Zero no Tsukaima:Volume19 Chapter10 - Revision history

Rxls at 15:32, 30 June 2018

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	===Chapter 10 - Escape=== <!-- 脱出 -->		===Chapter 10: Escape=== <!-- 脱出 -->

	The boat tugged by two dolphins was sprinting through the canals.		The boat tugged by two dolphins was sprinting through the canals.

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	Then Luctiana held out her hand to Tiffania.		Then Luctiana held out her hand to Tiffania.

	"Elves said a lot of hurtful things about you, but I envy you a little. Half elf, half barbarian~~; awesome~~, isn't it?"		"Elves said a lot of hurtful things about you, but I envy you a little. Half elf, half barbarian. Awesome, isn't it?"

	"Really?"		"Really?"
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	"Yes."		"Yes."

	"Right, 'as a friend.' He just wants you," ~~said~~ the merciless Luctiana.		"Right, 'as a friend.' He just wants you." Said the merciless Luctiana.

	Tiffania was close to tears. This conversation had become too exciting for her. She was thoroughly confused. She said, "I might have a problem."		Tiffania was close to tears. This conversation had become too exciting for her. She was thoroughly confused. She said, "I might have a problem."
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Txtracer: fix typos and grammatical errors, some clarifications

2017-09-09T03:54:41Z

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JFerg at 02:29, 31 January 2017

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	"Yes, sorry, I wanted to see! I am sorry I exist! Louise, forgive me! This is so wrong!"		"Yes, sorry, I wanted to see! I am sorry I exist! Louise, forgive me! This is so wrong!"

	"No distinction, huh? This is low."		"No distinction, huh? This is low." Luctiana butted in. "No! There is a distinction! Definitely!"

	Luctiana butted in.

	"No! There is a distinction! Definitely!"

	"Oh, Louise. If partner gets in trouble like that again, she will show them to you. I'd say it's the best medicine."		"Oh, Louise. If partner gets in trouble like that again, she will show them to you. I'd say it's the best medicine."
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	"Yes."		"Yes."

	"Right, 'as a friend.' He just wants you," said a merciless Luctiana.		"Right, 'as a friend.' He just wants you," said the merciless Luctiana.

	Tiffania was close to tears. This conversation had become too exciting for her. She was thoroughly confused. She said, "I might have a problem."		Tiffania was close to tears. This conversation had become too exciting for her. She was thoroughly confused. She said, "I might have a problem."
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	Tiffania nodded.		Tiffania nodded.

	"I don't know, if you guys are done with Holy War you could stay with me. I take care about my place."		"I don't know, but if you guys are done with Holy War you could stay with me. I take care about my place."

	"Don't joke about it, you dumb elf," said a disappointed Saito.		"Don't joke about it, you dumb elf," said a disappointed Saito.
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	"Yes."		"Yes."

	"Actually it's an imitation."		"Actually it's an imitation." Luctiana boastfully said to a surprised Saito.

	"Imitation?" ~~Luctiana boastfully said to a surprised~~ Saito.		"Imitation?" Saito asked.

	"Yes. Making intelligent swords, or rather giving them intent is an elvish hobby, like Ali's swords that you have seen recently. This one most likely was made by elves."		"Yes. Making intelligent swords, or rather giving them intent is an elvish hobby, like Ali's swords that you have seen recently. This one most likely was made by elves."
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	"Huh? What? Did he? Was it Sasha? Did she kill Founder Brimir? No way!"		"Huh? What? Did he? Was it Sasha? Did she kill Founder Brimir? No way!"

	"I wish it was a lie~~. While~~ you were discussing it I remebered the whole thing. Good grief, I wanted to forget it."		"I wish it was a lie, but while you were discussing it I remebered the whole thing. Good grief, I wanted to forget it." Derfflinger replied earnestly.

	Derfflinger replied earnestly.

	"I went through this guy's chest."		"I went through this guy's chest."

Leviticus: Corrections of the previous edit (punctuation placement).

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Corrections of the previous edit (punctuation placement).

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	The boat tugged by two dolphins was sprinting through the canals.		The boat tugged by two dolphins was sprinting through the canals.

	Splashing the water it easily ~~outrAn~~ other boats. Their passengers looked at it with surprise but it didn't bother Luctiana at all.		Splashing the water it easily outran other boats. Their passengers looked at it with surprise but it didn't bother Luctiana at all.

	Saito was still overwhelmed by Derfflinger's revival. Even though it had revived some time ago, it didn't have enough mental power to speak until now.		Saito was still overwhelmed by Derfflinger's revival. Even though it had revived some time ago, it didn't have enough mental power to speak until now.
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	"Where is it?"		"Where is it?"

	"You gonna like it." replied Luctiana with a smile.		"You gonna like it," replied Luctiana with a smile.

	"What will happen when you're done with your research?"		"What will happen when you're done with your research?"
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	"What do you mean?"		"What do you mean?"

	"That's how I am. If I think something is right I'm doing it, consequences be damned" Luctiana laughed loudly. Saito was amazed.		"That's how I am. If I think something is right I'm doing it, consequences be damned." Luctiana laughed loudly. Saito was amazed.

	"Helping us you committed high treason. If they catch you it's a death penalty, isn't it?" said Saito.		"Helping us you committed high treason. If they catch you it's a death penalty, isn't it?" said Saito.
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	"Hey! Fool! What are you saying! It's not like I didn't want to see those all the while!"		"Hey! Fool! What are you saying! It's not like I didn't want to see those all the while!"

	"Mine? Really?" asked Tiffania in a choked voice." ... all the while? Did you want to see them?"		"Mine? Really?" asked Tiffania in a choked voice. "... all the while? Did you want to see them?"

	Saito's face contorted. He hated to lie. Lying was wrong. So, he confessed.		Saito's face contorted. He hated to lie. Lying was wrong. So, he confessed.
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	"Yes."		"Yes."

	"Right, 'as a friend'. He just wants you" said a merciless Luctiana.		"Right, 'as a friend.' He just wants you," said a merciless Luctiana.

	Tiffania was close to tears. This conversation had become too exciting for her. She was thoroughly confused. She said "I might have a problem."		Tiffania was close to tears. This conversation had become too exciting for her. She was thoroughly confused. She said, "I might have a problem."

	"Tiffa?"		"Tiffa?"
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	Almost crying, Tiffania continued her monologue.		Almost crying, Tiffania continued her monologue.

	"But Saito loves Louise. He can't fall in love with me. At least I think so. I don't have much experience in these things. But, anyway, I did it. Mother told me that I shouldn't show it to anyone other than her son-in-law. But Saito can't her ~~become~~ son-in-law. He loves Louise. What should I do..."		"But Saito loves Louise. He can't fall in love with me. At least I think so. I don't have much experience in these things. But, anyway, I did it. Mother told me that I shouldn't show it to anyone other than her son-in-law. But Saito can't become her son-in-law. He loves Louise. What should I do..."

	"Tiffa."		"Tiffa."
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	"I don't know, if you guys are done with Holy War you could stay with me. I take care about my place."		"I don't know, if you guys are done with Holy War you could stay with me. I take care about my place."

	"Don't joke about it, you dumb elf." said a disappointed Saito.		"Don't joke about it, you dumb elf," said a disappointed Saito.

	Tiffania fainted and fell back on her cape.		Tiffania fainted and fell back on her cape.
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	"Actually it's an imitation."		"Actually it's an imitation."

	"Imitation?" Luctiana boastfully said to surprised Saito.		"Imitation?" Luctiana boastfully said to a surprised Saito.

	"Yes. Making intelligent swords, or rather giving them intent is an elvish hobby, like Ali's swords that you have seen recently. This one most likely was made by elves."		"Yes. Making intelligent swords, or rather giving them intent is an elvish hobby, like Ali's swords that you have seen recently. This one most likely was made by elves."

	"Huh? What are you saying? This is Japanese sword... from my home country... a katana, the weapon of a samurai."		"Huh? What are you saying? This is a Japanese sword... from my home country... a katana, the weapon of a samurai."

	Saito remembered this from the movies.		Saito remembered this from the movies.
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	"Now that you mentioned it, was Founder's Gandálfr an elf? Did Sasha that I had seen in my dream make you?"		"Now that you mentioned it, was Founder's Gandálfr an elf? Did Sasha that I had seen in my dream make you?"

	Luctiana's eyes widened. She asked intently "What? Founder's Gandálfr was an elf?"		Luctiana's eyes widened. She asked intently: "What? Founder's Gandálfr was an elf?"

	"Well, it was just a dream that I saw..."		"Well, it was just a dream that I saw..."
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	Saito and Luctiana stared at each other.		Saito and Luctiana stared at each other.

	"...what the hell happened six thousand years ago?"		"... what the hell happened six thousand years ago?"

	"It was so long ago, even I don't know. But it suddenly became very interesting."		"It was so long ago, even I don't know. But it suddenly became very interesting."

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Comrade at 19:52, 14 October 2016

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	Said Derfflinger. Tiffania blushed even more and hanged her head.		Said Derfflinger. Tiffania blushed even more and hanged her head.

	"Hey! Fool! What are you saying! ~~Its~~ not like I didn't want to see those all the while!"		"Hey! Fool! What are you saying! It's not like I didn't want to see those all the while!"

	"Mine? Really?"		"Mine? Really?"

Malakacrazy at 17:02, 24 August 2016

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	*Chapter 10 - Escape <!-- 脱出 -->		===Chapter 10 - Escape=== <!-- 脱出 -->

	The boat tugged by two dolphins was sprinting through the canals.		The boat tugged by two dolphins was sprinting through the canals.

Comrade at 20:10, 19 August 2016

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	Derfflinger, a sword with intent, was resting in the sea breeze. All these memories made it sad.		Derfflinger, a sword with intent, was resting in the sea breeze. All these memories made it sad.

	"Can something like that happen again? No way!" Even though it though so, the sword knew that it was only a tool.		''Can something like that happen again? No way!'' Even though it though so, the sword knew that it was only a tool.

	It looked at the bright blue skies.		It looked at the bright blue skies.

Comrade at 20:09, 19 August 2016

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	He couldn't imagine himself plunging a sword through her chest.		He couldn't imagine himself plunging a sword through her chest.

	Why the hell did you do it?		''Why the hell did you do it?''