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	"What is wrong with these goddamn barbarians? They think their land will be destroyed, yet they fight among themselves.", said the monk with light brown hair and grey eyes.		"What is wrong with these goddamn barbarians? They think their land will be destroyed, yet they fight among themselves.", said the monk with light brown hair and grey eyes.

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	"What is wrong with these goddamn barbarians? They think their land will be destroyed, yet they fight among themselves," said the monk with light brown hair and grey eyes.		"What is wrong with these goddamn barbarians? They think their land will be destroyed, yet they fight among themselves.", said the monk with light brown hair and grey eyes.

	His name was Madalf. He was thirty-seven years old, but humans wouldn't think him even twenty. Elves live about twice longer then humans.		His name was Madalf. He was thirty-seven years old, but humans wouldn't think him even twenty. Elves live about twice longer then humans.
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	"Rather shortsighted I suppose."		"Rather shortsighted I suppose."

	"Nothing new," - said Ali, commander of the group. He just wanted to quickly complete the mission and return to the desert. His body was slender and he looked nervous. It was difficult to guess that he was a veteran warrior.		"Nothing new." - said Ali, commander of the group. He just wanted to quickly complete the mission and return to the desert. His body was slender and he looked nervous. It was difficult to guess that he was a veteran warrior.

	He was forty years old, and likewise looked twice younger.		He was forty years old, and likewise looked twice younger.
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	"Meaning?" - prompted Madalf.		"Meaning?" - prompted Madalf.

	"The current minor conflict is more important than a future catastrophe. They are just animals," Ali said with contempt in his voice.		"The current minor conflict is more important than a future catastrophe. They are just animals." Ali said with contempt in his voice.

	His group of elves was watching the brawl from the bushes. Night darkness didn't present any problem for them. They used goggles enchanted with Ancient Magic to sense body temperature.		His group of elves was watching the brawl from the bushes. Night darkness didn't present any problem for them. They used goggles enchanted with Ancient Magic to sense body temperature.
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	"They will not escape."		"They will not escape."

	Louise started the chase using the "teleport" spell.		Louise started the chase using the 'teleport' spell.

	Ali, carrying Saito, tried to climb out of the pond. It was difficult because the land at the waterfront was brittle.		Ali, carrying Saito, tried to climb out of the pond. It was difficult because the land at the waterfront was brittle.
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	"She hasn't returned yet."		"She hasn't returned yet."

	"Really...really unruly girl."		"Really... really unruly girl."

	"What's the plan?"		"What's the plan?"
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	"One more time, release Saito and leave."		"One more time, release Saito and leave."

	There was no point in killing a Demon's Follower; the power would be passed on to someone else.		There was no point in killing a Demon's Follower, the power would be passed on to someone else.

	But considering her ability, running was not an option either. Apparently she could catch up with them instantly.		But considering her ability, running was not an option either. Apparently she could catch up with them instantly.
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	"'Demon' is not all that scary, huh?" said Madalf laughing. He also realized the nature of Louise's power.		"'Demon' is not all that scary, huh?" said Madalf laughing. He also realized the nature of Louise's power.

	"Bidashal's decision to separate them was wise" Ali nodded and started walking to the camp.		"Bidashal's decision to separate them was wise." Ali nodded and started walking to the camp.

	The camp was located several hundred mails away from the mansion. It was surrounded by a barrier created with Ancient Magic. The barrier covered an area about ten mails across. It made it impossible for outsiders to see or enter the camp.		The camp was located several hundred mails away from the mansion. It was surrounded by a barrier created with Ancient Magic. The barrier covered an area about ten mails across. It made it impossible for outsiders to see or enter the camp.
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	Saito was going to sleep for quite a while.		Saito was going to sleep for quite a while.

	Suddenly materialized "water" had helped Ali to capture Saito. Without it he wouldn't have been able to use a powerful enough spell. Ali thanked The Great Purpose.		Suddenly materialized 'water' had helped Ali to capture Saito. Without it he wouldn't have been able to use a powerful enough spell. Ali thanked The Great Purpose.

	A bit later the barrier opened again and Luctiana and Idris returned. Ali asked, surprised, "Hey, Luctiana, who is it?"		A bit later the barrier opened again and Luctiana and Idris returned. Ali asked, surprised, "Hey, Luctiana, who is it?"
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	"Elf! She is an elf, right?"		"Elf! She is an elf, right?"

	"No, not pure elf. Half-elf I think. The eye shape is the same as the barbarians," Luctiana said, looking like a scholar.		"No, not pure elf. Half-elf I think. The eye shape is the same as the barbarians." Luctiana said, looking like a scholar.

	"Where did you find her?"		"Where did you find her?"
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	"You will be responsible for her. However, if she appears to be dangerous, we are leaving her. Do you agree?"		"You will be responsible for her. However, if she appears to be dangerous, we are leaving her. Do you agree?"

	"Excellent," - nodded Luctiana.		"Excellent." - nodded Luctiana.

	"So, chief, what's the plan? If we drag them with us their friends will be looking, right? Barbarians are not stupid. Now that they know we are here, will we be able to return to Sahara?" said young Idris in a worried voice.		"So, chief, what's the plan? If we drag them with us their friends will be looking, right? Barbarians are not stupid. Now that they know we are here, will we be able to return to Sahara?" said young Idris in a worried voice.
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	"To take the form of a barbarian!? You've got to be joking!"		"To take the form of a barbarian!? You've got to be joking!"

	"We will not need it all the time," Ali said. He wasn't enthusiastic about this idea either. It was difficult for proud elves to accept the appearance of barbarians.		"We will not need it all the time." Ali said. He wasn't enthusiastic about this idea either. It was difficult for proud elves to accept the appearance of barbarians.

	"It's ok, isn't it? I wanted to do it once," cheerfully said Luctiana.		"It's ok, isn't it? I wanted to do it once.", cheerfully said Luctiana.

	"Sorry, but I can't!" spat out Madalf.		"Sorry, but I can't!" spat out Madalf.
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	Tabitha's chest was bandaged, likely the result of the confrontation with the elves.		Tabitha's chest was bandaged, likely the result of the confrontation with the elves.

	"She will be fine. Nothing life-threatening," - Colbert said.		"She will be fine. Nothing life-threatening." - Colbert said.

	"Saito? Where is Saito?"		"Saito? Where is Saito?"
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	"I can't! Saito was kidnapped!"		"I can't! Saito was kidnapped!"

	"I know. But you still can't move. Trust Guiche and the Royal Palace" said Colbert.		"I know. But you still can't move. Trust Guiche and the Royal Palace.", said Colbert.

	Louise fell from the bed and started to crawl to the door. With a pained expression, Colbert cast a spell.		Louise fell from the bed and started to crawl to the door. With a pained expression, Colbert cast a spell.
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	Ali shook his head.		Ali shook his head.

	"~~Its~~ too dangerous. Barbarian dragoons would spot us immediately."		"It's too dangerous. Barbarian dragoons would spot us immediately."

	"So what if they spot us? They already know we are here. Shouldn't we return as quickly as possible?"		"So what if they spot us? They already know we are here. Shouldn't we return as quickly as possible?"

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	"I didn't even say anything yet" said Luctiana, looking at him with her light blue eyes. Her beautiful face was tinted with anger. Anger didn't change the expression of her face, but it still was very obvious. After all, her frankness was one of the reason Ali fell for her.		"I didn't even say anything yet" said Luctiana, looking at him with her light blue eyes. Her beautiful face was tinted with anger. Anger didn't change the expression of her face, but it still was very obvious. After all, her frankness was one of the reason Ali fell for her.

	"~~Anyways~~, I suppose you want to look around?"		"Anyway, I suppose you want to look around?"

	Luctiana stuck out her tongue.		Luctiana stuck out her tongue.
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	Colbert really felt that they were out of options. Maybe the Pope had had an idea?		Colbert really felt that they were out of options. Maybe the Pope had had an idea?

	~~Anyways~~, now they could only pray for Saito's safety.		Anyway, now they could only pray for Saito's safety.

	Colbert looked in the window. It was a bright sunny day outside...		Colbert looked in the window. It was a bright sunny day outside...

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	"Excellent," - nodded Luctiana.		"Excellent," - nodded Luctiana.

	"So, chief, what's the plan? If we drag them with us, their friends will be looking, right? Barbarians are not stupid. Now that they know we are here, will we be able to return to Sahara?" said young Idris in a worried voice.		"So, chief, what's the plan? If we drag them with us their friends will be looking, right? Barbarians are not stupid. Now that they know we are here, will we be able to return to Sahara?" said young Idris in a worried voice.

	"We could use this kid's dragon" - quickly said Luctiana.		"We could use this kid's dragon" quickly said Luctiana.

	Ali shook his head.		Ali shook his head.
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	"Its too dangerous. Barbarian dragoons would spot us immediately."		"Its too dangerous. Barbarian dragoons would spot us immediately."

	"So what if they spot us? They already know we are here~~, shouldn~~'t we return as ~~quick~~ as possible?"		"So what if they spot us? They already know we are here. Shouldn't we return as quickly as possible?"

	"There are too many of us to carry. ~~Power~~ of land spirits diminishes with height, so we wouldn't be able to rely on magic. I can't allow this."		"There are too many of us to carry. The power of land spirits diminishes with height, so we wouldn't be able to rely on magic. I can't allow this."

	Defeated by Ali's arguments, Luctiana pouted. "What should we do then?"		Defeated by Ali's arguments, Luctiana pouted. "What should we do then?"

	Ali knew a method of escaping from the enemy who is aware of their presence. It was simple and effective.		Ali knew a method of escaping from the enemy who was aware of their presence. It was simple and effective. However, can he convince his two companions...

	~~But, can he convince his two companions...~~		"In short, I will use 'change' to look like a barbarian."

	"In short, I will use 'change' to look like barbarian."

	Idris's and Luctiana's faces turned light green.		Idris's and Luctiana's faces turned light green.

	"To take the form of barbarian! You've got to be joking!"		"To take the form of a barbarian!? You've got to be joking!"

	"We will not need it all the time," - Ali said. He wasn't enthusiastic about this idea either. It was difficult for proud elves to accept the appearance of barbarians.		"We will not need it all the time," Ali said. He wasn't enthusiastic about this idea either. It was difficult for proud elves to accept the appearance of barbarians.

	"It's ok, isn't it? I wanted to do it once" cheerfully said Luctiana.		"It's ok, isn't it? I wanted to do it once", cheerfully said Luctiana.

	"Sorry, I can't!" spat out Madalf.		"Sorry, but I can't!" spat out Madalf.

	"Madalf, the Council ordered us to quietly take him and return by any means necessary. The end justifies the means."		"Madalf, the Council ordered us to quietly take him and return by any means necessary. The end justifies the means."
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	"It looks bad. I didn't observe barbarians much."		"It looks bad. I didn't observe barbarians much."

	The other elves also cast the "change" spell. Ali saw the new Luctiana form and reflexively covered ~~their mouths~~.		The other elves also cast the "change" spell. Ali saw the new Luctiana form and reflexively covered his mouth.

	"What? What's so funny?"		"What? What's so funny?"
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	Luctiana hasd turned into a clown. Her face was heavily powdered and her eyes were surrounded with blue paint.		Luctiana hasd turned into a clown. Her face was heavily powdered and her eyes were surrounded with blue paint.

	Ali had also changed his appearance. His ears shrunk but his face didn't change much.		Ali had also changed his appearance. His ears had shrunk, but his face didn't change much.

	He asked everyone to check each others disguise.		He asked everyone to check each others disguise.
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	Tabitha was laying next to her. It was a big bed so there was plenty of room.		Tabitha was laying next to her. It was a big bed so there was plenty of room.

	Tabitha's chest was bandaged, likely the result of a confrontation with the elves.		Tabitha's chest was bandaged, likely the result of the confrontation with the elves.

	"She will be fine. Nothing life-threatening," - Colbert said.		"She will be fine. Nothing life-threatening," - Colbert said.
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	Colbert and Kirche exchanged glances. He tried to calm down Louise.		Colbert and Kirche exchanged glances. He tried to calm down Louise.

	"Guiche and Ondine Knights are looking for him. I also notified the Royal Palace. They will send a pursuing party immediately."		"Guiche and the Ondine Knights are looking for him. I also notified the Royal Palace. They will send a pursuing party immediately."

	Louise tried to get up and fell back ~~into~~ the bed. She still couldn't control her movements.		Louise tried to get up and fell back onto the bed. She still couldn't control her movements.

	"Please stay in the bed."		"Please stay in the bed."
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	"Hey, did they find Tiffania?" asked Kirche. Grandma Helen shook her head. Guiche wasn't really looking for Saito. Pursuit of the elves that had kidnapped Saito was left to the Royal Palace. Even if they had tried, his small group wouldn't be able to do much.		"Hey, did they find Tiffania?" asked Kirche. Grandma Helen shook her head. Guiche wasn't really looking for Saito. Pursuit of the elves that had kidnapped Saito was left to the Royal Palace. Even if they had tried, his small group wouldn't be able to do much.

	Guiche's group and Siesta were looking for Tiffania. She was supposed to arrive this morning. Her disappearance become apparent when they found an abandoned dragon.		Guiche's group and Siesta were looking for Tiffania. She was supposed to arrive this morning. Her disappearance had become apparent when they found an abandoned dragon.

	When Grandma left, Kirche asked Colbert "Maybe she was kidnapped by the elves too?"		When Grandma left, Kirche asked Colbert "Maybe she was kidnapped by the elves too?"
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	"This is horrible."		"This is horrible."

	"You mentioned you fought an elf before, right?"		"You mentioned that you had fought an elf before, right?"

	"Yes. I couldn't do much."		"Yes. I couldn't do much."
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	Colbert sighed. The reason of kidnapping seemed obvious. It was fear of the full potential of Void magic.		Colbert sighed. The reason of kidnapping seemed obvious. It was fear of the full potential of Void magic.

	Elves are bold and resourceful thought the alarmed Colbert. Caught off guard, they had kidnapped Saito and Tiffania.		Elves are bold and resourceful, thought the alarmed Colbert. Caught off guard, they had kidnapped Saito and Tiffania.

	Could the humans win?		Could the humans win?

	It wasn't just the bunch that ~~got~~ Saito.		It wasn't just the bunch that had gotten Saito.

	The entire race of elves was skillful both in Ancient Magic and conventional warfare. The army's pursuit is unlikely to succeed. For an experienced warrior this was the only possible conclusion.		The entire race of elves was skillful, both in Ancient Magic and conventional warfare. The army's pursuit was unlikely to succeed. For an experienced warrior, this was the only possible conclusion.

	Louise thrashed about in her sleep. With her sense of responsibility, the moment she woke up she would rush out to rescue Saito.		Louise thrashed about in her sleep. With her sense of responsibility, the moment she woke up she would rush out to rescue Saito.
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	What kind of "preparation" could give them a chance against the elves?		What kind of "preparation" could give them a chance against the elves?

	With the trump ~~card~~ of Saito and Void mage Tiffania kidnapped, what preparations would still make sense?		With the trump cards of Saito and Void mage Tiffania kidnapped, what preparations would still make sense?

	That said, they couldn't just do nothing. There was no guarantee that Saito was safe.		That said, they couldn't just do nothing. There was no guarantee that Saito was safe.

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	"What is wrong with these goddamn barbarians? They think their land will be destroyed, yet they fight among themselves."		"What is wrong with these goddamn barbarians? They think their land will be destroyed, yet they fight among themselves."

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	"What is wrong with these goddamn barbarians? They think their land will be destroyed, yet they fight among themselves."		"What is wrong with these goddamn barbarians? They think their land will be destroyed, yet they fight among themselves."