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Chapter 6: Damien and Gondrin

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	Eleonore sat in her chair in the Research Room, her left hand going back and forth, grasping the papers on the table.		Eleonore sat in her chair in the Research Room, her left hand going back and forth, grasping the papers on the table.

	She rubbed her temple with her right finger, a habit that happened every time she met something bad, she would shut her eyes, shape her lips into a へ, and rub her temple vigorously.		She rubbed her temple with her right finger, a habit that happened every time she met something bad, she would shut her eyes, shape her lips into a pout (like this: へ), and rub her temple vigorously.

	Her expression now was the spitting image of her younger sister.		Her expression now was the spitting image of her younger sister.

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Chapter 6: Damien and Gondrin

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	Remembering that Louise just ran away from the house, Eleonore's shoulders drooped again.		Remembering that Louise just ran away from the house, Eleonore's shoulders drooped again.

	"That kid, where and what is she doing......"		"That kid, where and what is she doing......?"

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Shadowys at 06:51, 27 January 2013

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	"Until now, the number of academy researchers who try to force an entry through here is one, and that's you, Miss Eleonore. How about you learn a little manners from others. If you had done that, perhaps you would have been much successful with marriage......"		"Until now, the number of academy researchers who try to force an entry through here is one, and that's you, Miss Eleonore. How about you learn a little manners from others. If you had done that, perhaps you would have been much successful with marriage......"

	Laughing coldly, Miss Valentine said the taboo ~~words~~.		Laughing coldly, Miss Valentine said the taboo word.

	Eleonore chuckled coldly while whipping out her wand, pointing it to Miss Valentine's nose. At the same time, Valentine's wand was also whipped out, pointing at Eleonore's nose.		Eleonore chuckled coldly while whipping out her wand, pointing it to Miss Valentine's nose. At the same time, Valentine's wand was also whipped out, pointing at Eleonore's nose.
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	Right. Eleonore suddenly thought of something.		Right. Eleonore suddenly thought of something.

	How about she ~~tried~~ asking Louise about it?		How about she try asking Louise about it?

	"Ah."		"Ah."

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	Gondrin rested his hand on Eleonore's shoulders. "As long as I can help impressive researchers like you work in a more comfortable and complete environment, it's nothing for old man me to work a little harder."		Gondrin rested his hand on Eleonore's shoulders. "As long as I can help impressive researchers like you work in a more comfortable and complete environment, it's nothing for old man me to work a little harder."

	".......Two more M-Mandragora fields will do fine."		".......Two more M-Mandragora fields will do fine." (T/L: Mandragora is the scientific name for "mandrake", which is a herb)

	"That's that then."		"That's that then."

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	Gondrin rested his hand on Eleonore's shoulders. "As long as I can help impressive researchers like you work in a more comfortable and complete environment, it's nothing for old man me to work a little harder."		Gondrin rested his hand on Eleonore's shoulders. "As long as I can help impressive researchers like you work in a more comfortable and complete environment, it's nothing for old man me to work a little harder."

	".......Two more m-~~mantoro~~ fields will do fine."		".......Two more M-Mandragora fields will do fine."

	"That's that then."		"That's that then."

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Chapter 6: Damien and Gondrin

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	"'A magical item that could release Alchemy for a substantial period of time' <!--Release...Alchemy?-->? What the heck are those people trying to do to ''me'', the one in charge of the Founder's sculpture?"		"'A magical item that could release Alchemy for a substantial period of time' <!--Release...Alchemy?-->? What the heck are those people trying to do to ''me'', the one in charge of the Founder's sculpture?"

	There must be something behind all this......with that ~~inmind~~, Eleonore stood up. Draping her cape, which had been hung on the wall, over her slim figure, she put on her head the hat on the corner of the table. A majestic Academy researcher was then born.		There must be something behind all this......with that in mind, Eleonore stood up. Draping her cape, which had been hung on the wall, over her slim figure, she put on her head the hat on the corner of the table. A majestic Academy researcher was then born.

	"Seriously......those guys on top there, I can't stand them anymore......"		"Seriously......those guys on top there, I can't stand them anymore......"

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	After living together for some time, their true selves, along with all their faults, would reveal themselves. She initially thought Louise was just sulking, and that she would return home quickly, right? However, things went contrary to her wishes, and there hadn't been any news about Louise yet.		After living together for some time, their true selves, along with all their faults, would reveal themselves. She initially thought Louise was just sulking, and that she would return home quickly, right? However, things went contrary to her wishes, and there hadn't been any news about Louise yet.

	Eleonore, had started to get a little worried, and had decided to personally visit Des Onieres to get the details from Saito.		Eleonore had started to get a little worried, and had decided to personally visit Des Onieres to get the details from Saito.

	"Now is not the time for that."		"Now is not the time for that."
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	"The heck?......this time I got hit?"		"The heck?......this time I got hit?"

	On the paper was her appointed research topic, which is also quite a peculiar topic.		On the paper was her appointed research topic, which was also quite a peculiar topic.

	"'A magical item that could release Alchemy for a substantial period of time' <!--Release...Alchemy?-->? What the heck are those people trying to do to ''me'', the one in charge of the Founder's sculpture?"		"'A magical item that could release Alchemy for a substantial period of time' <!--Release...Alchemy?-->? What the heck are those people trying to do to ''me'', the one in charge of the Founder's sculpture?"

	There must be something behind all this......with that in mind, Eleonore stood up. ~~picking~~ up her cape, which had been hung on the wall, she draped over her slim figure, she put her hat, which was the on the corner of the table, on her head and a majestic Academy researcher was then born.		There must be something behind all this......with that in mind, Eleonore stood up. Picking up her cape, which had been hung on the wall, she draped it over her slim figure, she put on her hat, which was the on the corner of the table, on her head and a majestic Academy researcher was then born.

	"Seriously......those guys on top there, I can't stand them anymore......"		"Seriously......those guys on top there, I can't stand them anymore......"
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	"......"		"......"

	No matter how many times she ~~has came~~ here, this place still ~~exudes~~ a powerful pressure. Behind the door was the entrance room to the Academy Head Office......the place where the masterminds behind the administration of ~~Tristian~~ went about their business.		No matter how many times she had come here, this place still exuded a powerful pressure. Behind the door was the entrance room to the Academy Head Office......the place where the masterminds behind the administration of Tristain went about their business.

	There was a door on either side of the entrance room. Behind the table in the dead center of the entrance room, a woman who had been writing official documents lifted her head after noticing Eleonore's presence.		There was a door on either side of the entrance room. Behind the table in the dead center of the entrance room, a woman who had been writing official documents lifted her head after noticing Eleonore's presence.
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	"Then, I'm sorry that I cannot arrange for such an unexpected meeting. This is protocol."		"Then, I'm sorry that I cannot arrange for such an unexpected meeting. This is protocol."

	Upon hearing this, A few angry veins emerged on Eleonore's forehead. Her brow quivering with agitation, Eleonore stepped maliciously towards the secretary.		Upon hearing this, a few angry veins emerged on Eleonore's forehead. Her brow quivering with agitation, Eleonore stepped maliciously towards the secretary.

	"Don't take me as some palace official or some schoolgirl from the country side. Can you send word that the Head Academy Researcher, Miss Eleonore de Valliere is requesting for a meeting?"		"Don't take me as some palace official or some schoolgirl from the country side. Can you send word that the Head Academy Researcher, Miss Eleonore de Valliere is requesting for a meeting?"

	"I'm, of course, very clear with this, but even if it were Her Majesty herself to come, my reply ~~will~~ remain the same. 'This is protocol.'"		"I'm, of course, very clear with this, but even if it were Her Majesty herself to come, my reply would remain the same. 'This is protocol.'"

	The angry veins on Eleonore's brow increased exponentially. She moved her face dangerously close to Miss Valentine's and said with a voice, trembling with anger, "You're really thick-headed."		The angry veins on Eleonore's brow increased exponentially. She moved her face dangerously close to Miss Valentine's and said with a voice, trembling with anger, "You're really thick-headed."

	"Until now, the number of academy researchers who ~~try~~ to force an entry through here is one, and that's you, Miss Eleonore. How about you learn a little manners from others. If you had done that, perhaps you would have been much successful with marriage......"		"Until now, the number of academy researchers who tried to force an entry through here is one, and that's you, Miss Eleonore. How about you learn a little manners from others. If you had done that, perhaps you would have been much more successful with your marriage......"

	Laughing coldly, Miss Valentine said the taboo word.		Laughing coldly, Miss Valentine said the taboo word.
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	"Yeah, yeah......seriously. Come in then."		"Yeah, yeah......seriously. Come in then."

	Just then, the door on the left opened. Before leaving Eleonore shot a vicious glare at Valentine.		Just then, the door on the left opened. Before leaving, Eleonore shot a vicious glare at Valentine.

	The room was filled with a myriad of magical items and luxurious decorations. In the dead center of the room that looked like a tumbled toy box stood a gaunt old gentleman.		The room was filled with a myriad of magical items and luxurious decorations. In the dead center of the room that looked like a tumbled toy box stood a gaunt old gentleman.

	He had a silver crown and a meticulously trimmed mustache under his nose. Even though he looked neat, it's hard to sense a powerful aura around him. This ~~has~~ also caused him to be easily forgotten and underestimated.		He had a silver crown and a meticulously trimmed mustache under his nose. Even though he looked neat, it was hard to sense a powerful aura around him. This had also caused him to be easily forgotten and underestimated.

	And such a man is the president of the "Academy", Mr Gondrin.		And such a man was the president of the "Academy", Mr Gondrin.

	"Seriously......what is it this time, Miss Valiere?"		"Seriously......what is it this time, Miss Valiere?"

	Gondrin who stuttered and mumbled, watched Eleonore slowly stepped closer to him.		Gondrin, who stuttered and mumbled, watched Eleonore slowly stepped closer to him.

	"It's not simply a matter of 'what's it this time'!" Eleonore yelled straight to his face. Gondrin who already had a weak aura about him withered.		"It's not simply a matter of 'what's it this time'!" Eleonore yelled straight to his face. Gondrin, who already had a weak aura about him, withered.

	"Don't yell that loud...... this old man is a bag of old bones you know......"		"Don't yell that loud...... this old man is a bag of old bones you know......"
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	"Of course I'm yelling! Please give me an reasonable explanation for this research command." Eleonore thrust out the document.		"Of course I'm yelling! Please give me an reasonable explanation for this research command." Eleonore thrust out the document.

	"Aah......about that. Nn, actually, it's regarding a repeated request from a ~~VVIP~~ from the palace......"		"Aah......about that. Nn, actually, it's regarding a repeated request from a VIP from the palace......"

	"Even though I don't think this is heretical, ~~but~~ it doesn't ~~follows~~ the traditional research topics of the 'Academy'".		"Even though I don't think this is heretical, it doesn't follow the traditional research topics of the 'Academy'".

	"What you're saying isn't wrong, but old man me also ~~have my~~ stand on this subject......"		"What you're saying isn't wrong, but an old man like also has his stand on this subject......"

	While wiping away the sweat on his brow, Gondrin took a glance at Eleonore.		While wiping away the sweat on his brow, Gondrin took a glance at Eleonore.
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	"Really?"		"Really?"

	"O-of course! Nn, about that, even though I'm not sure what assignment ~~did~~ the palace government gave you, ~~but~~ they should have their own concerns. Helping them out now is not a bad idea. Miss Valliere, this old man remembers that you once placed an order for a high speed magic cauldron, right?"		"O-of course! Nn, about that, even though I'm not sure what assignment the palace government gave you, they should have their own concerns. Helping them out now is not a bad idea. Miss Valliere, this old man remembers that you once placed an order for a high speed magic cauldron, right?"

	"Uh huh......"		"Uh huh......"
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	It was just a ten year old boy.		It was just a ten year old boy.

	With a head of blond hair and a face with a mischievous expression, he looked out of place with the room. The youngster said happily, "Smoothly done, Gray sama."		With a head of blond hair and a face with a mischievous expression, he looked out of place with the room. The youngster said happily, "Smoothly done, Gray-sama."

	"That Eleonore de Valliere is certainly a tough nut to crack......even though her skills are extremely proficient."		"That Eleonore de Valliere is certainly a tough nut to crack......even though her skills are extremely proficient."
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	"Don't be that inconsiderate." Damien shook his head. It was quite unimaginable that such words will come out of a ten year old boy's mouth.		"Don't be that inconsiderate." Damien shook his head. It was quite unimaginable that such words will come out of a ten year old boy's mouth.

	"Can't reach an agreement, eh? I just can't get it through my head what you need that much money for?" Gondrin asked.		"Can't reach an agreement, eh? I just can't get it through my head; what do you need that much money for?" Gondrin asked.

	"We have a dream."		"We have a dream."
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	"Why am I always the one to give in.......the person I am......"		"Why am I always the one to give in.......the person I am......"

	The recent "Academy" is getting stranger. Bizarre research topics one after another......Commands from palace? Who will it be? Or, is it really so?		The recent "Academy" is getting stranger. Bizarre research topics one after another......Commands from the palace? Who will it be? Or, is it really so?

	Even so, how does someone like me who's working their heart out in the Academy understand the inside story of these matters?		Even so, how does someone like me who's working their heart out in the Academy understand the inside story of these matters?