Zero no Tsukaima:Volume16 Chapter5 - Revision history

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2014-02-18T09:24:45Z

Chapter 5: Saito Chevalier De Hiraga Des Ornières

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	"What other people say or think has nothing to do with it! I do not care about that sort of thing!"		"What other people say or think has nothing to do with it! I do not care about that sort of thing!"

	"That’s not Louise." Kirche told her with her eyes half open.		"That’s not it Louise." Kirche told her with her eyes half open.

	"It's for Saito!"		"It's for Saito!"

2013-02-15T05:54:43Z

Chapter 5: Saito Chevalier De Hiraga Des Ornières

2013-02-09T20:38:10Z

Chapter 5: Saito Chevalier De Hiraga Des Ornières

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	- God ... this already seems like a noble procession. -Louise said sulkily.		- God ... this already seems like a noble procession. -Louise said sulkily.

	Land was given to Saito! So using that as an excuse, Guiche, leading the Undine boys (The Knights of the Holy Water Spirit) and Kirche, tired of waiting for Colbert, who had not yet arrived from Aquileia soon arrived first.		Land was given to Saito! So using that as an excuse, Guiche, leading the Undine boys (The Knights of the Holy Water Spirit) and Kirche, tired of waiting for Colbert, who had not yet arrived from Aquileia, soon arrived first.

	Siesta, of course loaded with a mountain of cleaning utensils, also joined. She was the first that, even without seeing the mansion, wanted to thoroughly inspect every corner of it.		Siesta, of course loaded with a mountain of cleaning utensils, also joined. She was the first that, even without seeing the mansion, wanted to thoroughly inspect every corner of it.

2013-02-09T20:37:31Z

Chapter 5: Saito Chevalier De Hiraga Des Ornières

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	- God ... this already seems like a noble procession. -Louise said sulkily.		- God ... this already seems like a noble procession. -Louise said sulkily.

	Land was given to Saito! So ~~putting~~ that as an excuse, ~~soon arrived first~~ Guiche, leading the Undine boys (The Knights of the Holy Water Spirit) and Kirche, tired of waiting for Colbert, who had not yet arrived from Aquileia.		Land was given to Saito! So using that as an excuse, Guiche, leading the Undine boys (The Knights of the Holy Water Spirit) and Kirche, tired of waiting for Colbert, who had not yet arrived from Aquileia soon arrived first.

	Siesta, of course loaded with a mountain of cleaning utensils, also joined. She was the first that, even without seeing the mansion, wanted to thoroughly inspect every corner of it.		Siesta, of course loaded with a mountain of cleaning utensils, also joined. She was the first that, even without seeing the mansion, wanted to thoroughly inspect every corner of it.

2013-02-01T01:35:47Z

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	Just when Saito thought that ... Saito briefly felt as if something pricked him in his chest. There was a moment when he thought "hee? That's impossible. The princess was sad, I just served to give her some comfort..."		Just when Saito thought that ... Saito briefly felt as if something pricked him in his chest. There was a moment when he thought "hee? That's impossible. The princess was sad, I just served to give her some comfort..."

	But this anxiety that pricked like a thorn, that ~~feelings~~ of unease, remained in Saito's chest.		But this anxiety that pricked like a thorn, that feeling of unease, remained in Saito's chest.

	What's happening to me? What is it that is worrying me? Then Saito shook his head.		What's happening to me? What is it that is worrying me? Then Saito shook his head.

2013-01-31T21:12:26Z

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	''But even if that time comes ... I can’t pull the life I lead here.''		''But even if that time comes ... I can’t pull the life I lead here.''

	That's what Saito thought, looking at his side Louise ~~sleeping~~ peacefully.		That's what Saito thought, looking at his side as Louise slept peacefully.

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

2013-01-31T21:09:49Z

Man, I forgot to log in. Ah well, you know who I am. - EastN3

2013-01-29T21:05:42Z

Just some more basic grammar fixes, making sentences flow, etc.

2013-01-29T20:33:29Z

Undo revision 223092 by EastN3 (talk)

2013-01-29T20:29:27Z