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Rxls at 15:24, 30 June 2018

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	Location: Capital of Gallia, Lutetia. In the courtyard of the palace of Versailles located in the suburbs of the capital, in a camp where a huge amount of tents were erected.		Location: Capital of Gallia, Lutetia. In the courtyard of the palace of Versailles located in the suburbs of the capital, in a camp where a huge amount of tents were erected.

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Vaelis at 06:00, 20 November 2013

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	The figure of Louise wearing only her underwear seemed to float while being illuminated by the soft light of the moon, then without thinking, Saito looked away from that beautiful vision.		The figure of Louise wearing only her underwear seemed to float while being illuminated by the soft light of the moon, then without thinking, Saito looked away from that beautiful vision.

	“Eeh, hey you ...” ~~[[File:ZnT18-002-003.jpg\|thumbnail\|“Eeh, hey you ...”]]~~		“Eeh, hey you ...”

	Immediately without receiving a doubt, a faint sound of clothing rubbing began to resonate. Then from that point, he could hear the sound of water churning "Chapun" because those little bare feet had entered the water.		Immediately without receiving a doubt, a faint sound of clothing rubbing began to resonate. Then from that point, he could hear the sound of water churning "Chapun" because those little bare feet had entered the water.
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	Saito slowly extended his arm, until he finally touch the back of Louise.		Saito slowly extended his arm, until he finally touch the back of Louise.

	[[File:ZnT18-025.jpg\|thumbnail~~\|Saito slowly extended his arm, until he finally touch the back of Louise.~~]]		[[File:ZnT18-025.jpg\|thumbnail]]

	The feeling of touching her skin with his hand makes his entire body tremble.		The feeling of touching her skin with his hand makes his entire body tremble.

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	“Yes, you're right, especially when you say you're nasty!”		“Yes, you're right, especially when you say you're nasty!”

	“Sor ... sorry, but could you be quiet while I'm talking, because really, I ... maybe this sounds a little weird but, every time I see you, it's like you are transporting me to a different world ... this ... because that's the way you make me feel. Towards an exciting place, to a distant place that is maybe not here. It is a special place that is beyond all good and evil, that's for sure. You opened my eyes and led me through those places that up till now have been unknown to me. Yes, and they were all equally precious, no matter how hard they have been on some occasions, nor the sadness that sometimes I feel, even in the times when I truly believed that my life was slipping through my hands, all were equally important. But, all the happy times we pass along have been the most ~~important~~ part you'll ever have in my life, and that's the truth.”		“Sor ... sorry, but could you be quiet while I'm talking, because really, I ... maybe this sounds a little weird but, every time I see you, it's like you are transporting me to a different world ... this ... because that's the way you make me feel. Towards an exciting place, to a distant place that is maybe not here. It is a special place that is beyond all good and evil, that's for sure. You opened my eyes and led me through those places that up till now have been unknown to me. Yes, and they were all equally precious, no matter how hard they have been on some occasions, nor the sadness that sometimes I feel, even in the times when I truly believed that my life was slipping through my hands, all were equally important. But, all the happy times we pass along have been the most precious part you'll ever have in my life, and that's the truth.”

	“Hey! Stop talking nonsense! I give you permission to leave aside the compliments!”		“Hey! Stop talking nonsense! I give you permission to leave aside the compliments!”

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	The land occupied by the court of Versailles were broad enough to allow a walk, this was of a size comparable to a large avenue, then they realized they had gone enough from the tumult of tents.		The land occupied by the court of Versailles were broad enough to allow a walk, this was of a size comparable to a large avenue, then they realized they had gone enough from the tumult of tents.

	The place where they arrived was a place located between a large number of plants with flowering shrubs. Because it is the month of Ansuul (August), the heat had reached its highest point ~~of the~~ year.		The place where they arrived was a place located between a large number of plants with flowering shrubs. Because it is the month of Ansuul (August), the heat had reached its highest point this year.

	Despite being at night, the heat in the atmosphere wiped the surrounding air. This place, full of boxes, was devoid of any nearby fire to light their way, thus, leaving the moonlight to guide their steps.		Despite being at night, the heat in the atmosphere wiped the surrounding air. This place, full of boxes, was devoid of any nearby fire to light their way, thus, leaving the moonlight to guide their steps.
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	“Hey you! Listen, you could stop and stick with that, you, if I were to have a lover, I promise you I will not ask you to risk your life to save me.”		“Hey you! Listen, you could stop and stick with that, you, if I were to have a lover, I promise you I will not ask you to risk your life to save me.”

	~~“Tt !~~ That’s Silly! I’ll still save you!”		“Huh? That’s Silly! I’ll still save you!”

	“So yes, I know, you're a man with the pure sense of duty you are ready to save me if I needed it, no matter whether you’re my lover or not.”		“So yes, I know, you're a man with the pure sense of duty you are ready to save me if I needed it, no matter whether you’re my lover or not.”
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	After she had said that, Louise began to mutter something to Saito that he could barely understand. By listening carefully:		After she had said that, Louise began to mutter something to Saito that he could barely understand. By listening carefully:

	"By God, in truth I'm a fool, as you may have come to believe in my words... although I cannot deny that everything I said is true ... but I already said that this, as I finish this well, I admit my defeat so easily, but ~~if I think about it a bit~~ I think this has nothing to do with winning or losing, so I think you win. "		"Oh God, in truth I'm a fool, as you may have come to believe in my words... although I cannot deny that everything I said is true ... but I already said that this, as I;ll finish this well, I admit my defeat so easily, but I think this has nothing to do with winning or losing, so I think you win. "

	Seeing Louise watching him with those muttering eyes, Saito could not help but feel really moved.		Seeing Louise watching him with those muttering eyes, Saito could not help but feel really moved.
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	He knew he had to say something, but no words came out of his mouth.		He knew he had to say something, but no words came out of his mouth.

	That's it.		''That's it.''

	I have to say Louise clearly the reasons why I love her.		''I have to say Louise clearly the reasons why I love her.''

	Saito then prepared and take a deep breath and then look in the eyes of Louise.		Saito then prepared and take a deep breath and then look in the eyes of Louise.

	~~“Yh~~, can I say something?"		“Um, can I say something?"

	“Huh? “ Louise could only return a puzzled look at Saito.		“Huh? “ Louise could only return a puzzled look at Saito.
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	“What is this "until the end", it was so nasty.”		“What is this "until the end", it was so nasty.”

	“Do not say nasty~~, p~~, but are not you the one who accept me even being so nasty?”		“Do not say nasty, but are not you the one who accept me even being so nasty?”

	“Yes, you're right, especially when you say you're nasty.”		“Yes, you're right, especially when you say you're nasty.”
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	Louise's leg rose once again in the air, seeing this Saito seemed prepared for the consequences of what he said, and before crying, he scream to answer the question of Louise.		Louise's leg rose once again in the air, seeing this Saito seemed prepared for the consequences of what he said, and before crying, he scream to answer the question of Louise.

	“S, yes, I was moved during the kiss! It was amazing!”		“Ye-, yes, I was moved during the kiss! It was amazing!”

	Louise's entire body began to shake as if a wave, then lift the other leg and began to move in the air, it was really as if preparing to launch a countless number of kicks, but eventually Louise could somehow contain her anger.		Louise's entire body began to shake as if a wave, then lift the other leg and began to move in the air, it was really as if preparing to launch a countless number of kicks, but eventually Louise could somehow contain her anger.
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	“Um, um, I.. , I would like to take a bath.”		“Um, um, I.. , I would like to take a bath.”

	~~“ Huh~~? Bath??”		“Huh? Bath??”

	As if he did not understand those words, Saito replied to a request from Louise.		As if he did not understand those words, Saito replied to a request from Louise.
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	“Huh, what's wrong, it's not as if it was dirty water, and we're in summer.” With that, determined, Louise took in her hands the bottom of the habit to start undressing.		“Huh, what's wrong, it's not as if it was dirty water, and we're in summer.” With that, determined, Louise took in her hands the bottom of the habit to start undressing.

	~~“Tt~~, Hey! we're practically in the street.”		“Tsk!, Hey! we're practically in the street.”

	“It’s alright, as we are totally in the dark, and I don’t hear anyone who is walking around. If someone is watching us now, those would be the moons.”		“It’s alright, as we are totally in the dark, and I don’t hear anyone who is walking around. If someone is watching us now, those would be the moons.”
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	The figure of Louise wearing only her underwear seemed to float while being illuminated by the soft light of the moon, then without thinking, Saito looked away from that beautiful vision.		The figure of Louise wearing only her underwear seemed to float while being illuminated by the soft light of the moon, then without thinking, Saito looked away from that beautiful vision.

	~~“Ee~~, hey you ...” [[File:ZnT18-002-003.jpg\|thumbnail\|~~“Ee~~, hey you ...”]]		“Eeh, hey you ...” [[File:ZnT18-002-003.jpg\|thumbnail\|“Eeh, hey you ...”]]

	Immediately without receiving a doubt, a faint sound of clothing rubbing began to resonate. Then from that point, he could hear the sound of water churning "Chapun" because those little bare feet had entered the water.		Immediately without receiving a doubt, a faint sound of clothing rubbing began to resonate. Then from that point, he could hear the sound of water churning "Chapun" because those little bare feet had entered the water.
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	“Hey Saito!”		“Hey Saito!”

	“M, m, Ye? Yes!”		“M, m, Ye? Yes?”

	“Do, I ... Do I look pretty? “ It was very smooth, a sound so softly that her voice seemed to fade, but still, he could perfectly understand what she said.		“Do, I ... Do I look pretty? “ It was very smooth, a sound so softly that her voice seemed to fade, but still, he could perfectly understand what she said.

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	After several weeks of not seeing her, it was expected that the love that radiates from them were to overflow uncontrollably. Yet no matter how strong it is, Louise’s frustration had not been dissipated.		After several weeks of not seeing her, it was expected that the love that radiates from them were to overflow uncontrollably. Yet no matter how strong it is, Louise’s frustration had not been dissipated.

	In silence, still wearing the habit that she always wore during her stay in ~~Santa~~ Margarita, Louise offered no resistance, while Saito was carrying her in his arms.		In silence, still wearing the habit that she always wore during her stay in Saint Margarita, Louise offered no resistance, while Saito was carrying her in his arms.

	Without thinking, Saito instinctively stretched his hand to reach the small chest of Louise, in doing so, Louise waved that hand gently in response.		Without thinking, Saito instinctively stretched his hand to reach the small chest of Louise, in doing so, Louise waved that hand gently in response.
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	Louise then just stared at Saito with those beautiful reddish brown eyes, a little embarrassed by what she was doing, thinking her was body was little. However to keep watching those deep eyes, one could not see any anger or reproach.		Louise then just stared at Saito with those beautiful reddish brown eyes, a little embarrassed by what she was doing, thinking her was body was little. However to keep watching those deep eyes, one could not see any anger or reproach.

	After watching for a few moments, Louise glanced toward the habit she worn for long, it had remained in her body from the moment she decided to escape from the convent of ~~Santa~~ Margarita.		After watching for a few moments, Louise glanced toward the habit she worn for long, it had remained in her body from the moment she decided to escape from the convent of Saint Margarita.

	Because that was all she had worn throughout her journey and even in her battle against Jack, it was expected that it was already quite dirty.		Because that was all she had worn throughout her journey and even in her battle against Jack, it was expected that it was already quite dirty.
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	“A bath... but why now?”		“A bath... but why now?”

	“Well, since I left ~~Santa~~ Margarita, I couldn’t bathe even once, and see ... I've sweated and also this is the only clothes I've been wearing ...”		“Well, since I left Saint Margarita, I couldn’t bathe even once, and see ... I've sweated and also this is the only clothes I've been wearing ...”

	“B-, but ... Taking a bath at this hour? ...?”		“B-, but ... Taking a bath at this hour? ...?”

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	“Hey! Stop talking nonsense, I give you permission to leave aside the compliments.”		“Hey! Stop talking nonsense, I give you permission to leave aside the compliments.”

	“No way they are nonsense! Well, if I were being totally honest, you~~'ve~~ been a little upset.”		“No way they are nonsense! Well, if I were being totally honest, you would have been a little upset.”

	“Then I'll punch you!”		“Then I'll punch you!”

	“But honestly, the majority of what I felt were funny moments. ~~Indeed~~, those moments that made my heart tremble! And believe me I would never lie about this, the one who is able to trigger these feelings inside me, it's you. I feel like if you were able to take me to a special place other than this.”		“But honestly, the majority of what I felt were funny moments. Yes, those moments that made my heart tremble! And believe me I would never lie about this, the one who is able to trigger these feelings inside me, it's you. I feel like if you were able to take me to a special place other than this.”

	Then Louise stared Saito and give him a cold stare.		Then Louise stared Saito and give him a cold stare.

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