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	"You... Are you..."		"You... Are you..."

	"Oh Noble Will. Thank you for allowing me to meet ~~Pearl~~'s daughter here."		"Oh Noble Will. Thank you for allowing me to meet Shajal's (TL/N: Pearl) daughter here."

	"One of the clans-people of Mother...!"		"One of the clans-people of Mother...!"

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	Tiffania stood up with her hands in front of her chest.		Tiffania stood up with her hands in front of her chest.

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	"Kill me then. This has nothing to do with her. Please save her."		"Kill me then. This has nothing to do with her. Please save her."

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	"And what should I do if there are really skilled ones on board, huh?", Saito thought as he aimed at the bridge, and he pulled the trigger on the RPG7. The warhead shot forward in a flash, faster than what Saito had expected, and hit the bridge.		"And what should I do if there are really skilled ones on board, huh?", Saito thought as he aimed at the bridge, and he pulled the trigger on the RPG7. The warhead shot forward in a flash, faster than what Saito had expected, and hit the bridge.

	Luckily, they did not have 'Reflect'. The weapon easily blew a hole into the thick scales of the dragon whale, and pierced through it. After that, a huge explosion was heard from the inside of the warship, followed by fire and heavy smoke.		Luckily, they did not have 'Reflect'. The weapon had a shaped charge, so it easily blew a hole into the thick scales of the dragon whale, and pierced through it. After that, a huge explosion was heard from the inside of the warship, followed by fire and heavy smoke.

	However, due to the gigantic size of the dragon whale, the attack barely affected it. Not only did it show no sign of slowing down, its attacks were barely hindered.		However, due to the gigantic size of the dragon whale, the attack barely affected it. Not only did it show no sign of slowing down, its attacks were barely hindered.
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	===Chapter 5: An Elf's Longing===~~Chapter 5 A Fairy's Longing~~		===Chapter 5: An Elf's Longing===
	"You looked troubled. A penny for your thoughts?" Mother Sea asked, on the day after Saito found the submarine. It was rare for her to do that.		"You looked troubled. A penny for your thoughts?" Mother Sea asked, on the day after Saito found the submarine. It was rare for her to do that.

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	"You looked troubled. A penny for your thoughts?" Mother Sea asked, on the day after Saito found the submarine. It was rare for her to do that.		"You looked troubled. A penny for your thoughts?" Mother Sea asked, on the day after Saito found the submarine. It was rare for her to do that.

	Saito looked disturbed the whole time that day. It could also be said that he was depressed because of the "nuclear weapon".		Saito looked disturbed the whole time that day. It could also be said that he was depressed because of the 'nuclear weapon'.

	"Um, you see... Actually, I'm the legendary familiar."		"Um, you see... Actually, I'm the legendary familiar."
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	Saito superimposed himself over those weapons. He thought about how he himself, was a weapon that had been summoned to this world...		Saito superimposed himself over those weapons. He thought about how he himself, was a weapon that had been summoned to this world...

	However, he was not a "tool". He was sentient, and he had a soul. What should he do, after being gifted such destructive power?		However, he was not a 'tool'. He was sentient, and he had a soul. What should he do, after being gifted such destructive power?

	Wasn't it for the best if he allowed his life to be wasted away like the weapons here? Saito could not help himself from thinking that way.		Wasn't it for the best if he allowed his life to be wasted away like the weapons here? Saito could not help himself from thinking that way.
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	"That's because I didn't like how the Council did things."		"That's because I didn't like how the Council did things."

	"Do things the way they should have been done. You people have such a complicated way of living," ~~said~~ Mother Sea. However, after observing that Luctiana was in fact itching to join them, Mother Sea then said,		"Do things the way they should have been done. You people have such a complicated way of living." Said Mother Sea. However, after observing that Luctiana was in fact itching to join them, Mother Sea then said,

	"You want to join them, don't you? It's written all over your face."		"You want to join them, don't you? It's written all over your face."
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	"That's because I am interested in what they are doing. Even if that's the case. Alright! I'm just going to take a look!"		"That's because I am interested in what they are doing. Even if that's the case. Alright! I'm just going to take a look!"

	Having said that, Luctiana joined the duo who had been searching the "weapons".		Having said that, Luctiana joined the duo who had been searching the 'weapons'.

	Although most of them had rusted beyond repair and left only husks of their original selves, they managed to find some weapons that were borderline usable. They were mostly small caliber firearms covered in plastic, or stainless steel revolvers that had been given the waterproof treatment.		Although most of them had rusted beyond repair and left only husks of their original selves, they managed to find some weapons that were borderline usable. They were mostly small caliber firearms covered in plastic, or stainless steel revolvers that had been given the waterproof treatment.
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	Even though he wanted to take the boat out for a test run, he did not want to attract unwanted attention. So he decided against it.		Even though he wanted to take the boat out for a test run, he did not want to attract unwanted attention. So he decided against it.

	Looking at Saito's and Tiffania's happy faces made Luctiana bored; so she pouted and said, "Humph, someone's on a high horse. Science? What about it, huh? In the end there was only this thing that was of any use. The rest was all rubbish."		Looking at Saito's and Tiffania's happy faces made Luctiana bored, so she pouted and said, "Humph, someone's on a high horse. Science? What about it, huh? In the end there was only this thing that was of any use. The rest was all rubbish."

	"What? Don't you see that this is not the only one! Every one of these guns and rocket launchers are also made by science! There are so many of them!"		"What? Don't you see that this is not the only one! Every one of these guns and rocket launchers are also made by science! There are so many of them!"
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	Saito stopped that train of thought for a while. No, how can this be possible? This was impossible. However...		Saito stopped that train of thought for a while. No, how can this be possible? This was impossible. However...

	Saito could not get rid of the lingering idea that this was "possible".		Saito could not get rid of the lingering idea that this was 'possible'.

	"Hey, Derf."		"Hey, Derf."
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	"Ah, what's happening? What is it?" Luctiana asked around anxiously. Tiffania hung onto Saito, scared.		"Ah, what's happening? What is it?" Luctiana asked around anxiously. Tiffania hung onto Saito, scared.

	"It seems that our fates are in their hands," Saito said apprehensively.		"It seems that our fates are in their hands." Saito said apprehensively.

	"Only three hit their marks. Isn't that a little inaccurate, Comrade Fleet Commander?" Fatima commented after she saw the landing points as she stood on the bridge of her ship. She stood firm, her posture reminiscent of the mythical female warriors of Halkeginia.		"Only three hit their marks. Isn't that a little inaccurate, Comrade Fleet Commander?" Fatima commented after she saw the landing points as she stood on the bridge of her ship. She stood firm, her posture reminiscent of the mythical female warriors of Halkeginia.
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	Saito shouted towards the dolphins that had gathered around the boat. The dolphins immediately understood what Saito meant, and deftly turned the boat around with their noses.		Saito shouted towards the dolphins that had gathered around the boat. The dolphins immediately understood what Saito meant, and deftly turned the boat around with their noses.

	After Saito made sure that Luctiana had pulled Tiffania onto the boat, he put his palms together and said, "Sorry," softly.		After Saito made sure that Luctiana had pulled Tiffania onto the boat, he put his palms together and said, "Sorry.", softly.

	Saito stepped on the propeller gas pedal after confirming that the path forward was clear, slowly moving the small patrol boat out into the open.		Saito stepped on the propeller gas pedal after confirming that the path forward was clear, slowly moving the small patrol boat out into the open.
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	Saito charted a straight path towards the fleet.		Saito charted a straight path towards the fleet.

	While he was advancing towards the fleet, Saito thought calmly about the unknown location of the "Holy Land".		While he was advancing towards the fleet, Saito thought calmly about the unknown location of the 'Holy Land'.

	If this place was really the Holy Land...		If this place was really the Holy Land...
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	Saito had a bad feeling about this.		Saito had a bad feeling about this.

	"Isn't it time yet?" Luctiana muttered. A few minutes after they had left, they could still hear some cannon shots; but it was not coming from the stone walls anymore.		"Isn't it time yet?" Luctiana muttered. A few minutes after they had left, they could still hear some cannon shots, but it was not coming from the stone walls anymore.

	That meant that Saito was successful in luring the Dragon Whale warships away.		That meant that Saito was successful in luring the Dragon Whale warships away.
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	Luctiana turned around without hesitation, only to find a troop of Elven Navy Marines led by a long-haired woman wearing a Navy officer's uniform. She was holding something like a gun.		Luctiana turned around without hesitation, only to find a troop of Elven Navy Marines led by a long-haired woman wearing a Navy officer's uniform. She was holding something like a gun.

	However, that gun was not powered by gunpowder; instead it used wind-stones to shoot bullets. Even though it was a single-shot pistol just like guns of Halkeginian design, it was much more powerful and it had no problems even if it was soaked in water.		However, that gun was not powered by gunpowder, instead it used wind-stones to shoot bullets. Even though it was a single-shot pistol just like guns of Halkeginian design, it was much more powerful and it had no problems even if it was soaked in water.

	It seems like they came through the water. They might have used the dolphins or something, since they were all wet.		It seems like they came through the water. They might have used the dolphins or something, since they were all wet.
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	"Wouldn't it be bothersome if we were killed?"		"Wouldn't it be bothersome if we were killed?"

	"Humph. It seems like no matter how many times we kill you guys, the power you have will be revived in someone else; but it's only that power. However, even if it was to be revived, we would just kill you guys again."		"Humph. It seems like no matter how many times we kill you guys, the power you have will be revived in someone else, but it's only that power. However, even if it was to be revived, we would just kill you guys again."

	Tiffania stood up with her hands in front of her chest.		Tiffania stood up with her hands in front of her chest.
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	Saito, who had been piloting the patrol boat, was not able to dodge the bright light that had suddenly shown up and he rammed right into it.		Saito, who had been piloting the patrol boat, was not able to dodge the bright light that had suddenly shown up and he rammed right into it.

	Before Saito had the chance to understand what was going on, he appeared right on top of the boat where Tiffania had been. The patrol boat had been moving at a speed of thirty knots, so it crashed into Fatima, who had been standing in front of the boat; and they both fell into the sea.		Before Saito had the chance to understand what was going on, he appeared right on top of the boat where Tiffania had been. The patrol boat had been moving at a speed of thirty knots, so it crashed into Fatima, who had been standing in front of the boat and they both fell into the sea.

	"What's happening?"		"What's happening?"
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	In less than ten seconds, the Elven Marines were disarmed and had run away in disarray.		In less than ten seconds, the Elven Marines were disarmed and had run away in disarray.

	Saito was ready to rush to Tiffania's side; but Fatima, who had already climbed into the boat, pointed her gun towards Tiffania who was barely alive.		Saito was ready to rush to Tiffania's side, but Fatima, who had already climbed into the boat, pointed her gun towards Tiffania who was barely alive.

	"Don't move! Throw that sword away!"		"Don't move! Throw that sword away!"
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	At the same time, Saito felt distressed and mournful that this was the only thing he could do. He apologized many times to Tiffania in his mind. Tears streamed down steadily from his eyes, each drop falling on Tiffania's cheeks.		At the same time, Saito felt distressed and mournful that this was the only thing he could do. He apologized many times to Tiffania in his mind. Tears streamed down steadily from his eyes, each drop falling on Tiffania's cheeks.

	Tiffania parted her lips from Saito's, and whispered, "thank you," before closing her eyes.		Tiffania parted her lips from Saito's, and whispered, "thank you." before closing her eyes.

	"Tiffa...!"		"Tiffa...!"
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	"It seems that our fates are in their hands." Saito said apprehensively.		"It seems that our fates are in their hands." Saito said apprehensively.

	"Only three hit their marks. Isn't that a little inaccurate, Comrade Fleet Commander?" ~~Fatimah~~ commented after she saw the landing points as she stood on the bridge of her ship. She stood firm, her posture reminiscent of the mythical female warriors of Halkeginia.		"Only three hit their marks. Isn't that a little inaccurate, Comrade Fleet Commander?" Fatima commented after she saw the landing points as she stood on the bridge of her ship. She stood firm, her posture reminiscent of the mythical female warriors of Halkeginia.

	The warship fleet she commanded had four 'dragon whales' in total. Each warship had a rotating cannon tower installed on the bridge.		The warship fleet she commanded had four 'dragon whales' in total. Each warship had a rotating cannon tower installed on the bridge.
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	"Alright, what should we do now then?"		"Alright, what should we do now then?"

	For the fleet commander's question, ~~Fatimah~~ answered, "Our orders by the Council were to 'capture them alive'."		For the fleet commander's question, Fatima answered, "Our orders by the Council were to 'capture them alive'."

	"No, I'm asking what our orders from the Party were."		"No, I'm asking what our orders from the Party were."

	The fleet commander was also one of the members of 'Steel ~~Blooded~~ Party'.		The fleet commander was also one of the members of 'Steel-blooded Party'.

	"We, the people of the desert, as united as steel by our bond of blood, will exterminate the barbarians of the west. Oh Noble Will, lead our way!" ~~Fatimah~~ answered with the party constitution.		"We, the people of the desert, as united as steel by our bond of blood, will exterminate the barbarians of the west. Oh Noble Will, lead our way!" Fatima answered with the party constitution.

	The fleet commander nodded, satisfied, and gave his order.		The fleet commander nodded, satisfied, and gave his order.
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	Luctiana's face blanched in horror after noticing the emblem on the sleeves of her uniform.		Luctiana's face blanched in horror after noticing the emblem on the sleeves of her uniform.

	"The Steel ~~Blooded~~ Party."		"The Steel-blooded Party."

	They are a party of elitist zealots who follow the rule that "they will kill every last one of the traitors of the people".		They are a party of elitist zealots who follow the rule that "they will kill every last one of the traitors of the people".
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	"I'm just giving the traitor due punishment."		"I'm just giving the traitor due punishment."

	~~Fatimah~~ said coolly, and jumped onto their boat. After noticing Tiffania's ears, her face turned bitter.		Fatima said coolly, and jumped onto their boat. After noticing Tiffania's ears, her face turned bitter.

	"You're one of the devils?"		"You're one of the devils?"
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	Tiffania tried to think of a way to stop the blood. She rolled up the clothes and applied pressure on the wound, but there was too much blood so Tiffania was a loss of what to do.		Tiffania tried to think of a way to stop the blood. She rolled up the clothes and applied pressure on the wound, but there was too much blood so Tiffania was a loss of what to do.

	~~Fatimah~~ walked towards her, escorted by armed marines.		Fatima walked towards her, escorted by armed marines.

	"The devil."		"The devil."
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	"Traitors are even more unforgivable than the devils."		"Traitors are even more unforgivable than the devils."

	~~Fatimah~~ gripped Tiffania's ears.		Fatima gripped Tiffania's ears.

	"Seems like the rumors about an elf with the blood of the devil was true. You've not only inherited the blood of the devil, but also the blood of the traitor of our people."		"Seems like the rumors about an elf with the blood of the devil was true. You've not only inherited the blood of the devil, but also the blood of the traitor of our people."

	Just then, ~~Fatimah~~ noticed something sparkling on Tiffania's finger. That was the base of the ring that Tiffania's mother had left her with.		Just then, Fatima noticed something sparkling on Tiffania's finger. That was the base of the ring that Tiffania's mother had left her with.

	"Where did you get that ring from?"		"Where did you get that ring from?"
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	"This is something my mother left me! She's a gentle person, completely different from you! The clans-people of my mother must also be gentle people!"		"This is something my mother left me! She's a gentle person, completely different from you! The clans-people of my mother must also be gentle people!"

	~~Fatimah~~ bit into her lips until blood trickled out.		Fatima bit into her lips until blood trickled out.

	"So it's you then. So this is how you look like. You...You!"		"So it's you then. So this is how you look like. You...You!"

	~~Fatimah~~'s face was distorted in hatred. She then seized Tiffania's finger, which had the ring.		Fatima's face was distorted in hatred. She then seized Tiffania's finger, which had the ring.

	"You probably don't know how much humiliation and suffering the 'clans-people of your mother' received because of what you and your mother had done! We lived a life where we were even forced to eat dirt to survive! We were cast away by others as traitors to the race, and we couldn't even buy bread in peace!"		"You probably don't know how much humiliation and suffering the 'clans-people of your mother' received because of what you and your mother had done! We lived a life where we were even forced to eat dirt to survive! We were cast away by others as traitors to the race, and we couldn't even buy bread in peace!"
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	Tiffania suddenly fell backwards on the boat. Just as she was about to say something, the gun was fired. Excruciating pain shot up Tiffania's right leg, and she curled into a ball. Fresh blood leaked out of the wound onto the boat.		Tiffania suddenly fell backwards on the boat. Just as she was about to say something, the gun was fired. Excruciating pain shot up Tiffania's right leg, and she curled into a ball. Fresh blood leaked out of the wound onto the boat.

	~~Fatimah~~ reloaded the pistol that had been holstered on her waist.		Fatima reloaded the pistol that had been holstered on her waist.

	"This is for uncle."		"This is for uncle."
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	Tiffania was now completely driven by her own sheer will.		Tiffania was now completely driven by her own sheer will.

	~~Fatimah~~ had underestimated Tiffania. Seeing that Tiffania continue chanting her spell in spite of multiple gunshot wounds, the marines began to look frightened.		Fatima had underestimated Tiffania. Seeing that Tiffania continue chanting her spell in spite of multiple gunshot wounds, the marines began to look frightened.

	"Cursed devil! What spell did you think of chanting? Let me have a look then. I have already wanted the tricks of the devil for so long now!" ~~Fatimah~~ howled.		"Cursed devil! What spell did you think of chanting? Let me have a look then. I have already wanted the tricks of the devil for so long now!" Fatima howled.

	Tiffania put in her all to chant the last part of the spell.		Tiffania put in her all to chant the last part of the spell.
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	The spell chanting is completed.		The spell chanting is completed.

	Blinding white light appeared on the boat, and ~~Fatimah~~ could not help but close her eyes.		Blinding white light appeared on the boat, and Fatima could not help but close her eyes.

	"Help." Tiffania mumbled as her consciousness began to fade.		"Help." Tiffania mumbled as her consciousness began to fade.
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	Saito, who had been piloting the patrol boat, was not able to dodge the bright light that had suddenly shown up, and he rammed right into it.		Saito, who had been piloting the patrol boat, was not able to dodge the bright light that had suddenly shown up, and he rammed right into it.

	Before Saito has got the chance to understand what was going on, he appeared right on top of the boat where Tiffania had been. The patrol boat had been moving at a speed of thirty knots, so it crashed into ~~Fatimah~~, who had been standing in front of the boat, and they both fell into the sea.		Before Saito has got the chance to understand what was going on, he appeared right on top of the boat where Tiffania had been. The patrol boat had been moving at a speed of thirty knots, so it crashed into Fatima, who had been standing in front of the boat, and they both fell into the sea.

	"What's happening?"		"What's happening?"
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	In less than ten seconds, the elven marines were disarmed and had ran away in disarray.		In less than ten seconds, the elven marines were disarmed and had ran away in disarray.

	Saito was ready to rush to Tiffania's side, but ~~Fatimah~~, who had already climbed onto the boat, pointed her gun towards Tiffania, who was barely alive.		Saito was ready to rush to Tiffania's side, but Fatima, who had already climbed onto the boat, pointed her gun towards Tiffania, who was barely alive.

	"Don't move! Throw that sword away!"		"Don't move! Throw that sword away!"
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	"Won't you just shoot anyway no matter what I did?" Saito said coolly. "Listen up, long ears. If you dare to shoot Tiffania, I will kill you. I will kill you no matter the means."		"Won't you just shoot anyway no matter what I did?" Saito said coolly. "Listen up, long ears. If you dare to shoot Tiffania, I will kill you. I will kill you no matter the means."

	"You!" ~~Fatimah~~ pointed her guns towards Saito.		"You!" Fatima pointed her guns towards Saito.

	In that moment, Saito leap up. He was so quick that to ~~Fatimah~~, it seemed that Saito had disappeared from her vision.		In that moment, Saito leap up. He was so quick that to Fatima, it seemed that Saito had disappeared from her vision.

	~~Fatimah~~ received a hard blow to her shoulder and collapsed on the boat. Saito was the one who did that.		Fatima received a hard blow to her shoulder and collapsed on the boat. Saito was the one who did that.

	Even though he did it with the hilt of his katana, it was enough to shatter her shoulder blade. ~~Fatimah~~ could not take the pain and fainted. Saito did not even spare her a look and walked towards Tiffania.		Even though he did it with the hilt of his katana, it was enough to shatter her shoulder blade. Fatima could not take the pain and fainted. Saito did not even spare her a look and walked towards Tiffania.

	"Tiffa!"		"Tiffa!"