Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter10 - Revision history

Veritatis cupitor at 07:19, 10 October 2015

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	Louise watched Saito as he was running off and sighed. "Well, I guess it’s good that that girl is still alive, but couldn’t he spend more time consoling me? The spell just then… “Explosion” of the Void magic branch. It seems like it didn't happen. Perhaps it doesn't feel real because it was Void magic. Am I really the “User of Void magic”? Is there some misunderstanding? But it explained how I was able to give Saito the legendary Gandálfr familiar powers. There are lots of legends, aren’t there," she whispered.		Louise watched Saito as he was running off and sighed. "Well, I guess it’s good that that girl is still alive, but couldn’t he spend more time consoling me? The spell just then… “Explosion” of the Void magic branch. It seems like it didn't happen. Perhaps it doesn't feel real because it was Void magic. Am I really the “User of Void magic”? Is there some misunderstanding? But it explained how I was able to give Saito the legendary Gandálfr familiar powers. There are lots of legends, aren’t there," she whispered.

	"In any case, it’ll probably be busy from here on. I really feel as if this didn't ~~happened…~~ and I can’t believe that I’m the one mentioned in the legend…" Louise sighed. ''If this were a dream, I would be so relieved. But I’ve decided not to think too much about it. I should learn from that idiot familiar of mine. Although he’s the legendary familiar, he doesn’t seem like it at all. But perhaps that is for the best. Anyway, this “legend” stuff is too much for me.''		"In any case, it’ll probably be busy from here on. I really feel as if this didn't happen… and I can’t believe that I’m the one mentioned in the legend…" Louise sighed. ''If this were a dream, I would be so relieved. But I’ve decided not to think too much about it. I should learn from that idiot familiar of mine. Although he’s the legendary familiar, he doesn’t seem like it at all. But perhaps that is for the best. Anyway, this “legend” stuff is too much for me.''

	“Hey, legendary mage.”		“Hey, legendary mage.”

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	An unbelievable scene unfolded before Henrietta’s eyes. The warship that had been bombarding them… A ball of light had appeared in the sky. It was like a smaller version of the sun, and it expanded. And… it swallowed it. It had swallowed the warship in the sky. The light continued to expand until it was all she could see. There was complete silence. Henrietta suddenly closed her eyes. The light of the sphere was so intense that anyone would think that their eyes would burn from staring at it. And then… after the light had faded, the whole fleet was on fire. The fleet led by the Lexington had all their sails and decks burning. As if it were a lie, the head of the fleet that had been tormenting the Tristain troops, sank to the ground.		An unbelievable scene unfolded before Henrietta’s eyes. The warship that had been bombarding them… A ball of light had appeared in the sky. It was like a smaller version of the sun, and it expanded. And… it swallowed it. It had swallowed the warship in the sky. The light continued to expand until it was all she could see. There was complete silence. Henrietta suddenly closed her eyes. The light of the sphere was so intense that anyone would think that their eyes would burn from staring at it. And then… after the light had faded, the whole fleet was on fire. The fleet led by the Lexington had all their sails and decks burning. As if it were a lie, the head of the fleet that had been tormenting the Tristain troops sank to the ground.

	A tremor in the earth could be felt. The fleet had come crashing down. Henrietta was dumbfounded. Complete silence overcame them. Everyone stared at the unbelievable scene.		A tremor in the earth could be felt. The fleet had come crashing down. Henrietta was dumbfounded. Complete silence overcame them. Everyone stared at the unbelievable scene.

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	''Foreword.''		''Foreword.''

	''Henceforth, I shall record the truth I know. All materials in the world are comprised of fine grains. The four branches intervene with these fine grains and apply an influence, which transform them into spells. This was how “Fire”, “Water”, “Wind” and “Earth” ~~became~~.''		''Henceforth, I shall record the truth I know. All materials in the world are comprised of fine grains. The four branches intervene with these fine grains and apply an influence, which transform them into spells. This was how “Fire”, “Water”, “Wind” and “Earth” were formed.''

	Louise was filled with curiosity. With an impatient feeling, she turned the page.		Louise was filled with curiosity. With an impatient feeling, she turned the page.

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	“Hm?” replied Louise, absentmindedly.		“Hm?” replied Louise, absentmindedly.

	[[Image:ZnT03-257.JPG\|thumb~~\|''He patted Louise gently on the head.''~~]]		[[Image:ZnT03-257.JPG\|thumb]]

	A feeling of fatigue overcame her. But this was a nice tired feeling. It was fatigue that came with the satisfaction of accomplishing something.		A feeling of fatigue overcame her. But this was a nice tired feeling. It was fatigue that came with the satisfaction of accomplishing something.

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	“Isn’t it obvious?! I’m going to go save Siesta!”		“Isn’t it obvious?! I’m going to go save Siesta!”

	Louise grabbed his arm and tried to shake him off, but ~~she~~ firmly clung on.		Louise grabbed his arm and tried to shake him off, but he firmly clung on.

	“You can’t! It’s a war! Even if you went, it wouldn't make a difference!”		“You can’t! It’s a war! Even if you went, it wouldn't make a difference!”

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Chapter Ten: The Void

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	“Isn’t it obvious?! I’m going to go save Siesta!”		“Isn’t it obvious?! I’m going to go save Siesta!”

	Louise grabbed his arm and tried to shake him off, but he firmly clung on.		Louise grabbed his arm and tried to shake him off, but she firmly clung on.

	“You can’t! It’s a war! Even if you went, it wouldn't make a difference!”		“You can’t! It’s a war! Even if you went, it wouldn't make a difference!”

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	Then, as if she were flaring up, she opened her eyes and started to read the runes written in the Founder’s Prayer Book.		Then, as if she were flaring up, she opened her eyes and started to read the runes written in the Founder’s Prayer Book.

	She read the spell amongst the roar of the engine. Saito was circling the ~~above~~ Lexington in the Zero fighter like he was told.		She read the spell amongst the roar of the engine. Saito was circling above the Lexington in the Zero fighter like he was told.

	It was at that moment.		It was at that moment.

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	Saito quickly made the airplane ascend, controlling the plane naturally. He switched the velocity level to high. Against dragons, the Zero fighter which had a reciprocating engine, had the most advantage at those speeds. As the Zero fighter descended, the velocity would increase. The first thing to do was to control the area above the enemy. With the shining runes on his left hand, he maneuvered the Zero fighter like a veteran.		Saito quickly made the airplane ascend, controlling the plane naturally. He switched the velocity level to high. Against dragons, the Zero fighter which had a reciprocating engine, had the most advantage at those speeds. As the Zero fighter descended, the velocity would increase. The first thing to do was to control the area above the enemy. With the shining runes on his left hand, he maneuvered the Zero fighter like a veteran.

	Derflinger, who was looking out for him, told him his next target. Just as he was about direct the plane there, he heard a voice behind him.		Derflinger, who was looking out for him, told him his next target. Just as he was about to direct the plane there, he heard a voice behind him.

	“T-T-T-That’s incredible! These Albion dragons are reputed to be unrivaled yet they’re dropping like flies!”		“T-T-T-That’s incredible! These Albion dragons are reputed to be unrivaled yet they’re dropping like flies!”

	Startled, Saito looked backwards. Louise’s head popped out from the gap between the seat and the rest of plane. Behind the seat was originally a stupidly big radio, but since this world didn’t have anyone who could contact through ~~him~~ the radio, he had removed it while he was adjusting the plane. After taking that off, only the wires connected to the rudder were left. Louise had slipped in there.		Startled, Saito looked backwards. Louise’s head popped out from the gap between the seat and the rest of plane. Behind the seat was originally a stupidly big radio, but since this world didn’t have anyone who could contact him through the radio, he had removed it while he was adjusting the plane. After taking that off, only the wires connected to the rudder were left. Louise had slipped in there.

	“You were here all this time!? Get off!”		“You were here all this time!? Get off!”
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	“There’s no way I can get off now!”		“There’s no way I can get off now!”

	Louise’s hands held the Founder’s Prayer Book. It ~~seems~~ like she didn’t go anywhere like he had thought and instead slipped inside the plane.		Louise’s hands held the Founder’s Prayer Book. It seemed like she didn’t go anywhere like he had thought and instead slipped inside the plane.

	“It’s dangerous! You idiot!”		“It’s dangerous! You idiot!”
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	Enraged, Johnston took his anger out on Bowood.		Enraged, Johnston took his anger out on Bowood.

	“What are you saying?! It’s your fault that the dragoons got wiped out! Your lack of competence was just asking for our precious dragoons to be destroyed! I will report this to His Excellency. I will report it!” Johnston yelled as he reached out to grab Bowood.		“What are you saying? It’s your fault that the dragoons got wiped out! Your lack of competence was just asking for our precious dragoons to be destroyed! I will report this to His Excellency. I will report it!” Johnston yelled as he reached out to grab Bowood.

	Bowood drew his wand and jabbed Johnston’s stomach. The white of his eyes showing, Johnston fainted to the ground. He ordered the soldiers to carry him away.		Bowood drew his wand and jabbed Johnston’s stomach. The white of his eyes showing, Johnston fainted to the ground. He ordered the soldiers to carry him away.
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	"Eoruu Suunu Firu Yarunsakusa" <!--(エオルー・スーヌ・フィル・ヤルンサクサ)-->		"Eoruu Suunu Firu Yarunsakusa" <!--(エオルー・スーヌ・フィル・ヤルンサクサ)-->

	A rhythm had started pulsating through Louise. She felt as though knew the rhythm from somewhere. With every word of the incantation, the rhythm grew stronger. It sharpened her senses, while not a single noise around reached her ears. It was as if something within her body was born, and was searching for a destination… Louise remembered what she was told once. When you recite an incantation of your own branch, a feeling similar to what she was feeling would be felt. Is it really what I’m feeling? Me, who has always been despised for being a zero. Me, who was said to have no talent in magic by teachers, parents, sisters and students. Is this the real me? <!-- text literally says "is this my real form/shape?" --> <!-- I like the translation - Delwack -->		A rhythm had started pulsating through Louise. She felt as though she knew the rhythm from somewhere. With every word of the incantation, the rhythm grew stronger. It sharpened her senses, while not a single noise around reached her ears. It was as if something within her body was born, and was searching for a destination… Louise remembered what she was told once. When you recite an incantation of your own branch, a feeling similar to what she was feeling would be felt. Is it really what I’m feeling? Me, who has always been despised for being a zero. Me, who was said to have no talent in magic by teachers, parents, sisters and students. Is this the real me? <!-- text literally says "is this my real form/shape?" --> <!-- I like the translation - Delwack -->

	"Osu Suunu Uryu Ru Rado" <!--(オス・スーヌ・ウリュ・ル・ラド)-->		"Osu Suunu Uryu Ru Rado" <!--(オス・スーヌ・ウリュ・ル・ラド)-->
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	Saito nodded and smiled. He patted Louise gently on the head.		Saito nodded and smiled. He patted Louise gently on the head.

	Below them, the Tristain troops had just charged at the Albion forces. The vigor of the Tristain troops was obvious even to a novice. It was vigor that ~~even~~ would triumph against enemies that outnumbered them.		Below them, the Tristain troops had just charged at the Albion forces. The vigor of the Tristain troops was obvious even to a novice. It was vigor that would triumph even against enemies that outnumbered them.

	“Yeah, later is fine.”		“Yeah, later is fine.”