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	“What!”		“What!”

	“No, from my older times, the hand that held me. Gandálfr. But I forgot. It was ~~600~~ years ago, old times.”		“No, from my older times, the hand that held me. Gandálfr. But I forgot. It was 6000 years ago, old times.”

	“Don’t talk nonsense!”		“Don’t talk nonsense!”

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	“Maybe, this is Louise’s view.” Saito said.		“Maybe, this is Louise’s view.” Saito said.

	Now he recalled what Louise said some time ~~age~~. “A familiar is the eyes and ears of its master, that’s their ability.”		Now he recalled what Louise said some time ago. “A familiar is the eyes and ears of its master, that’s their ability.”

	''However, Louise said she couldn't see anything through my eyes... It must be, there must be cases when the rules are reversed.''		''However, Louise said she couldn't see anything through my eyes... It must be, there must be cases when the rules are reversed.''
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	Louise raged. Wales put a hand on Wardes' shoulder, trying to pull him away, but Wardes pushed Wales instead, who fell on the ground.		Louise raged. Wales put a hand on Wardes' shoulder, trying to pull him away, but Wardes pushed Wales instead, who fell on the ground.

	Wales face turned red, and, after standing up again, he pulled out his cane.		Wales face turned red, and, after standing up again, he pulled out his cane.

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	Louise tried to duck when Wardes moved the cane, however his spell still hit her with ease, throwing her to the floor.		Louise tried to duck when Wardes moved the cane, however his spell still hit her with ease, throwing her to the floor.

	“Help...“		“Help...”

	Louise’s face turned pale. She tried to stand up, but her legs stopped obeying her.		Louise’s face turned pale. She tried to stand up, but her legs stopped obeying her.
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	“No…Help…”		“No…Help…”

	“Even the smallest bird can’t hear you, it seems like you will have to bow your head in defeat, huh, Louise?		“Even the smallest bird can’t hear you, it seems like you will have to bow your head in defeat, huh, Louise?”

	She was thrown against the wall and left lying on the floor, groaning in pain. Tears started rolling down her face.		She was thrown against the wall and left lying on the floor, groaning in pain. Tears started rolling down her face.
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	If even Saito’s arm was scorched by this blitz spell, there was no chance of survival if she was hit by it directly.		If even Saito’s arm was scorched by this blitz spell, there was no chance of survival if she was hit by it directly.

	From shock her breath was rough and her whole body was in pain. Louise, scared like a child, cried		From shock her breath was rough and her whole body was in pain. Louise, scared like a child, cried –

	“Saito! Help!”		“Saito! Help!”
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	Wardes muttered.		Wardes muttered.

	After breaking the wall, Saito jumped in with Derflinger in his hand stopped Wardes' cane.		After breaking the wall, Saito jumped in with Derflinger in his hand and stopped Wardes' cane.

	"You…" Saito swung the sword sidewise. Wardes dodged it by jumping back.		"You…" Saito swung the sword sidewise. Wardes dodged it by jumping back.
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	“How dare you to do that to Louise…!”		“How dare you to do that to Louise…!”

	Once Louise's body was blown off again, the remaining Wardes clones concentrated on Saito trying to press him further. However, Saito's movement gradually increased speed.		Once Louise's body was blown off again, the remaining Wardes clones concentrated on Saito trying to press him further. However, Saito's movement gradually increased in speed.

	All of the Wardeses' breathing became irregular and rough. Still, even then, their expression didn't change.		All of the Wardeses' breathing became irregular and rough. Still, even then, their expression didn't change.
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	Matching the light, Derflinger also shone brighter.		Matching the light, Derflinger also shone brighter.

	“Good! That’s good partner! Right! That’s the key! I remembered! I know the source of Gandálfr’s power! Good partner!”		“Good! That’s good partner! Right! That’s the key! I remembered! I know the source of Gandálfr’s power! Good partner!”

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	“You and your foolish master will be turned to ashes! Gandálfr!”		“You and your foolish master will be turned to ashes! Gandálfr!”

	Throwing ~~these~~ last parting words, Wardes disappeared through the hole in the wall.		Throwing those last parting words, Wardes disappeared through the hole in the wall.

	Saito, who used Derflinger as a crutch for support, stumblingly walked up to Louise.		Saito, who used Derflinger as a crutch for support, stumblingly walked up to Louise.
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	“Aaaaaaaan?”		“Aaaaaaaan?”

	And then that brown animal started groping Louise’s body that was lying ~~near sides~~.		And then that brown animal started groping Louise’s body that was lying nearside.

	“You… you are the huge mole Verdandi! Guiche’s familiar!”		“You… you are the huge mole Verdandi! Guiche’s familiar!”
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	Saito shouted, and soon enough from the same hole that Verdandi came out, Guiche's face appeared.		Saito shouted, and soon enough from the same hole that Verdandi came out, Guiche's face appeared.

	~~Hey~~! Verdandi! You can dig a hole anywhere! Good boy! Gu….”		“Hey! Verdandi! You can dig a hole anywhere! Good boy! Gu….”

	Guiche turned his soil smeared face from Saito and noticed Louise lying nearby, then said pretending not to know.		Guiche turned his soil smeared face from Saito and noticed Louise lying nearby, then said pretending not to know.
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	A pond in a forgotten courtyard…		A pond in a forgotten courtyard…

	There a small boat was floating… There, Louise was lying down. Whenever she ~~was facing~~ difficulties. Louise always hid herself and slept there. This was her world that no one else intruded in, her secret place…		There a small boat was floating… There, Louise was lying down. Whenever she faced difficulties, Louise always hid herself and slept there. This was her world that no one else intruded in, her secret place…

	Louise’s heart was in pain.		Louise’s heart was in pain.

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	Traitor Wardes.		Traitor Wardes.

	~~Crown~~ prince’s death…		The crown prince’s death…

	~~Noble~~ union’s ‘Reconquista’ victory…		The noble union’s ‘Reconquista’ victory…

	~~Report~~ to the Princess…		Reporting to the Princess…

	For various reasons, and while Louise felt sorry for them all, right now all Louise’s thoughts were blown away by the wind.		For various reasons, and while Louise felt sorry for them all, right now all Louise’s thoughts were blown away by the wind.

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	Louise asked in her dream. But she shook her head at once. No, the viscount didn’t come here anymore. Then, who?		Louise asked in her dream. But she shook her head at once. No, the viscount didn’t come here anymore. Then, who?

	It was Saito. The sword was hanging on his back, when he without hesitation about getting wet stepped into the pond and approached Louise’s shallop.		It was Saito. The sword was hanging on his back, when he, without hesitation about getting wet, stepped into the pond and approached Louise’s shallop.

	Louise's heart throbbed.		Louise's heart throbbed.

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	A pond in a forgotten courtyard…		A pond in a forgotten courtyard…

	There a small boat was floating… ~~Here~~ Louise was lying down ~~when~~ facing difficulties. Louise always hid herself and slept there. ~~Her~~ world that no one else intruded in~~. Her~~ secret place…		There a small boat was floating… There, Louise was lying down. Whenever she was facing difficulties. Louise always hid herself and slept there. This was her world that no one else intruded in, her secret place…

	Louise’s heart was in pain.		Louise’s heart was in pain.

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	“What? Well I do not understand it, but it seems everything ended already.” Kirche said in nonchalant voice.		“What? Well I do not understand it, but it seems everything ended already.” Kirche said in nonchalant voice.

	With Louise in his arms, Saito slowly made his way through the hole. But then he remembered something, left Louise in Guiche’s care and hurried back to Wales in the chapel.		With Louise in his arms, Saito slowly made his way through the hole. But then he remembered something. He left Louise in Guiche’s care and hurried back to Wales in the chapel.

	However, Wales had already died.		However, Wales had already died.

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	With ‘'Uneven Distribution’ defeated, the remaining real Wardes' body fell down on the floor. <-The spell name changed...which to use? This one makes more sense. ~Dan->		With ‘'Uneven Distribution’ defeated, the remaining real Wardes' body fell down on the floor. <-The spell name changed...which to use? This one makes more sense. ~Dan->

	His cut off ~~left arm~~, landed there after a few seconds.		His left arm, which had been cut off, landed there after a few seconds.

	Saito also landed on the ground, but he stumbled and had to support himself with his knee. His tiredness had reached a critical limit.		Saito also landed on the ground, but he stumbled and had to support himself with his knee. His tiredness had reached a critical limit.

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	~~Runes~~ started shining.		The runes started shining.

	Matching the light, Derflinger also shone brighter.		Matching the light, Derflinger also shone brighter.