Zero no Tsukaima:Volume17 Epilogue - Revision history

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Windwalker at 20:27, 24 August 2014

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	After their conversation... Louise stood upright, and her posture changed to match her cold attitude.		After their conversation... Louise stood upright, and her posture changed to match her cold attitude.

	“If I may, I believe ~~out~~ conversation is over. Can you tell me which room should I stay in?”		“If I may, I believe our conversation is over. Can you tell me which room I should stay in?”

	“My private tent is out there, but I hope you do not mind it's a bit cramped,”		“My private tent is out there, but I hope you do not mind it's a bit cramped,”
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	Henrietta began to move her fingers nervously through her hair as if she had lost her patience, but trying not to break her dignity as queen, she went to Saito and showed a smile.		Henrietta began to move her fingers nervously through her hair as if she had lost her patience, but trying not to break her dignity as queen, she went to Saito and showed a smile.

	“You've heard it Saito-dono, we have permission from your master~~, so there~~ is no longer any obstacle. However, because of all the commotion that occurred recently, I think I will have trouble falling asleep. If ~~it doesn’t bother~~ you, please be so kind as to accompany me ~~with~~ a glass of wine.”		“You've heard it Saito-dono, we have permission from your master. There is no longer any obstacle. However, because of all the commotion that occurred recently, I think I will have trouble falling asleep. If you are not bothered, please be kind as to accompany me for a glass of wine.”

	Caught between the hostilities of these two women, Saito did not know how to appropriately answer each proposition. He was helplessly, entirely lost within himself. Truly, I'm walking among rows of gunpowder-filled barrels and holding a torch. I make the slightest slip, Baaam! Think of a giant explosion.		Caught between the hostilities of these two women, Saito did not know how to appropriately answer each proposition. He was helplessly, entirely lost within himself. Truly, I'm walking among rows of gunpowder-filled barrels and holding a torch. I make the slightest slip, Baaam! Think of a giant explosion.

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	Fun stuff, happy things, sad things, painful things ...		Fun stuff, happy things, sad things, painful things ...

	The first time he went to a dance ... At the same time when I thought "how cute she is" his heart trembled for the first time, Louise had made his heart dance. And likewise, at the time he was in this world, Saito keeps thinking that there could be a "future" for him.		The first time he went to a dance ... At the same time when he thought "how cute she is" his heart trembled for the first time, Louise had made his heart dance. And likewise, at the time he was in this world, Saito keeps thinking that there could be a "future" for him.

	"I get the impression that Louise has transported me somewhere."		"I get the impression that Louise has transported me somewhere."

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	“I ask you, do it as a favor, right now I want to be alone. “ Henrietta said with a sad solemn voice.		“I ask you, do it as a favor, right now I want to be alone. “ Henrietta said with a sad solemn voice.

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	Reynald had brought Henrietta and all members of the Ondine Knight, accompanied by a large number of officers ~~from kingdom~~ of Gallia, and approached the place. Suddenly, this arming caused an uproar in the middle of the night.		Reynald had brought Henrietta and all members of the Ondine Knight, accompanied by a large number of officers of Gallia, and approached the place. Suddenly, this arming caused an uproar in the middle of the night.

	Jack, still unconscious, was recognized by the officers of Gallia as a former member of Chevalier Do North Partel and he was taken immediately into custody.		Jack, still unconscious, was recognized by the officers of Gallia as a former member of Chevalier Do North Partel and he was taken immediately into custody.
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	“Well, really, is that we are ...”		“Well, really, is that we are ...”

	What happen was Saito only ~~increase~~ the anger of Louise. So that's it... Louise returned here does not mean she have forgiven me for that incident. Man, although I think that it was pretty obvious ...		What happen was Saito only increased the anger of Louise. ''So that's it... Louise returned here does not mean she have forgiven me for that incident. Man, although I think that it was pretty obvious...''

	After the sudden declaration of Louise, Henrietta coughed clearing her throat, and said in an annoyed expression.		After the sudden declaration of Louise, Henrietta coughed clearing her throat, and said in an annoyed expression.
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	Louise's shoulders began to shake.		Louise's shoulders began to shake.

	~~“ Eeeeh~~? But! That cannot be!”		“Eeeeh? But! That cannot be!”

	“We at the moment we are being threatened by an immense danger, so it is ~~imperative~~ that the queen of Tristain is protected by her elite escort at all times. So, please Saito stay here overnight to protect me.”		“We at the moment we are being threatened by an immense danger, so it is pretty obvious that the queen of Tristain is protected by her elite escort at all times. So, please Saito stay here overnight to protect me.”

	“B, but ...”		“B, but ...”

	“Is it ~~good~~ to you, Louise?”		“Is it alright to you, Louise?”

	Then Louise nodded with a face like she was suffering from a seizure.		Then Louise nodded with a face like she was suffering from a seizure.

	“It ~~does not~~ matter if I feel ~~any good or not~~, if that's what your majesty wants, go ahead. I humbly ask you to accept it as a gift.”		“It doesn't matter what I feel, if that's what your majesty wants, go ahead. I humbly ask you to accept it as a gift.”

	Listening to Louise saying this, Henrietta also started to experience a tick in her eyebrow.		Listening to Louise saying this, Henrietta also started to experience a tick in her eyebrow.
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	From that moment she just stared at Henrietta with a glare.		From that moment she just stared at Henrietta with a glare.

	“As you wish Princess, but let me make it clear for the record, so far my record is 27 wins, 25 losses and 2 draws.”		“As you wish Princess, but let me make it clear for the record, so far my record is 27 wins, 25 losses and 2 draws!”

	“No, if I remember I have had 29 wins, 24 losses and 1 draw.”		“No, if I remember I have had 29 wins, 24 losses and 1 draw!”

	Then the fight between the two started. Little bitch! Women idiot! Queen incompetent! Priestess no breasts! While such insults to began accumulated, it became increasingly imminent that it leads to physical confrontation.		Then the fight between the two started. Little bitch! Women idiot! Queen incompetent! Priestess no breasts! While such insults to began accumulated, it became increasingly imminent that it leads to physical confrontation.
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	Still breathing hard ... without really having the strength to move yet, they said:		Still breathing hard ... without really having the strength to move yet, they said:

	“27 wins, 25 losses, 3 draws.”		“27 wins, 25 losses, 3 draws!”

	“29 Wins, 24 losses, 2 draws.”		“29 Wins, 24 losses, 2 draws!”

	Then as if Henrietta murmured:		Then as if Henrietta murmured:

	“You said cruel things really, really know where an attack will hurt.”		“You said cruel things really, really know where an attack will hurt!”

	“Princess-You too, you were very cruel to take advantage of my weak points.”		“Princess-You too, you were very cruel to take advantage of my weak points!”

	Then sighing Henrietta said:		Then sighing Henrietta said:
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	“Please.”		“Please.”

	“NO, I’ll never forgive you.”		“NO, I’ll never forgive you!”

	“I understand.”		“I understand.”

	“You do not understand, I’ll never forget it, what you and Princess did, never, even if I die, I will not forgive you.”		“You do not understand, I’ll never forget it, what you and Princess did, never, even if I die, I will not forgive you!”

	Saito nodded and then pressed his lips to Louise.		Saito nodded and then pressed his lips to Louise.

	This guy, as if he never understand.		''This guy, as if he never understand.''

	This was her thought, but still she was unable to reject the kiss.		This was her thought, but still she was unable to reject the kiss.

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	The exchange came to the point where it was explained to Louise that the current Tabitha had been replaced by an impostor who had taken her place on the throne of Gallia and how that impostor proclaimed her support to Romalia to continue the crusade.		The exchange came to the point where it was explained to Louise that the current Tabitha had been replaced by an impostor who had taken her place on the throne of Gallia and how that impostor proclaimed her support to Romalia to continue the crusade.

	Louise was not aware of what was lost in her absence. Saito then informed Henrietta about the details of the conversation he had with ~~Isabela~~ before being attacked.		Louise was not aware of what was lost in her absence. Saito then informed Henrietta about the details of the conversation he had with Isabella before being attacked.

	After listening to what he had to say, Henrietta gave a deep sigh.		After listening to what he had to say, Henrietta gave a deep sigh.

	“What a burden ... problems just accumulate one after another...! And the ~~last thing we needed~~, you were attacked right in front of our diplomatic visit in Gallia!”		“What a burden ... problems just accumulate one after another...! And the worst, you were attacked right in front of our diplomatic visit in Gallia!”

	“Looks like it was just coincidence, and to belonged to secret squad of knights of Gallia, to be here just give them the opportunity to make their job easier.”		“Looks like it was just coincidence, and to belonged to secret squad of knights of Gallia, to be here just give them the opportunity to make their job easier.”

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	Then, inevitably Louise exploded, unable to hold and shake her shoulders, as Louise came and brokenly murmured something.		Then, inevitably Louise exploded, unable to hold and shake her shoulders, as Louise came and brokenly murmured something.

	“... R God, in truth ... since when did you became an adult?”		“... Oh God, in truth ... since when did you became an adult?”

	Henrietta slowly turned her gaze to Louise's face, her expression had become totally expressionless. Saito remembered seeing a face like this when they were in the royal palace. This expression on her face always emerged in critical situations, Saito could practically smell fuses being burned.		Henrietta slowly turned her gaze to Louise's face, her expression had become totally expressionless. Saito remembered seeing a face like this when they were in the royal palace. This expression on her face always emerged in critical situations, Saito could practically smell fuses being burned.
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	“Did you say something!!?”		“Did you say something!!?”

	~~“ I~~ said I only succeeded in revealing this useless adult sensuality of yours, your majesty!”		“I said I only succeeded in revealing this useless adult sensuality of yours, your majesty!”
	Henrietta started shaking out of anger.		Henrietta started shaking out of anger.

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	In response Henrietta furiously approached Louise and attempted slap, however Louise skillfully evaded attack.		In response Henrietta furiously approached Louise and attempted slap, however Louise skillfully evaded attack.

	~~“ Indeed~~, I would advise you to stop the work of being a Queen, I assure you that you would be much better if you worked as an actress at the Theatre Royal Tanaijiiru, and at the same time peace will be achieve in the kingdom! Indeed so everything would work PERFECT!”		“Yes, I would advise you to stop the work of being a Queen, I assure you that you would be much better if you worked as an actress at the Theatre Royal Tanaijiiru, and at the same time peace will be achieve in the kingdom! Indeed so everything would work PERFECT!”

	The following her attack Henrietta connected to trip on the legs of Louise, the skill with which she remembers from time of her childhood.		The following her attack Henrietta connected to trip on the legs of Louise, the skill with which she remembers from time of her childhood.

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	“What a burden ... problems just accumulate one after another...! And the last thing we needed, you were attacked right in front of our diplomatic visit in Gallia!”		“What a burden ... problems just accumulate one after another...! And the last thing we needed, you were attacked right in front of our diplomatic visit in Gallia!”

	“Looks like it was just coincidence, and to belonged to secret squad of knights of Gallia, to be here just to give them the opportunity to make their job easier.”		“Looks like it was just coincidence, and to belonged to secret squad of knights of Gallia, to be here just give them the opportunity to make their job easier.”

	After saying this, Henrietta nodded to Saito's comment.		After saying this, Henrietta nodded to Saito's comment.
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	“So that means, you were hiding in the village of Cherphis with them ...?”		“So that means, you were hiding in the village of Cherphis with them ...?”

	~~“So in the end~~, I asked those guys to help me ~~hide”~~		“Yes, I asked those guys to help me hide.”

	The unexpected connection of all the events so far, greatly surprised the three.		The unexpected connection of all the events so far, greatly surprised the three.
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	“I ask you, do it as a favor, right now I want to be alone. “ Henrietta said with a sad solemn voice.		“I ask you, do it as a favor, right now I want to be alone. “ Henrietta said with a sad solemn voice.


	Regaining consciousness, Saito realized that he was in his private tent. At the side of his bed, sitting on a folding chair Louise could be seen distracted while looking at the landscape from the window of the tent.		Regaining consciousness, Saito realized that he was in his private tent. At the side of his bed, sitting on a folding chair Louise could be seen distracted while looking at the landscape from the window of the tent.
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	Then in a voice that seemed stuck in his throat Saito said:		Then in a voice that seemed stuck in his throat Saito said:

	“Louise ...”		“Louise...”

	Upon hearing this, Louise turned her head towards him.		Upon hearing this, Louise turned her head towards him.

	~~“Why~~ are you crying?”		“Hey, are you crying?”

	“No ... Is that ... I'm so glad you're back ...”		“No ... Is that ... I'm so glad you're back ...”