Zero no Tsukaima:Volume2 Chapter6 - Revision history

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2016-12-10T19:28:13Z

Chapter Six: The White Country

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	“B-but... Louise...”		“B-but... Louise...”

	“What’s the use in raising a racket now? Their cannons and arrows would just ~~turn~~ Louise, you, and all of us ~~into swiss cheese~~.”		“What’s the use in raising a racket now? Their cannons and arrows would just rip Louise, you, and all of us apart.”

	Saito was shocked.		Saito was shocked.
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	==Translator's Notes and References==		==Translator's Notes and References==
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2015-07-23T02:29:02Z

Preview -> MTL renaming

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	\| [[Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume2_Chapter5\|Back to Chapter 5]]		\| [[Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume2_Chapter5\|Back to Chapter 5]]
	\| [[Zero_no_Tsukaima\|Return to Main Page]]		\| [[Zero_no_Tsukaima\|Return to Main Page]]
	\| [[~~Zero_no_Tsukaima~~:~~Volume2_Chapter7_%7EPreview%7E~~\|Forward to Chapter 7]]		\| [[Zero no Tsukaima:Volume2 Chapter7 - MTL\|Forward to Chapter 7 - MTL]]
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2015-04-13T12:54:04Z

fix sentence

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	“There!” She pointed up towards the sky.		“There!” She pointed up towards the sky.

	“Huh?” He followed where she pointed, and gasped in shock. A huge... well, nothing but huge sight greeted his eyes.		“Huh?” He followed where she pointed, and gasped in shock. A huge... well, nothing but a huge sight greeted his eyes.

	From between the clouds he could see dark land. It continued to expand under them. Mountains carved the landscape, and rivers flowed down them.		From between the clouds he could see dark land. It continued to expand under them. Mountains carved the landscape, and rivers flowed down them.

2015-04-13T12:45:44Z

fixed verb tenses for consistency

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	The captain nodded, perhaps with a devious smile. With the deal done, the captain made one order after another. “Leave port! Untie anchors! Set sail!”		The captain nodded, perhaps with a devious smile. With the deal done, the captain made one order after another. “Leave port! Untie anchors! Set sail!”

	The sailors followed orders, all the while complaining under their breath, expertly ~~removing~~ the ropes from the branches, ~~climbing~~ to the securing ropes on both sides, and released the sails.		The sailors followed orders, all the while complaining under their breath. They expertly removed the ropes from the branches, climbed to the securing ropes on both sides, and released the sails.

	Without the ties, the ship suddenly sank, and then floated again with the power of the wind stones.		Without the ties, the ship suddenly sank, and then floated again with the power of the wind stones.

2015-04-13T12:32:40Z

fix verb

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	After climbing a long flight of stairs, they arrived on top of a small hill. Seeing everything in front of him, Saito gasped.		After climbing a long flight of stairs, they arrived on top of a small hill. Seeing everything in front of him, Saito gasped.

	It was a huge tree, branching out in every direction. It had the size of a mountain. How tall was it? The night covered its top, but it had considerable height. Saito looked at the tree as if it ~~was~~ Tokyo Tower.		It was a huge tree, branching out in every direction. It had the size of a mountain. How tall was it? The night covered its top, but it had considerable height. Saito looked at the tree as if it were Tokyo Tower.

	And then... taking a closer look between the branches, the tree seemed to be holding something even larger. A huge fruit? He was wrong. It was a ship. It looked like a zeppelin, stuck between the trees.		And then... taking a closer look between the branches, the tree seemed to be holding something even larger. A huge fruit? He was wrong. It was a ship. It looked like a zeppelin, stuck between the trees.

2015-04-13T12:26:54Z

fix expression

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	Tabitha concisely ordered Guiche. “Alchemy.”		Tabitha concisely ordered Guiche. “Alchemy.”

	On the golem’s shoulder, Fouquet, seeing her creation stuck all over with petals, annoyingly complained, “What’s this? A present? I’m not letting ~~this~~ up even if you decorate my golem with petals!”		On the golem’s shoulder, Fouquet, seeing her creation stuck all over with petals, annoyingly complained, “What’s this? A present? I’m not letting up even if you decorate my golem with petals!”

	The golem raised a fist, and smashed the table that shielded Kirche, Tabitha, and Guiche in one blow.		The golem raised a fist, and smashed the table that shielded Kirche, Tabitha, and Guiche in one blow.

2015-04-13T12:21:00Z

fix preposition

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	“Alright, my turn!” after making an untimely appearance, just as Guiche aimed at the retreating enemies in between the gaps of the flames for his “Valkyrie” spell...		“Alright, my turn!” after making an untimely appearance, just as Guiche aimed at the retreating enemies in between the gaps of the flames for his “Valkyrie” spell...

	In a loud, thunderous noise, the entrance and beyond disappeared.		With a loud, thunderous noise, the entrance and beyond disappeared.

	“Eh?”		“Eh?”

2015-04-13T12:16:44Z

corrected translation

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	Fouquet yelled below her, “Dammit, that’s enough! You’re all useless! Get out of my way!”		Fouquet yelled below her, “Dammit, that’s enough! You’re all useless! Get out of my way!”

	The golem rose with a thundering noise, and moved towards the entrance, ~~pulling punches~~ as it advanced.		The golem rose with a thundering noise, and moved towards the entrance, raising its fists over its head as it advanced.

2014-01-21T15:17:53Z

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	“Why ‘The White Country’?”		“Why ‘The White Country’?”

	Louise pointed towards the island. “The water from the rivers ~~flow~~ off the island into the air, and while doing so ~~become~~ white fog, covering the bottom part of the island. The fog ~~turn~~ into clouds, which give Halkeginia its rainfall,” Louise explained.		Louise pointed towards the island. “The water from the rivers flows off the island into the air, and while doing so becomes white fog, covering the bottom part of the island. The fog turns into clouds, which give Halkeginia its rainfall,” Louise explained.

	The lookout yelled again, “Ship approaching starboard side!”		The lookout yelled again, “Ship approaching starboard side!”

2014-01-21T15:14:27Z

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	“I can’t see ground anywhere.” Saito complained.		“I can’t see ground anywhere.” Saito complained.

	“There?” She pointed up towards the sky.		“There!” She pointed up towards the sky.

	“Huh?” He followed where she pointed, and gasped in shock. A huge... well, nothing but huge sight greeted his eyes.		“Huh?” He followed where she pointed, and gasped in shock. A huge... well, nothing but huge sight greeted his eyes.