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Rxls at 15:25, 30 June 2018

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	===Chapter 6 - Spirit Stone of Destruction===		===Chapter 6: Spirit Stone of Destruction===

	The Pope's caravan was moving at a slow pace towards Romalia. Their arrival was somewhat delayed. Unfortunately for them the trip took 3 days, compared to just a day if they had used dragons for transport.		The Pope's caravan was moving at a slow pace towards Romalia. Their arrival was somewhat delayed. Unfortunately for them the trip took 3 days, compared to just a day if they had used dragons for transport.

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LoudMouth224 at 20:11, 13 November 2015

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	''We cannot beat an enemy that exceeds us 10 times in numbers, and moreover, they were not ordinary enemy, they were the Templar Knights. Considering the experience of all of us in real battle conditions, we are still weak and naive.''		''We cannot beat an enemy that exceeds us 10 times in numbers, and moreover, they were not ordinary enemy, they were the Templar Knights. Considering the experience of all of us in real battle conditions, we are still weak and naive.''

	''...Indeed, it would be useless to fight ... Before we can even approach the carriage, magic attacks would already be fired upon us, there is the possibility ~~that~~ most of us survive. In that case, we can rescue Tabitha and run... But the Templar Knights have Pegasus, though we use dragons to escape they can still chase us mid-air, certainly it would be impossible to get rid of them... the chances of this might work were almost zero.''		''...Indeed, it would be useless to fight ... Before we can even approach the carriage, magic attacks would already be fired upon us, there is the possibility tha most of us survive. In that case, we can rescue Tabitha and run... But the Templar Knights have Pegasus, though we use dragons to escape they can still chase us mid-air, certainly it would be impossible to get rid of them... the chances of this might work were almost zero.''

	''But still, even if the chances were zero, if at that time the luck was on our side, Tabitha could indeed be rescued. The only thing left is to go for that small gap that would open during that miraculous event. As expected to the Halkeginian nobles, when it comes to this, their resolution was unwavering.''		''But still, even if the chances were zero, if at that time the luck was on our side, Tabitha could indeed be rescued. The only thing left is to go for that small gap that would open during that miraculous event. As expected to the Halkeginian nobles, when it comes to this, their resolution was unwavering.''
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	“Wind stone?”		“Wind stone?”

	''Certainly, they were used to raise "ships” to the ~~skiy~~, in addition for being a crystal that kept the power of the wind from the previous resident...''		''Certainly, they were used to raise "ships” to the sky, in addition for being a crystal that kept the power of the wind from the previous resident...''

	“... As you know, the lands of Halkeginia were rich of these wind stones. To put in simple words, a wind stone is a glass where the power of the spirits lies, so what happens is that it gradually crystallized into the ground forming a "spiritual power". So after tens of thousands of years, the amount soon be enough so that those wind stones will eventually raise the whole earth.”		“... As you know, the lands of Halkeginia were rich of these wind stones. To put in simple words, a wind stone is a glass where the power of the spirits lies, so what happens is that it gradually crystallized into the ground forming a "spiritual power". So after tens of thousands of years, the amount soon be enough so that those wind stones will eventually raise the whole earth.”
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	“Idiot!” Saito said.		“Idiot!” Saito said.

	“That’s what I should say.” ~~July~~ while his eyes remained fixed on Saito.		“That’s what I should say.” Julio said while his eyes remained fixed on Saito.

	“By the way, I would like to apologize, for what I said before, about who owned your body and soul, but it is also your fault for your bad habit of always wanting to deceive people.”		“By the way, I would like to apologize, for what I said before, about who owned your body and soul, but it is also your fault for your bad habit of always wanting to deceive people.”

LoudMouth224 at 19:46, 13 November 2015

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	''We cannot beat an enemy that exceeds us 10 times in numbers, and moreover, they were not ordinary enemy, they were the Templar Knights. Considering the experience of all of us in real battle conditions, we are still weak and naive.''		''We cannot beat an enemy that exceeds us 10 times in numbers, and moreover, they were not ordinary enemy, they were the Templar Knights. Considering the experience of all of us in real battle conditions, we are still weak and naive.''

	''...Indeed, it would be useless to fight ... Before we can even approach the carriage, magic attacks would already be fired upon us, there is the possibility ~~tha~~ most of us survive. In that case, we can rescue Tabitha and run... But the Templar Knights have Pegasus, though we use dragons to escape they can still chase us mid-air, certainly it would be impossible to get rid of them... the chances of this might work were almost zero.''		''...Indeed, it would be useless to fight ... Before we can even approach the carriage, magic attacks would already be fired upon us, there is the possibility that most of us survive. In that case, we can rescue Tabitha and run... But the Templar Knights have Pegasus, though we use dragons to escape they can still chase us mid-air, certainly it would be impossible to get rid of them... the chances of this might work were almost zero.''

	''But still, even if the chances were zero, if at that time the luck was on our side, Tabitha could indeed be rescued. The only thing left is to go for that small gap that would open during that miraculous event. As expected to the Halkeginian nobles, when it comes to this, their resolution was unwavering.''		''But still, even if the chances were zero, if at that time the luck was on our side, Tabitha could indeed be rescued. The only thing left is to go for that small gap that would open during that miraculous event. As expected to the Halkeginian nobles, when it comes to this, their resolution was unwavering.''

Vaelis at 06:01, 20 November 2013

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	Having faster reaction time than Julio, Saito took him by the neck and pointed his sword.		Having faster reaction time than Julio, Saito took him by the neck and pointed his sword.
	[[File:ZnT18-124.jpg\|thumb~~\|Saito took him by the neck and pointed his sword.~~]]		[[File:ZnT18-124.jpg\|thumb]]

	“Get us down!”		“Get us down!”

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	“This is not right, it's not like I don’t understand what you’ve said, however, we will all die here: it may be true that the war would stop with our sacrifice but... it is more likely that we may not succeed, or rather we will surely fail. How is it that you agree with a bet so dangerous?”		“This is not right, it's not like I don’t understand what you’ve said, however, we will all die here: it may be true that the war would stop with our sacrifice but... it is more likely that we may not succeed, or rather we will surely fail. How is it that you agree with a bet so dangerous?”

	“I never thought to hear that from ~~the mouth of~~ the man who faced the 70000 soldiers alone.” Guiche said in surprised voice.”		“I never thought to hear that from the man who faced the 70000 soldiers alone.” Guiche said in surprised voice.”

	“The circumstances are completely different then, since I was the only casualty. At this time we are talking about the lives of everyone. Surely, I understand your reasons for we must do it to avoid greater evil, but, even after knowing that, I still don’t want to see my friends die in vain before my eyes.”		“The circumstances are completely different back then, since I was the only casualty. At this time we are talking about the lives of everyone. Surely, I understand your reasons for we must do it to avoid greater evil, but, even after knowing that, I still don’t want to see my friends die in vain before my eyes.”

	Again silence flooded in the room.		Again silence flooded in the room.
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	The next morning...		The next morning...

	The assigned group to lead the of Pope's caravan, was none other than the order of Arieste Knights of the Church, which was commanded by Carlo Trobontino.		The assigned group to lead the Pope's caravan, was none other than the order of Arieste Knights of the Church, which was commanded by Carlo Trobontino.

	After spending almost an hour after they left the last village, they reached an area of land that seems like a vast wasteland. Shortly, they arrived at the foot of the Mountain of the Fire Dragons. And soon, they would travel to the route which joined Romalia and Gallia, the 'Tiger Highway'.		After spending almost an hour after they left the last village, they reached an area of land that seems like a vast wasteland. Shortly, they arrived at the foot of the Mountain of the Fire Dragons. And soon, they would travel to the route which joined Romalia and Gallia, the 'Tiger Highway'.
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	The suspected trio then stopped about 20 mails away, standing right in place where Carlo can clearly see them. One them, taller among the other two, dared to took a step in the front.		The suspected trio then stopped about 20 mails away, standing right in place where Carlo can clearly see them. One them, taller among the other two, dared to took a step in the front.

	“I presume that this was the caravan of his holiness the Pope! I am the captain of the order of the Eastern Roses, my name is Bart Castlemont! And I have to proclaim to His Holiness the Pope that we demand for his immediate surrender! We must reclaim what is respectfully ours!”		“I presume that this was the caravan of his holiness the Pope. I am the captain of the order of the Eastern Roses, my name is Bart Castlemont! And I have to proclaim to His Holiness the Pope that we demand for his immediate surrender! We must reclaim what is respectfully ours!”

	While shaking with rage, Carlo ~~responed~~:		While shaking with rage, Carlo responded:

	“You dare to obstruct the passage of his holiness the Pope, this is BLASPHEMY! You have the guts of march all your troops behind our backs!? Are you stupid enough to start a war with us!?”		“You dare to obstruct the passage of his holiness the Pope, this is BLASPHEMY! You have the guts of march all your troops behind our backs!? Are you stupid enough to start a war with us!?”
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	“Stop saying nonsense! No matter what petty reasons you have, by the time you bastards dared to raise your wands against us, we will immediately accused you of heresy!”		“Stop saying nonsense! No matter what petty reasons you have, by the time you bastards dared to raise your wands against us, we will immediately accused you of heresy!”

	“Before accusing us of heresy, I would like you tell me who was the person currently sharing the carriage with his Holiness? Tell me, who has given you the authorization to take that person to your country? Depending upon your answer, I’ll immediately give the signal to attack you any moment!”		“Before accusing us of heresy, I would like you tell me who was the person currently sharing the carriage with his Holiness? Tell me, who has given you the authorization to take that person to your country? Depending upon your answer, I’ll immediately give the signal to attack you any moment!”

	“Is that even a threat? Bastards! Perhaps you're saying that you’re trying to threaten his holiness the Pope!”		“Is that even a threat? Bastards! Perhaps you're saying that you’re trying to threaten his holiness the Pope!”
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	“His Holiness!...”		“His Holiness!...”

	Without thinking, Carlo immediately bowed down. With a calm expression, Pope Vittorio glanced ~~towards~~ Castlemont, Saito and Chikasui.		Without thinking, Carlo immediately bowed down. With a calm expression, Pope Vittorio glanced toward Castlemont, Saito and Chikasui.

	Saito was nervous while he was being gazed directly by Pope Vittorio. The Pope seemed to be traversing in his eyes, as if looking directly into his heart.		Saito was nervous while he was being gazed directly by Pope Vittorio. The Pope seemed to be traversing in his eyes, as if looking directly into his heart.
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	Unable to do anything as the icy cold sweat began to drop at his back.		Unable to do anything as the icy cold sweat began to drop at his back.

	“His holiness.”		“His holiness!”

	Saito then took off the hood covering his face, this sudden action had perplexed Carlo.		Saito then took off the hood covering his face, this sudden action had perplexed Carlo.
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	''You’re still trying to convince me?'', Saito thought.		''You’re still trying to convince me?'', Saito thought.

	It was time.		It was at this time.

	"Chikasui" who was on the far left, suddenly started to cast a spell. From the palm of his hand, a blinding light began to radiate, everyone was wrapped around the intense light.		"Chikasui" who was on the far left, suddenly started to cast a spell. From the palm of his hand, a blinding light began to radiate, everyone was wrapped around the intense light.
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	“Go after them, Sylphid!”		“Go after them, Sylphid!”

	Kyui! Silphyd roared and started to ascend.		"Kyui!" Silphyd roared and started to ascend.

	“Hurry up! If they made it to Romalia, we’re in serious trouble!”		“Hurry up! If they made it to Romalia, we’re in serious trouble!”
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	Right in front of them, they could glimpse the enormous mountain ranges of the Fire Dragons, this was the ridge that stretched from east to west dividing Halkeginia ... And right behind those mountains was Romalia.		Right in front of them, they could glimpse the enormous mountain ranges of the Fire Dragons, this was the ridge that stretched from east to west dividing Halkeginia ... And right behind those mountains was Romalia.

	The moment they saw the ~~fire~~ dragon something horrible happened; leaving the mouth of Azulo, they saw Tabitha falling to the ground.		The moment they saw the wind dragon something horrible happened; leaving the mouth of Azulo, they saw Tabitha falling to the ground.

	“Saito! Tabitha is...!” Louise issued a desperate cry.		“Saito! Tabitha is...!” Louise issued a desperate cry.
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	“A handshake, but this does not mean that I have already accepted cooperate with you.”		“A handshake, but this does not mean that I have already accepted cooperate with you.”

	Julio watched that hand for a moment, but in the end, he corresponded strongly against his ~~handshake…~~		Julio watched that hand for a moment, but in the end, he corresponded strongly against his handshake...

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

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	The Pope's caravan was at slow pace towards Romalia, their arrival was somewhat delayed. Unfortunately for them, the travel took 3 days, compared to just a day if they used dragons for transport.		The Pope's caravan was at slow pace towards Romalia, their arrival was somewhat delayed. Unfortunately for them, the travel took 3 days, compared to just a day if they have used dragons for transport.

	But one should take into consideration, that the Holy Pope's visit was not anything. He must respond to the devotion of all those believers of Brimir that lived in villages they passed by. This was a primary task for those who had given the title of ‘Pope’.		But one should take into consideration that the Holy Pope's visit was not anything. He must respond to the devotion of all those believers of Brimir that lived in villages they passed by. This was a primary task for those who had given the title of ‘Pope’.

	However, if the Pope stopped to give sermons in every person in his visit, the number of people would become endless. So, he only gave the blessing to babies, families who became faithful servants in the service of God and Brimir; and brave soldiers who served in the crusade.		However, if the Pope would stopped to give sermons in every person in his visit, the number of people would become endless. So, he only gave the blessing to babies, families who became faithful servants in the service of God and Brimir; and brave soldiers who served in the crusade.

	For Romalia, they needed to continue with the developments of the crusade as soon as possible, so this visit of the Pope had a great and deep political gain.		For Romalia, they needed to continue with the developments of the crusade as soon as possible, so this visit of the Pope had a great and deep political gain.
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	It seemed that planning a move during the course of their journey was impossible.		It seemed that planning a move during the course of their journey was impossible.

	Also, the ~~guard~~ of the Pope ~~was~~ always at the frontline, this would make impossible to ~~prepare~~ a trap in advance. Thus, attempting a surprise attack when they were in the vicinity of ~~the~~ forest would be unsuccessful due to low number of soldiers at their disposal, compared to the vastness of knights guarding Pope.		Also, the guards of the Pope were always at the frontline, this would make impossible to setup a trap in advance. Thus, attempting a surprise attack when they were in the vicinity of a forest would be unsuccessful due to low number of soldiers at their disposal, compared to the vastness of knights guarding Pope.

	So in the end, the progress in rescuing Tabitha was still stagnant.		So in the end, the progress in rescuing Tabitha was still stagnant.
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	“Just as I thought, then we do not have any other option but to attack in the front, if we can attack with everything we have, in the end maybe one of us will be able to reach and rescue Tabitha,” said Malicorne while nodding at himself.		“Just as I thought, then we do not have any other option but to attack in the front, if we can attack with everything we have, in the end maybe one of us will be able to reach and rescue Tabitha,” said Malicorne while nodding at himself.

	“That~~'s impossible.~~ But then if there is no other option~~. We must~~ use the decoy plan.”		“That will be suicide! But then if there is no other option, maybe, we can just use the decoy plan.”

	“Decoy plan?”		“Decoy plan?”
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	“Exactly,” said Saito.		“Exactly,” said Saito.

	“I will begin to make a ~~fuss in close to~~ them to get their attention, then you have to go after Tabitha...”		“I will begin to make a scene near them to get their attention, then you just have to go after Tabitha...”

	Without completing, suddenly a voice came from behind him.		Without completing, suddenly a voice came from behind him.
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	When they turned back, what they found was a large muscular man standing near them. Immediately, all present, from within their monk robes, prepared to arm themselves with wands and swords.		When they turned back, what they found was a large muscular man standing near them. Immediately, all present, from within their monk robes, prepared to arm themselves with wands and swords.

	“It's me Chikasui.” said the man.		“It's me Chikasui!” said the man.

	“But you're a man?!” cried Louise.		“But you're a man?!” cried Louise.
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	“We will be annihilated! They will surely destroy us!"		“We will be annihilated! They will surely destroy us!"

	“We cannot consider "team work" in this plan because all present here came from different nations with their own different ways of organization. So, running a precise and flawless plan was frankly impossible, the only possible option left is to buy time for someone to get into the carriage and perform the rescue, then that someone will take care to safeguard the Queen and bring her safely to Lutetia.”		“We cannot consider "team work" in this plan because all present here came from different nations with their own different ways of organization. So, running a precise and flawless plan was frankly impossible, the only possible option left is to buy time for someone to get into the carriage and perform the rescue, then that someone will take care and safeguard the Queen and bring her safely to Lutetia.”

	“You might be right, we don’t seem to have any more options.” Castlemont said while nodding to Isabella.		“You might be right, we don’t seem to have any more options.” Castlemont said while nodding to Isabella.
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	Taking those account, Saito then began to notice each one of those around him. All appeared to be quiet, however, in their eyes he could see a complete resolution.		Taking those account, Saito then began to notice each one of those around him. All appeared to be quiet, however, in their eyes he could see a complete resolution.

	Then after seeing the nervous faces Malicorne of Guiche, Saito finally understood:		Then after seeing the nervous faces of Malicorne and Guiche, Saito finally understood:

	"It seems that the one who is being naive...is me."		"It seems that the one who is being naive...is me."

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