Zero no Tsukaima:Volume20 Chapter8 - Revision history

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	===Chapter 8 : Breaking Through Barricades===		===Chapter 8: Breaking Through Barricades===
	Elven patrol airships were very different from the ones in Halkeginia. Even though they were both propelled by wind stones, elven airships did not have sails. Instead, similar to horse carriages, they were towed by dragons.		Elven patrol airships were very different from the ones in Halkeginia. Even though they were both propelled by wind stones, elven airships did not have sails. Instead, similar to horse carriages, they were towed by dragons.

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Shadowys: ancient magic -> Firstborn magic

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	The main responsibility of the patrol fleet was to protect the Elven merchant ships from the threat of the barbarian air pirates. This was because even though each individual elf were mighty warriors, the air pirates ships still could take out merchant ships if they attacked together headfirst in groups of dozens.		The main responsibility of the patrol fleet was to protect the Elven merchant ships from the threat of the barbarian air pirates. This was because even though each individual elf were mighty warriors, the air pirates ships still could take out merchant ships if they attacked together headfirst in groups of dozens.

	The "Mestia" was one of the air ships patrolling the skies above the "Unexplored Land". The "Unexplored Land" was the stretch of forest and empty plains between Germania and the Sahara desert. No elf or human lived there. It was a vast piece of virgin land occupied by mostly ~~demigods~~... beast-men, ogres, and avian-men.		The "Mestia" was one of the air ships patrolling the skies above the "Unexplored Land". The "Unexplored Land" was the stretch of forest and empty plains between Germania and the Sahara desert. No elf or human lived there. It was a vast piece of virgin land occupied by mostly demihumans... beast-men, ogres, and avian-men.

	It was nearly nightfall. However, even if it was night, they could not let down their guard. The barbarian pirates had set up a well-concealed port in the "Unexplored Land", so they could sneak into the Sahara desert under the cover of the night to raid and plunder the villages.		It was nearly nightfall. However, even if it was night, they could not let down their guard. The barbarian pirates had set up a well-concealed port in the "Unexplored Land", so they could sneak into the Sahara desert under the cover of the night to raid and plunder the villages.

Eatmepls-Senpai: /* Chapter 8 : Breaking Through Barricades */

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	Elven patrol airships were very different from the ones in Halkeginia. Even though they were both propelled by wind stones, elven airships did not have sails. Instead, similar to horse carriages, they were towed by dragons.		Elven patrol airships were very different from the ones in Halkeginia. Even though they were both propelled by wind stones, elven airships did not have sails. Instead, similar to horse carriages, they were towed by dragons.

	Compared to Halkeginian airships which were propelled by wind, those elven airships, were on average an one hundred and fifty percent faster.		Compared to Halkeginian airships which were propelled by wind, those elven airships, were on average one hundred and fifty percent faster.

	The spheroidal airship, towed by dozens of dragons, moved through the air like an amphibious insect.		The spheroidal airship, towed by dozens of dragons, moved through the air like an amphibious insect.

Shadowys: /* Chapter 8 : Breaking Through Barricades */

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	"What the heck was that ship!" The fleet commander, who heard the commotion, yelled out as he saw the ship that went past them.		"What the heck was that ship!" The fleet commander, who heard the commotion, yelled out as he saw the ship that went past them.

	"There seems to be rotating ~~fan leaves~~ behind the ship, maybe that's what powering it." The deck officer said, dumbfounded.		"There seems to be rotating fans behind the ship, maybe that's what powering it." The deck officer said, dumbfounded.

	"Ah! We'll know it when we see it! Chase after them now!"		"Ah! We'll know it when we see it! Chase after them now!"

Shadowys at 10:14, 25 January 2017

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	===Chapter 8 : Breaking Through Barricades===		===Chapter 8 : Breaking Through Barricades===
	Elven ~~patrol~~ airships were very different from the ones in Halkeginia. Even though they were both propelled by wind stones, elven airships did not have sails. Instead, similar to horse carriages, they were towed by dragons.		Elven airships were very different from the ones in Halkeginia. Even though they were both propelled by wind stones, elven airships did not have sails. Instead, similar to horse carriages, they were towed by dragons.

	Compared to Halkeginian airships which were propelled by wind, those elven airships, were on average an one hundred and fifty percent faster.		Compared to Halkeginian airships which were propelled by wind, those elven airships, were on average an one hundred and fifty percent faster.
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	It was impossible for them to reach their full potential while on the ship.		It was impossible for them to reach their full potential while on the ship.

	To prevent the moonlight from shining on them, Tabitha masterfully manipulated the wind to turn the ~~wind~~ into a veil of fog around them. Even though this camouflage would immediately be exposed during the day, it was not as obvious during the night. The two Elven dragon knights had not noticed her while they were wrecking mayhem below.		To prevent the moonlight from shining on them, Tabitha masterfully manipulated the wind to turn the clouds into a veil of fog around them. Even though this camouflage would immediately be exposed during the day, it was not as obvious during the night. The two Elven dragon knights had not noticed her while they were wrecking mayhem below.

	"Little one, there's two more left, you know!"		"Little one, there's two more left, you know!"
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	However, it was difficult for her to find an opening.		However, it was difficult for her to find an opening.

	"If I were to disrupt their rhythm..."		"If someone were able to disrupt their rhythm..."

	Sweat appeared on Tabitha's forehead out of anxiousness.		Sweat appeared on Tabitha's forehead out of anxiousness.
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	"Stop! Don't do it! I can't swim!" He started shouting out nonsense...		"Stop! Don't do it! I can't swim!" He started shouting out nonsense...

	Suddenly, the dragon's body shuddered, as a massive ice ~~arrow~~ went through its skull.		Suddenly, the dragon's body shuddered, as a massive ice spearhead went through its skull.

	"An ice spear? From whom?"		"An ice spear? From whom?"

Eatmepls-Senpai: /* Chapter 8 : Breaking Through Barricades */

2017-01-25T09:51:33Z

Chapter 8 : Breaking Through Barricades

Bygghandel: Minor fixes, mainly tenses and small, small capitalization errors (Elven vs. elven).

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Minor fixes, mainly tenses and small, small capitalization errors (Elven vs. elven).

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	The two left were the better riders, since they managed to dodge the "little flying snakes" attack and proceeded to close in on them before casting magic.		The two left were the better riders, since they managed to dodge the "little flying snakes" attack and proceeded to close in on them before casting magic.

	The riders' ~~Ancient~~ Wind ~~magic~~ whipped up a tornado, slamming into their direction, but Kirche and Colbert nimbly dodged it.		The riders' Wind "Firstborn Magic" whipped up a tornado, slamming into their direction, but Kirche and Colbert nimbly dodged it.

	The tornado crashed into the deck and created a huge hole. Its sheer power scared Kirche nearly to death. As expected of Elven ancient magic, even while riding a dragon, they still managed to cast such an accurate magic spell!		The tornado crashed into the deck and created a huge hole. Its sheer power scared Kirche nearly to death. As expected of Elven ancient magic, even while riding a dragon, they still managed to cast such an accurate magic spell!
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	"This is really bad."		"This is really bad."

	If the elves came too close, Colbert and the others could only use magic to defend themselves. If they were to aim for the steam engines, then their plans would be ended prematurely. However, elves had the upper hand in magical battles.		If the elves came too close, Colbert and the others could only use magic to defend themselves. If they were to aim for the steam engines, then their plans would be ended prematurely. However, elves had the upper hand in magical battles.

	The Elven dragon rides rose up into the air to cover each other's backs, before swooping down again to continue their attacks in a brilliant maneuver.		The Elven dragon rides rose up into the air to cover each other's backs, before swooping down again to continue their attacks in a brilliant maneuver.

	Colbert and Kirche casted their "Fireball" spell at the elves, but the dragon knights were too fast for them to land a hit.		Colbert and Kirche casted their "Fireball" spell at the elves, but the dragon knights were too fast for them to land a hit.
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	"What kind of steering is this!" Kirche yelled from the quarterdeck. Of course, Malicorne and Éléonore could not hear them.		"What kind of steering is this!" Kirche yelled from the quarterdeck. Of course, Malicorne and Éléonore could not hear them.

	After the "Ostland" dodged each cannon shell from the main cannons, it whizzed past the top of the warship.		After the "Ostland" dodged each cannon shell from the main cannons, it whizzed past the top of the warship.

	The Elven warship was not able to react within such a short time at that speed.		The Elven warship was not able to react within such a short time at that speed.
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	"Siesta..." the person who came in was Siesta. She held a plate of bread, meat and wine.		"Siesta..." the person who came in was Siesta. She held a plate of bread, meat and wine.

	"Okay! Time to eat!" Siesta said that with a cheerful tone that she had never lost no matter what situation she was in. Louise shook her head nervously.		"Okay! Time to eat!" Siesta said that with a cheerful tone that she had never lost no matter what situation she was in. Louise shook her head nervously.

	"N-now is not the time to be eating, right? Isn't everyone else still fighting..."		"N-now is not the time to be eating, right? Isn't everyone else still fighting..."

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	===Chapter 8 : Breaking Through Barricades===		===Chapter 8 : Breaking Through Barricades===
	Elven airships were very different from the ones in Halkeginia. Even though they were both propelled by wind stones, elven airships did not have sails. Instead, similar to horse carriages, they were towed by dragons.		Elven patrol airships were very different from the ones in Halkeginia. Even though they were both propelled by wind stones, elven airships did not have sails. Instead, similar to horse carriages, they were towed by dragons.

	Compared to Halkeginian airships which were propelled by wind, those elven airships, were on average an one hundred and fifty percent faster.		Compared to Halkeginian airships which were propelled by wind, those elven airships, were on average an one hundred and fifty percent faster.
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	The spheroidal airship, towed by dozens of dragons, moved through the air like an amphibious insect.		The spheroidal airship, towed by dozens of dragons, moved through the air like an amphibious insect.

	The hull of the airship was reinforced with armour, and cannons were fitted into the ~~armours~~ between each armour plate. Rotating cannon towers, not unlike the ones found on a dragon whale ship, were installed on the deck where the sails would normally be found.		The hull of the airship was reinforced with armour, and cannons were fitted into the gaps between each armour plate. Rotating cannon towers, not unlike the ones found on a dragon whale ship, were installed on the deck where the sails would normally be found.

	Although the relationships between the Halkeginian nobles and the elves were terrible, trading was still conducted on a civilian level, and it was common for air pirates to attack Elven merchant ships.		Although the relationships between the Halkeginian nobles and the elves were terrible, trading was still conducted on a civilian level, and it was common for air pirates to attack Elven merchant ships.
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	It was impossible for them to reach their full potential while on the ship.		It was impossible for them to reach their full potential while on the ship.

	To prevent the moonlight from shining on them, Tabitha masterfully manipulated the wind to turn the ~~clouds~~ into a veil of fog around them. Even though this camouflage would immediately be exposed during the day, it was not as obvious during the night. The two Elven dragon knights had not noticed her while they were wrecking mayhem below.		To prevent the moonlight from shining on them, Tabitha masterfully manipulated the wind to turn the wind into a veil of fog around them. Even though this camouflage would immediately be exposed during the day, it was not as obvious during the night. The two Elven dragon knights had not noticed her while they were wrecking mayhem below.

	"Little one, there's two more left, you know!"		"Little one, there's two more left, you know!"
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	However, it was difficult for her to find an opening.		However, it was difficult for her to find an opening.

	"If ~~someone~~ were ~~able~~ to disrupt their rhythm..."		"If I were to disrupt their rhythm..."

	Sweat appeared on Tabitha's forehead out of anxiousness.		Sweat appeared on Tabitha's forehead out of anxiousness.
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	"Stop! Don't do it! I can't swim!" He started shouting out nonsense...		"Stop! Don't do it! I can't swim!" He started shouting out nonsense...

	Suddenly, the dragon's body shuddered, as a massive ice ~~spearhead~~ went through its skull.		Suddenly, the dragon's body shuddered, as a massive ice arrow went through its skull.

	"An ice spear? From whom?"		"An ice spear? From whom?"

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	Elven patrol airships were very different from the ones in Halkeginia. Even though they were both propelled by wind stones, elven airships did not have sails. Instead, similar to horse carriages, they were towed by dragons.		Elven patrol airships were very different from the ones in Halkeginia. Even though they were both propelled by wind stones, elven airships did not have sails. Instead, similar to horse carriages, they were towed by dragons.

	Compared to ~~the~~ Halkeginian airships propelled by ~~the~~ wind, those elven airships, on average~~, had~~ an one hundred and fifty percent ~~increase in speed~~.		Compared to Halkeginian airships which were propelled by wind, those elven airships, were on average an one hundred and fifty percent faster.

	The spheroidal airship, towed by dozens of dragons, moved through the air like an amphibious insect.		The spheroidal airship, towed by dozens of dragons, moved through the air like an amphibious insect.

	The hull of the airship was reinforced with ~~armor~~, and cannons were fitted into the ~~armors~~ between each ~~armor~~ plate. Rotating cannon towers, not unlike the ones found on a dragon whale ship, were installed on the deck where the sails would normally be found.		The hull of the airship was reinforced with armour, and cannons were fitted into the armours between each armour plate. Rotating cannon towers, not unlike the ones found on a dragon whale ship, were installed on the deck where the sails would normally be found.

	Although the ~~relationship~~ between the Halkeginian nobles and the elves is terrible, trading was still conducted on a civilian level, and it was common for air pirates to attack Elven merchant ships.		Although the relationships between the Halkeginian nobles and the elves were terrible, trading was still conducted on a civilian level, and it was common for air pirates to attack Elven merchant ships.

	The main responsibility of the patrol fleet was to protect the Elven merchant ships from the threat of the barbarian air pirates. This was because even though each individual elf were mighty warriors, the air pirates ships still could take out merchant ships if they attacked together headfirst in groups of dozens.		The main responsibility of the patrol fleet was to protect the Elven merchant ships from the threat of the barbarian air pirates. This was because even though each individual elf were mighty warriors, the air pirates ships still could take out merchant ships if they attacked together headfirst in groups of dozens.
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	It was nearly nightfall. However, even if it was night, they could not let down their guard. The barbarian pirates had set up a well-concealed port in the "Unexplored Land", so they could sneak into the Sahara desert under the cover of the night to raid and plunder the villages.		It was nearly nightfall. However, even if it was night, they could not let down their guard. The barbarian pirates had set up a well-concealed port in the "Unexplored Land", so they could sneak into the Sahara desert under the cover of the night to raid and plunder the villages.

	Even though the elves had good night vision, they still ~~could not~~ see as well as in the day, so the guard on duty had to use a special telescope.		Even though the elves had good night vision, they were still unable to see as well they could in the day, so the guard on duty had to use a special telescope.

	It was a telescope that used magic to amplify the moonlight.		It was a telescope that used magic to amplify the moonlight.
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	"Prepare the cannons!"		"Prepare the cannons!"

	However, by the time ~~this~~ order reached the guards in charge of the cannons, the strange ship had already reached them, and flew past the "Mestia". The broad wings of the airship made it look like one of the enormous desert birds. However, the sizes of the birds were incomparable to the size of ship.		However, by the time the order reached the guards in charge of the cannons, the strange ship had already reached them, and flew past the "Mestia". The broad wings of the airship made it look like one of the enormous desert birds. However, the sizes of the birds were incomparable to the size of ship.

	"What the heck was that ship!" The fleet commander, who heard the commotion, yelled out as he saw the ship that went past them.		"What the heck was that ship!" The fleet commander, who heard the commotion, yelled out as he saw the ship that went past them.
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	The "little flying snakes" sensed the magical weapons on the elves, accelerated towards them, and exploded right in front of them.		The "little flying snakes" sensed the magical weapons on the elves, accelerated towards them, and exploded right in front of them.

	They ~~might~~ not ~~have thought~~ that the barbarians would have such a weapon. The elves did not have time to cast any powerful magic. Metal shrapnel and strong gusts assaulted the wind dragons, tearing holes into their wings. The Elven dragon knights fell one after another.		They did not expect that the barbarians would have such a weapon. The elves did not have time to cast any powerful magic. Metal shrapnel and strong gusts assaulted the wind dragons, tearing holes into their wings. The Elven dragon knights fell one after another.

	"We did it!"		"We did it!"
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	Just as he was about fall of the deck, Guiche began to chant the "Flying" spell, so he slowly floated in the air. Kirche also jumped into the air after him.		Just as he was about fall of the deck, Guiche began to chant the "Flying" spell, so he slowly floated in the air. Kirche also jumped into the air after him.

	Guiche tried his best to fly, but the dragons were much adept at doing so than him. It was like fighting against a shark in the water.		Guiche tried his best to fly, but the dragons were much more adept at doing so than him. It was like fighting against a shark in the water.

	"Whoa! They're coming to me! They're coming to me!"		"Whoa! They're coming to me! They're coming to me!"
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	Malicorne answered absentmindedly,		Malicorne answered absentmindedly,

	"Mm, well, we did bite more than ~~what~~ we could chew anyway."		"Mm, well, we did bite off more than we could chew anyway."

	"Don't say things like that. Aren't you a man? Think of something, would you please."		"Don't say things like that. Aren't you a man? Think of something, would you please."
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	To say the truth, it was a completely different ship as compared to the patrol ship before. It was enormous, sporting a total of four cannon towers on the deck, two on each end of the ship.		To say the truth, it was a completely different ship as compared to the patrol ship before. It was enormous, sporting a total of four cannon towers on the deck, two on each end of the ship.

	Each cannon towers had two turrets, so ~~there were~~ all in all eight cannons. There was no other word than horrifying to describe the feeling of having all eight large caliber cannons pointed towards them. If they were hit by it, without its armored hull, the "Ostland" might ~~have shattered~~ into pieces.		Each cannon towers had two turrets, so all in all there were eight cannons. There was no other word than horrifying to describe the feeling of having all eight large caliber cannons pointed towards them. If they were hit by it, without its armored hull, the "Ostland" might shatter into pieces.

	"What is that thing..."		"What is that thing..."
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	"Siesta..." the person who came in was Siesta. She held a plate of bread, meat and wine.		"Siesta..." the person who came in was Siesta. She held a plate of bread, meat and wine.

	"Okay! Time to eat!" Siesta said that with a cheerful tone that she had never lost no matter ~~the~~ situation she was in. Louise shook her head nervously.		"Okay! Time to eat!" Siesta said that with a cheerful tone that she had never lost no matter what situation she was in. Louise shook her head nervously.

	"N-now is not the time to be eating, right? Isn't everyone else still fighting..."		"N-now is not the time to be eating, right? Isn't everyone else still fighting..."
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	Louise fixed her gaze on Siesta.		Louise fixed her gaze on Siesta.

	"The three of us will live on happily in Des Ornières. If the Pope and everyone else says that it is troublesome for him to be like that, and they want to take his life away... I will pick up my frying pan and fight against them. Miss Vallière, wouldn't you fight with me too? It's likely we will lose anyway, but in that case everyone would rise up up to the heavens together, hand in hand."		"The three of us will live on happily in Des Ornières. If the Pope and everyone else says that it is troublesome for him to be like that, and they want to take his life away... I will pick up my frying pan and fight against them. Miss Vallière, wouldn't you fight with me too? It's likely we will lose anyway, but in that case everyone would rise up to the heavens together, hand in hand."

	Louise looked at Siesta for some time, before chewing her lip, and wiping the tears in her eyes away.		Louise looked at Siesta for some time, before chewing her lip, and wiping the tears in her eyes away.

	Louise felt a little ashamed of herself. Even Siesta ~~had~~ made up her mind...		Louise felt a little ashamed of herself. Even Siesta has made up her mind...

	"Sorry, Siesta."		"Sorry, Siesta."