Zero no Tsukaima:Volume15 Chapter3 - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 05:26, 2 August 2019

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70.79.148.215 at 19:25, 1 June 2013

2013-06-01T19:25:08Z

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	Tiffania sat down on the bed next to Louise's side.		Tiffania sat down on the bed next to Louise's side.

	"Seems like it has became very ~~'''XXXX'''~~", Tiffania said uncomfortably.		"Seems like it has became very serious", Tiffania said uncomfortably.

	~~:(Sorry, I don't understand the chinese version here myself so until another translator comes by, we'll have to leave it like that)~~		"Really, being so relaxed even under these situations."

	"~~Seriously~~, being so ~~lax~~ even under these situations."

	"So-sorry."		"So-sorry."

Wolfpup: /* Chapter 3: A Shaken Mind */

2013-02-01T01:58:46Z

Chapter 3: A Shaken Mind

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	"L-lewd fantasties?"		"L-lewd fantasties?"

	Louise lifted Tiffania's hat, and started whispering close to her pointy ears.<		Louise lifted Tiffania's hat, and started whispering close to her pointy ears.

	"......Court- In the middle of the courtyard!?"		"......Court- In the middle of the courtyard!?"

Rizo536 at 01:30, 1 February 2013

2013-02-01T01:30:43Z

78.40.239.4: /* Chapter 3: A Shaken Mind */

2012-10-17T11:57:33Z

Chapter 3: A Shaken Mind

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	Picturing the sight of a mere river stopping the progress of the two armies sent a shiver down Louise's spine.		Picturing the sight of a mere river stopping the progress of the two armies sent a shiver down Louise's spine.

	Joseph may be an terror that cannot be left ignored, but the only choice does not lie with an act such as war. The more Louise ponders on the subject, the more this doesn't feels right.		Joseph may be a terror that cannot be left ignored, but the only choice does not lie with an act such as war. The more Louise ponders on the subject, the more this doesn't feels right.

	"....Sorry."		"....Sorry."
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	"L-lewd fantasties?"		"L-lewd fantasties?"

	Louise ~~took off Henrietta~~'s hat, and started whispering close to her pointy ears.		Louise lifted Tiffania's hat, and started whispering close to her pointy ears.<!--a random fan: i understand translations and edits aren't easy, plus grammar makes it tricky, but at-least get the right name:changed henrietta to tiffania-->

	"......Court- In the middle of the courtyard!?"		"......Court- In the middle of the courtyard!?"

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2012-08-08T08:23:24Z

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65.190.65.3 at 08:17, 8 August 2012

2012-08-08T08:17:59Z

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	Louise suddenly grabbed Tiffania's breasts and squeezed with force.		Louise suddenly grabbed Tiffania's breasts and squeezed with force.

	"It must by your breasts that made you say something impossible."		"It must ne your breasts that made you say something impossible."

	"Sorry! I thought too much, I thought too much! Louise was always angry!"		"Sorry! I thought too much, I thought too much! Louise was always angry!"

65.190.65.3 at 08:15, 8 August 2012

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	"Not true, I'm the cause for this. Being 'Aquelia's Saint' and to trigger a war was the condition for my choice to send Saito back...."		"Not true, I'm the cause for this. Being 'Aquelia's Saint' and to trigger a war was the condition for my choice to send Saito back...."

	With memories about Saito have been erased, Louise was not the same ~~salf~~ anymore, yet the fact that she had done everything consciously is undeniable, which is why she believes she does not deserve forgiveness either.		With memories about Saito have been erased, Louise was not the same self anymore, yet the fact that she had done everything consciously is undeniable, which is why she believes she does not deserve forgiveness either.

	"No matter what happens, we must stop this war. Only in that way may I bear the title of being 'Aquelia's Saint', it's what a real saint should do."		"No matter what happens, we must stop this war. Only in that way may I bear the title of being 'Aquelia's Saint', it's what a real saint should do."

Wildk: /* Chapter 3: A Shaken Mind */

2012-04-27T00:18:24Z

Chapter 3: A Shaken Mind

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	Alongside with surprise from the unexpected sender, Tabitha continued to read down the letter. On it, was all sorts of of jaw-dropping news:		Alongside with surprise from the unexpected sender, Tabitha continued to read down the letter. On it, was all sorts of of jaw-dropping news:

	News of rebellion against the despicable Gallian's conspiracy, failing to capture King Joseph by raiding the ~~'''Basentine~~ Palace ~~(爾薩爾提宮殿)'''~~, followed by news of the disassembly of the Knights of the Eastern Roses, him and a few surviving knights disguised as mercenaries joining the Gallian army.....		News of rebellion against the despicable Gallian's conspiracy, failing to capture King Joseph by raiding the Versailles Palace, followed by news of the disassembly of the Knights of the Eastern Roses, him and a few surviving knights disguised as mercenaries joining the Gallian army.....

	At this point, Tabitha bit her lower lips tightly.		At this point, Tabitha bit her lower lips tightly.

Vaelis at 10:24, 19 April 2012

2012-04-19T10:24:57Z

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	==A Shaken Mind==		===Chapter 3: A Shaken Mind===

	The night Saito displayed his skills at the sandbank....		The night Saito displayed his skills at the sandbank....

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	The night Saito displayed his skills at the sandbank....		The night Saito displayed his skills at the sandbank....

	Louise was in her bedroom awaiting Saito's return. Hugging around one main street, praised as a ~~heaven~~ for vacations, Carcassonne has countless hotels. At this moment, they all of the customers they were serving are almost entirely Romalia soldiers. As a special team from Tristain, Louise and the others were also assigned a hotel.		Louise was in her bedroom awaiting Saito's return. Hugging around one main street, praised as a heavenly spot for vacations, Carcassonne has countless hotels. At this moment, they all of the customers they were serving are almost entirely Romalia soldiers. As a special team from Tristain, Louise and the others were also assigned a hotel.

	After the previous event, Louise hurried back to the hotel. Despite her efforts in anxiously waiting, Saito just doesn't seem to appear.		After the previous event, Louise hurried back to the hotel. Despite her efforts in anxiously waiting, Saito just doesn't seem to appear.
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	"Saito must have had Saito's own concerns, must have proper thoughts and reasonings of a man, before deciding to do so."		"Saito must have had Saito's own concerns, must have proper thoughts and reasonings of a man, before deciding to do so."

	"Huh! That guy doesn't ~~even~~ have much ~~of a~~ thinking to talk about! Just as I was starting to believe some sense was surfacing in him, ~~yet~~ they're all these weird dreams, something 'three of us together', if those backyard things count as 'a man's thoughts and reasoning', he would be better off dead."		"Huh! That guy doesn't have much thinking to talk about! Just as I was starting to believe some sense was surfacing in him, they're all these weird dreams, something 'three of us together', if those backyard things count as 'a man's thoughts and reasoning', he would be better off dead."

	"Aren't you going a bit overboard."		"Aren't you going a bit overboard?"
	Tiffania scolded.		Tiffania scolded.

	"You can say that only because you have no idea what kind of lewd fantasties that dog ~~have~~ to torture me."		"You can say that only because you have no idea what kind of lewd fantasties that dog has to torture me."

	"L-lewd fantasties?"		"L-lewd fantasties?"

	Louise lifted Tiffania's hat, and started whispering close to her pointy ears.<~~!--a random fan: i understand translations and edits aren't easy, plus grammar makes it tricky, but at-least get the right name:changed henrietta to tiffania-->~~		Louise lifted Tiffania's hat, and started whispering close to her pointy ears.<

	"......Court- In the middle of the courtyard!?"		"......Court- In the middle of the courtyard!?"
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	Louise suddenly grabbed Tiffania's breasts and squeezed with force.		Louise suddenly grabbed Tiffania's breasts and squeezed with force.

	"It must ne your breasts that made you say something impossible."		"It must be your breasts that made you say something impossible."

	"Sorry! I thought too much, I thought too much! Louise was always angry!"		"Sorry! I thought too much, I thought too much! Louise was always angry!"