Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story2 Chapter4 - Revision history

Shadow Walker13: Changed a word to past tense ("isn't" to "wasn't")

2023-10-31T21:57:17Z

Changed a word to past tense ("isn't" to "wasn't")

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	"You… why are you tied up like this?!"		"You… why are you tied up like this?!"

	"~~Isn~~'t that your idea?!"~~<!-- <Shadow Walker13> Shouldn't this be "Wasn't" rather than "Isn't"? -->~~		"Wasn't that your idea?!"

	Above them, the golem raised its foot.		Above them, the golem raised its foot.

Shadow Walker13: Replaced curly quotes and double spaces with straight quotes and single spaces; various fairly minor spelling, punctuation, and capitalization changes

2023-10-31T21:19:54Z

Replaced curly quotes and double spaces with straight quotes and single spaces; various fairly minor spelling, punctuation, and capitalization changes

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127.0.0.1: minor grammar fixes

2016-09-27T18:47:21Z

minor grammar fixes

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	''Kirche’s fireballs will cut that rope easily. I can’t fail this one.''		''Kirche’s fireballs will cut that rope easily. I can’t fail this one.''

	She picked fireballs anyway. Aiming a small one at the target, she recited the short spell. If she ~~fails~~, Saito ~~gets~~ Kirche’s sword, and to someone esteemed like Louise, this is completely unacceptable. She finished reciting, and with her utmost concentration, flicked her wand. If it ~~works~~, a fireball ~~should~~ come out of the tip.		She picked fireballs anyway. Aiming a small one at the target, she recited the short spell. If she failed, Saito would get Kirche’s sword, and to someone esteemed like Louise, this would be completely unacceptable. She finished reciting, and with her utmost concentration, flicked her wand. If it worked, a fireball would come out of the tip.

	But nothing came out of the wand. The next moment, the wall behind Saito exploded. The shock wave shook Saito even harder. “What the hell?! Are you trying to kill me?!” Saito’s angry yell drifted down towards them.		But nothing came out of the wand. The next moment, the wall behind Saito exploded. The shock wave shook Saito even harder. “What the hell?! Are you trying to kill me?!” Saito’s angry yell drifted down towards them.
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	A row of staffs of many sorts hung on the wall, but one came to Fouquet as completely unlike a staff. It was a mail long, and made with a sort of metal that he had never seen before. He looked at the metal plate right under it, reading, “Staff of Destruction, do not remove.” His smile grew to a grin.		A row of staffs of many sorts hung on the wall, but one came to Fouquet as completely unlike a staff. It was a mail long, and made with a sort of metal that he had never seen before. He looked at the metal plate right under it, reading, “Staff of Destruction, do not remove.” His smile grew to a grin.

	Fouquet picked up the Staff of Destruction, and was shocked by its lightness. ''Just what is this thing made of?'' He had no time to ponder and ran back ~~on to~~ the golem’s shoulder.		Fouquet picked up the Staff of Destruction, and was shocked by its lightness. ''Just what is this thing made of?'' He had no time to ponder and ran back onto the golem’s shoulder.

	Fouquet burned a message onto the wall before leaving:		Fouquet burned a message onto the wall before leaving:
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	With its caped summoner sitting on its shoulder, the golem leaped over the Academy walls, landed with a huge thud, and moved toward the grasslands and beyond.		With its caped summoner sitting on its shoulder, the golem leaped over the Academy walls, landed with a huge thud, and moved toward the grasslands and beyond.

	Above the golem, the wind dragon circled around. Tabitha, sitting on the wind dragon, waved her staff for a Spell of Levitation, moving Saito and Louise onto the dragon’s back. She waved again~~, the~~ air around Saito resonated into slicing waves, shredding the binding rope into pieces.		Above the golem, the wind dragon circled around. Tabitha, sitting on the wind dragon, waved her staff for a Spell of Levitation, moving Saito and Louise onto the dragon’s back. She waved again. The air around Saito resonated into slicing waves, shredding the binding rope into pieces.

	“Thank you,” he said to Tabitha in gratitude.		“Thank you,” he said to Tabitha in gratitude.

Veritatis cupitor at 11:57, 4 October 2015

2015-10-04T11:57:28Z

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	Louise frustratingly held her fists and knelt to the ground.		Louise frustratingly held her fists and knelt to the ground.

	“Next is my turn.” Kirche aimed at the rope like a hunter would his prey. Tabitha was shaking the rope, so it was tough aiming. Despite that, Kirche kept a brisk, easy smile. Chanting a short spell, Kirche waved her wand born out from habit, fire spells ~~are~~ her specialty after all.		“Next is my turn.” Kirche aimed at the rope like a hunter would his prey. Tabitha was shaking the rope, so it was tough aiming. Despite that, Kirche kept a brisk, easy smile. Chanting a short spell, Kirche waved her wand born out from habit, fire spells were her specialty after all.

	From her wand appeared a melon-sized fireball, which flew towards Saito striking the rope, and burned it loose in an instant. Saito started to fall to the ground, but Tabitha waved her staff from the rooftop, casting a Spell of Levitation on him, causing him to slowly land on the ground.		From her wand appeared a melon-sized fireball, which flew towards Saito striking the rope, and burned it loose in an instant. Saito started to fall to the ground, but Tabitha waved her staff from the rooftop, casting a Spell of Levitation on him, causing him to slowly land on the ground.

Vaelis at 12:09, 21 April 2012

2012-04-21T12:09:39Z

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	===Chapter ~~Seven~~: Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt===		===Chapter Four: Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt===

	In Tristain, there was a mage thief by the name of "The Crumbling Dirt," who had every noble in the country cowering in fear. This one's full name was Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt.		In Tristain, there was a mage thief by the name of "The Crumbling Dirt," who had every noble in the country cowering in fear. This one's full name was Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt.

Vaelis: moved Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Chapter7 to Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story2 Chapter4

2012-04-21T12:02:31Z

moved Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Chapter7 to Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story2 Chapter4

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Vaelis at 08:28, 20 April 2012

2012-04-20T08:28:35Z

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	[[Image:ZNT-page-195.jpg\|thumb~~\|Pressing a foot against the wall, Fouquet felt the wall’s power.''~~]]		[[Image:ZNT-page-195.jpg\|thumb]]

Vaelis at 13:31, 22 December 2011

2011-12-22T13:31:37Z

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	Brightly illuminated by the moons, there was nothing else besides the mountain of dirt. Just like that, the summoning mage had disappeared into the night.		Brightly illuminated by the moons, there was nothing else besides the mountain of dirt. Just like that, the summoning mage had disappeared into the night.

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95.145.88.23: Correcting an inconsistency

2011-06-12T17:53:32Z

Correcting an inconsistency

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	Fouquet burned a message onto the wall before leaving:		Fouquet burned a message onto the wall before leaving:
	“I ~~got your~~ Staff of Destruction. ~~–Fouquet~~ the Crumbling Dirt.”		“I have the Staff of Destruction. – Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt.”

	With its caped summoner sitting on its shoulder, the golem leaped over the Academy walls, landed with a huge thud, and moved toward the grasslands and beyond.		With its caped summoner sitting on its shoulder, the golem leaped over the Academy walls, landed with a huge thud, and moved toward the grasslands and beyond.

151.20.107.100: /* Chapter Seven: Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt */

2010-02-21T14:26:05Z

Chapter Seven: Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt

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	“Okay… good luck.”		“Okay… good luck.”

	Louise brandished her wand. In the air, Tabitha began to shake the rope, wobbling Saito left and right. Spells like “fireball” have high accuracy rates, and as long as the target doesn’t move it can hit it. However, Louise had more than that to worry about – she had to make the spell work in the first place.		Louise brandished her wand. In the air, Tabitha began to shake the rope, wobbling Saito left and right. Spells like “fireball” have high accuracy rates, and as long as the target doesn’t move i can hit it. However, Louise had more than that to worry about – she had to make the spell work in the first place.

	Louise thought hard. ''What would work? Wind? Fire? Water and earth are both out… they don’t have many spells that can cut ropes. Fire spells work the best here…''and here Louise remembered that that is exactly what Kirche is good at.		Louise thought hard. ''What would work? Wind? Fire? Water and earth are both out… they don’t have many spells that can cut ropes. Fire spells work the best here…''and here Louise remembered that that is exactly what Kirche is good at.