Zero no Tsukaima:Volume2 Chapter3 - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 07:50, 6 October 2015

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	"How forgetful. Who gave you permission to use human language? Just bark. Dog. Come on, bark, I say. Everyone look at the doggie. Stupid dog."		"How forgetful. Who gave you permission to use human language? Just bark. Dog. Come on, bark, I say. Everyone look at the doggie. Stupid dog."

	Then she ~~stamped~~ stamped on Saito's head and ground it against the floor.		Then she stamped on Saito's head and ground it against the floor.

	"I-it's alright. Loyalty must be rewarded, after all."		"I-it's alright. Loyalty must be rewarded, after all."

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	"Yes, in the middle of our 'Make-Believe Royal Court', we ended up fighting over who would play princess! And it was my blow to your stomach, Louise Françoise, that successfully decided it."		"Yes, in the middle of our 'Make-Believe Royal Court', we ended up fighting over who would play princess! And it was my blow to your stomach, Louise Françoise, that successfully decided it."

	"I'd fainted in the presence of Princess."		"I fainted in the presence of Princess."

	After that, the two of them exchanged glances and broke out in laughter. Saito, amazed, just kept watching them in that state. The princess may have looked like a lady, but she was actually a tomboy.		After that, the two of them exchanged glances and broke out in laughter. Saito, amazed, just kept watching them in that state. The princess may have looked like a lady, but she was actually a tomboy.

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	Saito grinned deliberately at Louise. Louise muttered under her breath and turned her face away.		Saito grinned deliberately at Louise. Louise muttered under her breath and turned her face away.

	''Ah, what, so you are getting jealous. Just look at yourself. This is what you get for getting charmed by that noble with the plumed hat and blushing'', Saito thought.		''Ah, what, so you are getting jealous. Just look at yourself. This is what you get for getting charmed by that noble with the plumed hat and for blushing'', Saito thought.

	Saito caught Henrietta's hand, and then firmly pulled her to him.		Saito caught Henrietta's hand, and then firmly pulled her to him.

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	"I wish to be of use to Her Highness......"		"I wish to be of use to Her Highness......"

	Saito was sensing something from Guiche's ~~appearence~~ right then.		Saito was sensing something from Guiche's appearance right then.

	"You, are you in love? With the princess?!"		"You, are you in love? With the princess?!"

EastN3 at 03:27, 3 February 2013

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Vaelis at 08:33, 20 April 2012

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	"This mission is for the future of Tristain. For that, my mother's ring will protect you from the harsh winds blowing in Albion."		"This mission is for the future of Tristain. For that, my mother's ring will protect you from the harsh winds blowing in Albion."


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Imagker: Chapter Three: A Childhood Friend's Request

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Chapter Three: A Childhood Friend's Request

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	"Yes! That's right, Louise! We were arguing over those puffy cream cakes, and ended up having a real scuffle! Oh, whenever we fought, it was me who always lost. You would grab my hair, and I'd just start crying."		"Yes! That's right, Louise! We were arguing over those puffy cream cakes, and ended up having a real scuffle! Oh, whenever we fought, it was me who always lost. You would grab my hair, and I'd just start crying."

	"Not at all, ~~princess~~ achieved victory on at least one occasion."		"Not at all, Princess achieved victory on at least one occasion."

	Louise said, looking sentimental.		Louise said, looking sentimental.
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	"You remembered! Looking at the two of us, one could call that battle the Siege of Amiens!"		"You remembered! Looking at the two of us, one could call that battle the Siege of Amiens!"

	"That was when we were fighting over a dress in ~~princess~~' bedroom, wasn't it?"		"That was when we were fighting over a dress in Princess' bedroom, wasn't it?"

	"Yes, in the middle of our 'Make-Believe Royal Court', we ended up fighting over who would play princess! And it was my blow to your stomach, Louise Françoise, that successfully decided it."		"Yes, in the middle of our 'Make-Believe Royal Court', we ended up fighting over who would play princess! And it was my blow to your stomach, Louise Françoise, that successfully decided it."

	"I'd fainted in the presence of ~~princess~~."		"I'd fainted in the presence of Princess."

	After that, the two of them exchanged glances and broke out in laughter. Saito, amazed, just kept watching them in that state. The princess may have looked like a lady, but she was actually a tomboy.		After that, the two of them exchanged glances and broke out in laughter. Saito, amazed, just kept watching them in that state. The princess may have looked like a lady, but she was actually a tomboy.
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	Saito asked, as Louise closed her eyes in reminiscence before answering.		Saito asked, as Louise closed her eyes in reminiscence before answering.

	"I had the pleasure of serving as ~~princess~~' playmate back when we were children."		"I had the pleasure of serving as Princess' playmate back when we were children."

	After that, Louise turned back to Henrietta.		After that, Louise turned back to Henrietta.

	"But, I am deeply moved that ~~princess~~ would remember such things....... I thought you'd already forgotten about me."		"But, I am deeply moved that Princess would remember such things....... I thought you'd already forgotten about me."

	The princess gave a deep sigh and sat down on the bed.		The princess gave a deep sigh and sat down on the bed.
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	"No, it's nothing. Forgive me, oh, I'm so ashamed of myself. It's not something I should tell you...... but I am just so......"		"No, it's nothing. Forgive me, oh, I'm so ashamed of myself. It's not something I should tell you...... but I am just so......"

	"Please tell me. What troubles are they that cause ~~princess~~, as cheerful as she is, to sigh like this?"		"Please tell me. What troubles are they that cause Princess, as cheerful as she is, to sigh like this?"

	"......No, I cannot tell you. Please forget I said anything. Louise."		"......No, I cannot tell you. Please forget I said anything. Louise."
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	Saito didn't know anything about the alliance or Albion, but in any case, it seemed like it was something serious. ''Yup, as big as another Yagoto'', Saito thought with a nod.		Saito didn't know anything about the alliance or Albion, but in any case, it seemed like it was something serious. ''Yup, as big as another Yagoto'', Saito thought with a nod.

	"Then this is about that thing that could get in the way of ~~princess~~' wedding?"		"Then this is about that thing that could get in the way of Princess' wedding?"

	Louise asked, her face looking pale, and Henrietta gave a regretful nod.		Louise asked, her face looking pale, and Henrietta gave a regretful nod.
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	"What kind of letter could that be?"		"What kind of letter could that be?"

	"......That I cannot tell you. But if the Germanian Imperial Family were to read it...... they would never forgive me. The marriage ~~will~~ fall through, and with it, the alliance with Tristain. Then Tristain would stand alone against the strength of Albion."		"......That I cannot tell you. But if the Germanian Imperial Family were to read it...... they would never forgive me. The marriage would fall through, and with it, the alliance with Tristain. Then Tristain would stand alone against the strength of Albion."

	Louise gave a gasp and seized Henrietta's hands.		Louise gave a gasp and seized Henrietta's hands.
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	"Impossible! It's impossible, Louise! How could I be so terrible? It's all confusing! When I think about it, I couldn't ask you to do such a dangerous thing as to go to Albion while this conflict between the nobles and the royalists is unfolding!"		"Impossible! It's impossible, Louise! How could I be so terrible? It's all confusing! When I think about it, I couldn't ask you to do such a dangerous thing as to go to Albion while this conflict between the nobles and the royalists is unfolding!"

	"What are you saying? Be it the kettles of hell, or into the jaws of a dragon, if it's for ~~princess~~' sake, I'll go anywhere! There is no way the third daughter of the House of la Vallière, Louise Françoise, could overlook such a crisis for ~~princess~~ and Tristain!"		"What are you saying? Be it the kettles of hell, or into the jaws of a dragon, if it's for Princess' sake, I'll go anywhere! There is no way the third daughter of the House of la Vallière, Louise Françoise, could overlook such a crisis for Princess and Tristain!"

	Louise kneeled down and lowered her head reverently.		Louise kneeled down and lowered her head reverently.

	"Please leave this matter to me, the one who has captured Fouquet the [Crumbling Earth]."		"Please leave this matter to me, the one who has captured Fouquet the Crumbling Earth."

	Saito, who had been leaning on his arm against the wall, turned to look at Louise and spoke.		Saito, who had been leaning on his arm against the wall, turned to look at Louise and spoke.
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	Louise grasped Henrietta's hands, and as the former spoke heatedly, the latter gave in and started crying.		Louise grasped Henrietta's hands, and as the former spoke heatedly, the latter gave in and started crying.

	"Princess! I, Louise, forever friend of the ~~Princess~~, will be your confidante! Have you forgotten my vow of eternal loyalty?"		"Princess! I, Louise, forever friend of the princess, will be your confidante! Have you forgotten my vow of eternal loyalty?"

	"Ah, the loyalty. This loyalty and sincere friendship! I'm deeply moved. I will never forget through life your loyalty and friendship! Louise Françoise!"		"Ah, the loyalty. This loyalty and sincere friendship! I'm deeply moved. I will never forget through life your loyalty and friendship! Louise Françoise!"
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	''Legendary or not, she still treats me like a dog.''		''Legendary or not, she still treats me like a dog.''

	"Then shall we go to Albion, find the Crown Prince of Wales, and get the letter back, ~~princess~~?"		"Then shall we go to Albion, find the Crown Prince of Wales, and get the letter back, Princess?"

	"Yes, that is correct. I feel confident that you, the ones who have caught Fouquet the [Crumbling Earth], should be able to accomplish this difficult mission."		"Yes, that is correct. I feel confident that you, the ones who have caught Fouquet the Crumbling Earth, should be able to accomplish this difficult mission."

	"As you wish. How urgent is this task?"		"As you wish. How urgent is this task?"
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	"Th-that's not fair! You! Gah!"		"Th-that's not fair! You! Gah!"

	"So, what now? This guy overheard ~~princess~~' story. Shall we have him hanged?"		"So, what now? This guy overheard Princess' story. Shall we have him hanged?"

	If the opponent was a guy, Saito could be very serious.		If the opponent was a guy, Saito could be very serious.