Capable of piercing through armor of that size, the shells for Panzer, to everyone's surprise, exists.		Capable of piercing through armor of that size, the shells for Panzer, to everyone's surprise, exists.
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	"Thanks for your help! Destroying that devil like armored Golem....! Please inform me of your team name!"		"Thanks for your help! Destroying that devil like armored Golem....! Please inform me of your team name!"

	"Ondine Water Spirit Knights of ~~Tristing~~!"		"Ondine Water Spirit Knights of Tristain!"

	"Understood! There is a thing I wish to ask of you! Hoisting a flag affects morale! Please hoist this flag on top!"		"Understood! There is a thing I wish to ask of you! Hoisting a flag affects morale! Please hoist this flag on top!"
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	The knight who handed Saito his flag, cried out to his own army		The knight who handed Saito his flag, cried out to his own army

	"Everyone! Attention! The great army from ~~Tristing~~, has joined us in our Crusade! Do not fear! We have the protection of our ancestors!"		"Everyone! Attention! The great army from Tristain, has joined us in our Crusade! Do not fear! We have the protection of our ancestors!"

	Still, the one fighting with the enemy is me.... Saito muttered to himself.		Still, the one fighting with the enemy is me.... Saito muttered to himself.
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	The distance is 1000 meters.		The distance is 1000 meters.

	From the triangular scope, revealed Golomonta's distinct silhouette. With ~~Halkenia~~'s technologies, making this kind of periscopes is far from impossible.		From the triangular scope, revealed Golomonta's distinct silhouette. With Halkeginia's technologies, making this kind of periscopes is far from impossible.

	The Golomontas turned their cannons towards the Panzer.		The Golomontas turned their cannons towards the Panzer.