Zero no Tsukaima:Volume17 Chapter11 - Revision history

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	===Chapter 11 - Bonds===		===Chapter 11: Bonds===

	In the evening of that day... in the guest house.		In the evening of that day... in the guest house.

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	''Although I knew that this guy is not only attacking with magic, yet ...		''Although I knew that this guy is not only attacking with magic, yet ...

	As expected ... I could not get my heart to shiver.''		''As expected ... I could not get my heart to shiver.''

	In his previous battles, just hearing Louise recite her spells would give him great strength; but knowing how he lost her, nothing would give encouragement to his heart.		In his previous battles, just hearing Louise recite her spells would give him great strength; but knowing how he lost her, nothing would give encouragement to his heart.

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	It was over in an instant.		It was over in an instant.

	Although I knew that this guy is not only attacking with magic, yet ...		''Although I knew that this guy is not only attacking with magic, yet ...

	As ~~pictured~~ ... ''I could not get my heart to shiver.''		As expected ... I could not get my heart to shiver.''

	In his previous battles, just hearing Louise recite her spells would give him great strength; but knowing how he lost her, nothing would give encouragement to his heart.		In his previous battles, just hearing Louise recite her spells would give him great strength; but knowing how he lost her, nothing would give encouragement to his heart.

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	In the time the white smoke was beginning to clear ... Saito was speechless and shocked ...		In the time the white smoke was beginning to clear ... Saito was speechless and shocked ...

	“And you, what do you think you're doing?”[[File:ZnT17-241.jpg\|thumbnail~~\|“And you, what do you think you're doing?”~~]]		“And you, what do you think you're doing?”[[File:ZnT17-241.jpg\|thumbnail]]

	That pink blonde hair glowed with the light of the moon, with her wand in hand and raising her arm as she stretched her body, one that was standing before him was the figure of "a user of VOID".		That pink blonde hair glowed with the light of the moon, with her wand in hand and raising her arm as she stretched her body, one that was standing before him was the figure of "a user of VOID".

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	Listening to this the girl withdrew her hood, then in the light of the lamps the stirrings of her long blue hair were seen, then with a tone of impatience she said:		Listening to this the girl withdrew her hood, then in the light of the lamps the stirrings of her long blue hair were seen, then with a tone of impatience she said:

	“I introduce myself, my name is Isabella Martel, the commander of the special forces of the kingdom of Gallia, the ~~knighthood Chevalier~~ of North ~~Partel~~.”		“I introduce myself, my name is Isabella Martel, the commander of the special forces of the kingdom of Gallia, the Knights of North Parterre.”

	~~“North Chevalier Partel~~ you say?”		“Chevalier of North Parterre you say?”

	That was certainly the secret order of knights belonging to Tabitha, which dealt exclusively to do the dirty work of the kingdom of Gallia ...		That was certainly the secret order of knights belonging to Tabitha, which dealt exclusively to do the dirty work of the kingdom of Gallia ...
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	The man's face was the one with which he had faced in Cherphis, the gigantic man accompanying Bleu...		The man's face was the one with which he had faced in Cherphis, the gigantic man accompanying Bleu...

	“You, how this place brings back memories, you know, I used to get frequent long missions on this place, do not tell me that you also belong to Chevalier Do North ~~Partel~~?, Ha, as if that were possible ...”		“You, how this place brings back memories, you know, I used to get frequent long missions on this place, do not tell me that you also belong to Chevalier of North Parterre?, Ha, as if that were possible ...”

	“Why did you come here?” Saito asked this man ... Jack scratched his head.		“Why did you come here?” Saito asked this man ... Jack scratched his head.

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	Despite wanting to show his strength, Saito noticed the tremor in the tip of the katana he held.		Despite wanting to show his strength, Saito noticed the tremor in the tip of the katana he held.

	“Well, first I will tell you how much it. Really it’s a habit that I have, if I'm going to kill someone before, I told them the price paid for their head. To me, this is the best thing to do. Tell me, knowing it would be somewhat fulfilling, don't you think? So, the price they'll pay when we're done with your life is 140000 ECU! That's really a fortune, with that you could buy 3 or maybe 4 small castles. I never thought you could be a guy that was worth so much, ~~why take a pride man.~~”		“Well, first I will tell you how much it. Really it’s a habit that I have, if I'm going to kill someone before, I told them the price paid for their head. To me, this is the best thing to do. Tell me, knowing it would be somewhat fulfilling, don't you think? So, the price they'll pay when we're done with your life is 140000 ECU! That's really a fortune, with that you could buy 3 or maybe 4 small castles. I never thought you could be a guy that was worth so much, you should be proud!”

	You bastard, that's his way of making fun of me, probably at this time the only thing in his mind was to beat him.		''You bastard, that's his way of making fun of me,'' probably at this time the only thing in his mind was to beat him.

	“And tell me, you think you can do ~~the~~ work just by yourself?”		“And tell me, you think you can do that work just by yourself?”

	“I suppose, really I always ~~thought~~ from the first time we met, that I would be enough to kill you, not that I want to brag but I'm a lot more stronger than Duduu(Bleu). And so, now I really promise you this is your last time.”		“I suppose, really I always knew it from the first time we met, that I would be enough to kill you, not that I want to brag but I'm a lot more stronger than Duduu(Bleu). And so, now I really promise you this is your last time!”

	A cold sweat was flowing from his neck, Saito began to froze.		A cold sweat was flowing from his neck, Saito began to froze.
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	In truth no matter where he search he could not find an opening in his defense, the immense pressure exerted by his presence seemed to be winning the battle ...		In truth no matter where he search he could not find an opening in his defense, the immense pressure exerted by his presence seemed to be winning the battle ...

	“If you have any last will, ~~do not~~ hold it. Provided it is something you can write in this place, I’ll let put the will in ~~the~~ wall, but if you write something problematic I should delete it.”		“If you have any last will, don't hold it. Provided it is something you can write in this place, I’ll let put the will in that wall, but if you write something problematic I should delete it.”

	Wordlessly Saito lunged at him, in a single beat he was beside his opponent, then Saito started to sweep one of the legs of Jack.		Wordlessly Saito lunged at him, in a single beat he was beside his opponent, then Saito started to sweep one of the legs of Jack.
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	In the mind of Saito, Derflinger words resurfaced.		In the mind of Saito, Derflinger words resurfaced.

	''"Those guys have ~~previous resident~~ magic on their joints ..."''		''"Those guys have magic casted on their joints ..."''

	Saito could somehow deflect the stone with his katana, but in the next instant, Jack was already on it ready to connect a new attack.		Saito could somehow deflect the stone with his katana, but in the next instant, Jack was already on it ready to connect a new attack.
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	The impact made Saito drop his katana and sent him flying and crashed into the ground.		The impact made Saito drop his katana and sent him flying and crashed into the ground.

	“Yo, ~~fencer~~ you were a tough guy. “ Jack told Saito who was lying on the floor.		“Yo, swordsman you were a tough guy!“ Jack told Saito who was lying on the floor.

	Seeing his katana lying on the floor and completely out of reach, he felt helpless and all the strength left his body ...		Seeing his katana lying on the floor and completely out of reach, he felt helpless and all the strength left his body ...
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	Saito began to mourn, which provoked a great anger in Jack.		Saito began to mourn, which provoked a great anger in Jack.

	“Phew, ~~but that~~'s wrong ... Do you think to end the fight in tears? ~~damn~~ ... are you insulting me in our battle?”		“Phew, That's wrong!... Do you think to end the fight in tears? Damn ... are you insulting me in our battle?”

	“Louise ... Sorry ... I ...”		“Louise ... Sorry ... I ...”
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	Jack's face was sprouting with more and more veins, his anger was indescribable.		Jack's face was sprouting with more and more veins, his anger was indescribable.

	“Bastard ... Not only you dare to insult our fight by screaming, now you asking help from a woman ... you trash~~, how~~ you can you be so pathetic~~, you~~'re weak~~, you~~'re a coward~~, you~~'re a disappointment ...”		“Bastard ... Not only you dare to insult our fight by screaming, now you asking help from a woman ... you trash! How you can you be so pathetic? You're weak! You're a coward! You're a disappointment!...”

	Jack raised his wand and started to cast a spell, a large landmass rose from the ground and with a powerful "alchemy" it turned into a gunpowder.		Jack raised his wand and started to cast a spell, a large landmass rose from the ground and with a powerful "alchemy" it turned into a gunpowder.
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	Seeing this Saito try to run dragging himself, then Jack said Saito while launching the tremendous amount of gunpowder.		Seeing this Saito try to run dragging himself, then Jack said Saito while launching the tremendous amount of gunpowder.

	“You will not even leave the dust of what you were once!”		“You will not even leave the dust of what you were once! Ha!”

	It was at that moment.		It was at that moment.
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	“Louise ...”		“Louise ...”

	“You’re a pathetic familiar! if possible, I want to be accompanied by someone ~~good~~, so I can save the world.”		“You’re a pathetic familiar! If possible, I want to be accompanied by someone better, so I can save the world.”

	“Louise!”		“Louise!”
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	Then Louise picked up the katana of Saito, stop, then return it and say:		Then Louise picked up the katana of Saito, stop, then return it and say:

	“Hey you, really do not tell me you've lost to that man.”		“Hey you, really do not tell me you've lost to that man?”

	“Only with that ...? He's strong you know.”		“Only with that ...? He's strong you know.”
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	Anyway, There is something that I can use in a situation like this, since that device is essential to fulfill the dream of Demian-niisan, then ...		Anyway, There is something that I can use in a situation like this, since that device is essential to fulfill the dream of Demian-niisan, then ...

	~~“It~~ is very simple, only I have to exchange my life for more power.”		''It is very simple, I only have to exchange my life for more power.''

	Jack started to recite a spell, the earth began to emerge a lot of golems.		Jack started to recite a spell, the earth began to emerge a lot of golems.
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	But ... Upon hearing Louise's chant a mysterious feeling that I could do anything has invaded his senses, it was truly as if he was born with wings on his back, his mysterious movements were the expression of power flowing in his body.		But ... Upon hearing Louise's chant a mysterious feeling that I could do anything has invaded his senses, it was truly as if he was born with wings on his back, his mysterious movements were the expression of power flowing in his body.

	~~“What~~ happens? It seems as if they ~~had stopped~~!”		''What happens? It seems as if they were moving slowly!''

	Saito precisely cut each of those golems, then Saito pitched a war cry.		Saito precisely cut each of those golems, then Saito pitched a war cry.
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	The Void's power emanated stunningly and wrapped Louise's body.		The Void's power emanated stunningly and wrapped Louise's body.

	Jack’s spell was ~~complete~~.		Meanwhile, Jack’s spell was completed.

	After refining the power of his "Alchemy" the complex spell started run on the ground under his feet, holding him as epicenter, a sort of concentric circles were drawn so as to serve as a catalyst to increase the range and power of his alchemy.		After refining the power of his "Alchemy" the complex spell started run on the ground under his feet, holding him as epicenter, a sort of concentric circles were drawn so as to serve as a catalyst to increase the range and power of his alchemy.

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	The reason for calling to Saito was because she had recovered enough senses to speak to him.		The reason for calling to Saito was because she had recovered enough senses to speak to him.

	“... What happen to your meeting with Queen Charlotte?”		“...What happen to your meeting with Queen Charlotte?”

	Saito nodded and then explain what happened to Henrietta, as it was impossible to have a conversation with her ...		Saito nodded and then explain what happened to Henrietta, as it was impossible to have a conversation with her ...
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	Then Saito thought, ''if a Void user died, it would only be necessary that the void will be transferred to another family member, right...?		Then Saito thought, ''if a Void user died, it would only be necessary that the void will be transferred to another family member, right...?
	''		''
	Even for the Void, it is assumed that at some point a replacement will emerge ...		''Even for the Void, it is assumed that at some point a replacement will emerge...''

	While Saito was plunged in these thoughts suddenly he heard someone hit the window. Then Henrietta , because of the noise, quickly approached Saito while receiving a slight tremor in her body.		While Saito was plunged in these thoughts suddenly he heard someone hit the window. Then Henrietta , because of the noise, quickly approached Saito while receiving a slight tremor in her body.
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	“Who is it?” So he asked as his voice was echoing.		“Who is it?” So he asked as his voice was echoing.

	“...I have a delivery for Her Majesty Queen Henrietta, it is a message from my ~~teacher~~.”		“...I have a delivery for Her Majesty Queen Henrietta, it is a message from my master.”

	From her voice, apparently it was a young woman.		From her voice, apparently it was a young woman.
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	“But then who will be the one to sent this message? And why is he asking help from Tristain?”		“But then who will be the one to sent this message? And why is he asking help from Tristain?”

	“If I may, my ~~teacher~~ will be in greater willingness to answer your questions, then we have to hurry servant of the queen.”		“If I may, my master will be in greater willingness to answer your questions, then we have to hurry servant of the queen.”

	The situation was totally dubious, plus there are high chances that it was a trap, however, this was not the time to hesitate, certainly not seemed to have more options, Saito then glanced Henrietta.		The situation was totally dubious, plus there are high chances that it was a trap, however, this was not the time to hesitate, certainly not seemed to have more options, Saito then glanced Henrietta.
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	Chikasui then took a lamp that was in that place, then recite a very common spell. She had lit that lamp with magic. Having lit the place, they found themselves wondering…		Chikasui then took a lamp that was in that place, then recite a very common spell. She had lit that lamp with magic. Having lit the place, they found themselves wondering…

	“This way.”		“This way!”

	Chikasui unhesitatingly made her way into the labyrinthine drainage. She was so adept as if this labyrinth was just the streets of the city in which she lived.		Chikasui unhesitatingly made her way into the labyrinthine drainage. She was so adept as if this labyrinth was just the streets of the city in which she lived.
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	“Wait Chikasui! Please lead them to the exit.”		“Wait Chikasui! Please lead them to the exit.”

	“Oh, right.”		“Oh, right!”

	It was true that if they were left unattended they may likely lost their way on the drainage, however, what caused her to stop Saito in his attempt to leave, it seemed more evident in Isabella's face.		It was true that if they were left unattended they may likely lost their way on the drainage, however, what caused her to stop Saito in his attempt to leave, it seemed more evident in Isabella's face.
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	“Please give this information to Her Majesty.”		“Please give this information to Her Majesty.”

	“B-, but ...”		“B, but ...”

	“I am the only target of this man, am I not?” After saying that Jack said while nodding.		“I am the only target of this man, am I not?” After saying that Jack said while nodding.
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	He also recalled the words a few moments ago, and remembered that he was familiar with this place.		He also recalled the words a few moments ago, and remembered that he was familiar with this place.

	“Then, as I said, sir, We do not have a grudge against you ~~and the truth is that we were not~~ intended to follow you even abroad ... ~~although~~ as things turned out ~~okay for me~~. You see, they called us for an internal investigation, but I never imagined that I would be coming here ~~with~~ you! At ~~the~~ exact moment that I happened to ~~come~~ to the hideout, was the exact moment I met you. ~~I have luck~~ don’t you think?"		“Then, as I said, sir, I do not have a grudge against you nor am I intended to follow you even abroad ... however as things turned out to be in this way. You see, they called us for an internal investigation, but I never imagined that I would be coming here to see you! At this exact moment that I happened to go to the hideout, was the exact moment I met you. It's my lucky day, don’t you think?"

	''Damn, it doesn't even make sense to flee.''		''Damn, it doesn't even make sense to flee...''

	Due to the circumstances, all that was left to Saito was to fight, but no matter how much he tried to build up the courage to face ~~IJack~~, his body could not gather any strength. As if it were shudder, his arms and legs felt stiff.		Due to the circumstances, all that was left to Saito was to fight, but no matter how much he tried to build up the courage to face Jack, his body could not gather any strength. As if it were shudder, his arms and legs felt stiff.

	He was like when a toddler that could not contain the anxiety experienced in fighting for the first time.		He was like when a toddler that could not contain the anxiety experienced in fighting for the first time.
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	Jack laughed ...		Jack laughed ...

	“Is that so, because what good are you if who cannot even move out of that fear, it's no fun you know~~? well~~, I'm supposed to come here to kill you but ~~do not~~ blame me, since this is only a job, the truth is I'm ~~doing it because I~~ like it, ~~then~~ I promise I will raise a prayer for you when you die, so surrender!”		“Is that so, because what good are you if who cannot even move out of that fear, it's no fun you know! Well, I'm supposed to come here to kill you but don't blame me, since this is only a job, but the truth is I'm starting to like this! Very well, I promise I will raise a prayer for you when you die, so surrender!”

	Saito said, drawing his katana from his waist, then the rune on his left hand glow.		Saito said, drawing his katana from his waist, then the rune on his left hand glow.
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	“Hey hey! Hurry up and die! Finish talking already!”		“Hey hey! Hurry up and die! Finish talking already!”

	“Stop saying stupid things and get ready to fight.”		“Stop saying stupid things and get ready to fight!”

	Despite wanting to show his strength, Saito noticed the tremor in the tip of the katana he held.		Despite wanting to show his strength, Saito noticed the tremor in the tip of the katana he held.

	“Well, first I will tell you how much it~~, sir, really~~ it’s a habit that I have, if I'm going to kill someone before I ~~tell~~ them the price paid for their head~~, to~~ me, ~~that's really~~ the ~~only~~ thing ~~that has value, tell~~ me, knowing it would be ~~something liberating~~, ~~isn’t it~~? so, the price they pay when we're done with your life is 140000 ECU! ~~that~~'s really a fortune, with that you could buy 3 maybe 4 small castles. ~~Never~~ thought you could be a guy that was worth so much, why take a pride man.”		“Well, first I will tell you how much it. Really it’s a habit that I have, if I'm going to kill someone before, I told them the price paid for their head. To me, this is the best thing to do. Tell me, knowing it would be somewhat fulfilling, don't you think? So, the price they'll pay when we're done with your life is 140000 ECU! That's really a fortune, with that you could buy 3 or maybe 4 small castles. I never thought you could be a guy that was worth so much, why take a pride man.”

	You bastard, that's his way of making fun of me, probably at this time the only thing in his mind was to beat him.		You bastard, that's his way of making fun of me, probably at this time the only thing in his mind was to beat him.