Zero no Tsukaima:Volume2 Chapter5 ~Preview~ - Revision history

Lysanther: removed comments regarding a resolved translation query

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	“But what happen if I cannot find a way back?”		“But what happen if I cannot find a way back?”

	Her face reddened a little, Louise hardened her heart and replied, “…If that happens, I will ask you to continue to serve me.” <!--(Why not just use "worry" in place of "serve" here? They're having a cute heart-to-heart conversation anyway...~Dan)--> <!--Having serve there instead of worry changes the meaning of the sentence to a fair degree. Her asking him to continue to worry her could be a humerous line in reference to her previously saying that his presence is troublesome for her too. Also it seems somewhat out of place that she would harden her heart before saying something like asking for Saito to continue serving her which seems more tender.~Lys--> <!--Actually , it can be translated not only as to worry about but also as to take care of, so in this sense serving doesn't seem that far off~Darknemo2000-->		Her face reddened a little, Louise hardened her heart and replied, “…If that happens, I will ask you to continue to serve me.”

	“Even if you are married?”		“Even if you are married?”

Darknemo2000 at 16:20, 27 May 2008

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	“But what happen if I cannot find a way back?”		“But what happen if I cannot find a way back?”

	Her face reddened a little, Louise hardened her heart and replied, “…If that happens, I will ask you to continue to serve ~~(literal translation is worry about)~~ me.” <!--(Why not just use "worry" in place of "serve" here? They're having a cute heart-to-heart conversation anyway...~Dan)--> <!--Having serve there instead of worry changes the meaning of the sentence to a fair degree. Her asking him to continue to worry her could be a humerous line in reference to her previously saying that his presence is troublesome for her too. Also it seems somewhat out of place that she would harden her heart before saying something like asking for Saito to continue serving her which seems more tender.~Lys-->		Her face reddened a little, Louise hardened her heart and replied, “…If that happens, I will ask you to continue to serve me.” <!--(Why not just use "worry" in place of "serve" here? They're having a cute heart-to-heart conversation anyway...~Dan)--> <!--Having serve there instead of worry changes the meaning of the sentence to a fair degree. Her asking him to continue to worry her could be a humerous line in reference to her previously saying that his presence is troublesome for her too. Also it seems somewhat out of place that she would harden her heart before saying something like asking for Saito to continue serving her which seems more tender.~Lys--> <!--Actually , it can be translated not only as to worry about but also as to take care of, so in this sense serving doesn't seem that far off~Darknemo2000-->

	“Even if you are married?”		“Even if you are married?”

Lysanther: Corrections & some comments odd sections

2008-05-27T13:55:32Z

Corrections & some comments odd sections

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Darknemo2000: Translated few sentances that ArchmageXin had troubles with, also corrected few mistranslations

2008-05-27T02:38:45Z

Translated few sentances that ArchmageXin had troubles with, also corrected few mistranslations

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Dan at 02:34, 16 April 2008

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86.88.203.49 at 17:27, 9 April 2008

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Vaelis at 13:04, 17 March 2008

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	Who talked about Gandalfr anyway? Old Osman shouldn’t have talked about this.		Who talked about Gandalfr anyway? Old Osman shouldn’t have talked about this.

	「我對歷史和戰爭都很有興趣的呢。向芙凱尋問的時候，就對你抱有了興趣，然後在王室的圖書館裡調查了一下呢。調查的結果就是，你是傳說的使魔『綱達魯烏』。」		“I find history and warfare extremely interesting. When Fouquet was captured, I became very interested in you. Then I did some research in the Imperial library. The result of that research is you are the legendary familiar Gandalf.”

			Oh, is that so. You are really a scholar.
	~~原來如此，真是個學習家呢。~~

			“I want to know how strong is the person who captured Fouquet, can you show it to me?”
	~~「我想知道那個逮捕芙凱的力量到底有多強。能否讓我見識下呢？」~~

	“Show you?”		“Show you?”

Vaelis at 08:13, 17 March 2008

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ArchmageXin at 01:17, 17 March 2008

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	“But I am the son of General de Gramont, how could I lose to this band of idiot soldiers?”		“But I am the son of General de Gramont, how could I lose to this band of idiot soldiers?”

			“This is intolerable, (Something’s, I think Hengensrkia) nobility is only tough with their words, but actual combat capabilities are pretty weak.”

			Guiche stood up, preparing to chant his magic. But Warde stopped him by grapping on to the young noble’s shirt.

			“Everyone listen carefully.” Warde whispered. Saito and the others became silent to listen.

			“This mission counts as complete if one half of the group arrives safely at the destination.”

			At this moment the cute Tabitha also closed her book, looked at Warde’s direction. The girl used her wand and point at herself, Kirche and Guiche and uttered one word, “Bait.”

			Then Tabitha continued and point at Saito, Warde, and Louise then uttered another word, “Go to the harbor.”

			“The time?” Warde asked the young girl.

			“We carry it out right now.”

			“Just liked we planned a while ago, go from the backdoor.”

			“Ah? AH!” Saito and Louise shouted out in surprise.

			“They are responsible for holding the situation; we should be able to confuse their sight. Using this time we should be able to escape, toward the harbor, just like that.”

			“But…But…”

			Saito looked at Kirche, and the girl ran her hand through her red hair. And puckered her lies then added, “

			“Bah, can’t help it anyway, we really didn’t want to go to Albion with you anyway.”

			Guchie sniffed at his rose, “ Heh, I might die here. What would happen then? If I die then I won’t be able to meet Princess Herneitta again.”

			Tabitha nodded at Saito. “Go.”

			“But..”

			Kirche begin to push Saito, “Ok, time to go. When you come back…I will let you kiss me.”

			Then, she turned around to face Louise, “Ah, Louise, please don’t make any misinterpretation of this, I am not here to be bait for you.”

			”I know, I know!” Although she said it, Louise still lowered her head in a salute to Kirche and others.

			Saito and the others lowered their body to the floor, and begin to run. Arrows flew at their direction, but with a wave of Tabitha’s wand, and the roaring wind protected them from the onslaught.

			The group left the Bar into the kitchen and toward the other exit, and then there was a huge explosion behind them.

			“…Look like it begins.” Louise mouthed.

			Warde couch close to the door, then listened at the situation outside.

			“There don’t appear to be anyone.”

			Opening the door, the three leaped into the night streets of La Roche.

			“The docks are this way.”

			Warde is in the lead, Louise followed behind. Saito came in the back.

			Under the Moonlight, the trio’s shadow extended, and followed closely behind.

Vaelis at 12:59, 16 March 2008

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	“Ha” (Some kind of expression)		“Ha” (Some kind of expression)

	Who talked about Gandalfr anyway? Old Osman shouldn’t ~~had~~ talked about this.		Who talked about Gandalfr anyway? Old Osman shouldn’t have talked about this.

	「我對歷史和戰爭都很有興趣的呢。向芙凱尋問的時候，就對你抱有了興趣，然後在王室的圖書館裡調查了一下呢。調查的結果就是，你是傳說的使魔『綱達魯烏』。」		「我對歷史和戰爭都很有興趣的呢。向芙凱尋問的時候，就對你抱有了興趣，然後在王室的圖書館裡調查了一下呢。調查的結果就是，你是傳說的使魔『綱達魯烏』。」
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	“This hotel used to be a castle designed for repelling Albion invasions, there is a parade ground in the center of it.”		“This hotel used to be a castle designed for repelling Albion invasions, there is a parade ground in the center of it.”

	The two then left for the parade ground for nobles together. The ancient practice ground is now a place for debris and refuse, with empty beer barrels and crates scattered all over the place. 好像在訴說往日的榮譽的石製的升旗台，現在已經佈滿了青苔。~~<!--~~(The sentence is untranslated, but it meant an once great parade ground is now an wasteland, using an ancient Chinese phase for an failing dynasty) ~~-->~~		The two then left for the parade ground for nobles together. The ancient practice ground is now a place for debris and refuse, with empty beer barrels and crates scattered all over the place. 好像在訴說往日的榮譽的石製的升旗台，現在已經佈滿了青苔。(The sentence is untranslated, but it meant an once great parade ground is now an wasteland, using an ancient Chinese phase for an failing dynasty)

	“Before, maybe you don’t know, under the reign of Philip the 3rd, this often used to be a place to host duels between nobility.”		“Before, maybe you don’t know, under the reign of Philip the 3rd, this often used to be a place to host duels between nobility.”

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	“If we don’t try we will never know.”		“If we don’t try we will never know.”

	“But Guiche, if it ~~come~~ to warfare I am a far better expert than you are”		“But Guiche, if it comes to warfare I am a far better expert than you are”

	“But I am the son of General de Gramont, how could I lose to this band of idiot soldiers?”		“But I am the son of General de Gramont, how could I lose to this band of idiot soldiers?”
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	“This is intolerable, the nobles of Tristain are only tough with their words, but their actual combat capabilities are pretty weak.”		“This is intolerable, the nobles of Tristain are only tough with their words, but their actual combat capabilities are pretty weak.”

	Guiche stood up, preparing to chant his magic. But Wardes stopped him by ~~grapping~~ on to the young noble’s shirt.		Guiche stood up, preparing to chant his magic. But Wardes stopped him by grabbing on to the young noble’s shirt.

	“Everyone listen carefully.” Wardes whispered. Saito and the others became silent to listen.		“Everyone listen carefully.” Wardes whispered. Saito and the others became silent to listen.
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	“This mission counts as complete if one half of the group arrives safely at the destination.”		“This mission counts as complete if one half of the group arrives safely at the destination.”

	At this moment the cute Tabitha also closed her book, looked at Wardes’ direction. The girl used her wand and point at herself, Kirche and Guiche and uttered one word, “Bait.”		At this moment the cute Tabitha also closed her book and looked at Wardes’ direction. The girl used her wand and point at herself, Kirche and Guiche and uttered one word, “Bait.”

	Then Tabitha continued and point at Saito, Wardes, and Louise then uttered another word, “Go to the harbor.”		Then Tabitha continued and point at Saito, Wardes, and Louise then uttered another word, “Go to the harbor.”
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	“But..”		“But..”

	Kirche ~~begin~~ to push Saito, “Ok, time to go. When you come back…I will let you kiss me.”		Kirche began to push Saito, “Ok, time to go. When you come back…I will let you kiss me.”

	Then, she turned around to face Louise, “Ah, Louise, please don’t make any misinterpretation of this, I am not here to be bait for you.”		Then, she turned around to face Louise, “Ah, Louise, please don’t make any misinterpretation of this, I am not here to be bait for you.”
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	The group left the Bar into the kitchen and toward the other exit, and then there was a huge explosion behind them.		The group left the Bar into the kitchen and toward the other exit, and then there was a huge explosion behind them.

	“…Look like it ~~begins~~.” Louise mouthed.		“…Look like it has begun.” Louise mouthed.

	Wardes couch close to the door, then listened at the situation outside.		Wardes couch close to the door, then listened at the situation outside.

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	“But I am the son of General de Gramont, how could I lose to this band of idiot soldiers?”		“But I am the son of General de Gramont, how could I lose to this band of idiot soldiers?”

	“This is intolerable, ~~(Something’s, I think Hengensrkia) nobility is~~ only tough with their words, but actual combat capabilities are pretty weak.”		“This is intolerable, the nobles of Tristain are only tough with their words, but their actual combat capabilities are pretty weak.”

	Guiche stood up, preparing to chant his magic. But ~~Warde~~ stopped him by grapping on to the young noble’s shirt.		Guiche stood up, preparing to chant his magic. But Wardes stopped him by grapping on to the young noble’s shirt.

	“Everyone listen carefully.” ~~Warde~~ whispered. Saito and the others became silent to listen.		“Everyone listen carefully.” Wardes whispered. Saito and the others became silent to listen.

	“This mission counts as complete if one half of the group arrives safely at the destination.”		“This mission counts as complete if one half of the group arrives safely at the destination.”

	At this moment the cute Tabitha also closed her book, looked at ~~Warde’s~~ direction. The girl used her wand and point at herself, Kirche and Guiche and uttered one word, “Bait.”		At this moment the cute Tabitha also closed her book, looked at Wardes’ direction. The girl used her wand and point at herself, Kirche and Guiche and uttered one word, “Bait.”

	Then Tabitha continued and point at Saito, ~~Warde~~, and Louise then uttered another word, “Go to the harbor.”		Then Tabitha continued and point at Saito, Wardes, and Louise then uttered another word, “Go to the harbor.”

	“The time?” ~~Warde~~ asked the young girl.		“The time?” Wardes asked the young girl.

	“We carry it out right now.”		“We carry it out right now.”
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	“But…But…”		“But…But…”

	Saito looked at Kirche, and the girl ran her hand through her red hair. And puckered her ~~lies~~ then added, “		Saito looked at Kirche, and the girl ran her hand through her red hair. And puckered her lips then added,

	“Bah, can’t help it anyway, we really didn’t want to go to Albion with you anyway.”		“Bah, can’t help it anyway, we really didn’t want to go to Albion with you anyway.”

	~~Guchie~~ sniffed at his rose, “ Heh, I might die here. What would happen then? If I die then I won’t be able to meet Princess ~~Herneitta~~ again.”		Guiche sniffed at his rose, “ Heh, I might die here. What would happen then? If I die then I won’t be able to meet Princess Henrietta again.”

	Tabitha nodded at Saito. “Go.”		Tabitha nodded at Saito. “Go.”
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	”I know, I know!” Although she said it, Louise still lowered her head in a salute to Kirche and others.		”I know, I know!” Although she said it, Louise still lowered her head in a salute to Kirche and others.

	Saito and the others lowered their body to the floor, and ~~begin~~ to run. Arrows flew at their direction, but with a wave of Tabitha’s wand, ~~and~~ the roaring wind protected them from the onslaught.		Saito and the others lowered their body to the floor, and began to run. Arrows flew at their direction, but with a wave of Tabitha’s wand, the roaring wind protected them from the onslaught.

	The group left the Bar into the kitchen and toward the other exit, and then there was a huge explosion behind them.		The group left the Bar into the kitchen and toward the other exit, and then there was a huge explosion behind them.
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	“…Look like it begins.” Louise mouthed.		“…Look like it begins.” Louise mouthed.

	~~Warde~~ couch close to the door, then listened at the situation outside.		Wardes couch close to the door, then listened at the situation outside.

	“There don’t appear to be anyone.”		“There don’t appear to be anyone.”

	Opening the door, the three leaped into the night streets of La ~~Roche~~.		Opening the door, the three leaped into the night streets of La Rochelle.

	“The docks are this way.”		“The docks are this way.”

	~~Warde~~ is in the lead, Louise followed behind. Saito came in the back.		Wardes is in the lead, Louise followed behind. Saito came in the back.

	Under the Moonlight, the trio’s shadow extended, and followed closely behind.		Under the Moonlight, the trio’s shadow extended, and followed closely behind.