Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 - Revision history

Leviticus: "noinclude" is necessary for the Full Text versions of the page.

2023-11-24T21:34:41Z

"noinclude" is necessary for the Full Text versions of the page.

← Older revision		Revision as of 21:34, 24 November 2023
Line 1:		Line 1:
			<noinclude>
	==Kingdom of Magic==		==Kingdom of Magic==
	</noinclude>		</noinclude>

Shadow Walker13: Replaced all triple dots with proper ellipses; replaced some double spaces with single spaces

2023-10-31T20:48:04Z

Replaced all triple dots with proper ellipses; replaced some double spaces with single spaces

Show changes

Shadow Walker13: changed an instance of "geez" to "jeez", as "jeez" is the spelling this story seems to use more often

2023-10-31T18:56:02Z

changed an instance of "geez" to "jeez", as "jeez" is the spelling this story seems to use more often

← Older revision		Revision as of 18:56, 31 October 2023
Line 176:		Line 176:
	His face twisted in panic.		His face twisted in panic.

	"Ah, ~~geez~~! I told you to stay still!"		"Ah, jeez! I told you to stay still!"
	Louise grabbed Saito's face roughly with her left hand.		Louise grabbed Saito's face roughly with her left hand.

Shadow Walker13: Replaced the en dashes of my previous edit with em dashes

2023-10-30T22:28:59Z

Replaced the en dashes of my previous edit with em dashes

← Older revision		Revision as of 22:28, 30 October 2023
Line 455:		Line 455:
	Parents' evaluation: "You should study more. You're on the slow side."		Parents' evaluation: "You should study more. You're on the slow side."

	Being slow, he was rarely bothered by accidents, and accepted pretty much anything – relative to most people, at least. Earlier, when he saw people flying, he made a commotion, but given that an ordinary person would have been so shocked as to be brought to their knees, he owed much to his disposition.		Being slow, he was rarely bothered by accidents, and accepted pretty much anything — relative to most people, at least. Earlier, when he saw people flying, he made a commotion, but given that an ordinary person would have been so shocked as to be brought to their knees, he owed much to his disposition.
	<!-- <Cala-kun> spliced in lines from SaiyaJedi's translation -->		<!-- <Cala-kun> spliced in lines from SaiyaJedi's translation -->

Line 607:		Line 607:
	Saito sprung upon Louise.		Saito sprung upon Louise.

	"~~Kya–~~! What are you doing?!"		"Kya—! What are you doing?!"

	Knocking over a chair, he bore down on her.		Knocking over a chair, he bore down on her.
Line 886:		Line 886:
	A lacy camisole and matching panties. White, too. ''What exquisite and delicate pieces'', Saito thought as his face began to flush. He clenched them tightly as a mix of indignation and delight welled up.		A lacy camisole and matching panties. White, too. ''What exquisite and delicate pieces'', Saito thought as his face began to flush. He clenched them tightly as a mix of indignation and delight welled up.

	"Why do I have ~~to–~~ Your underwear?! Wash them?! Frankly, I'm both flattered and offended!"		"Why do I have to— Your underwear?! Wash them?! Frankly, I'm both flattered and offended!"

	He bolted upright, without even realizing he'd done so. Louise was pulling a large nightgown over her head. And in the dim light thrown off by the lamp, he could see the outline of her figure. While he couldn't make out any other details, it didn't seem as though she was embarrassed. It was kind of disappointing. He felt as though his masculinity were being denied.		He bolted upright, without even realizing he'd done so. Louise was pulling a large nightgown over her head. And in the dim light thrown off by the lamp, he could see the outline of her figure. While he couldn't make out any other details, it didn't seem as though she was embarrassed. It was kind of disappointing. He felt as though his masculinity were being denied.
Line 897:		Line 897:
	-->		-->

	"You're my familiar, right? Laundry, cleaning, other menial tasks – they're naturally your job."		"You're my familiar, right? Laundry, cleaning, other menial tasks — they're naturally your job."

	Saito pulled the blanket over his head again.		Saito pulled the blanket over his head again.

Shadow Walker13: Changed a curly single quote to straight; changed some punctuation and capitalization; replaced some hyphens and an em dash with en dashes

2023-10-30T21:57:17Z

Changed a curly single quote to straight; changed some punctuation and capitalization; replaced some hyphens and an em dash with en dashes

Show changes

IcePhantom: Reverted edits by 108.162.210.157 (talk) to last revision by Niita

2018-02-25T08:32:46Z

Reverted edits by 108.162.210.157 (talk) to last revision by Niita

← Older revision		Revision as of 08:32, 25 February 2018
Line 935:		Line 935:
	''Okay,'' thought Saito. ''It's not like I've been stranded on a deserted island. Moping will achieve nothing.''		''Okay,'' thought Saito. ''It's not like I've been stranded on a deserted island. Moping will achieve nothing.''

	''I'll live as		''I'll live as a familiar, and in the process, I'll look for a way to return home.''

			Now that his plan was set, he felt noticeably sleepy.

	No matter the situation, Saito's amazing adaptability had always saved him. Where anyone else would've panicked and crumbled, Saito came through thanks to his flexible personality.		No matter the situation, Saito's amazing adaptability had always saved him. Where anyone else would've panicked and crumbled, Saito came through thanks to his flexible personality.

108.162.210.157 at 07:44, 25 February 2018

2018-02-25T07:44:57Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 07:44, 25 February 2018
Line 935:		Line 935:
	''Okay,'' thought Saito. ''It's not like I've been stranded on a deserted island. Moping will achieve nothing.''		''Okay,'' thought Saito. ''It's not like I've been stranded on a deserted island. Moping will achieve nothing.''

	''I'll live as ~~a familiar, and in the process, I'll look for a way to return home.''~~		''I'll live as

	~~Now that his plan was set, he felt noticeably sleepy.~~

	No matter the situation, Saito's amazing adaptability had always saved him. Where anyone else would've panicked and crumbled, Saito came through thanks to his flexible personality.		No matter the situation, Saito's amazing adaptability had always saved him. Where anyone else would've panicked and crumbled, Saito came through thanks to his flexible personality.

Niita: /* Chapter One: I'm a Familiar */

2017-08-25T02:07:52Z

Chapter One: I'm a Familiar

← Older revision		Revision as of 02:07, 25 August 2017
Line 23:		Line 23:
	''I don't recognize it''.''		''I don't recognize it''.''

	Saito was lying on the ground, face up, though he was unsure of how he had ~~got~~ there.		Saito was lying on the ground, face up, though he was unsure of how he had gotten there.
	He raised his head to take a look around.		He raised his head to take a look around.
	A crowd of people in black cloaks were curiously examining him.		A crowd of people in black cloaks were curiously examining him.

Asdfasdf: ^

2017-04-08T17:12:21Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 17:12, 8 April 2017
Line 11:		Line 11:
	She seemed to be close to Saito's age.		She seemed to be close to Saito's age.
	Underneath a black cloak, she wore a white blouse and a gray pleated skirt.		Underneath a black cloak, she wore a white blouse and a gray pleated skirt.
	She knelt down, inspected and was astonished at his face.		She knelt down, inspected and was astonished by his face.

	''Her face is... cute.''		''Her face is... cute.''

Asdfasdf: Changed some vocabs in the first few sentences

2017-04-08T17:11:15Z

Changed some vocabs in the first few sentences

← Older revision		Revision as of 17:11, 8 April 2017
Line 7:		Line 7:
	"Who are you?" asked the girl intently.		"Who are you?" asked the girl intently.
	She was examining Saito's face.		She was examining Saito's face.
	~~The sky~~ was ~~a clear~~ blue ~~behind her~~.		Behind her was an azure blue sky.

	She seemed to be close to Saito's age.		She seemed to be close to Saito's age.
	Underneath a black cloak, she wore a white blouse and a gray pleated skirt.		Underneath a black cloak, she wore a white blouse and a gray pleated skirt.
	She knelt down and ~~looked, shocked,~~ at his face.		She knelt down, inspected and was astonished at his face.

	''Her face is... cute.''		''Her face is... cute.''