Zero no Tsukaima:Volume15 Chapter4 - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 12:21, 9 January 2020

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66.169.192.216 at 01:12, 14 February 2013

2013-02-14T01:12:35Z

66.169.192.216: /* Chapter 4: The Jewel of Fire */

2013-02-14T01:10:06Z

Chapter 4: The Jewel of Fire

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Rizo536 at 01:48, 1 February 2013

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	"Romalia taking us as an 'enemy of God', you really can't do anything about it. More unbelievable is our country allying with heretics..... feels like we're having a nightmare"		"Romalia is taking us as an 'enemy of God', you really can't do anything about it. More unbelievable is our country allying with heretics..... feels like we're having a nightmare"
	The knight sighed, after watching Joseph leave. He, was exactly one of those who saw Castlemont of the Eastern Roses' betrayal. The relatively older knight next to him, was also one of the first to be alerted after those events.		The knight sighed, after watching Joseph leave. He, was exactly one of those who saw Castlemont of the Eastern Roses' betrayal. The relatively older knight next to him, was also one of the first to be alerted after those events.

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	"Without land or title of a baron, people like me living only on our salary, what can we do after we leave the kingdom"		"Without land or title of a baron, people like me living only on our salary, what can we do after we leave the kingdom"

	That is, very true to most aristocrats of the Gallian army as well. ~~Such~~ giant events happening within their country's own borders, it is not possible to have no complaints at all. However, all of them rely on their country. Even if they were to join the crusade, there's no one in Romalia to guarantee their status. Those of lower status, may even be interrogated with torture for being a heretic.		That is, very true to most aristocrats of the Gallian army as well. With such giant events happening within their country's own borders, it is not possible to have no complaints at all. However, all of them rely on their country. Even if they were to join the crusade, there's no one in Romalia to guarantee their status. Those of lower status, may even be interrogated with torture for being a heretic.

	Similarly an aristocrat, but those with land and actual power, unlike military men like them, their standing are completely different.		Similarly an aristocrat, but those with land and actual power, unlike military men like them, their standing are completely different.
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	Joseph left Bidashal's side.		Joseph left Bidashal's side.

	"Make 2, 3 more of things like that. Relax~~, you~~ are not going to be the person who gets to use it. I am."		"Make 2, 3 more of things like that. Relax. You are not going to be the person who gets to use it.


			I am."

Acolyte at 08:41, 8 August 2012

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	"Why?"		"Why?"

	"Because despair has the ~~greated~~ effect when you're drowned in hope. Let those guys dreaming 'maybe bringing me down' die with their hopes. Really admire them for never being able to feel this amount of despair before."		"Because despair has the greatest effect when you're drowned in hope. Let those guys dreaming 'maybe bringing me down' die with their hopes. Really admire them for never being able to feel this amount of despair before."
	That was the thoughts from the deepest parts of his mind.		That was the thoughts from the deepest parts of his mind.

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	Bidashal winced his eyes, staring straight down at Joseph. A natural jewel of fire, is made from the natural energy underground. A level so deep that it would be impossible for humans to reach. To the elves, even if they were to dig such a hole, its gain would not be nearly enough to cover its losses.		Bidashal winced his eyes, staring straight down at Joseph. A natural jewel of fire, is made from the natural energy underground. A level so deep that it would be impossible for humans to reach. To the elves, even if they were to dig such a hole, its gain would not be nearly enough to cover its losses.

	To control the powers of the fire requires immense skill, definitely out of a human's capability, explaining the tiny amount of population in Halkenia with knowledge of its ~~existance~~. Unfortunately, right beside Joseph..... the mysterious lady called Myozunitonirun is part of the tiny population, and raised Joseph's interest in it.		To control the powers of the fire requires immense skill, definitely out of a human's capability, explaining the tiny amount of population in Halkenia with knowledge of its existence. Unfortunately, right beside Joseph..... the mysterious lady called Myozunitonirun is part of the tiny population, and raised Joseph's interest in it.

	"And, how do you plan to use it?"		"And, how do you plan to use it?"
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	"Using your 'void', you should be able to do it, no? Myozunitonirun?"		"Using your 'void', you should be able to do it, no? Myozunitonirun?"

	Myozunitonirun's ~~smilled~~ even more.		Myozunitonirun's smiled even more.
	"Affirmative"		"Affirmative"

	Hearing this, Bidashal's face lost ~~colour~~.		Hearing this, Bidashal's face lost color.
	"Using void magic? You? How, possible.... you?"		"Using void magic? You? How, possible.... you?"

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	"Great. Like those Romalia idiots, in addition now we have a even more horrible nightmare. Therefore you must protect me with all your power, follow my words"		"Great. Like those Romalia idiots, in addition now we have a even more horrible nightmare. Therefore you must protect me with all your power, follow my words"
	Joseph patted Bidashal's shoulders ~~sarcasticlly~~.		Joseph patted Bidashal's shoulders sarcastically.

	"Maybe, I will turn out to be the person who understands elves most."		"Maybe, I will turn out to be the person who understands elves most."

Acolyte at 08:39, 8 August 2012

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	Both their hands were shaking, not because of the fact that their lord can use magic to bury traitors together with the entire Grand Troyes to his pleasure.		Both their hands were shaking, not because of the fact that their lord can use magic to bury traitors together with the entire Grand Troyes to his pleasure.

	Instead, it's because...... for the purpose of suppressing the rebellion at the port of San Marin, the "research" going on brazenly in the middle of the palace and its ~~crutial~~ "researcher".		Instead, it's because...... for the purpose of suppressing the rebellion at the port of San Marin, the "research" going on brazenly in the middle of the palace and its crucial "researcher".

	Since the start of this research, which is going to experimented on San Marin, a rumor began to spread among the knights and army.		Since the start of this research, which is going to experimented on San Marin, a rumor began to spread among the knights and army.
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	The old knight asked his student with a soothing voice.		The old knight asked his student with a soothing voice.

	"If so, at least we won't be standing up against God and Founder. Compared to our founder, our ~~lard~~ seems to be much more interested to the elves in the church"		"If so, at least we won't be standing up against God and Founder. Compared to our founder, our lord seems to be much more interested to the elves in the church"

	"It's still not too late. Like the southern vassals, just go and join the crusade"		"It's still not too late. Like the southern vassals, just go and join the crusade"

Acolyte: Sentence didn't make sense. Attempting to make it sound sensible.

2012-08-08T08:35:18Z

Sentence didn't make sense. Attempting to make it sound sensible.

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	To prove themselves not "heretics", rich merchants all, acting on their own consciousness, transport carriage-full of gold and valuables to this church, the amount of "storage" representing the amount of devotion.		To prove themselves not "heretics", rich merchants all, acting on their own consciousness, transport carriage-full of gold and valuables to this church, the amount of "storage" representing the amount of devotion.

	~~Representing~~ plebeian class, the aristocracy and the court ~~Gallian~~, attempted seek a small hope of survival for this crumbling country, and became more and more lively with the start of each day.		Consisting of plebeian class, the aristocracy and the court, Gallians attempted seek a small hope of survival for this crumbling country, and became more and more lively with the start of each day.

	Yet, whenever these people are at the countryside of Lutece, at the place of Palace of Versailles...... Every glance at the ruins of the collapsed Grand Troyes courts, once containing beautiful clear sky blue walls, they can't help but feel the reality that all their work is for naught.		Yet, whenever these people are at the countryside of Lutece, at the place of Palace of Versailles...... Every glance at the ruins of the collapsed Grand Troyes courts, once containing beautiful clear sky blue walls, they can't help but feel the reality that all their work is for naught.

Acolyte: Fixing typos

2012-08-08T08:33:47Z

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67.173.218.145: Joseph misspelled as 'Josepf'

2012-05-07T18:54:42Z

Joseph misspelled as 'Josepf'

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	That chest, brought out warm memories beckoning to him.		That chest, brought out warm memories beckoning to him.

	Memories of childhood...... in the middle of the broad palace, a five-year-old '''Harold''' ''(Charlotte/Tabitha 's father)'' and the eight-year-old ~~Josepf~~ were playing a game of hide-and-seek.		Memories of childhood...... in the middle of the broad palace, a five-year-old '''Harold''' ''(Charlotte/Tabitha 's father)'' and the eight-year-old Joseph were playing a game of hide-and-seek.

	Joseph, hid in this place after turning the place upside-down with effort. This is a popular chest among the commoners. Although it may not seem to have enough size to fit in a person, the storage space has actually been expanded up to 3 times its original size through magic. It's a one-of-its-kind magical tool.		Joseph, hid in this place after turning the place upside-down with effort. This is a popular chest among the commoners. Although it may not seem to have enough size to fit in a person, the storage space has actually been expanded up to 3 times its original size through magic. It's a one-of-its-kind magical tool.

212.219.156.36: /* Chapter 4: The Jewel of Fire */

2012-04-30T17:00:18Z

Chapter 4: The Jewel of Fire

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	Joseph left Bidashal's side.		Joseph left Bidashal's side.

	"Make 2, 3 more of things like that. Relax, you ~~will~~ not be the person who gets use it. I ~~will~~."		"Make 2, 3 more of things like that. Relax, you are not going to be the person who gets to use it. I am."

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	"Father"		"Father"

	Walking with wide steps, was his own daughter, princess ~~Elisabeth~~. Long blue hair draped over her shoulders, a sign of royalty. Her face, which usually sported an ominous smile, had never been paler.		Walking with wide steps, was his own daughter, princess Isabella. Long blue hair draped over her shoulders, a sign of royalty. Her face, which usually sported an ominous smile, had never been paler.

	"What in the world happened? Hearing Romalia's announcement, I had to rush back immediately from my trip at Albion. And when I come back, the entire city is a mess! I also heard that half of the country has betrayed you."		"What in the world happened? Hearing Romalia's announcement, I had to rush back immediately from my trip at Albion. And when I come back, the entire city is a mess! I also heard that half of the country has betrayed you."
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	~~Elisabeth~~ was scared of her father's attitude, she discovered unexpectedly.		Isabella was scared of her father's attitude, she discovered unexpectedly.

	Until now, although she had once thought there was something weird about her father... today was her first day to actually experience the "other side" of her father.		Until now, although she had once thought there was something weird about her father... today was her first day to actually experience the "other side" of her father.

	~~Elisabeth~~, as far as her memories served, seldom talked with her father. After her mother passed away, the distance between them lengthened even more.		Isabella, as far as her memories served, seldom talked with her father. After her mother passed away, the distance between them lengthened even more.

	Before ~~Elisabeth~~ had a chance to find anything out of place, she had already grown up.		Before Isabella had a chance to find anything out of place, she had already grown up.

	Their status of royalty, as King and princess, was valued much more than as family.		Their status of royalty, as King and princess, was valued much more than as family.

	The growing ~~Elisabeth~~ was surrounded by tons of maids, butlers, playmates, so she never had much loneliness in her childhood.		The growing Isabella was surrounded by tons of maids, butlers, playmates, so she never had much loneliness in her childhood.

	Of course, once in a while, there was a desire to be with her family, but she would always comfort herself with the reason that "father is busy with his work."		Of course, once in a while, there was a desire to be with her family, but she would always comfort herself with the reason that "father is busy with his work."
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	So in the end, other than showing up for the public every now and then, they barely had any time to see each other.		So in the end, other than showing up for the public every now and then, they barely had any time to see each other.

	His attitude, the title of "incompetent king", rumors of murdering her uncle Harold.... these things had slowly turned unimportant to ~~Elisabeth~~. No matter what she desired, Joseph would always satisfy her needs.		His attitude, the title of "incompetent king", rumors of murdering her uncle Harold.... these things had slowly turned unimportant to Isabella. No matter what she desired, Joseph would always satisfy her needs.


	But now..... different from his usual, varying, difficult to approach attitude, facing him directly made ~~Elisabeth~~ tremble.		But now..... different from his usual, varying, difficult to approach attitude, facing him directly made Isabella tremble.

	Standing in front of her was a completely unfamiliar person.		Standing in front of her was a completely unfamiliar person.

	Even so, ~~Elisabeth~~ drew out her courage and cried out		Even so, Isabella drew out her courage and cried out
	"F-father, I do not understand at all! Isn't the country about to collapse! What would happen to me!"		"F-father, I do not understand at all! Isn't the country about to collapse! What would happen to me!"

	"Who knows. If you don't like it then leave this country."		"Who knows. If you don't like it then leave this country."

	Violently trembling, ~~Elisabeth~~'s teeth chattered loudly.		Violently trembling, Isabella's teeth chattered loudly.
	"....what are you thinking right now, father?"		"....what are you thinking right now, father?"

	"Disappear from my sight. Looking at you feels like staring at myself, urg."		"Disappear from my sight. Looking at you feels like staring at myself, urg."

	Unable to stand the frighteningly deep low voice's words, ~~Elisabeth~~ quickly dashed out of her father's bedroom.		Unable to stand the frighteningly deep low voice's words, Isabella quickly dashed out of her father's bedroom.

	In replacement, with completely black hair, Sheffield appeared.		In replacement, with completely black hair, Sheffield appeared.
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	Losing interest, Joseph turned back and looked forward again.		Losing interest, Joseph turned back and looked forward again.

	"Your highness, don't you love Miss ~~Elisabeth~~?"		"Your highness, don't you love Miss Isabella?"
	Remembering Joseph's attitude previously, Sheffield asked her master.		Remembering Joseph's attitude previously, Sheffield asked her master.

	"~~Elisabeth~~? How's could I. 'There is not a father in the world that doesn't love his daughter.' To me, this phrase is nothing but a praise for fathers. I don't see anything special between our relationship. After all, there are plenty of other parents in this world who don't love their children."		"Isabella? How's could I. 'There is not a father in the world that doesn't love his daughter.' To me, this phrase is nothing but a praise for fathers. I don't see anything special between our relationship. After all, there are plenty of other parents in this world who don't love their children."

	"Suppose I actually loved her...."		"Suppose I actually loved her...."