Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter5 - Revision history

Coffeezombie: fix verb tense

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	===Chapter Five: The Arsenal and the Royal Family ===		===Chapter Five: The Arsenal and the Royal Family ===

	The Albion air force’s arsenal was located in the outskirts of its capital, Londinium, in the town of Rosyth. Before the Revolutionary War (which is what the Reconquista ~~call~~ the civil war that had just ended recently), that place used to be called the Royal air force’s arsenal. And thus, there were all sorts of buildings. The numerous buildings with massive chimneys were used for manufacturing iron. Next to them were piles and piles of timber used for ship constructions and repairs.		The Albion air force’s arsenal was located in the outskirts of its capital, Londinium, in the town of Rosyth. Before the Revolutionary War (which is what the Reconquista were calling the civil war that had just ended recently), that place used to be called the Royal air force’s arsenal. And thus, there were all sorts of buildings. The numerous buildings with massive chimneys were used for manufacturing iron. Next to them were piles and piles of timber used for ship constructions and repairs.

	The large red brick building was the control center. The three colored flag of Reconquista could be seen fluttering proudly. But the thing that stood out most was the large battleship which seemed to reach the skies.		The large red brick building was the control center. The three colored flag of Reconquista could be seen fluttering proudly. But the thing that stood out most was the large battleship which seemed to reach the skies.

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2012-09-13T20:09:49Z

Chapter Five: The Arsenal and the Royal Family

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	Bringing new models of weapons for a visit of good will would be seen as something along the lines of gunboat diplomacy.		Bringing new models of weapons for a visit of good will would be seen as something along the lines of gunboat diplomacy.

	Cromwell replied casually, “Ah yes, I haven’t explained the scheme for this 'good ~~willed~~ visit' to you, have I?”		Cromwell replied casually, “Ah yes, I haven’t explained the scheme for this 'good will visit' to you, have I?”

	“Scheme?”		“Scheme?”

Vaelis at 08:41, 20 April 2012

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	They embraced each other tightly.		They embraced each other tightly.

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	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

Liboicl: Fixed Misspelling

2010-11-14T14:03:19Z

Fixed Misspelling

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	“No, it’s not that at all. I’m a happy person. I’m able to marry. Didn’t you once say that a woman was happy if she got to marry?”		“No, it’s not that at all. I’m a happy person. I’m able to marry. Didn’t you once say that a woman was happy if she got to marry?”

	In contrast to her words, Henrietta’s beautiful face became miserable and she started crying in grief. ~~Marianna~~ patted her daughter’s head gently.		In contrast to her words, Henrietta’s beautiful face became miserable and she started crying in grief. Marianne patted her daughter’s head gently.

	“You have someone you love?”		“You have someone you love?”

Kealper: Undo revision 68762 by Kealper (Talk) (Re-read sentance, it was correct the first time)

2010-07-07T07:25:24Z

Undo revision 68762 by Kealper (Talk) (Re-read sentance, it was correct the first time)

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	He shook his head, rejecting Wardes’ presumption.		He shook his head, rejecting Wardes’ presumption.

	“That man won’t betray us. He’s too stubborn and straightforward, which is why we can trust him. I’m just lending him your power, seeing as you led the magic defense squad once. Have you ever ridden a ~~dragoon~~ before?”		“That man won’t betray us. He’s too stubborn and straightforward, which is why we can trust him. I’m just lending him your power, seeing as you led the magic defense squad once. Have you ever ridden a dragon before?”

	“No. But there is no beast in Halkeginia that I cannot master.”		“No. But there is no beast in Halkeginia that I cannot master.”

Kealper: Changed "dragon" to "dragoon", assuming the first time it was mentioned was the correct spelling, and the second instance was incorrect.

2010-07-07T05:51:52Z

Changed "dragon" to "dragoon", assuming the first time it was mentioned was the correct spelling, and the second instance was incorrect.

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	He shook his head, rejecting Wardes’ presumption.		He shook his head, rejecting Wardes’ presumption.

	“That man won’t betray us. He’s too stubborn and straightforward, which is why we can trust him. I’m just lending him your power, seeing as you led the magic defense squad once. Have you ever ridden a ~~dragon~~ before?”		“That man won’t betray us. He’s too stubborn and straightforward, which is why we can trust him. I’m just lending him your power, seeing as you led the magic defense squad once. Have you ever ridden a dragoon before?”

	“No. But there is no beast in Halkeginia that I cannot master.”		“No. But there is no beast in Halkeginia that I cannot master.”

Myopius at 09:04, 10 April 2010

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	“You ‘believe’? You really don’t have any desires, do you.” Said Cromwell.		“You ‘believe’? You really don’t have any desires, do you.” Said Cromwell.

	Cromwell was a ~~originally~~ clergyman, but he didn’t have a speck of faith in him. Wardes cast his eyes downwards on an old silver locket. Inside was a drawn portrait of a beautiful woman. His heart, which always appeared cold to people around him, started to warm up. After looking at the small portrait, he whispered, “No, your Excellency. I’m a man who desires the most in this world.”		Cromwell was originally a clergyman, but he didn’t have a speck of faith in him. Wardes cast his eyes downwards on an old silver locket. Inside was a drawn portrait of a beautiful woman. His heart, which always appeared cold to people around him, started to warm up. After looking at the small portrait, he whispered, “No, your Excellency. I’m a man who desires the most in this world.”

Vaelis at 21:13, 15 July 2009

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	Cromwell nodded with satisfaction and patted Bowood on the back.		Cromwell nodded with satisfaction and patted Bowood on the back.

	“She’s from ~~Roba aru kariie~~. She designed these cannons from the technology she learned from the elves. ~~The knowledge of technology she possesses… does~~ not follow our magic arts. She possesses knowledge of technology that is new to us. You should get to know each other.”		“She’s from Rub' al Khali. She designed these cannons from the technology she learned from the elves. Her insights in technology… do not follow our magic arts. She possesses knowledge of technology that is new to us. You should get to know each other.”

	Bowood nodded in a bored manner. He was actually a royalist, but he strongly believed that soldiers should not get involved in politics. In other words, he was a purely militaristic person. The fleet commander, who outranked him, had joined the rebel army, and so he had no choice but to participate in the revolutionary war as a captain of the Reconquista fleet. For him, who had exerted his utmost for the sake of upholding Albion's tradition - Noblesse oblige, a noble duty, Albion was still a mere kingdom. Cromwell was someone despicable who had just seized power and the throne.		Bowood nodded in a bored manner. He was actually a royalist, but he strongly believed that soldiers should not get involved in politics. In other words, he was a purely militaristic person. The fleet commander, who outranked him, had joined the rebel army, and so he had no choice but to participate in the revolutionary war as a captain of the Reconquista fleet. For him, who had exerted his utmost for the sake of upholding Albion's tradition - Noblesse oblige, a noble duty, Albion was still a mere kingdom. Cromwell was someone despicable who had just seized power and the throne.
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	Was that just Void magic?		Was that just Void magic?

	~~… The~~ legendary “Zero” branch of magic.		…The legendary “Zero” branch of magic.

	With a shaking voice, Bowood whispered, “…What the hell is he planning to do to Halkeginia?”		With a shaking voice, Bowood whispered, “…What the hell is he planning to do to Halkeginia?”

Akirasav: Waldo --> Wardes

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	“Viscount, join the Lexington fleet as the commander of the dragoons.”		“Viscount, join the Lexington fleet as the commander of the dragoons.”

	Under a feathered hat, ~~Waldo’s~~ eyes gleamed.		Under a feathered hat, Wardes’ eyes gleamed.

	“Are you telling me to keep an eye on him?”		“Are you telling me to keep an eye on him?”

	He shook his head, rejecting ~~Waldo’s~~ presumption.		He shook his head, rejecting Wardes’ presumption.

	“That man won’t betray us. He’s too stubborn and straightforward, which is why we can trust him. I’m just lending him your power, seeing as you led the magic defense squad once. Have you ever ridden a dragon before?”		“That man won’t betray us. He’s too stubborn and straightforward, which is why we can trust him. I’m just lending him your power, seeing as you led the magic defense squad once. Have you ever ridden a dragon before?”
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	“No. But there is no beast in Halkeginia that I cannot master.”		“No. But there is no beast in Halkeginia that I cannot master.”

	Cromwell smirked in agreement. He suddenly turned to ~~Waldo~~.		Cromwell smirked in agreement. He suddenly turned to Wardes.

	“Viscount, why do you obey me?”		“Viscount, why do you obey me?”
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	“Not at all. You yield such fine results yet you have no requests.”		“Not at all. You yield such fine results yet you have no requests.”

	~~Waldo~~ laughed lightly. He touched the artificial hand that was put on him recently.		Wardes laughed lightly. He touched the artificial hand that was put on him recently.

	“I only want to see the thing your Excellency will show me.”		“I only want to see the thing your Excellency will show me.”
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	“The holy lands?”		“The holy lands?”

	~~Waldo~~ nodded.		Wardes nodded.

	“I believe what I’m searching for lies there.”		“I believe what I’m searching for lies there.”
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	“You ‘believe’? You really don’t have any desires, do you.” Said Cromwell.		“You ‘believe’? You really don’t have any desires, do you.” Said Cromwell.

	Cromwell was a originally clergyman, but he didn’t have a speck of faith in him. ~~Waldo~~ cast his eyes downwards on an old silver locket. Inside was a drawn portrait of a beautiful woman. His heart, which always appeared cold to people around him, started to warm up. After looking at the small portrait, he whispered, “No, your Excellency. I’m a man who desires the most in this world.”		Cromwell was a originally clergyman, but he didn’t have a speck of faith in him. Wardes cast his eyes downwards on an old silver locket. Inside was a drawn portrait of a beautiful woman. His heart, which always appeared cold to people around him, started to warm up. After looking at the small portrait, he whispered, “No, your Excellency. I’m a man who desires the most in this world.”