Zero no Tsukaima:Volume2 Chapter1 - Revision history

Shadow Walker13: Hyphenated a few words; removed honorific from "Viscount-sama"; various capitalization and punctuation changes

2023-10-31T23:52:56Z

Hyphenated a few words; removed honorific from "Viscount-sama"; various capitalization and punctuation changes

Shadow Walker13: Replaced triple dots, double spaces, and curly quotation marks with ellipses, single spaces, and straight quotation marks; fixed link to previous chapter and changed it to V2illustrations instead of V1Ch8

2023-10-31T23:19:51Z

Replaced triple dots, double spaces, and curly quotation marks with ellipses, single spaces, and straight quotation marks; fixed link to previous chapter and changed it to V2illustrations instead of V1Ch8

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Maou: Minor typo fixes woohooo

2016-12-24T00:25:12Z

Minor typo fixes woohooo

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	Saito was so touched that tears nearly came out of his eyes. ''From now onwards the petite and cute girl will finally be mine,'' he thought to himself. He has been waiting for this moment for a week, ever since the ball.		Saito was so touched that tears nearly came out of his eyes. ''From now onwards the petite and cute girl will finally be mine,'' he thought to himself. He has been waiting for this moment for a week, ever since the ball.

	Rubbing his hands together, Saito approached the sleeping Louise and said,“Itadakimasu… ”<ref>"Itadakimasu" is a Japanese ~~Honororific~~ used when one is about eat. In this case, it means that Saito beginning to 'devour' Louise ^^</ref> saying that, he snuggled under Louise’s blanket.		Rubbing his hands together, Saito approached the sleeping Louise and said,“Itadakimasu… ”<ref>"Itadakimasu" is a Japanese Honorific used when one is about eat. In this case, it means that Saito beginning to 'devour' Louise ^^</ref> saying that, he snuggled under Louise’s blanket.

	“Ah, Louise, Louise your skin is really so smooth and supple. Haha… Saito you idiot…”		“Ah, Louise, Louise your skin is really so smooth and supple. Haha… Saito you idiot…”
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	“What is that?” Fouquet replied in a rather surprised tone. “Don’t tell me that you’re going to speak on my defense. What a weirdo.”		“What is that?” Fouquet replied in a rather surprised tone. “Don’t tell me that you’re going to speak on my defense. What a weirdo.”

	“I’d be happy to speak in your defense, my dear Mathilda of Saxe-Gotha<ref>Old medieval ~~german~~ duchy. Here's the Wiki page [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Saxe-Gotha]</ref>”		“I’d be happy to speak in your defense, my dear Mathilda of Saxe-Gotha<ref>Old medieval German duchy. Here's the Wiki page [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Saxe-Gotha]</ref>”

	Fouquet’s face became pale. That’s a name I had forgotten, or rather, was forced to forget, she thought. There should be no one in this world that knows that name anymore…		Fouquet’s face became pale. That’s a name I had forgotten, or rather, was forced to forget, she thought. There should be no one in this world that knows that name anymore…

Arcorann: Fix (north -> east), @Flere821, if you're reading this your help would really have been appreciated years ago but it's not too late

2016-06-12T11:28:08Z

Fix (north -> east), @Flere821, if you're reading this your help would really have been appreciated years ago but it's not too late

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	“Hmm! Getting the holy land back… how would you fight against the all-powerful elves?”		“Hmm! Getting the holy land back… how would you fight against the all-powerful elves?”

	For hundreds of years, the holy land had been in the possession of the elves living ~~north~~ of Halkeginia. Humans had attempted countless crusades to get back the holy land, but failed miserably each time.		For hundreds of years, the holy land had been in the possession of the elves living east of Halkeginia. Humans had attempted countless crusades to get back the holy land, but failed miserably each time.

	The elves, distinguished by their distinctly pointed ears and unique culture, had long life spans and were highly proficient with magic. As such, they were highly effective warriors. Defeating them would be an uphill battle.		The elves, distinguished by their distinctly pointed ears and unique culture, had long life spans and were highly proficient with magic. As such, they were highly effective warriors. Defeating them would be an uphill battle.

Veritatis cupitor at 11:33, 5 October 2015

2015-10-05T11:33:38Z

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	Saito thanked Derflinger and once again approached Louise.		Saito thanked Derflinger and once again approached Louise.

	Louise was still in deep sleep. No matter from what angle you ~~look~~ at the sleeping Louise, she still ~~looks~~ as beautiful as ever. Saito took a deep breath; the room was filled with a nice fragrance.		Louise was still in deep sleep. No matter from what angle you looked at the sleeping Louise, she still looked as beautiful as ever. Saito took a deep breath; the room was filled with a nice fragrance.

	Saito, trembling slowly, lifted Louise’s blanket.		Saito, trembling slowly, lifted Louise’s blanket.
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	Inside her cell, there was nothing except for shoddy looking bed and a table that was made of wood. Even the utensils she used were made of wood. Things would be quite different if there was just something made of metal… Like a spoon.		Inside her cell, there was nothing except for shoddy looking bed and a table that was made of wood. Even the utensils she used were made of wood. Things would be quite different if there was just something made of metal… Like a spoon.

	She had wanted to turn the prison walls and iron bars into soil using alchemy. Without her wand, which was confiscated, that would not be possible. Magicians were helpless without their wands. Furthermore, the prison walls and iron bars ~~are~~ specially enchanted to resist magic. Even with the use of alchemy, she would not be able to escape.		She had wanted to turn the prison walls and iron bars into soil using alchemy. Without her wand, which was confiscated, that would not be possible. Magicians were helpless without their wands. Furthermore, the prison walls and iron bars were specially enchanted to resist magic. Even with the use of alchemy, she would not be able to escape.

	“It’s really mean of them to lock up a feeble female like myself here.” Fouquet grumbled to herself. Then she thought about the youth that had apprehended her, ''That boy is quite strong, can’t believe that he’s an ordinary human. Who exactly is he? Then again, it doesn’t concern me anymore.''		“It’s really mean of them to lock up a feeble female like myself here.” Fouquet grumbled to herself. Then she thought about the youth that had apprehended her, ''That boy is quite strong, can’t believe that he’s an ordinary human. Who exactly is he? Then again, it doesn’t concern me anymore.''

Coffeezombie: Line is thought and not spoken in text

2015-04-12T11:35:45Z

Line is thought and not spoken in text

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	Saito thanked Derflinger and once again approached Louise.		Saito thanked Derflinger and once again approached Louise.

	Louise was still in deep sleep. No matter from what angle you ~~looked~~ at the sleeping Louise, she still ~~looked~~ as beautiful as ever. Saito took a deep breath; the room was filled with a nice fragrance.		Louise was still in deep sleep. No matter from what angle you look at the sleeping Louise, she still looks as beautiful as ever. Saito took a deep breath; the room was filled with a nice fragrance.

	Saito, trembling slowly, lifted Louise’s blanket.		Saito, trembling slowly, lifted Louise’s blanket.
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	“I’d be happy to speak in your defense, my dear Mathilda of Saxe-Gotha<ref>Old medieval german duchy. Here's the Wiki page [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Saxe-Gotha]</ref>”		“I’d be happy to speak in your defense, my dear Mathilda of Saxe-Gotha<ref>Old medieval german duchy. Here's the Wiki page [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Saxe-Gotha]</ref>”

	Fouquet’s face became pale. ~~“That’s~~ a name I had forgotten, or rather, was forced to forget. There should be no one in this world that knows that name ~~anymore…”~~		Fouquet’s face became pale. That’s a name I had forgotten, or rather, was forced to forget, she thought. There should be no one in this world that knows that name anymore…

	“Who exactly are you?”		“Who exactly are you?”

Coffeezombie: fixed tenses

2015-04-12T11:17:13Z

fixed tenses

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	Saito thanked Derflinger and once again approached Louise.		Saito thanked Derflinger and once again approached Louise.

	Louise was still in deep sleep. No matter from what angle you ~~look~~ at the sleeping Louise, she still ~~looks~~ as beautiful as ever. Saito took a deep breath; the room was filled with a nice fragrance.		Louise was still in deep sleep. No matter from what angle you looked at the sleeping Louise, she still looked as beautiful as ever. Saito took a deep breath; the room was filled with a nice fragrance.

	Saito, trembling slowly, lifted Louise’s blanket.		Saito, trembling slowly, lifted Louise’s blanket.

Coffeezombie: fix tense

2015-04-12T10:45:52Z

fix tense

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	“I completely agree. Why can’t she be like her two older sisters who are very good with magic?”		“I completely agree. Why can’t she be like her two older sisters who are very good with magic?”

	Louise, upon hearing those words, felt sad and dejected as she bit her lips. The servants ~~have~~ started ~~looking~~ for her in the vegetation. Louise tried her best to escape. She retreated to the place she called the “Secret Garden” – the central lake.		Louise, upon hearing those words, felt sad and dejected as she bit her lips. The servants started to look for her in the vegetation. Louise tried her best to escape. She retreated to the place she called the “Secret Garden” – the central lake.

	The Secret Garden was the only place where Louise felt at ease. It was tranquil, with no one else around. Flowers bloomed everywhere and birds gathered on the benches near the lake. And in the middle of the lake there was a small island on which a small house made of white marble rested.		The Secret Garden was the only place where Louise felt at ease. It was tranquil, with no one else around. Flowers bloomed everywhere and birds gathered on the benches near the lake. And in the middle of the lake there was a small island on which a small house made of white marble rested.

Coffeezombie: add comma

2014-03-09T15:33:55Z

add comma

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	“Haha… Please tell me the reason for you believing that, but you’d better make it simple to understand, otherwise I will not be able to tell what will happen to you…”		“Haha… Please tell me the reason for you believing that, but you’d better make it simple to understand, otherwise I will not be able to tell what will happen to you…”

	“Well, during the ball, you looked at me, your familiar with those lovelorn eyes.”		“Well, during the ball, you looked at me, your familiar, with those lovelorn eyes.”

	Louise with her face turning red replied, “So that’s why you thought that I’m fond of you and climbed into my bed?”		Louise with her face turning red replied, “So that’s why you thought that I’m fond of you and climbed into my bed?”

Coffeezombie: fix verb tenses

2014-03-09T15:28:07Z

fix verb tenses

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	“Of course it’s you, partner.”		“Of course it’s you, partner.”

	The praises went straight to Saito's head. He felt as if the whole world was cheering for him. One ~~has~~ to wonder if he ~~has~~ a problem with his IQ.		The praises went straight to Saito's head. He felt as if the whole world was cheering for him. One had to wonder if he had a problem with his IQ.

	“Louise is really fortunate that I have taken a liking to her. The great and handsome me.”		“Louise is really fortunate that I have taken a liking to her. The great and handsome me.”