Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story2 Chapter5 - Revision history

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	Why? Because the Staff of Destruction had been stolen.		Why? Because the Staff of Destruction had been stolen.

	And it was brazenly stolen by using an ~~Earth Golem~~ to break through the wall of the vault.		And it was brazenly stolen by using an earth golem to break through the wall of the vault.

	The teachers of the Academy of Magic who gathered inside the vault were speechless when they saw the gaping hole in the wall.		The teachers of the Academy of Magic who gathered inside the vault were speechless when they saw the gaping hole in the wall.

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	Louise saw Saito wielding his sword in a stand off against the golem.		Louise saw Saito wielding his sword in a stand off against the golem.

	The golem moved and threw a punch. In mid-flight the fist morphed into steel. ~~(3)~~		The golem moved and threw a punch. In mid-flight the fist morphed into steel.

	Saito saw this, and parried the attack with his sword.		Saito saw this, and parried the attack with his sword.
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	But since Louise’s magic did not work, all she could depend on now was the Staff of Destruction.		But since Louise’s magic did not work, all she could depend on now was the Staff of Destruction.

	Louise closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Opening her eyes again she said, “Tabitha! Use levitation on me.” And jumped off the Sylphid’s back. Tabitha hastily ~~casted~~ “Levitation” on Louise.		Louise closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Opening her eyes again she said, “Tabitha! Use levitation on me.” And jumped off the Sylphid’s back. Tabitha hastily cast “Levitation” on Louise.

	Under the effect of the spell, Louise slowly descended and, facing Saito and the golem, waved the Staff of Destruction.		Under the effect of the spell, Louise slowly descended and, facing Saito and the golem, waved the Staff of Destruction.

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	At this point in time, all the teachers at the academy could do was gripe and whine		At this point in time, all the teachers at the academy could do was gripe and whine

	“It’s that thief who had looted the nobles clean, Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt! How daring of him ~~(1)~~ to target the academy!”		“It’s that thief who had looted the nobles clean, Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt! How daring of him to target the academy!”

	“What were the guards doing?”		“What were the guards doing?”

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	“We must report this to the Imperial Court right away! We must seek reinforcements from the imperial army!” Mr. Colbert shouted yet again.		“We must report this to the Imperial Court right away! We must seek reinforcements from the imperial army!” Mr. Colbert shouted yet again.

	Old Osman shook his head and stared at Colbert and with a vigor unfitting for an old man ~~and~~ shouted, “You fool! By the time we report this to the imperial court, Fouquet would have gotten away ~~Scott~~ free! Besides, if we can’t even handle such a small problem on our own, we’re not fit to be called nobles! Since the staff was stolen from the academy, then it’s the academy’s responsibility to get back the staff ourselves!”		Old Osman shook his head and stared at Colbert and with a vigor unfitting for an old man shouted, “You fool! By the time we report this to the imperial court, Fouquet would have gotten away scot-free! Besides, if we can’t even handle such a small problem on our own, we’re not fit to be called nobles! Since the staff was stolen from the academy, then it’s the academy’s responsibility to get back the staff ourselves!”

	Miss Longueville smiled, as though she was waiting for this answer all along.		Miss Longueville smiled, as though she was waiting for this answer all along.
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	''… Why do I know how to do this?''		''… Why do I know how to do this?''

	But ~~now this is~~ not the time to think.		But that was not the time to think.

	He flipped up the telescope sight on the tube and aimed.		He flipped up the telescope sight on the tube and aimed.
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	Sylphid, who was carrying Tabitha, descended. Tabitha looked at the mound of earth and asked, “Where is Miss Longueville?”		Sylphid, who was carrying Tabitha, descended. Tabitha looked at the mound of earth and asked, “Where is Miss Longueville?”

	~~Just then everyone~~ realized that Miss Longueville was missing.		Everyone realized that Miss Longueville was missing.

	Just then ~~Miss Longueville~~ came out from the forest.		Just then she came out from the forest.

	“Miss Longueville! Did you find out where Fouquet was controlling the golem from?” Kirche asked.		“Miss Longueville! Did you find out where Fouquet was controlling the golem from?” Kirche asked.

	~~Miss Longueville~~ shook her head.		She shook her head.

	The four of them started searching the mound of earth for clues. Saito looked at them, and then looked at the Staff of Destruction, thinking to himself: ''Why did this thing appear in this world?''		The four of them started searching the mound of earth for clues. Saito looked at them, and then looked at the Staff of Destruction, thinking to himself: ''Why did this thing appear in this world?''
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	On top of Alvíss Dining Hall, there is a great hall. That is where the ball was being held. Saito leaned on the railings of the balcony and looked at the grand reception.		On top of Alvíss Dining Hall, there was a great hall. That was where the ball was being held. Saito leaned on the railings of the balcony and looked at the grand reception.

	The students and teachers who were dressed grandly gathered around tables filled with exquisite food and chatted amongst themselves. Saito arrived there through a flight of stairs leading up to the balcony. Seeing them, Saito felt that he would not fit in at all and therefore, decided not to enter.		The students and teachers who were dressed grandly gathered around tables filled with exquisite food and chatted amongst themselves. Saito arrived there through a flight of stairs leading up to the balcony. Seeing them, Saito felt that he would not fit in at all and therefore, decided not to enter.
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	Tabitha dressed in a black gown feasted away on the sumptuous food on the table.		Tabitha dressed in a black gown feasted away on the sumptuous food on the table.

	~~Looks~~ like everyone is enjoying the dance to the fullest…		Looked like everyone was enjoying the dance to the fullest…

	The doors to the great hall opened and Louise appeared.		The doors to the great hall opened and Louise appeared.

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	“I buried the Staff of Destruction that he had used to save me along with him in his grave, the other one I named the Staff of Destruction and kept it inside the vault in order to commemorate my savior…”		“I buried the Staff of Destruction that he had used to save me along with him in his grave, the other one I named the Staff of Destruction and kept it inside the vault in order to commemorate my savior…”

	Osman gazed far away and said, ”While he was resting on the bed till the day he died, he kept saying repeatedly ‘Where is this place? I want to go back to my world.’ I guess that he must be from the same world as yours.”		Osman gazed far away and said, ”While he was resting on the bed till the day he died, he kept saying repeatedly ‘Where is this place? I want to go back to my world.’ I guess that he must have been from the same world as yours.”

	“Who was the one who brought him to this world then?”		“Who was the one who brought him to this world then?”

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	And it was brazenly stolen by using an Earth Golem to break through the wall of the vault.		And it was brazenly stolen by using an Earth Golem to break through the wall of the vault.

	The teachers of the Academy of Magic gathered inside the vault were speechless when they saw the gaping hole in the wall.		The teachers of the Academy of Magic who gathered inside the vault were speechless when they saw the gaping hole in the wall.

	The inscription on the wall etched by Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt said it all:		The inscription on the wall etched by Fouquet the Crumbling Dirt said it all:

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	Due to the short distance between him and the golem, Saito decided to aim directly at the golem.		Due to the short distance between him and the golem, Saito decided to aim directly at the golem.

	''As the distance was very close, the arming range ~~(4)~~ might not be attained and therefore even if hit directly, it might not explode.''		''As the distance was very close, the arming range might not be attained and therefore even if hit directly, it might not explode.''

	''Forget about that, just try it!'' Saito thought while shouting at Louise, “Don’t stand behind the staff, there will be a back blast!”		''Forget about that, just try it!'' Saito thought while shouting at Louise, “Don’t stand behind the staff, there will be a back blast!”
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	Just like last time, the golem was reduced into a mound of earth.		Just like last time, the golem was reduced into a mound of earth.

	Louise, who witnessed everything, felt her legs weaken and sat on the floor.		Louise, who had witnessed everything, felt her legs weaken and sat on the floor.

	Kirche, who was hiding near the bushes, came running out.		Kirche, who was hiding near the bushes, came running out.
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	“Why?” Louise asked angrily.		“Why?” Louise asked angrily.

	“Hmm… I’d better explain to you all ~~in order for~~ you ~~all to~~ rest in peace.” Fouquet said with a coquettish smile on her face.		“Hmm… I’d better explain to you all so you can rest in peace.” Fouquet said with a coquettish smile on her face.

	“I had gotten hold of the Staff of Destruction, but I did not know how to use it.”		“I had gotten hold of the Staff of Destruction, but I did not know how to use it.”
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	“Let her finish.”		“Let her finish.”

	“How considerate of you, Mr. Familiar. Then I ~~would~~ continue. Since I did not know how to use it, the only way was to let other people show me how to use it.”		“How considerate of you, Mr. Familiar. Then I will continue. Since I did not know how to use it, the only way was to let other people show me how to use it.”

	“So therefore you brought us here.”		“So therefore you brought us here.”
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	“If it’s the students from the academy, there may be a chance that someone knows how to use the staff.”		“If it’s the students from the academy, there may be a chance that someone knows how to use the staff.”

	“If none of us knew how to use the Staff of Destruction, what would you do?”		“If none of us knew how to use the Staff of Destruction, what would you have done?”

	“If that was the case, you all would be crushed by my golem. After that I would bring the next group of students here. But thanks to you, I finally know how to use the Staff of Destruction.”		“If that was the case, you all would be crushed by my golem. After that I would bring the next group of students here. But thanks to you, I finally know how to use the Staff of Destruction.”
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	Saito moved as fast as lightning, delivering a blow to Fouquet’s stomach with the hilt of his sword.		Saito moved as fast as lightning, delivering a blow to Fouquet’s stomach with the hilt of his sword.

	“This is a weapon from my world. Hmm… To be precise, it’s called an M72 rocket launcher ~~(5)~~.”		“This is a weapon from my world. Hmm… To be precise, it’s called an M72 rocket launcher.”

	Fouquet fell onto the ground.		Fouquet fell onto the ground.
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	“Please ask. I’ll try to answer your question to the best of my abilities. Even though I couldn’t confer you a title, this is the least I can do to show my appreciation.”		“Please ask. I’ll try to answer your question to the best of my abilities. Even though I couldn’t confer you a title, this is the least I can do to show my appreciation.”

	Immediately after, he asked Mr. Colbert to leave the room. Mr. Colbert, who ~~was~~ waiting for Saito to speak, was expressing displeasure as he exited the room.		Immediately after, he asked Mr. Colbert to leave the room. Mr. Colbert, who had been waiting for Saito to speak, was expressing displeasure as he exited the room.

	After Mr. Colbert left, Saito said, “That, the Staff of Destruction was originally from my world.”		After Mr. Colbert left, Saito said, “That, the Staff of Destruction was originally from my world.”

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	“Ah... Erm… Well… I’m not feeling very well recently, so…”		“Ah... Erm… Well… I’m not feeling very well recently, so…”

	“They have seen Fouquet before plus, even though Miss Tabitha here is very young, I have heard that she has already been conferred the title of chevalier ~~(2)~~, am I right?”		“They have seen Fouquet before plus, even though Miss Tabitha here is very young, I have heard that she has already been conferred the title of chevalier, am I right?”

	Tabitha did not answer and just stood quietly.		Tabitha did not answer and just stood quietly.
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	“I do not know if this applies to your country, but in Tristain, it’s a shameful act to force someone to reveal something that he or she does not want to say.”		“I do not know if this applies to your country, but in Tristain, it’s a shameful act to force someone to reveal something that he or she does not want to say.”

	Kirche did not answer her. She got up and sat in a cross legged position and began saying, “It’s all because of your ~~impetuous~~ that got me into this mess. Capturing Fouquet…”		Kirche did not answer her. She got up and sat in a cross legged position and began saying, “It’s all because of your impetuousness that I got into this mess. Capturing Fouquet…”

	Louise gave an angry stare at Kirche, “What do you mean by that? Didn’t you volunteer yourself in?”		Louise gave an angry stare at Kirche, “What do you mean by that? Didn’t you volunteer yourself in?”

	“If you had ~~came~~ alone, wouldn’t Saito be in danger, too? Am I right, Louise the Zero?”		“If you had come alone, wouldn’t Saito be in danger, too? Am I right, Louise the Zero?”

	“Why do you say that?”		“Why do you say that?”

	“Anyways, if that large golem ~~appeared~~ again, you would surely run to the rear and let Saito do all the fighting, right?"		“Anyways, if that large golem appears again, you would surely run to the rear and let Saito do all the fighting, right?"

	“Why would I run away? I would use my magic, you’ll see!”		“Why would I run away? I would use my magic, you’ll see!”
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	“Wow! Thanks!” Saito said while taking the sword.		“Wow! Thanks!” Saito said while taking the sword.

	“I won that time round, or do you have something to say? Louise the Zero?”		“I won that time round, or do you have something to say, Louise the Zero?”

	Louise stared at the both of them, but kept quiet.		Louise stared at the both of them, but kept quiet.
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	The group started discussing, using sticks to draw their battle plan on the ground. They all agreed that ambushing him was the best way. All the better if he was sleeping.		The group started discussing, using sticks to draw their battle plan on the ground. They all agreed that ambushing him was the best way. All the better if he was sleeping.

	Firstly, they would need to scout around the house and ~~know~~ what is going inside. After that if Fouquet is inside, the scout ~~will~~ draw him out, because there is not enough earth inside the house for him to create an earth golem. Once outside, the rest would all cast their magic against him, without letting him have a chance to summon his golem.		Firstly, they would need to scout around the house and find out what is going on inside. After that, if Fouquet is inside, the scout would draw him out, because there is not enough earth inside the house for him to create an earth golem. Once outside, the rest would all cast their magic against him, without letting him have a chance to summon his golem.

	“So who is going to lure him out?” Saito asked.		“So who is going to lure him out?” Saito asked.