Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter3 - Revision history

Shadow Walker13: Replaced all triple dots with proper ellipses

2023-10-31T20:50:37Z

Replaced all triple dots with proper ellipses

Shadow Walker13: Some minor grammar changes; replaced two uses of "Saito-san" and a use of "Guiche-sama" with "Mr. Saito" and "Sir Guiche", respectively; removed a couple of odd-sounding, unnecessary lines (both consisting of only "And then..."), moved many dialogue tags and action beats to be on the same line as their dialogue. If this is too much to count as just a "minor edit", or if it reads weirdly now, then please let me know.

2023-10-31T01:39:13Z

Some minor grammar changes; replaced two uses of "Saito-san" and a use of "Guiche-sama" with "Mr. Saito" and "Sir Guiche", respectively; removed a couple of odd-sounding, unnecessary lines (both consisting of only "And then..."), moved many dialogue tags and action beats to be on the same line as their dialogue. If this is too much to count as just a "minor edit", or if it reads weirdly now, then please let me know.

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Veritatis cupitor at 06:20, 4 October 2015

2015-10-04T06:20:58Z

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	"Oh no, not me. I'm a commoner, just like you. I serve the nobility here by doing domestic duties."		"Oh no, not me. I'm a commoner, just like you. I serve the nobility here by doing domestic duties."

	''I'm actually from Earth and not a commoner, but it's probably useless to try explain.'' Saito decided to just introduce himself.		''I'm actually from Earth and not a commoner, but it's probably useless to try to explain.'' Saito decided to just introduce himself.
	<!-- clarification to future editors, first sentence is a thought to himself, (or perhaps author narration) and as a result of the reasoning in that sentence, in the second sentence, Saito decides to just introduce himself. [oldid=9048] -->		<!-- clarification to future editors, first sentence is a thought to himself, (or perhaps author narration) and as a result of the reasoning in that sentence, in the second sentence, Saito decides to just introduce himself. [oldid=9048] -->

Denormative: Updating references to new style.

2013-02-27T00:10:36Z

Updating references to new style.

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	"Are you running away?"		"Are you running away?"

	"Don't be stupid. I can't taint the dining table of nobles with the blood of a commoner, can I? I'll be waiting at <~~span id="back_to_vestri"~~>[~~[Talk~~:~~Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume1_Story1_Chapter3#vestri\|~~Vestri]]</~~span~~> Court. Come once you're finished delivering those cakes."		"Don't be stupid. I can't taint the dining table of nobles with the blood of a commoner, can I? I'll be waiting at Vestri<ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vestri Vestri] is a dwarf in Norse mythology representing West.</ref> Court. Come once you're finished delivering those cakes."

	Looking excited, Guiche's friends stood up and followed him off.		Looking excited, Guiche's friends stood up and followed him off.
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	"Don't you forget! You're my familiar!"		"Don't you forget! You're my familiar!"

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			==Translator's Notes and References==
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Sab: /* Chapter Three: Legend */

2012-09-12T06:27:37Z

Chapter Three: Legend

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	"Right, right. Now I remember. It's just that you talked so fast I never really caught it. So, Colby <!-- I think its best to leave out honourifics, since we are not using it much in this project, i suggest changing one with "-kun" to a nick name, or simply just the name.-->, what is it about this book?"		"Right, right. Now I remember. It's just that you talked so fast I never really caught it. So, Colby<!-- I think its best to leave out honourifics, since we are not using it much in this project, i suggest changing one with "-kun" to a nick name, or simply just the name.-->, what is it about this book?"

	"Please take a look at this also!"		"Please take a look at this also!"

Vaelis at 20:59, 23 April 2012

2012-04-23T20:59:06Z

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	"Are you running away?"		"Are you running away?"

	"Don't be stupid. I can't taint the dining table of nobles with the blood of a commoner, can I? I'll be waiting at <span id="back_to_vestri">[[Talk:Zero_no_Tsukaima:~~Volume1_Chapter3~~#vestri\|Vestri]]</span> Court. Come once you're finished delivering those cakes."		"Don't be stupid. I can't taint the dining table of nobles with the blood of a commoner, can I? I'll be waiting at <span id="back_to_vestri">[[Talk:Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume1_Story1_Chapter3#vestri\|Vestri]]</span> Court. Come once you're finished delivering those cakes."

	Looking excited, Guiche's friends stood up and followed him off.		Looking excited, Guiche's friends stood up and followed him off.

Vaelis: moved Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Chapter3 to Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter3

2012-04-21T12:01:37Z

moved Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Chapter3 to Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter3

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(No difference)

Vaelis at 08:30, 20 April 2012

2012-04-20T08:30:39Z

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	Saito leapt into action.		Saito leapt into action.

	[[Image:ZNT-page105.jpg\|thumb~~\|''"Stupid tin cans..."''~~]]		[[Image:ZNT-page105.jpg\|thumb]]

	At the sight of his golem sliced in two as though it was a lump of clay, Guiche uttered a tormented moan.		At the sight of his golem sliced in two as though it was a lump of clay, Guiche uttered a tormented moan.

Vaelis at 08:30, 20 April 2012

2012-04-20T08:30:18Z

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	[[Image:ZNT-page083.jpg\|thumb~~\|''"Delicious. I'm going to cry."''~~]]		[[Image:ZNT-page083.jpg\|thumb]]
	"This is so good~!"		"This is so good~!"

Vaelis at 13:29, 22 December 2011

2011-12-22T13:29:50Z

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	"Don't you forget! You're my familiar!"		"Don't you forget! You're my familiar!"

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