Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story2 Chapter1 - Revision history

Shadow Walker13: Replaced all triple dots with proper ellipses

2023-10-31T20:52:53Z

Replaced all triple dots with proper ellipses

Shadow Walker13: Changed a bolded word to italics; hyphenated "expensive-looking"; replaced some hyphens with em dashes; changed "moustache" and "make-up" to their more common American spellings; changed some double quotes to singles; minor capitalization and spelling; moved some lines to be next to their dialogue

2023-10-31T18:52:58Z

Changed a bolded word to italics; hyphenated "expensive-looking"; replaced some hyphens with em dashes; changed "moustache" and "make-up" to their more common American spellings; changed some double quotes to singles; minor capitalization and spelling; moved some lines to be next to their dialogue

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Veritatis cupitor at 07:23, 4 October 2015

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	One morning, while he was wiping her face with a towel, he lightly traced Louise's face with a piece of charcoal he had found.		One morning, while he was wiping her face with a towel, he lightly traced Louise's face with a piece of charcoal he had found.

	Seeing his masterwork drawn on Louise's face, Saito barely held in a snigger. Then in ~~pretend~~ obsequience, he politely bowed his head to Louise.		Seeing his masterwork drawn on Louise's face, Saito barely held in a snigger. Then in mock obsequience, he politely bowed his head to Louise.

	"Mistress. You are the epitome of beauty this day." <!-- <Cala> 'This day' as opposed to 'today'; butt-kissing servant mode. -->		"Mistress. You are the epitome of beauty this day." <!-- <Cala> 'This day' as opposed to 'today'; butt-kissing servant mode. -->

Denormative: Updating references to new style.

2013-02-27T00:12:03Z

Updating references to new style.

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	Colbert flustered nervously as he wiped sweat from his balding forehead. Then, regaining composure, he faced her seriously.		Colbert flustered nervously as he wiped sweat from his balding forehead. Then, regaining composure, he faced her seriously.

	"Miss Longueville. Have you heard of the Ball of <~~span id="back_to_frigg"~~>[~~[Talk~~:~~Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume1_Story2_Chapter1#frigg\|~~Frigg]]</~~span~~> that is being held on the day of Yule?" <!-- <Cala> Frigg, a Norse goddess. Wiki it. -->		"Miss Longueville. Have you heard of the Ball of Frigg<ref>In Norse mythology, [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Frigg Frigg] (Eddas) or Frigga (Gesta Danorum) was said to be "foremost among the goddesses," the wife of Odin, queen of the Æsir, and goddess of the sky.</ref> that is being held on the day of Yule?" <!-- <Cala> Frigg, a Norse goddess. Wiki it. -->

	"No, I haven't."		"No, I haven't."
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	"That was most intriguing indeed, Mister Colbert."		"That was most intriguing indeed, Mister Colbert."

	<noinclude>{{Nav\|{{FULLPAGENAME}}\|{{ZnT List v1}}\|Zero no Tsukaima}}</noinclude>		<noinclude>
			==Translator's Notes and References==
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Vaelis at 21:00, 23 April 2012

2012-04-23T21:00:55Z

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	Colbert flustered nervously as he wiped sweat from his balding forehead. Then, regaining composure, he faced her seriously.		Colbert flustered nervously as he wiped sweat from his balding forehead. Then, regaining composure, he faced her seriously.

	"Miss Longueville. Have you heard of the Ball of <span id="back_to_frigg">[[Talk:Zero_no_Tsukaima:~~Volume1_Story1_Chapter4~~#frigg\|Frigg]]</span> that is being held on the day of Yule?" <!-- <Cala> Frigg, a Norse goddess. Wiki it. -->		"Miss Longueville. Have you heard of the Ball of <span id="back_to_frigg">[[Talk:Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume1_Story2_Chapter1#frigg\|Frigg]]</span> that is being held on the day of Yule?" <!-- <Cala> Frigg, a Norse goddess. Wiki it. -->

	"No, I haven't."		"No, I haven't."

Vaelis at 20:59, 23 April 2012

2012-04-23T20:59:57Z

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	Colbert flustered nervously as he wiped sweat from his balding forehead. Then, regaining composure, he faced her seriously.		Colbert flustered nervously as he wiped sweat from his balding forehead. Then, regaining composure, he faced her seriously.

	"Miss Longueville. Have you heard of the Ball of <span id="back_to_frigg">[[Talk:Zero_no_Tsukaima:~~Volume1_Chapter4~~#frigg\|Frigg]]</span> that is being held on the day of Yule?" <!-- <Cala> Frigg, a Norse goddess. Wiki it. -->		"Miss Longueville. Have you heard of the Ball of <span id="back_to_frigg">[[Talk:Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume1_Story1_Chapter4#frigg\|Frigg]]</span> that is being held on the day of Yule?" <!-- <Cala> Frigg, a Norse goddess. Wiki it. -->

	"No, I haven't."		"No, I haven't."

Vaelis at 12:11, 21 April 2012

2012-04-21T12:11:49Z

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	<noinclude>==~~Story 2:~~ Gandálfr==</noinclude>		<noinclude>==Gandálfr==</noinclude>
	===Chapter One: A Familiar's Day===		===Chapter One: A Familiar's Day===

Vaelis at 12:08, 21 April 2012

2012-04-21T12:08:42Z

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	<noinclude>==Story 2: Gandálfr==</noinclude>		<noinclude>==Story 2: Gandálfr==</noinclude>
	===Chapter ~~Four~~: A Familiar's Day===		===Chapter One: A Familiar's Day===

	It had been a week since Saito started his life as Louise's familiar at Tristain Magic Academy. If one were to explain an average day for Saito, it would read like the following: <!-- <Cala> The tense in this chapter becomes disjunctional at times from this point onwards. I'm guessing it's supposed to be a 'he does this, he does that' sort of description, weaved into recounts of certain episodes, but it still confused me plenty. Hack apart at your own discretion... oh, but do consult me or the original text whenever possible. -->		It had been a week since Saito started his life as Louise's familiar at Tristain Magic Academy. If one were to explain an average day for Saito, it would read like the following: <!-- <Cala> The tense in this chapter becomes disjunctional at times from this point onwards. I'm guessing it's supposed to be a 'he does this, he does that' sort of description, weaved into recounts of certain episodes, but it still confused me plenty. Hack apart at your own discretion... oh, but do consult me or the original text whenever possible. -->

Vaelis at 12:08, 21 April 2012

2012-04-21T12:08:29Z

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	<~~!--~~ == ~~[[zeroNT~~:~~Gandvol01editchpter04control\|Raw English Translation Available Here]]~~ == -->		<noinclude>==Story 2: Gandálfr==</noinclude>
	===Chapter Four: A Familiar's Day===		===Chapter Four: A Familiar's Day===

Vaelis: moved Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Chapter4 to Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story2 Chapter1

2012-04-21T12:01:54Z

moved Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Chapter4 to Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story2 Chapter1

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