Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story2 Chapter3 - Revision history

Shadow Walker13: Replaced all curly quotes and double spaces with straight quotes and single spaces; replaced en dashes with em dashes; replaced spoken numbers with their written forms; removed the honorific from "Derflinger-sama"; other minor grammatical changes

2023-10-31T20:42:58Z

Replaced all curly quotes and double spaces with straight quotes and single spaces; replaced en dashes with em dashes; replaced spoken numbers with their written forms; removed the honorific from "Derflinger-sama"; other minor grammatical changes

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Arcorann: I'm trying to resist fixing the unnecessary double spacing here

2016-06-12T11:33:55Z

I'm trying to resist fixing the unnecessary double spacing here

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	“Well… I’m a noble.” Louise held her head up high.		“Well… I’m a noble.” Louise held her head up high.

	At that, the shopkeeper bluntly gave the price, ~~“This will go for just~~ three thousand new gold coins.”		At that, the shopkeeper bluntly gave the price, “Two thousand écus, or three thousand new gold coins.”

	“What?! You can buy a holiday home with a garden with that!” Louise said, shocked. Saito, with no idea of the currency’s value, stood dumbly.		“What?! You can buy a holiday home with a garden with that!” Louise said, shocked. Saito, with no idea of the currency’s value, stood dumbly.

	“A famous sword is worth as much as a castle, my lady. A holiday home is quite cheap compared to this.”		“A famous sword is worth as much as a castle, my lady. A holiday home is quite cheap compared to this.”

Veritatis cupitor at 09:34, 4 October 2015

2015-10-04T09:34:46Z

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	“My name is Saito Hiraga. Nice to meet you.”		“My name is Saito Hiraga. Nice to meet you.”

	The sword fell silent, and it ~~seems~~ to closely observe Saito. After a while, it silently spoke. “So you came… are you a user?”		The sword fell silent, and it seemed to closely observe Saito. After a while, it silently spoke. “So you came… are you a user?”

	“A user?”		“A user?”

75.44.120.67 at 00:59, 17 May 2015

2015-05-17T00:59:31Z

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	“Bourdonné Street, Tristain’s widest avenue. The palace is straight ahead.” Louise pointed. <!-- TODO: Confirm “Brudan” -->		“Bourdonné Street, Tristain’s widest avenue. The palace is straight ahead.” Louise pointed. <!-- TODO: Confirm “Brudan” -->

	“Can we go the palace, then?”		“Can we go to the palace, then?”

	“What business do we have visiting Her Majesty The Queen?”		“What business do we have visiting Her Majesty The Queen?”

Coffeezombie: fix question

2015-03-31T23:43:48Z

fix question

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	“Bourdonné Street, Tristain’s widest avenue. The palace is straight ahead.” Louise pointed. <!-- TODO: Confirm “Brudan” -->		“Bourdonné Street, Tristain’s widest avenue. The palace is straight ahead.” Louise pointed. <!-- TODO: Confirm “Brudan” -->

	~~“We're going to~~ the palace, then?”		“Can we go the palace, then?”

	“What business do we have visiting Her Majesty The Queen?”		“What business do we have visiting Her Majesty The Queen?”

Coffeezombie: change sentence to question per text

2015-03-31T23:40:39Z

change sentence to question per text

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	Strong and tough wings spread out to the wind. Then, a wind dragon flew into the air and received its two passengers.		Strong and tough wings spread out to the wind. Then, a wind dragon flew into the air and received its two passengers.

	“Your Sylphid is still so awesome no matter how many times I see it!” Kirche grabbed a protruding spine and sighed in admiration. That’s right – Tabitha’s familiar ~~was~~ an infant wind dragon.		“Your Sylphid is still so awesome no matter how many times I see it!” Kirche grabbed a protruding spine and sighed in admiration. That’s right – Tabitha’s familiar is an infant wind dragon.

	The dragon, which got the name of the "Fairies of the Air" from Tabitha, swiftly and perfectly caught the upward draft around the tower, and reached 200 mails in the air in the blink of an eye.		The dragon, which got the name of the "Fairies of the Air" from Tabitha, swiftly and perfectly caught the upward draft around the tower, and reached 200 mails in the air in the blink of an eye.
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	“Bourdonné Street, Tristain’s widest avenue. The palace is straight ahead.” Louise pointed. <!-- TODO: Confirm “Brudan” -->		“Bourdonné Street, Tristain’s widest avenue. The palace is straight ahead.” Louise pointed. <!-- TODO: Confirm “Brudan” -->

	~~“To~~ the palace, then.”		“We're going to the palace, then?”

	“What business do we have visiting Her Majesty The Queen?”		“What business do we have visiting Her Majesty The Queen?”

Coffeezombie: fix tense

2015-03-31T23:33:29Z

fix tense

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	Strong and tough wings spread out to the wind. Then, a wind dragon flew into the air and received its two passengers.		Strong and tough wings spread out to the wind. Then, a wind dragon flew into the air and received its two passengers.

	“Your Sylphid is still so awesome no matter how many times I see it!” Kirche grabbed a protruding spine and sighed in admiration. That’s right – Tabitha’s familiar is an infant wind dragon.		“Your Sylphid is still so awesome no matter how many times I see it!” Kirche grabbed a protruding spine and sighed in admiration. That’s right – Tabitha’s familiar was an infant wind dragon.

	The dragon, which got the name of the "Fairies of the Air" from Tabitha, swiftly and perfectly caught the upward draft around the tower, and reached 200 mails in the air in the blink of an eye.		The dragon, which got the name of the "Fairies of the Air" from Tabitha, swiftly and perfectly caught the upward draft around the tower, and reached 200 mails in the air in the blink of an eye.

Wolfpup: Undo revision 194129 by 66.169.196.135 (talk) mails is an old europen unit for measeuring distances abd 1 mail =~1.5ft

2012-10-04T22:42:34Z

Undo revision 194129 by 66.169.196.135 (talk) mails is an old europen unit for measeuring distances abd 1 mail =~1.5ft

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	“Your Sylphid is still so awesome no matter how many times I see it!” Kirche grabbed a protruding spine and sighed in admiration. That’s right – Tabitha’s familiar is an infant wind dragon.		“Your Sylphid is still so awesome no matter how many times I see it!” Kirche grabbed a protruding spine and sighed in admiration. That’s right – Tabitha’s familiar is an infant wind dragon.

	The dragon, which got the name of the "Fairies of the Air" from Tabitha, swiftly and perfectly caught the upward draft around the tower, and reached 200 ~~miles~~ in the air in the blink of an eye.		The dragon, which got the name of the "Fairies of the Air" from Tabitha, swiftly and perfectly caught the upward draft around the tower, and reached 200 mails in the air in the blink of an eye.

	“Where?” Tabitha succinctly asked Kirche.		“Where?” Tabitha succinctly asked Kirche.

66.169.196.135: /* Chapter Three: Tristain’s Arms Dealer */

2012-10-04T21:18:25Z

Chapter Three: Tristain’s Arms Dealer

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	“Your Sylphid is still so awesome no matter how many times I see it!” Kirche grabbed a protruding spine and sighed in admiration. That’s right – Tabitha’s familiar is an infant wind dragon.		“Your Sylphid is still so awesome no matter how many times I see it!” Kirche grabbed a protruding spine and sighed in admiration. That’s right – Tabitha’s familiar is an infant wind dragon.

	The dragon, which got the name of the "Fairies of the Air" from Tabitha, swiftly and perfectly caught the upward draft around the tower, and reached 200 ~~mails~~ in the air in the blink of an eye.		The dragon, which got the name of the "Fairies of the Air" from Tabitha, swiftly and perfectly caught the upward draft around the tower, and reached 200 miles in the air in the blink of an eye.

	“Where?” Tabitha succinctly asked Kirche.		“Where?” Tabitha succinctly asked Kirche.

Vaelis at 12:09, 21 April 2012

2012-04-21T12:09:14Z

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	===Chapter ~~Six~~: Tristain’s Arms Dealer===		===Chapter Three: Tristain’s Arms Dealer===

	Kirche woke up before noon. ''Today is the Day of Void.'' She looked at her window, and found that all the glass was gone, with burn marks surrounding the frame. Still groggy, she stared at the window for a moment before remembering what happened last night.		Kirche woke up before noon. ''Today is the Day of Void.'' She looked at her window, and found that all the glass was gone, with burn marks surrounding the frame. Still groggy, she stared at the window for a moment before remembering what happened last night.