Zero no Tsukaima:Volume2 Chapter8 - MTL - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 08:45, 7 October 2015

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	"Aye Aye sir, stop here!"		"Aye Aye sir, stop here!"

	Wales' order was given to the still very energetic and lively crew. The sails were taken off and the ''Eagle'' started to drift right under the hole.		Wales' order was given to the still very energetic and lively crew. The sails were taken off and the ''Eagle'' started to drift right under the hole.

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	Light could be seen inside the hole and that's where the ''Eagle'' headed to.		Light could be seen inside the hole and that's where the ''Eagle'' headed to.

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	Wales hurried Louise and the others to go down the gangway.		Wales hurried Louise and the others to go down the gangway.

	A tall and aged mage approached them.		A tall and aged mage approached them.

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	Wales tapped Louise's shoulder.		Wales tapped Louise's shoulder.

	"You are a honest girl, Vallière. You have honest, clear and kind eyes."		"You are an honest girl, Vallière. You have honest, clear and kind eyes."

	Louise looked down desolately.		Louise looked down desolately.
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	Anxiously, Wales looked into Saito's face. He still felt pain in his arm and seeing people preparing for their death was depressing as well.		Anxiously, Wales looked into Saito's face. He still felt pain in his arm and seeing people preparing for their death was depressing as well.

	Saito stood up and asked Wales. "Sorry for the impoliteness... But aren't you scared?"		Saito stood up and asked Wales. "Sorry for the impoliteness... But aren't you scared?"

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	Saito shook his head and pushed Louise away from him. Louise looked up at his face surprised.		Saito shook his head and pushed Louise away from him. Louise looked up at his face surprised.

	Saito had an painful expression on his face.		Saito had a painful expression on his face.

	After seeing such an expression on his face, Louise bit her lip.		After seeing such an expression on his face, Louise bit her lip.

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	===Chapter Eight: The Eve Before the Final Battle in Newcastle===		===Chapter Eight: The Eve Before the Final Battle in Newcastle===
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2015-04-13T18:50:00Z

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	"Why?"		"Why?"

	"Because you are here to deliver princess-sama's letter. ~~This~~ is your only mission."		"Because you are here to deliver princess-sama's letter. That is your only mission."

	Louise muttered while tears kept on streaming down her cheeks. "...I want to return soon. I want to return back to Tristain. I dislike this country. These foolish people and unreasonable prince that leaves everything."		Louise muttered while tears kept on streaming down her cheeks. "...I want to return soon. I want to return back to Tristain. I dislike this country. These foolish people and this unreasonable prince that leaves everything."

	Though Louise sometimes acted tough, she was still a girl. Louise could not understand Wales' world. But Saito understood her as he thought the same way as well.		Though Louise sometimes acted tough, she was still a girl. Louise could not understand Wales' world. But Saito understood her as he thought the same way as well.

Coffeezombie: connotation of "もの" here is "something" and not "someone"

2015-04-13T18:46:18Z

connotation of "もの" here is "something" and not "someone"

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	"No... Those people... Why, why did they chose to die? Even though there is the princess... Even if Wales loves her... Why does Crown Prince Wales choose death?"		"No... Those people... Why, why did they chose to die? Even though there is the princess... Even if Wales loves her... Why does Crown Prince Wales choose death?"

	"He said that it was to defend ~~someone~~ important."		"He said that it was to defend something important."

	"What is more important in this world than the person you love?"		"What is more important in this world than the person you love?"

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	Saito, because he was confused, asked rather a trivial question.		Saito, because he was confused, asked rather a trivial question.

	"Only if you ~~would~~ fly fast without resting." Wardes answered. "Well then, I need to go now."		"Only if you fly fast without resting." Wardes answered. "Well then, I need to go now."

	"A-alright."		"A-alright."

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2015-04-13T18:27:27Z

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	"The princess of Tristain loves you. Did you forgot her letter?"		"The princess of Tristain loves you. Did you forgot her letter?"

	After Saito~~'s words~~, Wales smiled ~~recalling~~ it.		After Saito said that, Wales smiled as he remembered it.

	"Because of love, sometimes it is necessary to pretend not to know. Because of love, sometimes it is necessary to let go. It would only give others an excuse to invade Tristain."		"Because of love, sometimes it is necessary to pretend not to know. Because of love, sometimes it is necessary to let go. It would only give others an excuse to invade Tristain."

Coffeezombie: replaced "easily" with "simply"

2015-04-13T18:22:22Z

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	Wales declared decisively.		Wales declared decisively.

	"Why? ~~Easily~~, it is our obligation. The obligation of those born in the royal family. The obligation imposed on the royal family to defend the kingdom to the very end."		"Why? Simply, it is our obligation. The obligation of those born in the royal family. The obligation imposed on the royal family to defend the kingdom to the very end."

	Saito did not understand. Wales has a person whom he loves, and who loves Wales as well; isn't surviving for that person also an obligation? He thought in such a way.		Saito did not understand. Wales has a person whom he loves, and who loves Wales as well; isn't surviving for that person also an obligation? He thought in such a way.

Coffeezombie: fixed with complete sentences

2015-04-13T18:18:16Z

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	Anxiously, Wales looked into Saito's face. He still felt pain in his arm and seeing people preparing for their death was depressing as well.		Anxiously, Wales looked into Saito's face. He still felt pain in his arm and seeing people preparing for their death was depressing as well.

	Saito stood up and asked Wales. "Sorry for impoliteness... But aren't you scared?"		Saito stood up and asked Wales. "Sorry for the impoliteness... But aren't you scared?"

	"Scared?" Wales looked blankly at Saito.		"Scared?" Wales looked blankly at Saito.
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	"However, is there no chance of victory any more? What's the point of dying here? Maybe you can find other means to defeat them later..."		"However, is there no chance of victory any more? What's the point of dying here? Maybe you can find other means to defeat them later..."

	"No, we should at least show off a glimpse of courage and honor to other nobles even if is not possible to win~~, we~~ can show that Halkeginia's royal families are not a weak enemy~~. Even~~ though ~~they do~~ not seem like they will throw away the ambitions of 'Union' and 'Recovery of the Holy Land' anytime soon."		"No, we should at least show off a glimpse of courage and honor to other nobles even if is not possible to win. We can show that Halkeginia's royal families are not a weak enemy, even though the other side does not seem like they will throw away the ambitions of 'Union' and 'Recovery of the Holy Land' anytime soon."

	"Why?" Saito asked.		"Why?" Saito asked.

Coffeezombie: change to adverb

2015-04-13T17:59:42Z

change to adverb

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	"You are a honest girl, Vallière. You have honest, clear and kind eyes."		"You are a honest girl, Vallière. You have honest, clear and kind eyes."

	Louise looked down ~~lonesome~~.		Louise looked down desolately.

	"But let me give you some advice. It's not too good for an ambassador to be honest like that."		"But let me give you some advice. It's not too good for an ambassador to be honest like that."