Zero no Tsukaima:Volume21 Chapter 3 - Revision history

Masterupc: punctuation, name conventions

2018-02-14T17:41:03Z

punctuation, name conventions

IcePhantom at 15:21, 13 December 2017

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	===Chapter 3 : The Elven Tower===		===Chapter 3: The Elven Tower===

	Louise and the others, lead by Colbert rushed into the tower and ran past the corridors.		Louise and the others, lead by Colbert rushed into the tower and ran past the corridors.

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	Tabitha immediately cast "Windy Icicle" towards her opponent without another word. However, the icicle spear turned around and lunged towards Tabitha just as it was about to reach the elf's chest.		Tabitha immediately cast "Windy Icicle" towards her opponent without another word. However, the icicle spear turned around and lunged towards Tabitha just as it was about to reach the elf's chest.

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	"Reflection".		"Reflection".

Immorrel at 07:17, 7 December 2017

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	===Chapter 3 : The Elven Tower===		===Chapter 3 : The Elven Tower===

	Louise and the others, lead by Colbert rushed into the tower and ran past the corridors.		Louise and the others, lead by Colbert rushed into the tower and ran past the corridors.

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	Just as Colbert was about to chase after Louise and the others, the pile of rubble, which should have been solidified by "Alchemy", began to distort itself, like it was alive.		Just as Colbert was about to chase after Louise and the others, the pile of rubble, which should have been solidified by "Alchemy", began to distort itself, like it was alive.



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	"The Hero of Ivaldi."		"The Hero of Ivaldi."

	He was the hero of the legendary story that Tabitha had always yearned for since young.		He was the hero of the legendary story that Tabitha had always yearned for since she was young.

	"At the time, I was a princess who was saved and liberated by the hero. However, this is my turn. I will be the one who will save that person, the 'Hero of Ivaldi'."		"At the time, I was a princess who was saved and liberated by the hero. However, this is my turn. I will be the one who will save that person, the 'Hero of Ivaldi'."
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	Tabitha closed her eyes and started to chant a spell.		Tabitha closed her eyes and started to chant a spell.

	''Rakus~~''. ''~~Wotale~~''. ''~~Isu~~''. ''~~Yise~~''. ''~~Hagaras''		"Rakus Wotale Isu Yise Hagaras"

	Tabitha's staff began to shine, and from that beam of light, a powerful wind howled into existence.		Tabitha's staff began to shine, and from that beam of light, a powerful wind howled into existence.
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	The terrifying elf who imprisoned Tabitha's mother and her in Alhambra.		The terrifying elf who imprisoned Tabitha's mother and her in Alhambra.



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	Her memories of him flowed into Louise's mind, and faded away.		Her memories of him flowed into Louise's mind, and faded away.

	There were happy memories and sad memories. There were memories of him being kind and gentle to her and memories where they fought... The memory when they met in the ~~Vestri~~ Courtyard where they hugged each other without any clothes on... The memory when he mistook her for Tabitha, and when she saw him k-kiss the princess, in the basement below the villa... Her blood boiled as she thought about it. "Is S-Saito now being all i-intimate with Tiffania...?"		There were happy memories and sad memories. There were memories of him being kind and gentle to her and memories where they fought... The memory when they met in the Versailles Courtyard where they hugged each other without any clothes on... The memory when he mistook her for Tabitha, and when she saw him k-kiss the princess, in the basement below the villa... Her blood boiled as she thought about it. "Is S-Saito now being all i-intimate with Tiffania...?"

	The powerful waves of emotions within her mind was distilled into her mental willpower that permeated her entire being. Louise chanted the runes of the "Void" spell, one that she has used so many times that her body would naturally summon it on its own.		The powerful waves of emotions within her mind was distilled into her mental willpower that permeated her entire being. Louise chanted the runes of the "Void" spell, one that she has used so many times that her body would naturally summon it on its own.
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	"Welcome to Adyl, barbarians." The old Elf who stood on the tall podium said.		"Welcome to Adyl, barbarians." The old Elf who stood on the tall podium said.

	He was not talking to them in elvish, but in fluent ~~Gaulish~~, the lingua franca of Halkeginia.		He was not talking to them in elvish, but in fluent Gallish, the lingua franca of Halkeginia.

	"However, who could have thought that you would reach this place in such a barbaric manner."		"However, who could have thought that you would reach this place in such a barbaric manner."
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	"He really is a fearsome monster". Any trace of a smile was now gone from Kirche's face.		"He really is a fearsome monster". Any trace of a smile was now gone from Kirche's face.

	"This was the power that they have boasted about, the power of the '~~first born~~' elves."		"This was the power that they have boasted about, the power of the 'firstborn' elves."

	~~Tiruc~~ swung a balled fist, and the stone giant raised his feet to stomp on the ground.		Turuk swung a balled fist, and the stone giant raised his feet to stomp on the ground.

	The ground shook as stone splintered off the ceiling and rained from above.		The ground shook as stone splintered off the ceiling and rained from above.
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	"Mm, I understand."		"Mm, I understand."

	The stone giant leapt up in a loud crash. The level of dexterity it displayed compared to the Bronze Valkyries were heaven and earths apart, it was just like a living thing.		The stone giant leapt up with a loud crash. The level of dexterity it displayed compared to the Bronze Valkyries were heaven and earths apart, it was just like a living thing.

	The huge silhouette plunged from above. Louise and the others split up and ran for cover.		The huge silhouette plunged from above. Louise and the others split up and ran for cover.
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	Louise then pointed her wand towards the bottom and began to chant a spell loudly.		Louise then pointed her wand towards the bottom and began to chant a spell loudly.

	''Eoru~~''. ''~~Sunu~~''. ''~~Firu''. ~~''Yarunsaksa''~~...		"Eoru Sunu Firu Yarunsaksa...."

	''Onu~~''. ''~~Sunu~~''. ''~~Uriu~~''. ''~~Ru''. ~~''Raduo''~~...		"Onu Sunu Uriu Ru Raduo...."

	The mental will that was flowing continuously within her... was converted into "Void" runes, and was concentrated into the tip of her wand.		The mental will that was flowing continuously within her... was converted into "Void" runes, and was concentrated into the tip of her wand.
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	The high feeling that she had never felt before made Louise feel troubled.		The high feeling that she had never felt before made Louise feel troubled.

	However, she just felt like Saito was beside her... This feeling made Louise ~~felt~~ like there was nothing to be afraid of.		However, she just felt like Saito was beside her... This feeling made Louise feel like there was nothing to be afraid of.

	She felt as if she could use any magic she wanted...		She felt as if she could use any magic she wanted...

	''Beozusu~~''. ''~~Yuru~~''. ''~~Suwieru~~''. ''~~Kano~~''. ''~~Oshiera''.		"Beozusu Yuru Suwieru Kano Oshiera."

	The melody of the runes that she has chanted countless times, interwove as she willed them to in her mind.		The melody of the runes that she has chanted countless times, interwove as she willed them to be in her mind.

	Louise overlooked the stone giant from above.		Louise overlooked the stone giant from above.
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	There was nothing to be afraid of. You're nothing but a lump of normal rock.		There was nothing to be afraid of. You're nothing but a lump of normal rock.

	''Jera~~''. ''~~Isa~~''. ''~~Wunshu~~''. ''~~Hagaru~~''. ''~~Beokun''. ~~''Iru''~~...		"Jera Isa Wunshu Hagaru Beokun Iru...."

	The spell was complete.		The spell was complete.
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	The "Explosion" Void spell punctured through the elven "Reflection", and blasted the ten-mail-tall giant into pieces. What was left of the giant fell into the crater that also appeared in the ground.		The "Explosion" Void spell punctured through the elven "Reflection", and blasted the ten-mail-tall giant into pieces. What was left of the giant fell into the crater that also appeared in the ground.

	"Oh, Louise, she ~~has~~ succeeded!" Guiche, who was released from the giant's hands, exclaimed cheerfully.		"Oh, Louise, she succeeded!" Guiche, who was released from the giant's hands, exclaimed cheerfully.

	"Hey, wasn't there still a lot of power left within you? I see, you were saving it for last, right?"		"Hey, wasn't there still a lot of power left within you? I see, you were saving it for last, right?"

Immorrel: /* Chapter 3 : The Elven Tower */

2017-08-15T18:17:16Z

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Rocketmanwikia: /* Chapter 3 : The Elven Tower */ fix link to chap2

2017-05-30T23:34:42Z

Chapter 3 : The Elven Tower: fix link to chap2

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2017-04-26T13:06:54Z

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	Louise and the others rushed into the tower~~, lead by Colbert,~~ and ran past the corridors.		Louise and the others, lead by Colbert rushed into the tower and ran past the corridors.

	Lamp-like magical devices lined on the ~~wall~~ of both sides, the weak illumination showed doors along the corridor. Missing statues, drawings and other superfluous decorations highlighted the different atmosphere it had compared to the Halkeginia palaces.		Lamp-like magical devices lined on the walls of both sides, the weak illumination showed doors along the corridor. Missing statues, drawings and other superfluous decorations highlighted the different atmosphere it had compared to the Halkeginia palaces.

	A deep alarm echoed within the tower.		A deep alarm echoed within the tower.
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	"Try not to make any footstep sounds. Don't do anything on your own, and wait for my command." Colbert said softly. Beads of sweat slowly formed on his forehead. He had never felt this choking feeling of anxiety before.		"Try not to make any footstep sounds. Don't do anything on your own, and wait for my command." Colbert said softly. Beads of sweat slowly formed on his forehead. He had never felt this choking feeling of anxiety before.

	They had sneaked into the enemy base without a map nor any information about them. Even though he had participated in all kinds of battles during his tenure as the leader of "Magical Research Experimental Group", this was ~~the~~ first time he had taken part in such a reckless mission.		They had sneaked into the enemy base without a map nor any information about them. Even though he had participated in all kinds of battles during his tenure as the leader of "Magical Research Experimental Group", this was is first time he had taken part in such a reckless mission.

	Not only that, they were fighting against elves.		Not only that, they were also fighting against elves.

	Would they be able to leave this place alive? In the worst case, even if their plan were to fail, he should at least let the student escape with their lives... As he thought about this, his expression turned even more severe.		Would they be able to leave this place alive? In the worst case, even if their plan were to fail, he should at least let the student escape with their lives... As he thought about this, his expression turned even more severe.
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	"The Hero of Ivaldi."		"The Hero of Ivaldi."

	He was the hero of the legendary story that Tabitha had always yearned for since ~~she was~~ young.		He was the hero of the legendary story that Tabitha had always yearned for since young.

	"At the time, I was a princess who was saved and liberated by the hero. However, this is my turn. I will be the one who will save that person, the 'Hero of Ivaldi'."		"At the time, I was a princess who was saved and liberated by the hero. However, this is my turn. I will be the one who will save that person, the 'Hero of Ivaldi'."
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	"Huff, huff... w-wait for me, hey!"		"Huff, huff... w-wait for me, hey!"

	"Can't you run faster? The Elves are going to catch up to us." Guiche urged Malicorne who ~~went~~ out of breath just ~~after~~ running for a while.		"Can't you run faster? The Elves are going to catch up to us." Guiche urged Malicorne who was already out of breath after just running for a while.

	"I'm just not good at running."		"I'm just not good at running."

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2017-04-24T19:04:25Z

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	Tabitha cast the "Blade" spell on her staff, and swiftly slashed at the trio.		Tabitha cast the "Blade" spell on her staff, and swiftly slashed at the trio.

	The elves were stunned for a moment. They generally assumed that... the barbarian Mages only could cast spells with exaggerated hand motions, which made them extremely vulnerable. Therefore, an assassin-like Mage who attacked nimbly and ~~casd~~ spells while not letting the enemy see their lip motions was a never before heard enemy for them.		The elves were stunned for a moment. They generally assumed that... the barbarian Mages only could cast spells with exaggerated hand motions, which made them extremely vulnerable. Therefore, an assassin-like Mage who attacked nimbly and cast spells while not letting the enemy see their lip motions was a never before heard enemy for them.

	The vacuum blade extending out of the staff cut open the "Wind Shield" and the uniform of the elf who looked like the team leader.		The vacuum blade extending out of the staff cut open the "Wind Shield" and the uniform of the elf who looked like the team leader.

Bygghandel: /* Chapter 3 : The Elven Tower */ Edited. Minor tense fixes, etc. Good job!

2017-04-24T16:46:01Z

Chapter 3 : The Elven Tower: Edited. Minor tense fixes, etc. Good job!

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