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Nimble Momonga: /* Chapter Two: Louise’s Lovesickness */

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Chapter Two: Louise’s Lovesickness

Nimble Momonga: /* Chapter Two: Louise’s Lovesickness */

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Chapter Two: Louise’s Lovesickness

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	===Chapter Two: Louise’s Lovesickness===		===Chapter Two: Louise’s Lovesickness===

	The morning after her return from Albion, Louise’s attitude began to change. To put it bluntly, she became nicer. As usual, after waking up, Saito prepared the wash basin for Louise. He poured water into the basin and then washed Louise's face. It was troublesome, but if Saito forgot about the wash basin, severe consequences would follow.		The morning after her return from Albion, Louise’s attitude began to change. To put it bluntly, she became nicer. As usual, after waking up, Saito prepared the wash basin for Louise. He poured water into the basin and then washed Louise's face. It was troublesome, but if Saito forgot about the wash basin, severe consequences would follow.

	Once, when Saito forgot to prepare the wash basin, he wasn’t allowed to eat. The next morning, he was quite angry, so he caught a frog from the pond behind the Academy of Magic and put it in the wash basin. Louise, who hated frogs, squealed at the sight of the slimy amphibian. She burst into tears when it suddenly appeared in front of her. Saito apologized profusely, but Louise did not forgive him for making her cry.		Once, when Saito forgot to prepare the wash basin, he wasn’t allowed to eat. The next morning, he was quite angry, so he caught a frog from the pond behind the Academy of Magic and put it in the wash basin. Louise, who hated frogs, squealed at the sight of the slimy amphibian. She burst into tears when it suddenly appeared in front of her. Saito apologized profusely, but Louise did not forgive him for making her cry.

	That time, unsatisfied with merely starving Saito, Louise tried whipping him, and as a result, Saito escaped the room and slept outside.		That time, unsatisfied with merely starving Saito, Louise tried whipping him, and as a result, Saito escaped the room and slept outside.

	They would get into fights just like the one with the wash basin, but after going to Albion something changed. Warm feelings towards Saito started to sprout within Louise and vice versa. However, they did not realize each other’s feelings.		They would get into fights just like the one with the wash basin, but after going to Albion something changed. Warm feelings towards Saito started to sprout within Louise and vice versa. However, they did not realize each other’s feelings.

	In the morning, Saito prepared the wash basin, feeling slightly awkward. Louise sat on her bed with a drowsy look.		In the morning, Saito prepared the wash basin, feeling slightly awkward. Louise sat on her bed with a drowsy look.

Nimble Momonga: /* Chapter Two: Louise’s Lovesickness */

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Chapter Two: Louise’s Lovesickness

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	===Chapter Two: Louise’s Lovesickness===		===Chapter Two: Louise’s Lovesickness===

	The morning after her return from Albion, Louise’s attitude began to change. To put it bluntly, she became nicer. As usual, after waking up, Saito prepared the wash basin for Louise. He poured water into the basin and then washed Louise's face. It was troublesome, but if Saito forgot about the wash basin, severe consequences would follow.		The morning after her return from Albion, Louise’s attitude began to change. To put it bluntly, she became nicer. As usual, after waking up, Saito prepared the wash basin for Louise. He poured water into the basin and then washed Louise's face. It was troublesome, but if Saito forgot about the wash basin, severe consequences would follow.

	Once, when Saito forgot to prepare the wash basin, he wasn’t allowed to eat. The next morning, he was quite angry, so he caught a frog from the pond behind the Academy of Magic and put it in the wash basin. Louise, who hated frogs, squealed at the sight of the slimy amphibian. She burst into tears when it suddenly appeared in front of her. Saito apologized profusely, but Louise did not forgive him for making her cry.		Once, when Saito forgot to prepare the wash basin, he wasn’t allowed to eat. The next morning, he was quite angry, so he caught a frog from the pond behind the Academy of Magic and put it in the wash basin. Louise, who hated frogs, squealed at the sight of the slimy amphibian. She burst into tears when it suddenly appeared in front of her. Saito apologized profusely, but Louise did not forgive him for making her cry.

	That time, unsatisfied with merely starving Saito, Louise tried whipping him, and as a result, Saito escaped the room and slept outside.		That time, unsatisfied with merely starving Saito, Louise tried whipping him, and as a result, Saito escaped the room and slept outside.

	They would get into fights just like the one with the wash basin, but after going to Albion something changed. Warm feelings towards Saito started to sprout within Louise and vice versa. However, they did not realize each other’s feelings.		They would get into fights just like the one with the wash basin, but after going to Albion something changed. Warm feelings towards Saito started to sprout within Louise and vice versa. However, they did not realize each other’s feelings.

	In the morning, Saito prepared the wash basin, feeling slightly awkward. Louise sat on her bed with a drowsy look.		In the morning, Saito prepared the wash basin, feeling slightly awkward. Louise sat on her bed with a drowsy look.

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	‘’Of course, if he did anything now I’d kick him in the crotch.’’		‘’Of course, if he did anything now I’d kick him in the crotch.’’

	‘’But…but…’’ Louise tapped Saito’s pillow. He didn’t wake up. She looked around restlessly. Other than the moon, nothing was looking at her. She moved towards Saito’s face. Her pulse started to quicken. She pressed her lips upon his softly, only for about two seconds. It was the kind of kiss that the person wasn’t aware had ~~even~~ taken place.		‘’But…but…’’ Louise tapped Saito’s pillow. He didn’t wake up. She looked around restlessly. Other than the moon, nothing was looking at her. She moved towards Saito’s face. Her pulse started to quicken. She pressed her lips upon his softly, only for about two seconds. It was the kind of kiss that the person wasn’t even aware had taken place.

	Saito turned over.		Saito turned over.

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	“Mr. Colbert, what’s that?” one student asked.		“Mr. Colbert, what’s that?” one student asked.

	It really was a strange looking ~~machinery~~. It was composed of a long metallic tube with a metallic pipe stretching out of it. A pair of bellows were connected to the pipe and a crank was attached to the head of the cylinder. The crank was connected to a wheel on the side of the cylinder. Finally, gears were attached to the wheel and the box.		It really was a strange looking machine. It was composed of a long metallic tube with a metallic pipe stretching out of it. A pair of bellows were connected to the pipe and a crank was attached to the head of the cylinder. The crank was connected to a wheel on the side of the cylinder. Finally, gears were attached to the wheel and the box.

	Staring at the equipment, the students were all wondering what sort of lesson would follow. Clearing his throat, he began his lecture, “Firstly, who can tell me the main characteristics of the fire branch of magic?”		Staring at the equipment, the students were all wondering what sort of lesson would follow. Clearing his throat, he began his lecture, “Firstly, who can tell me the main characteristics of the fire branch of magic?”

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	Glancing at her, Kirche elegantly started redoing her make-up and Tabitha quietly sat while reading her book. Tabitha didn’t talk much. As for Kirche, although she usually was in the mood to talk, today she didn't feel like telling her classmates about their secret journey.		Glancing at her, Kirche elegantly started redoing her make-up and Tabitha quietly sat while reading her book. Tabitha didn’t talk much. As for Kirche, although she usually was in the mood to talk, today she didn't feel like telling her classmates about their secret journey.

	No matter how hard their classmates pushed and pulled, they couldn’t extract anything out of the two, so they switched their target to Guiche and Louise who had just appeared.		No matter how hard their classmates pushed and pulled, they couldn’t extract anything out of the two, so they switched their target to Guiche and Louise, who had just appeared.

	Guiche, who liked being surrounded and fussed over, got carried away as expected. “You want to ask me, right? You want to know the secrets I know? Ahaha, what a troubled little rabbit!”		Guiche, who liked being surrounded and fussed over, got carried away as expected. “You want to ask me, right? You want to know the secrets I know? Ahaha, what a troubled little rabbit!”

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	Dumbfounded, he sat next to Louise. Malicorne, who always sat there and had caught a cold, started to protest, “Hey Louise, that’s my seat. What do you mean you’ll let your familiar sit on it?”		Dumbfounded, he sat next to Louise. Malicorne, who always sat there and had caught a cold, started to protest, “Hey Louise, that’s my seat. What do you mean you’ll let your familiar sit on it?”

	Louise glared at Malicorne. “If you don’t have seat, then just go get a chair.”		Louise glared at Malicorne. “If you don’t have a seat, then just go get a chair.”

	“Don’t play around with me! Letting a commoner familiar sit down while I have to go get a chair? That’s just wrong! Hey familiar, piss off, that’s my seat. This is a dining table for nobles!”		“Don’t play around with me! Letting a commoner familiar sit down while I have to go get a chair? That’s just wrong! Hey familiar, piss off, that’s my seat. This is a dining table for nobles!”

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	‘’It is only natural… yet saddening.’’		‘’It is only natural… yet saddening.’’

	‘’A ray of hope? Nope. None. Louise doesn’t like me. I’m only a familiar. That being said, I’ve only been a dangerous familiar so far. A bad familiar that transforms into a wolf at night. A barrier has already been ~~erect~~ between us.’’		‘’A ray of hope? Nope. None. Louise doesn’t like me. I’m only a familiar. That being said, I’ve only been a dangerous familiar so far. A bad familiar that transforms into a wolf at night. A barrier has already been erected between us.’’

	Dark clouds started forming. The hope inside Saito’s heart whispered desperately, “But on the way back home on the dragon, she cuddled with me, right?” The despair within Saito’s heart replied coldly, "That was just my imagination. She sent me flying when Kirche pointed it out, didn’t she?"		Dark clouds started forming. The hope inside Saito’s heart whispered desperately, “But on the way back home on the dragon, she cuddled with me, right?” The despair within Saito’s heart replied coldly, "That was just my imagination. She sent me flying when Kirche pointed it out, didn’t she?"

Coffeezombie: The text reads "underwear," not "panties." Louise is not topless in this scene.

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The text reads "underwear," not "panties." Louise is not topless in this scene.

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	“No, not at all…”		“No, not at all…”

	Saito then took Louise’s clothes from her closet and laid them face down on her bed, while Louise put on her ~~panties~~. Saito, holding Louise's uniform, turned around when he thought she was done. The next step was dressing Louise.		Saito then took Louise’s clothes from her closet and laid them face down on her bed, while Louise put on her underwear. Saito, holding Louise's uniform, turned around when he thought she was done. The next step was dressing Louise.

	When Saito turned around, Louise, wearing only her ~~panties~~, started to panic and quickly covered her body with sheets.		When Saito turned around, Louise, wearing only her underwear, started to panic and quickly covered her body with sheets.

	“Leave the clothes there,” said Louise, with half her face covered by the sheets.		“Leave the clothes there,” said Louise, with half her face covered by the sheets.

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	===Chapter Two: Louise’s Lovesickness===		===Chapter Two: Louise’s Lovesickness===

	The morning after her return from Albion, Louise’s attitude began to change. To put it bluntly, she became nicer. As usual, ~~after~~ waking up, Saito prepared the wash basin for Louise. He ~~poured~~ water into the basin and then ~~washed~~ Louise's face. It was troublesome, but if Saito forgot about ~~the wash basin~~, severe consequences would follow.		The morning after her return from Albion, Louise’s attitude began to change. To put it bluntly, she became nicer. As usual, upon waking, Saito prepared the wash basin for Louise. He would pour water into the basin, and then wash Louise's face. It was a troublesome routine, but if Saito forgot about it, severe consequences would follow.

	Once, when Saito forgot to prepare the wash basin, he wasn’t allowed to eat. The next morning, ~~he was~~ quite angry, so he caught a frog from the pond behind the Academy of Magic and put it in the wash basin. Louise~~, who~~ hated frogs, squealed at the sight of the slimy amphibian~~. She burst~~ into tears when it suddenly appeared in front of her. Saito apologized profusely, but Louise did not forgive him for making her cry.		Once, when Saito forgot to prepare the wash basin, he wasn’t allowed to eat. The next morning, being quite angry, he caught a frog from the pond behind the Academy of Magic and put it in the wash basin. Louise hated frogs, and squealed at the sight of the slimy amphibian, bursting into tears when it suddenly appeared in front of her. Saito apologized profusely, but Louise did not forgive him for making her cry.

	That time, unsatisfied with merely starving Saito, Louise tried ~~whipping~~ him~~, and~~ as a result, Saito escaped the room and slept outside.		That time, unsatisfied with merely starving Saito, Louise tried to whip him; as a result, Saito escaped the room and slept outside.

	They would get into fights just like the one ~~with~~ the wash basin, but after ~~going to~~ Albion something changed. Warm feelings towards Saito started to sprout within Louise and vice versa. However, ~~they did not~~ realize ~~each~~ other’s feelings.		They would get into fights just like the one over the wash basin, but after Albion something had changed. Warm feelings towards Saito started to sprout within Louise, and vice versa. However, neither had yet to realize the other’s feelings.

	~~In the~~ morning, Saito prepared the wash basin~~, feeling slightly awkward~~. Louise sat on her bed ~~with~~ a drowsy look.		So that morning, Saito, feeling slightly awkward, prepared the wash basin. Louise sat on her bed, a drowsy look on her face.

	With the wash basin placed on the floor, Saito scooped up water with both hands, but Louise didn’t move. Her pinkish blond hair dangled on her face. Seemingly tired, she rubbed her eyes. With an absent minded expression, she said, “Leave it there, I’ll do it myself.”		With the wash basin placed on the floor, Saito scooped up water with both hands, but Louise didn’t move. Her pinkish blond hair dangled across her face. Seemingly tired, she rubbed her eyes. With an absent minded expression, she said, “Leave it there, I’ll do it myself.”

	Saito was shocked. He didn’t think the words “I’ll do it myself” could come from Louise’s mouth.		Saito was shocked. He didn’t think the words “I’ll do it myself” could come from Louise’s mouth.
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	“Louise?”		“Louise?”

	Saito waved his hand in front of her face. Louise pouted, ~~facing away. She was~~ blushing. As if she was angry, Louise said, “I’ll do it myself. Leave me alone.”		Saito waved his hand in front of her face. Louise pouted and turned away, blushing. As if she was angry, Louise said, “I’ll do it myself. Leave me alone.”

	Louise dipped her hand in the wash basin, scooped up water, shook her head, and washed her face. Water splattered everywhere.		Louise dipped her hand in the wash basin, scooped up water, shook her head, and washed her face. Water splattered everywhere.
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	“So, you’re the type that likes to move their face while they wash it, huh?”		“So, you’re the type that likes to move their face while they wash it, huh?”

	Louise was slightly taken aback by Saito's comment. Her face blushed and she became angry. “G-Got a problem with that?”		Louise was slightly taken aback by Saito's comment. Her face blushed, and she became angry. “G-Got a problem with that?”

	“No, not at all…”		“No, not at all…”

	Saito then took Louise’s clothes from her closet and laid them face down on her bed~~, while Louise put on her underwear~~. Saito, holding Louise's uniform, turned around when he thought she was done. The next step was dressing Louise.		Saito then took Louise’s clothes from her closet and, while Louise put on her underwear, laid them face down on her bed. Saito, holding Louise's uniform, turned around when he thought she was done. The next step was dressing Louise.

	When Saito turned around, Louise, wearing only her underwear, started to panic and quickly covered her body with sheets.		When Saito turned around, Louise, wearing only her underwear, started to panic and quickly covered her body with sheets.
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	Louise popped her head up above the sheets. “I said leave it there, didn’t I?!”		Louise popped her head up above the sheets. “I said leave it there, didn’t I?!”

	Louise then buried half of her face in the sheets again and glared at Saito.		Louise then buried half of her face in the sheets again, and glared at Saito.

	''Well this is strange,'' thought Saito as he placed the clothes beside Louise as he was told.		''Well this is strange,'' thought Saito as he placed the clothes beside Louise as he was told.
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	Saito turned his back to Louise thinking, ''What the hell happened?''		Saito turned his back to Louise thinking, ''What the hell happened?''

	Well, many things happened in Albion. ~~Her~~ fiancé had betrayed her and Henrietta~~. Her~~ childhood friend. She had lost her lover. It was a horrible experience for Louise. Perhaps those events had changed her.		Well, many things happened in Albion. Louise's fiancé had betrayed both her and Henrietta, her childhood friend. She had lost her lover. It was a horrible experience for Louise. Perhaps those events had changed her.

	Had Louise really changed?		Had Louise really changed?

	With an expressionless face, Saito remembered the feeling of Louise’s lips. He had kissed a half-asleep Louise softly on the lips while on the dragon. He knew that kissing someone in their sleep is cowardly and something that he ought not to have done, but he couldn’t control himself. He cared a great deal about her.		With an expressionless face, Saito remembered the feeling of Louise’s lips. He had kissed a half-asleep Louise softly on the lips while on the dragon. He knew that kissing someone in their sleep was cowardly and something that he ought not to have done, but he couldn’t control himself. He cared a great deal about her.

	''Could it be…'', Saito thought. ''That Louise knows about that kiss? She didn’t change because she felt I was dangerous and thought I was going to make a move on her, right?''		''Could it be…'', Saito thought. ''That Louise knows about that kiss? She didn’t change because she felt I was dangerous and thought I was going to make a move on her, right?''